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Year 1 - moon 86 - greenleaf

It’s finally done! The first page of Adventures of Cloudyclan! This moon was messy. I didn’t play through the whole moon before starting to draw so it’s missing an event. I couldn’t fit it onto the first page and it wasn’t big enough to fill a second one so here you go.

Figpaw finds a lost kitten while on patrol with Sunflare and Teaselflip. They bring the kit back to camp and welcome them into the clan.

I like to think that after surviving on her own Morningkit isn’t happy to be put into a role where she can’t leave the camp. It’s just one moon Morningkit. You’ll make it I promise.

I’m looking forward to Morningpaw and hopefully seeing the rest of Robinshade and Peakshatter’s siblings become warriors next moon.

I’ve never made a comic before so I’d really appreciate feedback on this. Where could I improve? Is the text too hard to read? That sort of thing.

Here’s Morningpaw’s cute little tail :)

Thanks for reading! I’m not sure when the next update will be. This took about a week to draw (I think?). Good news is that I got a job so I can actually make money now. Bad news is I got a job and won’t be able to draw all day. We’ll just have to see :) I will play through the whole moon before starting art this time lol

[cloudyclan-clangen]

Page 2

Year 1 - moon 87 - greenleaf

Page two is finally here! A lot happens this moon so stay tuned ;)

I had so much fun drawing this and I’m really proud with how it came out! I think I’ll draw some bonus art before hopping into page three.

Do yall have any questions for/ about the characters? :0 I’m working to draw a headshot of eat clan cat that includes their stats. I’m torn between liking that the audience has to learn about them as we go and wanting to infodump about all of them.

Critique is very welcome, on the art or writing. I’m still trying to figure out comic layout and what writing style I want to use.

Thanks for reading! See you soon :)