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Hey guys! I’ve started updating my charahub with characters from what’s likely to be my NaNoWriMo novel, Lost Kingdoms! If it’s not too much trouble, I’d like some feedback on good/bad/ok/any kind of things about them. I’ll be getting more up at some point, but until I do, the main trio is already there. There’s more on my writing blog, if anyone’s interested. Please message me with any thoughts/opinions about them, I’m really quite desperate to talk about them. Thank you!
I forget about these fuckers sometimes but they are Hella Rad so thank you friend
There were two ship ones so I’ll do the big one and then whatever ones weren’t answered from the second one ok yes
1. Who’s more dominant?
I think it’s a fair bet to say CJ for whatever meaning of the word. CJ does things, Felony just lets the world happen to him.
2. Who’s the cuddler?
Oh my god. Felony Pierce. Is the biggest cuddler on this good earth. And through hard work and many painful electrical shocks, he manages to convert his tiny abrasive girlfriend to the side of good.
3. Who’s the big spoon/little spoon?
Felony is big, CJ is little, just like their physical sizes. It’s a lot easier this way.
4. Favorite non-sexual activity?
Just sitting working on stuff. They’re kinda always busy saving the world, so they’ll work on their computers compiling cases and planning missions. But invariably Felony will get distracted and show her something, she’ll be annoyed at first then remember a hilarious clickhole article she wanted to show him, and three hours later it’s midnight and they’re watching dumb baby animal videos which are CJ’s number one guilty pleasure.
5. Who uses all the hot water?
Felony. He spaces out in the shower and only gets brought back to reality by the water going cold and has to slink out to the living room like ‘so i’ve made a tiny huge mistake’
6. Most trivial thing they fight over?
See above.
7. Who does most of the cleaning?
Neither of them. Caleb and Mim show up once a month to clean because if they didn’t you would not be able to walk around and lord knows those assholes won’t do it themselves.
8. Who controls the netflix queue?
I’d say it’s equal. CJ has her action/drama series, Felony has his trashy TLC reality shows, and they both watch together whenever they have time.
9. Who calls the super when the heat’s not working?
CJ, since Felony would forget. He’s pyrokinetic, he generates his own heat and is never cold as a result. If they’re away from home long enough during the day, they won’t bother, since at night they can just allow #3 to happen because he also exudes enough heat to keep her warm.
10. Who leaves their stuff around?
Both. See #7.
11. Who remembers to buy the milk?
Felonious Q. Pierce can’t even remember how to spell his full first name half the time. So.
12. Who remembers anniversaries?
...At least, he forgets things that are trivial to him. CJ ain’t trivial. He’ll wake her up with breakfast in bed and she’ll just be “???????” and then he’ll explain and she’ll feel bad but he wON’T LET HER because he made bacon and bacon makes problems go away
13. Who cooks normally?
You wouldn’t expect it from the look of him, but Felony is actually a very good cook. Particularly with baked goods. It usually just falls to him.
14. How often do they fight?
a LOT. They both put their lives on the line daily as part of their job description, but Felony takes more risks and does more dumb things. CJ has a right to get pissed off that he won’t sit down and follow orders for once. Other than that, small arguments are a daily occurrence, but unless he’s being dumb on missions, they don’t go to bed angry.
15. What do they do when they’re away from each other?
They deal pretty well. If they’re in safe territory, they’llphone call or skype at night. Maybe a text or two during the day to check in.
16. Nicknames for each other?
I think they both call each other “babe” occasionally. He’sknown to sarcastically call her darling, but never in a serious context.
17. Who is more likely to pay for dinner?
CJ works for basically nothing for a semi-legalinternational secret organization. Felony is from Southern old money. Itgenerally falls to him out of necessity.
18. Who steals the covers at night?
CJ. Felony can operate without them just fine, and thereforedoesn’t argue it.
19. What would they get each other for gifts?
Felony is a video game nerd, and CJ enables that. As for thereverse, CJ never says no to weapons or funding for tattoos/piercings.
20. Who kissed who first?
…See, this is actually a story plot point that hasn’t workeditself out yet. My gut says Felony kissed CJ. Subject to change though.
21. Who made the first move?
Felony, no matter what. CJ is an emotionally constipatedasshole who doesn’t see herself as getting a guy ever, so she’s not doing athing.
22. Who remembers things?
CJ, usually. But Felony remembers things he sees asimportant, like dates. In time, at least.
23. Who started the relationship?It was mutual, once they were on the same page. After thekiss, after everything was mostly over and they could settle into somethingcomfortable.24. Who cusses more?
CJ HOLY SHIT Felony cusses in outdated slang andsouthernisms but CJ has been kicked out of places for her cluster f-bombs.
25. What would they do if the other one was hurt?
CJ would scream and fight like hell while Felony narratedsnarkily from the ground. If the roles were reversed, though, Felony wouldn’tknow WHAT to do. If she’s showing her injury enough for him to notice, things arepretty bad. She’s tough. For him to realize, she’d have to be unconscious orbleeding heavily. He wouldn’t be sure whether to keep fighting or help her.It’s the one time he’d follow orders no matter what- if she got out of there,he’d do whatever he was told to ensure it.
26. Who is the dirty talker?
CJ generally, but you would be surprised what Felony iscapable of when he’s drunk. Once at a party they were both slightly out of itand all anyone saw was him walk up, whisper something, CJ choke slightly on herdrink, raise her eyebrows at him and nod, then say goodbye to everyone else andhead for home.
27. Headcanon:
I don’t have headcanons for these two. They’re mine. They’recanon. I am god. I A M G O D
(Now from the other one)
28. Who was the one to propose?
Felony. It was months of carrying around a ring everywherethey went together, trying to get up the guts. Eventually he just sat her downat home one night and paced around ranting about their relationship and whatpeople tend to do when they’ve been together this long and after ten minutes orso looked for her to put him out of his misery by just waving his arms andgoing “Y-you know what I’m saying, right?” and she smirked and nodded and aid,“Yeah, but I’m gonna make you go through with it.” So he sighed and said it andshe said yes and got the ring on and just sat next to her because he wasexhausted. Then it hit them and she suddenly went “holy SHIT” and he attackkissed her and that was that.
29. Who stressed more over wedding planning?
Again with neither. Felony’s mom. According to Morry, shenever shut up about it, and when she did, he could always hear her thinkingabout it. Never got a minute’s rest.
30. Who suggested kids first?
Er… it never came up. She got pregnant accidentally prettysoon into their relationship, which soon led to the revelation that she can’tcarry due to her electrical charge. BLARGH that was even sadder to type than itwas just sitting in my head :((((
31. Who kills the spiders?
Neither of them are afraid, but Felony isn’t allowed toanymore since his preferred method almost burned the place to the ground onetime too many.
32. Who falls asleep first?
Felony, probably. CJ’s a night owl.
33. Who wakes up first?
Felony, definitely. He’s a morning person.
34. Who does the laundry?
The twins, when they come to clean. They’re… liberal withwashing. (Caleb: Ew, Felony, you smell terrible. When’s the last time you tooka shower? Felony: Last night, I’m not an animal. Caleb: So, when did you washthat shirt? Felony: Uuhhhhh… last time you came, I think. Caleb: ...Felony.Felony that’s three weeks. Felony: Well, hey, it’s not stained or anything.Caleb: distressed sweating)
35. What they’re like as parents:
Ok, so for argument’s sake, let’s give them kids. Felony isthe “cool parent”, less intentionally and more because he lets the kid doanything by virtue of being a pushover. CJ is stricter, but still fun. Kids,particularly her own, bring out her soft side. And also the tICKLE MONSTER. She’sa good tickle monster. Static electricity fuzzing up hair and such helps.
36. A song that sums them up:
Come to Me, The Goo Goo Dolls (although I have a wholeplaylist for them too looooool)
37. Who gets jealous more easily?
Neither of them. Felony isn’t jealous to begin with, but CJis intimidating enough to not get much attention from guys. And CJ knows hernerd isn’t going anywhere.
maaaan i have a whole planned out universe of superheroes and villains and i want to draw them but like
one has a gas mask and one has a completely blank theater mask and one has just a fucking face-concealing hood and one has a bandanna over his mouth and goggles and i don't even know what's going on with eris and kestrel they just do what they do
descriptions of my characters in one universe that, out of context, do not seem like they could possibly fit together:
asshole loner from a southern gothic small town, falls into mysterious parallel universe where her blood and bones fetch high prices
redhead steampunk lesbian with an awesome mechanical leg and an awesomer mechanical horse
cyberpunk soldier with a plasma gun and an undercut who just wants to finish the mission and go home, dammit
psychopathic, faux affably evil witch who drinks blood to sustain her powers and is gathering followers to ascend to a higher dimension
ill girl younger sister of the witch who has been forcibly fed blood and human bones to keep her powers growing and is turned into a person of mass destruction
Summary: Shintaro hated the shades of black and gray that stained his vision after he had once experienced the world dyed in magnificent hues of color. Based on the tumblr prompt where the world is just in black and white until you meet your soul mate.
Chapter: 1 out of 2
Notes: Posted on my AO3 account here
He hated colors. Red, blue, green, purple, no matter what word he would hear he’d always grimace at the words as a twinge of jealousy would flare up in his chest, silently cursing those that could see every hue whenever they oh so pleased. Though sometimes the black haired boy would feel a spark of curiosity once he’d hear the various words and tried to imagine how each pigment would look against the canvas of the monochrome world he has always seen around him.
It was normal though for people not to see color early on in their life and from what he heard many were unlucky enough to never experience its joys but those lucky few claimed to see it he was absolutely sure it was just a lie. After all there was no way that their world of black and white and every shade of grey in between would suddenly brighten up by something as ridiculous as a soul mate. It was laughable really for anyone to believe such nonsense that could only happen in those bleak colored fairy tales but slowly he began to doubt his theory that color was just nonsense that people with time to waste thought of.
That day started that planted the first seed of doubt started off pretty normal since he kept to himself and rarely strayed away from his comfort zone that is until a female classmate of his, Ayano was her name as he eventually came to find out, told him red was a color that suited him. He found it annoying how she would drag him along in her attempt to befriend the lonely boy and how she wouldn’t stop trying even when he’d try his best to hide from her. Once their friendship began to flourish he still found that it was unpleasant to hear her ramble off about what color everyday things were dyed in but eventually he found himself memorizing the shade of grey that would match this illusion of what red looked like through Ayano’s eyes.
As weeks began to pass he began to wonder who caused the sudden surge of richly dyed brightness to enter the long haired girl’s world. He remembered asking her once on a hot summer day during one of their daily meetings with their friends from school and instead of answering Ayano would stutter out an excuse as to why she couldn’t answer that question as her cheeks would flush the shade of grey that he had previously dawned red before the loud Takane would step in and oh so gently tell him to mind his own damn business while the oblivious Haruka would try to calm their friend down.
To this day he continued to wonder what had caused that girl to see the world the way he had always wished to experience it and as he finished his reminiscing he couldn’t help sigh softly as he clutched the bundle of “red” daisies at his side, instead switching his attention over to reaching his destination before sundown hoping not to run into anyone while he was there.
He expected the visit to be short, just him scanning the rows upon rows of granite and marble gravestones until he catches sight of the familiar name followed by him carefully switching out the wilted dull colored flowers that he left weeks ago by the tablet with the fresh batch of handpicked daisies. Finally once that’s done he’d quickly wrap the meeting up with telling the long gone girl what she had missed during the month of absence before making his way out the depressing place.
But before the NEET could even make his way to his to his destination he could only freeze where he stood once the sound of a carefree voice made it to his ears while an unfamiliar figure of a boy, most likely a year or two younger than him if he had to guess, stood in front of the girl’s grave as hues of unfamiliar colors crept into his vision. Once their eyes managed to lock he finally released the breath he wasn’t aware he was hold as the younger boy flashed him a cat like grin as he carelessly drawled out, “So you’re the Shintaro Nee-chan always talked about.~” And suddenly Shintaro found himself hoping that his fate wasn't tied to this person he could already sense was annoying.
Planned Firt Lines of the Felony Pierce books (but let's be honest I'll likely forget these)
Book 1: "You know how in movies and such, it always rains at funerals? And someone always mentions it, like, 'Hey, I didn't think it actually rained at funerals'?
Bullshit. At the grand total of one funeral I've been to, it was sunny as hell.
She would have preferred rain.
Fuck today. Up the ass."
Book 2: "Two options, at this point: One, pull a gun and go in the building, sneaking up from behind. Two, drive the car into the wall.
I put the car in drive."
Book 3: "'This is a meeting about the apocalypse,' I remind myself. 'We are meeting to decide on what to do now that we know when we're probably going to die.'
I can't die yet. There's too much shit to be done. I've only been in, like, two states, and I don't know how any of my shows end. Who gets Westeros? I don't know. I don't know anything. This is the most inconvenient end of days in history.
Shit. Staring off and mentally rambling. All the signs of "gosh darn it, Felony's having a breakdown!'"
Book 4: "Imagine, if you will, this scene:
I stand in Time Square, once a scene of happy funtimes Disney ads, now a scene of death and turmoil and flaming hell beasts.
I just prevented rather than caused civilian casualties.
The hell bests were set on fire by me, with my mind, which I didn't know I could do, but which frankly explains a lot.
I'm on every JumboTron, and every person in the square is looking at me.
'Evening,' I manage, looking at myself on the Disney Store sign. 'Name's Pierce. It might be good for you to get out. Of town, preferably, but the Square's a nice start, maybe.'"
Felony Pierce Characters, Their Powers, and What They Do With Them
Felony Pierce has no idea what his power is, and so mainly gets bitchin' at handguns. (Note: I know what his power is. I know everything.)
Desdemona Pierce had a protective field that prevented her from being found by anyone/anything that wanted to kill her. she used this to keep her brothers safe by proxy. After her death, however...
Morfran Pierce has enhanced mental capacity, manifesting in telekinesis, telepathy, and other mental abilities, as well as extreme intelligence. Mostly he memorizes useless information because he can.
Linnea Panzetti is able to project powerful illusions of all forms. She uses this to convince people of things (such as whenever they do something of questionable legality and need to hide from the cops) and cover the group's tracks.
Dominic Panzetti is telekinetic. He doesn't do much with it outside of combat, really. Only as a laziness shortcut. Never needs to get up to get the remote, this guy.
C.J. Addox is highly electrokinetic. She tries as hard as possible not to do anything with it, as she generally accidentally shocks people with her constant electrical charge.
Caleb and Miriam Hatzkel, telepathic twins, are so used to their ability that they never have to do anything with it. They can't exactly turn it off, so they work together, operating on each other's thoughts and sensations and usually moving in unison. They're still distinctly separate, and rarely purposefully speak in unison, although when extremely focused they move into a sort of state where they're the same consciousness with two bodies. In that state, they get shit done.
Ben Wright has control over air and, occasionally, ice. Generally he just tries not to stick to people. He's like a cold lamppost and they are all tongues.
Khalida el Amin is the resident water elemental, and when she's not stopping droughts, she's quietly using her powers to play with local kids.
Tomas Espinosa controls plant life. Talks to plants a lot. He's... interesting, as a result. Not the best human conversationalist.
