One of the doodle requests I did on stream yesterday that I loved the pose on so much that I had to get it lined and colored...And I may have caused my own demise with this qwq
AUTHOR’S NOTE: Hey guys! I enjoyed writing the last fic, so have another one on the house!
Overview: After about a month of Eclipse being at Saturn’s mercy, an accident in the daycare causes him to change the game.
WARNING: THIS IS A TICKLE FIC
The lights of the daycare glowed warmly in gold and yellow tones as laughter rang out and echoed through the building. Barrels were being thrown and thunderous footsteps made the play structures and bridge shake and rattle.
Except, the Pizza Plex was closed, and the result of the daycare still being in use came from bigger bodies than the normal-sized superstars that regularly attended.
“S-S-S-Saturn! Dear! Please!” Eclipse was the one running, fleeing, and leaping away like a crazed gazelle as Saturn chased him down like a hungry tiger.
Eclipse had been made her prey many times before, and he knew what would happen if he let her catch him. Ever since his little secret was revealed during his updates, Saturn had been much more playful with him, using his newfound weakness for training. After all, Saturn wanted Eclipse to be strong with her, and so improving his physical performance was a goal of hers. She didn’t quite understand what it would take to do this, so she resorted to using what she knew. Eclipse learned new things when he put them into practice, and he could be motivated by fear, like many of her soldiers.
But it wasn’t true fear. The dimensional conqueror could see the excitement in his eyes whenever he looked back towards her, flashing like the infinite cosmos the closer she got to catching him. Saturn had actually managed to shrink her body just enough to use the play structures, making this game much more fun. This daily routine of theirs got more extreme when Saturn had bad days and needed something extra to relax her. It flustered Eclipse to no end, but she frequently told, AND showed him just how much his frantic laughter helped to ease her from her stress. In a way, it was also relaxing to Eclipse, so it was deemed a win-win.
Eclipse twisted just a little too fast on one of the turns and tripped himself, falling to the floor of the padded pathway. He could hear Saturn’s footsteps getting closer, as well as her rare, quiet chuckle.
“What that a chuckle, I heard?” He couldn’t help but tease her whenever he heard her adorable laugh. It was so deep and gentle, like a murmur of joy from the greatest oceans.
Saturn stopped dead in her tracks, the hungry tiger being momentarily replaced by a deer in headlights, as her voice got caught in her throat.
“S-stop that!” The queen exclaimed as Eclipse took the opportunity to run away yet again.
Saturn grunted and chased after him again, her body hardening with a new resolve to catch him after that dirty stunt.
Unfortunately for his wife, Eclipse had another dirty little trick up his sleeve. As they both got closer to the exit at the bottom of one of the play structures, Eclipse knew that if he slid, he could fit under a small tear in the material that made up a specific clime-y wall. It had been torn for quite some time, and he had requested it be fixed, but Fazbear never answered him about it. Once he ensured all edges were soft to the touch, and all kids could fit through it, he let the kids play with the tear in the play structure, so long as they were careful. He knew full-well if he used this little secret opening as they were nearing the exit, he would have the upper hand. Just as his large wife was gaining on him, he suddenly dove for the corner, slipping through with ease due to his size. He expected Saturn to run around the long way to catch up again, but as he emerged the other side and sprang to his feet, he was startled by the sound of his darling’s yelp and a pair of legs jutting out from the play structure.
“D-Dear?” He turned around and had to hold back a giggle at what he saw.
Saturn, destroyer of worlds and the void, was stuck in the tear. She had attempted to follow Eclipse through the small hole and figured out- too late- that it would not fit her larger body. Her legs were stuck on one side, and the rest of her body was stuck on the other, facing up.
“Oh dear, are you alright?” Eclipse panted slightly and stooped next to her.
Saturn could only grunt in embarrassment, too flustered by her mistake to even speak.
“Are you injured, yes or no?” Eclipse’s voice was soft, but firm in her ear. He was certain she was fine, but even so, he wanted to make sure.
“No.” She said softly, squirming. “Though, I may need assistance getting out… this is uncomfortable, and it’s very tight…”
Eclipse sighs. “Only if you promise not to pin me as soon as you’re out. Give me a few seconds to start running again.”
“That seems more than fair considering it was my action that caused our training to stop.” Saturn sighed and crossed her arms, tapping her fingers.
“You mean our game of tickle tag fight?” Eclipse’s eye widened as Saturn gave an embarrassed chuckle.
“Oh, was that a chuuuckle?” He teased in a low voice as Saturn tried to lean away from him, his heterochromia eyes making her face heat up as they peered at her through the gaps in the clime-y wall.
“Nooo…” She whined like a teenager.
“Liar.” Eclipse sighed and tried to figure out how to get his wife out. Maybe pushing on her hips would slide her out the way she came in.
It would probably be easier to either pull her upper half by going around the other side, or pushing her lower half to get her out. However, as his hands landed softly on her hips and began pushing into her skin to dislodge her body, Saturn suddenly stiffened. Had he been too rough?
“Everything okay dear?” Eclipse looked up at her to see the most adorable thing.
Saturn was squirming back and forth with a steady blush forming on her face. Her eyes were squeezed shut and she was biting her lip. Eclipse tested something and lightly fluttered his fingers over where he had initially pushed down. Saturn’s body immidately jolted as she let a low giggle out.
As soon as the laughter reached Eclipse’s audio sensors, she was doomed.
“What was that?” He asked in an over-exaggerated, goofy tone. “Was that a chuckle, I heard?”
Saturn could only groan and cover her face. She knew her lover was looking at her, and it made her face feel hot. When she discovered his weakness, she didn’t consider it could also be used on her.
“E-Eclipse… w-wait…” She peeked out of her hands just to quickly hide again with a squeak. Yup, he was looking at her, with the smuggest smile she had ever seen on his face, accompanied by two hands full of wiggling fingers.
“Oh, my dear, are you… ticklish?” He cooed at his flustered love, his finger getting closer to her hips.
“No.” The big blue alien squeaked out, trying to sound serious, but her voice betrayed her.
“Oh? Then I guess this shouldn’t bother you…” Eclipse slyly touched his wiggly fingers down onto his wife’s hips, giggling softly as she desperately tugged at her trap, trying to get away from the annoying tingly feeling it gave her.
He could tell from the way her face looked, she was holding her breath. Her cheeks were all puffed-out and her face was turning a delightful shade of red with her eyes squeezed shut. Not to mention her chest and stomach were shaking badly as if trying to hold back a supernova of energy.
“Oh, dear…” He smiled softly and stopped his hands for a second. He wanted to make sure he wasn’t crossing a boundary.
Saturn relished in the merciful break, taking deep breaths and looking up at her love through the open squares of the clime-y wall, curious as to why he showed her mercy, and instantly regretted it. Eclipse was staring at her fondly, with that ridiculously lovable face of his.
“Is this… making you feel bad? Do you want me to stop?” His soft voice made her chest feel warm as he looked at her in the eye. Normally staring was a challenge in her world, but it was seen as affection here on Earth.
“Nhhhh…” She could only grunt out a whine, her cheeks rosier than Saint Nicholas.
“If it doesn’t feel good, I’ll stop and pull you out by your hands-”
“Wait!” Eclipse froze at Saturn’s interjection. “I… want to… train, too…” Her voice sounded uneasy, almost choked. It only sounded like that, when she was being vulnerable and expressing herself. Expressing herself in ways she hadn’t in years.
Saturn had to look away as a tender smile crept across Eclipse’s face. “Of course, dear…”
His hands returned to her hips, scribbling and squeezing as she returned to holding her breath, smiling wide and shaking. These feelings building up inside her were strange and funny, and it wasn’t just the air trapped in her lungs. With these feelings, she almost felt… younger. MUCH younger. Some of her first memories were back playing this same silly game with her siblings, and now, it felt like she was there again. In those days of vulnerability. Not fully understanding for what reason they trained. Not understanding her future turmoil and rise to power. Not understanding that wonderful freedom… the freedom she would lose as she grew into a leader. The freedom to laugh.
Eclipse suddenly caught her off-guard by sending some kind of sonic pulse through her abdomen using his face. It felt maddening, like a tickle bomb going off in her tummy and spreading around the rest of her core.
“GYHEHEHEHEHEHE! Ehehehehehe! Oh nohohoho!” Eclipse looked up with eyes full of stars, his smile stretched wide as he heard his wife laugh- REALLY laugh. Not a muffled chuckle or a giggle cut short by pride. Freedom. Freedom to laugh and be happy. If he had a heart in his metal shell it would likely be bursting like a balloon from all the love he felt for her in that moment.
Saturn cried out as Eclipse gave her another torturous raspberry on her tummy, rubbing his faceplate into the center.
“Lohohohohohove!” She strained and wiggled and slammed her fists, but nothing gave. The wall was her prison, and her precious Star was now her trainer. She had to figure a way out, especially as Eclipse stared working his way down her legs. Her joints were very sensitive, and Eclipse soon learned this as he wiggled his slim fingers on the underside of her knee. She nearly kicked him into the ceiling at that, giving a delightful squeal.
“You’re so cute…” He couldn’t help himself. As he worked on getting her shoes off, his wife struggled even harder to get free. He was beginning to tease her, which already made her nerves alight with feeling she didn’t understand. If he continued… training her… while using this other weakness, it would likely create a combo move that would defeat her.
Eclipse chuckled as he started to massage her, now exposed, foot. “Honestly, what to do with you…” He purred out, pressing his fingers into her heel. “High Commander, always on her feet… her poor, tired, ticklish feet…”
Saturn squeaked and tried desperately not to injure her evil and sweet love, her legs shaking as the combo move took effect.
“EHEHEHEHE! GHEHEHEHE! WAIT! STOP!” She screamed out and Eclipse immidately did, letting her foot down.
She covered her face as she rode the remaining laughter out. “Ihihi… think that’s enough training for mehehehe…” She looked up at him, blushing and smiling.
“I love you, you know that?” Eclipse gently placed a kiss on the side of her tummy, making her flinch and squeak before going completely limp. “Once our game is over… there’s something I want to show you…”
Saturn just nodded and Eclipse started making his way over to her upper half.
In the time it took him to get there, Saturn could feel different emotions swirling inside her tummy. She was excited to see what he wanted to show her. Eclipse tugged at her arms and she immidately became free. It was funny how easy it was for him to get her out. If it would have been that easy for her, the chain of events that unlocked her inner child would not have occurred. Eclipse got up to run but was immidately pinned.
“H-hey! You said you’d give me extra time!” He weakly protested.
“Too bad.” His wide smirked down at him, her eyes flashing with resolve as she immidately went for his belly, itching and squeezing the metal shell, making his hat fly off his head from how fast his rays spun. “I want to see your surprise, so, let’s cut our training short.”
“NOHOHOT FAHAHAIR!” He squirmed badly and pushed against his mountain of a lover as she held him down, scratching her fingernails across his tummy before launching them into his open arm joints to torture the sensitive wiring. He screamed and begged as she looked to his stomach once more, stopping the tazing of his armpits.
“Ehhh… hehehehe… S-Sahahaturn? Whahahat… ahahare you- EEP!” Eclipse jolted with nerves as Saturn suddenly gave him a raspberry. She had never used those before! But it only took him all of two seconds to realize it was his own fault. HE had shown her raspberries when she was stuck.
“PLEHEHEASE! YOU’RE GOHOHONAHAHAHA KIHIHILL MEHEHE!” He cried out as Saturn gave him a second raspberry.
“Okay. Love I think that’s enough… Now… what’s the surprise?” Eclipse was taken aback by the amount of excitement in Saturn’s voice. Her eyes were showing just about as many stars as her beautiful dark blue skin.
After recovering from his giggles and being let up by his wife, he leaned up and began something he had always been too shy to initiate before.
Saturn felt her body enter a state of shock as Eclipse started leaving little tickly, but very gentle, kisses on her face, and neck and even some of her chest. She utterly melted from the affection and leaned into him as he gave her kiss after kiss, humming deep in his chest. His voice felt like that of a songbird’s on a sweet summer’s day, the sunset leaking and mixing with the growing nightfall.
They had definitely exchanged kisses before, but never like this. Eclipse would usually jump and give her peck or she would lean down and give him one proper. Then there was the one time he had initiated a strong, passionate kiss. This felt similar to that. The love was just as intense, but being delivered slightly differently in the form of little bites of snacks to soothe her emptiness instead of a glorious feast all at once.
As Eclipse’s fans worked to cool off his inner wiring, he couldn’t help but be proud of himself when he gazed up at his wife’s face. It was mostly red and accompanied by two golden eyes rolled up in bliss.
“I love you, Saturn…” He murmured into her ear.
“Mmmm… Mhmmm…” She couldn’t even reply other than a hum to let him know he had been heard.
She didn't even realize she had fallen asleep in his arms until she awoke several hours later with her cute, devilishly sweet husband still holding onto her.
Glitch can make duplicates of himself and loves being all over the place, playing different roles with each copy. Sunny got a little taste of Eclipse's little super power~
Alrighty, let's get this started with the triplets.
Sun and Moon arguing with Eclipse tryin to get them to behave themselves. This can go however you may see, dear~
~LF