I still get notifications from this post that it was a year ago and... well, I went and reread and I noticed that my method has changed a bit. So, here’s the update!
In last year’s post I didn’t talk about characters, so... here it goes. This is all after I have an idea of what the story is going to be about (and ofc after I decided what kind of character I want for protagonist).
Usually I think about my characters when I’m doing something else, so when I sit to write their profiles I already have a global concept of them.
First, I complete the character profile. What do I have there? These things:
Age (at the start of the story and at the end if it takes place over several years)
Personality type (I use the 16 personalities types)
Top three thing they value more in life
Whatever specifics about the story. Like, if is a fantasy, type of magic
Backstory (this I don’t always fill, sometimes I just put some notes to not forget certain things and that’s it)
Then I make a chart with all the important characters where I put this:
Want: pretty obvious; this is what they want, what push them forward in life and the story, what they think they’ll need to be happy
Need: this is what they actually need, and is usually different from the want, because they don’t know that they need it, this is something I know they need to be happy
Lie: this is something they believe about themselves or the world that is somehow not true. It can be literally anything and is often what makes them believe that they want something that they don’t actually need
Truth: this is what they’ll find out at the end of the story (or near the end), what they’ll discover when they stop trying to get what they want and get what they need, that thing that I as the author want the reader to get of my story... like, to use some cliché thing, the true power of love (?)
After I have my characters, I take the lie and truth of the protagonist and think about the “steps” they’ll have to take to go from the lie to the truth, and so I write that down.
And that’s the skeleton of the story, the basic plot points that need to happen. But that’s not the complete story, because there’s more that one character, so I do the same for the other important ones. I usually have three or four important characters, so I end up with three or four “timelines” of events.
Then, it’s time to join all those events together and that’s where I order them all in a (kind of) coherent outline. What I do to order them to make sense is think about the cause and effect law. We all here the famous phrase “for every action there’s an equal opposite reaction”. It’s about physics but I apply it to stories as well because is complete true. Everything that the characters do or experience has a cause and an effect and when you have in mind those concepts is a lot easier to order the events.
For example, if I want a character to learn that they need to tell the truth to their friends, first I need them to experience what lies can do to friendship. The cause might be that their friend gets hurt by a lie they tell, the effect is that they realize how bad lying is. Of course, their friend getting hurt is also the effect of another cause (them saying the lie) and so on...
After that, I usually have a good solid outline, but I like to compare it to the three act story structure, just to make sure the flow is good or that the tension is in good places. So I get the structure template and I start putting the events in every story bit. If some story bits end up empty or some events are together it doesn’t matter, because it’s a template, it’s not a solid thing and it can be blend to the kind of story you’re telling.
And then it comes the fun part (not really). I took that outline of events, I too Aeon Timeline and start to put those events in the timeline, I assign them a date, a place, a type and the participans. I like to use Aeon because is designed for writers and it had a lot of fun stuff to put, you can create character profiles, places profiles, arcs and link them to the events. I like to use the colors to indicate if the event is a personal thing, a military thing, something global, local and that, but I’ve seen people use the colors to indicate the acts of the three acts story structure. Is a very flexible tool.
The best part tho, is that it can be synchronized with scrivener. And honestly it saves so much time. I synchronize with the project and just put every event in there to be a chapter. The date, the characters, the place, everything gets into the metadata of the scrivener text files. And so when I open scrivener again, I have every chapter of my novel in place with all the information I need!
That last part is the only thing that stayed the same from last year, I think lol
The last thing I do is when I’m not sure how to write some chapters, I write a mini outline in the document notes of scrivener so I know what to write. But I don’t do it for every chapter, usually only when I stuck or when is a fight scene and I feel kind of overwhelmed by it.
And… I think that’s it. That’s how I outline now.
I like to do this posts so I can see how my method changes over time and so if it’s helpful for someone, here it is!
Here’s my posts about worldbuilding, which I do… well, kind of all the time? I usually start after I get the idea for the world and keep doing it even when I’m writing.
Hello future me (youtube channel)
Brandon Sanderson (youtube channel)
Abbie Emmons (youtube channel)
Start with this (podcast)