opening btd/ykmet/tpof writing requests!! do be aware that they will likely be slow due to my being in school atm but im open to ideas :]!! it can be x reader, canon x canon, solo fics or platonic things
no pedophilia, incest or bestiality requests please. I dont fw that stuff
I will write for strade, rire, lawrence, ren, fox, derek, mason, celia, komodo, dragon, jack and machete
so if you'd like some feel free to send it in my askbox :P
Summary: Oh you know, just Derek...Poor, poor Derek, being beaten into submission :3
CW: Non-con!!! Forced submission, Dumbification, whump (poor Derek getting thrown around), use of homophobic slurs, force-fem if you squint.
DISCLAIMER: The Price of Flesh is a Horrorporn Game made by Gatobob which is strictly designed for an 18+ audience. Children are NOT WELCOME and will NEVER BE WELCOME in this fandom space.
Get off my blog and wait until you are 18.
♡ The concept of Derek Goffard, spoiled brat, bitchy, whiny Derek being roughed up and passed around like a blunt between Komodo, Dragon, Jack and Machete around the campfire.....
♡ Oh, that poor, unfortunate bastard getting what's coming to him because he ran his mouth one too many times.
♡ Derek having his noisy mouth gagged by his red bandana because that boy wouldn't stop shouting death threats at them.
♡ "G'na cry to daddy after this? Go on, tell big ya' daddy Goffard how you were too much of a sissy to fight off four men during your vacay." Jack drawled, groaning as he teased his tip against Derek's puckered asshole.
♡ "You'll learn to love it, Derek." Komodo cooed, grabbing Derek's face in his hands as he licked a long stripe across his neck, to his jaw and ending at his squished cheeks. Komodo purred as he licked his lips, his split tongue now tinged in black kohl. He reveled in the saltiness of Derek's sweat and the pained tears falling from his big doe eyes.
"Enak, bikin gue sange..."
♡ "Oh, this rich boy tastes divine, Jace.. I can't wait to see you ravage him." praised Komodo, pupils blown wide, casting a half-lidded look towards Dragon who held Derek down by his shoulders. Dragon's gut bounced as he chuckled, his callused fingers now squeezing the the flesh under them.
♡ Derek, who breathed a sigh of relief when Jack stopped rubbing his cock against his asshole. Komodo and Dragon who restrained his arms and legs suddenly let Derek go, dropping him. They both snickered as Derek unceremoniously fell face-first on the ground, scrambling as he yanked out his bandana that was used to gag him.
♡ "All of you, just a bunch of...FUCKING FAGGOTS." roared Derek with full of vitriol as he struggled to cover the lower part of himself up, still sprawled on the sand. The three men towered over him with their masks still on. Their eyes glinted in amusement as he bared his teeth at them, glaring at each of their eyeholes with an intent to slaughter.
♡ Derek, never feeling as emasculated and ashamed as much like this, shook in fury and fear. He indignantly pulled up his boxers and his camo pants, scrambling to preserve whatever dignity he's had left. Adrenaline pumped through his veins as the reality of his humiliation settled in. No! He will not let this happen! These people are underneath him, he's the one calling the shots, he's the one who provided them them the means to kill without repercussions.
Oh, does he?
♡ He's killing them. By god, he's going to make them all suffer the slowest and most painful deaths- especially that old fuck.
♡ "I'll kill all of you...I'll F-FUCKING GUT ALL of you- I'll chop off every single one of your microdicks and stuff them inside your mouths-!" Derek shouted, suddenly lunging at Jack who stood the closest to him.
♡ -Only to be knocked back into the sand, landing ass-first on the cold ground from a powerful kick to his chest. Jack's boot harshly landed on Derek before he could react, pinning him down- the grooves of his soles grinded against Derek's stomach.
♡ "You don't get to call the shots here." Jack chuckled lowly, leering at how absolutely scared Derek looked underneath his boot. He could feel the boy writhing in pain under him as he pressed his soles further against his stomach. Pah! the boy was too soft and wide-eyed to be barking as loud as he did. He needed to be disciplined.
♡ "You were tight.." Jack purred.
♡ Derek balked at the statement as he looked up at Jack, feeling bile creep up his throat from the sheer disgust of almost getting ass-fucked by the old bastard. He shuddered as the cooling, slimy precum coating his ass and thighs from earlier began to dry out, making him feel sticky and unclean.
♡ "-And you were not ready to get fucked" Jack continued, frowning.
♡ "Tell you what, boy...You'll get to walk out this desert, fly back to your mansion, on your big daddy's private jet with your sweet virginity still intact..." Jack paused to gauge the delicious fear that developed in Derek's eyes.
♡ "-If you serviced us." He emphasized on the word "sweet" as his foot moved lower to land three taps at the side of Derek's hip. The boy understood what Jack meant, his blue watery eyes trained on the grinning bastard. For once, Derek was quiet.
♡ "You don't have a choice." Dragon warned the boy as he and Komodo crept closer...And closer...And closer...
♡As soon as Jack lifted his boot off his stomach, Komodo and Dragon tackled Derek, pulling and prodding and manhandling him into a kneeling position.
.
.
.
♡ Oh, poor Derek! forced to kneel on the sand, held down by Komodo and Dragon. And Jack? Derek's servicing him first, alright.
♡ "Didn't know you'd be this baby smooth." Jack growled under his breath as he rutted against Derek's armpit. Fuck- he could only feel the softest piece of baby fat against his dick. God, how could he be surprised? When he teased his asshole, he could feel how much Derek even worked his body or his glutes. Absolutely close to nil.
♡ Tanned, baby soft piece of meat with the eyes of goddamn doe. Fuck! Seeing Derek crying hot tears of humiliation underneath him was such a divine sight. Jack's cock twitched at a delicious thought; he wondered how much sweeter that fat ass would feel once he's buried inside him.
♡ "Goddamn Derek, 'ya shave your pits?" Teased Dragon, now holding Derek by the nape. Komodo, holding Derek down by pressing on his knees shook his head in quiet laughter. Derek, mouth muffled by his bandana, strained his jaw, spitting what they can only guess were expletives aimed towards them. Alas, the boy couldn't get a word or two in to defend himself.
♡ "Ah, I bet he waxes...Shit's too goddamn smooth." Komodo quipped, giving Derek an appraising look. Derek, gagged and restrained, glared back as tears spilled from his eyes, running down his cheeks in black streaks. Jack hummed as they conversed, his cockhead clumsily rubbing against Derek's pit.
♡ "Jace, hook your fingers in his mouth. I wanna see his cute kitten fangs"
♡ "Does anyone ever notice how pretty you are, Derek?" Cooed Komodo, as Derek drooled over Dragon's fat fingers, shoved in his mouth. He's got Derek's teeth on full display. Pearly white, perfect teeth. He groaned at how much effort he's exerting to bite his fingers. Still feisty, huh.
♡ "You're a pretty princess, huh Derek? Soooo preeetty when you cryyyyy..." Rumbled Dragon, grinding his clothed erection against Derek's back. Jack, only a few inches away from him, began to pick up the pace, now thrusting fervently against Derek's armpit. He's got Derek's arm raised up high, he might as well have his shoulder dislocated if Jack went on rutting against him anymore longer-
♡ "Fuuucccckkkkkk take it, take it, fuckfuckfuckfuck..uhhnnnn-!" Grunted Jack as he shot his slimy load, spurting his release against the boy's underarm. Derek shuddered and thrashed from the revolting sensation, only to have Jack's cum land on his collarbones and a stripe landing on his cheeks.
♡ "Don't tell me you're turned on from getting pit-fucked now"
♡ Komodo eyes landed on the unmistakable boner in the junction where Derek's thighs meet. Komodo grinned, tone giddy as his spindly fingers groped him through the material of his camo pants.
♡ "I always knew you liked being treated like a bitch with the way you kept yapping like one-"
♡ "...Oh no, look who you idiots just woke up." Jack tsked now tucked himself back in his pants. Jack languidly lights a cigarette, appearing unbothered as a large shadow fell over Derek, covered in cum, spit and smudges of his kohl.
♡ Standing before Derek was the newest member of the group. A looming figure came into view. Machete rose forth from the shadows, moonlight reflecting off of his terrifying blade in his left hand, and an even more terrifying tent in his pants.
♡ "Now you're ready."
-- End of Pt. 1 --
Section Translation:
"Enak, bikin gue sange" - "Delicious, it's making me horny"
A/N: It's basically my first time doing something like this and I'm quite happy at how it turned out! I'm very proud of the lil gradient title y'know ;3
♡Credits♡
♡ Thank you to @omi-resources for the dividers used in this part! I know they said there is no need to credit them, but I feel you guys should check out their blog. Truly wonderful work.
♡ Shoutout to @d3sp4ir-c0d3 for helping me with Komodo's Indo dialogue! It's a one-liner, but I'm looking forward to introduce more Indonesian dialogue in future parts! We wholeheartedly hc Komodo as Orang Jawa (Javanese)!! <3
One thing that always caught my attention was Machete, his story is very simple and at the same time very real/complex, what do you think of this character?
I don’t think about Machete often, but when I do, I always wish he was more than just a side character.
He has such an interesting backstory, he’s introduced well, and honestly if this were a book/comic I think he would make a good focal point. (Not quite the antagonist.. there’s a word for it I’m sure)
Machete’s introduction as a character was done very well in my opinion. That might just be because I have writer’s brain, but it definitely caught my attention. Everyone in the desert group is obnoxious, rude, and careless towards the victims, who are terrified and uncertain. MC is trying desperately to gauge the situation and get some clarity, and then they see him. He’s not laughing, he’s not talking with the group, he’s just staring. At you.
It introduces him with an air of mystery that makes him a different kind of scary than the others, something that feels instinctually like a threat. Unsettling.
The blank mask suits his character well, in a way that’s much more eerie than the others. The blank slate, coupled with his silence and the fact that even the other crew members don’t know what he wants— that unknown is scary.
I love how his silence compliments his character. When he does talk, everyone takes it seriously (unlike Derek, who never shuts up). I like the hints in his dialogue too; like when he killed Chamomile before they were finished with her, and only said “I’m here to kill.” Because he was. Just not the captives.
Little hints to Machete from other characters dialogue let us know that no one’s actually close enough with him to know his motivations. So they just steer clear.
His story and motives regarding his sister is such great writing, or potential for great writing. I wish there was more detail given, at least behind the scenes. The story is so interesting and it feels human, in a way. The fact that he did everything to try and find her when no one would help, and went so far to get revenge. He lost himself. Even as he tells the player his reasoning, he says that he’s not a hero. He didn’t save her, and he can’t bring her back. He only wanted revenge on her killers. But in getting it, he’s become a murderer himself.
I wish we knew what happened to him after MC escapes, or how he came to discover it was this group and how he was accepted to join.
I think his character explores the conflict that comes with grief, and the battle between getting revenge and moving on. Will you leave it be, always wondering what happened, or will you sacrifice your humanity for some kind of justice?
This is random ik but do yall think Jack/Dean would ever hit his partner?? ALSOO I saw this hc and it said that he’d be “misogynistic”, I cried after I saw it but do you guys think he would be??
I need someone to make HC about him because I simply cannot be asked and I am shit at writing 😓💗
I think it's actually very interesting that machete doesn't have an animal themed mask, he is the only one of the group that is not interested in SAing the captives and generally is pretty torn up about the whole situation, it's much less of a funny game for him and thus he can't really have fun with it like the others do. I do wonder if the fact that he lacks the "whimsy", for a lack of a better word, the others have makes him more intimidating and helps protect his act or if in some way it gives him away and the others.
I also think he has the most beautiful cg of the entire game, with the moon behind him framing him like a halo, the white mask almost looking like it's glowing, he looks like a mercyful reaper.
