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Since the hunger in your belly has mostly subsided, you decide to explore your surroundings more. The pond is small enough that you can see most of it, so there's little left to find here. As you swim closer to where the edge of the pond meets the stream, you can feel strength in the current.
Lurking on the edge of the pond, you see a small- no, big fish? Its certainly a good bit bigger than you, why did you think it is small? Confused, you hover in place for a moment. The fish, regardless of size, seems pretty unaffected by the current. It easily keeps its place amidst the flow, facing upstream. The stream looks a lot like the pond, clear water, mud, rocks, and algae, as well as some leaves and grass dipping into it here and there.
Bam! The fish charges towards you with frightening speed. Moving with all the strength you can muster, you manage to narrowly avoid its sharp teeth. A bite would be fatal. You need to escape, barely have time to recover. It's about to charge again.
Every fiber of your being screams at you to run, to hide, but there's nowhere to hide. The pond is empty except for you and your enemy. The swift current of the stream will certainly sweep you away. But even if you don't know where it will take you, it seems better than certain death. With a flick of your tail, a choice is made.
You roll and fumble for a moment, unused to the speed with which the stream carries you. As the current puts the danger further and further behind you, so too goes the fear that had begun to overtake you.
All too soon, the peaceful trip comes to an end.
Not far ahead, the stream seems to pass though a bunch of debris. There are a number of long straight branches interlocking with each other, a grate? The ends of this "grate" are buried deep into the earthen banks of the stream. Above it, there seems to be a bunch of weirdly uniform rocks. One of them must have fallen, because it now lays against the grate and the bank, with a small space underneath. The grate itself is partially covered in piles of leaves, sticks, and mud. Beyond the grate, the water is black, like night. night? Anyway, you are pretty sure you wont be able to see in there.
Swimming upstream is truly not an option. And to make matters worse, the fish has appeared again. There isn't much time. Aided by the current, it's closing in. Swept up against the grate, you are left with two choices:
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Our first action scene!! How'd I do? Maybe don't answer that haha, I'm not entirely sure how to feel about it
I think I'm pleased, since this project is the first time I've really stretched my writing muscles in a while. For the past few months (or even years) most of what I wrote was just lore dumps and character profiles. Also It's been years since I wrote anything episodic. Anyway, sorry it's kinda late and I hope you enjoy!
What do we think about the four navigation options? This would mean five options if half episodes continue to not be considered the "next" episode. Half episodes being primarily art pieces and technically skippable.