#is awkward

[mage-parivir]

In the spar scene against Leon, I was a little lost on how the scene description seems to imply that Mage and Leon are trading blows. Mage doesn't seem have a sword, so either they are parrying the blows with magic somehow (I'm assuming that can happen, wasn't clear to me) or Leon is actually chicken chasing the Mage which is fun to imagine. (1/2)

(2/2) But in the second pass Leon seems to land a cut with the sword when Mage was vulnerable (partially vulnerable? Also unclear to me) and it knocks them away? I don't know, the sword is reading to me more like a club. Sorry if I missed anything and thank you for your work anyway.

Thanks for alerting me to the need for a rewrite!

MC was actually dodging Leon’s strikes in a close-range scuffle, though looking back on the passage I can see why that wouldn’t necessarily be the impression given off. On the second part, Leon bashed the MC with the flat side of his blade, which is why the attack had a bludgeoning instead of a slashing effect. Will make sure to reclarify that when I work on the third demo.

[sure-i-rcust]

Atla fic idea/setup:

So, Ba Sing Se, the gaang have realised Jet is brainwashed, and then as they debate what to do to jog his memory, Smellerbee says that he was kinda obsessed with "those two guys" and says maybe they could try to talk with them? That could jog his memory surely? Sokka points out that they're firebenders and therefore shouldn't be trusted. The others think on this and then Longshot moves his head and Smellerbee's like "he ( Longshot)'s right, we stole food from the captain with him ('Lee')"

And so they agree fine we'll try to find them and figure something out. They go to the tea shop, guided there by Smellerbee and Longshot, and they see Zuko and Iroh SERVING TEA and dealing with customer's and then Zuko spots them and there's an "Oh shit" moment . Jet recognises them, and GOES UP TO HIM! The gaang are just like "that's bad, wtf are you doing Jet and why are you calling him Lee?"

Because he ( surprisingly) doesn't want to cause a scene, Jet's calm and is all "when do you get off? Don't yell we just wanna talk for a second" Zuko is worried, Iroh is worried, the gaang's slowly dying and don't know how to bring up that they know him and he's not called Lee and is in fact, not just some firebender but the fucking Prince of the Fire Nation. 

Shit happens, probably.

[psalm40speakstome]

The amount of times throughout my day my KDrama male lead should appear and doesn’t is truly shocking.

[musaics]

continued from here with @kahenn​

             “Thank you.” Konan offers her appreciation quietly.  There’s a slight pause, her gaze cloudy momentarily as she tries to articulate her next words carefully.  “I’d be in trouble if periwinkle didn’t suit me, wouldn’t I?” 

         Her jest is extremely dry-sounding; She hasn’t quite gotten down how to joke with others yet. At least she didn’t over-explain that she’s talking about how her hair is periwinkle- Something she cannot change.  She adjusts in her seat, turning her attention to Miki’s work rather than stay swimming in her thoughts.

            Bright eyes take in the small flower being painted. “Do you like flora?” 

[longeyelashedtragedy]

⬆️ this is a screenshot of an anon someone sent to a blog i follow, talking about my fic and

OOHSJAKSJSJSJSKS MY GODDD IM FAMOUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

[notquitebilateral]

I am a failure

Facepalming all the way and looking like a dumbass. But I am a genuine dork, so that is something.

[ssaalexblake]

I’ve arrived at the ‘Saru doesn’t deserve this shit’ portion of post-episode feelings examining. 

He’s gonna have to stand there and pretend that thing that happened at the beginning of the ep didn’t happen, all the while missing her just as much as Michael.