Hi there, could we please have your opinion? Ghost Towns is an upcoming 4x4 skeleton roleplay centered on an indefinite roadtrip eight strangers take to abandoned places across America. [ But those walls aren’t the only thing holding secrets. ] Thank you in advance!
Hey there! Sorry this took me a couple days, I’ve been busy with life.
Overall Opinion: I like your icon, it’s simple, but the font is easy to read which is something a lot of people have difficulty getting right. Your url is great, it clearly identifies your plot and that you’re an RP. I can’t speak to your mobile banner as it’s either not loading/showing for me, or you simply don’t have one. It’s sort of like a ghost ;) Which is super clever if that was the intent, but I’m likely reading too much into it.
As for the main your chosen theme has a lot of potential. Usually I advocate for at least a splash of colour here and there because I’m just not partial to monochromatic themes, I find a little bit of colour makes my eyes keep moving over the page. That being said, with your plot, the lack of colour works, but the background really detracts from the theme for me. I would much rather see a grey (or some other shade) solid background, the grid distracts my eyes from the actually important things I should be reading over as a potential member. Over all, not a ton of coding errors or a bunch of things that need improving and the links at the top are fantastic.
Your graphics are simple and clean, I like them. The plot sounds intriguing! I do wish proper capitalization was used in the about section in the sidebar and for face claims the bios, but that’s relatively minor. The bios themselves are well written. They give enough detail, but also leave wiggle room for players to further develop their characters. I’m really glad to see you have a trigger list, sample application (so potential members have an idea what you’re looking for), and the rules look pretty good. I would mention somewhere in the rules your standpoint on smut (i.e. smut is not allowed at all, smut is only allowed for members age 18+, any minor caught participating in smut/deceiving about their age to do so will be removed, etc.).
Looking over everything else, it really all looked good. I think you’ve got what should be a fun and great group. Definitely check them out lovelies!