Dee give us the visuals for everyone’s wedding fits please!!!
Oooh so so there's so many pics involved so I just combined the relevant ones 😯 I may have a questionable search history and my Pinterest algorithm went from memes to potential wedding dress designs but I'll fix that up later 🤪 also please also note I combined a bunch of things together but I'll explain,,,
So in order - y/n - hairstyle, the way her garter with diamantes would sit below the slit on her dress, the gloves Tae gave her, the chain that would be built in her boot to hand at her thigh, her black thigh high boots, the designs I used for her Grecian gown where I added a sky high slit, and the colour of her dress
Also what I did for Y/n's dress, I took the top half off the second picture (G) and combined it with the lower half of the lavender gown, coz personally I wasn't a fan off the overgrown ruffles on her shoulder
Yuna - her half-up hairstyle, the two major colors throughout the wedding, the Eden pump Jimin recommended and the fishtail silhouette dress with white lace at the bodice and the trail,
When I picked the dresses I realised how unusual it was because Yuna seems like the more rebellious one, with a slit and maybe a bit daring with cleavage or even use kicks instead of pumps, and Yn is supposed to be the prim and proper type, but this was Yuna's wedding and I imagine yuna was the daring one yn would be the epitome of elegance at hers,
How do you do this? I thought with a bachelor and bachelorette we would be having fun and gossip maybe a bit of Joon and Huru being all macho but not this. This is beyond everything I imagined would happen in Nerve.
This is not a well thought review but here I go anyways
Kenta needs a break. They all need it but as the main protector Kenta definitely needs a major one. His entire monologue was so intense and him always being in control and the situation is like fraying threads of a tapestry.
This team is mindblowing and I love that you've made it so that even after everything they all have went they are standing ready to protect and this is because they are together.
I've got so many questions like Is Kiri really okay? How do Kae-Lee and Yoshi know each other so well? What exactly Sylo must be going through at the thought of his entire team in that situation (and no it doesn't matter how much trained they are concern is something else but he is probably going to need to be the leader) and that his daughter would have been in the midst of it?
What do you mean by there is no suspense? How this happened and who is the mastermind behind this is the suspense.
Though @emmybyeakitty is onto something with Huru as a suspect. Because I remember that he managed to find out what went down with YN and Kwan but couldn't find out what was going on with Maiya? And this smells awfully like . . . Helen Mei.
Helen is definitely involved in this. I don't think she would have purposefully wanted to let an armed Maiya go near Yuna but the incident of Fortification pushed her off the edge.
You just keep knocking this out of the park each time. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
🤭🤭
👀,,, there is fun, and gossip, and maybe a bit of that third part there 🤪🤪
'... fraying threads of a tapestry,' 😭😭 the wording is so sexy, please,
No but man's definitely needs a good long break. Kenta is just,,, not what I thought I would make him out to be. He's become one of my favourite glue characters.
Idk if I'm explaining that right, but basically someone that isn't the main character but is necessary, Kenta, Yoongi, Jin,
I loved writing about the team. A part of me really contemplated removing their backstories because it was like digressing from the main stuff, but Kenta is their leader, ofcourse he would know what's in their personal files.
As for your questions, Kiri is most definitely not okay. Her story is traumatic. And she's essentially damaged and dealing with the aftermath of what she's been through. She's usually very sharp and capable, but in this instance whoever the guy was must have done or said something that hit a little too close to home.
Kae-Lee and Yoshi, that's clarified in 'Havoc' which I'll post tomorrow. Jinx is definitely a spanner in the works of things. Personal and professional lives don't mix well, even for the most controlled of people, but that will unfortunately be Jinx's battle to handle.
In terms of suspense, I really meant, no one died and this was a specific chain of events and cleared the air of what went down. What's next is basically how it's all gone down.
It does seem weird that Huru can dig so deep and be so good at what he does, but he can't find the one person that would blow everything wide open, he's doing the most in Cloak & Dagger and,,, oof,,, Helen, that sad act, is so unhinged. I wouldn't have been surprised if she went to the club to shoot y/n herself.
🥺🥺 Thank you!! I love your feedback. And I love that you love my au. 💜💜
BAYBEEEEEEEEEE I’VE MISSED YOU. I know life has been kicking all of our asses but I’m glad you’re doing well.
Now let’s unpack this update:
I love Ria and y/n’s relationship. Like the emotional protectiveness? Chef’s kiss. And the way that what Ria said to y/n was also something I needed to hear.. (I know it wasn’t your intention for that but I must thank you anyways. I love you.)
Huru.. like on one hand, very appreciative for him giving y/n an out but that that conversation.. yikes 😬
Forget international playboy, it’s now Jeon Jungkook: international spy! He is truly the sweetest to do this for y/n and the fact that he knows his power lmao love it love it love it
Y/n and joon.. that’s it. They were powerful before all the betrayal and drama but now? Omg I just know when they completely pull through to the other side of this, they will be unstoppable
Just wanna bring this back to huru and say fuck him for even having the audacity to utter hobi’s name 😒
And finally.. Kwang. The nerve of him to hold out his hand as if everything was fine and dandy.. the shuffling behind y/n, he is not slick the disgusting bastard. On one hand I can’t wait for the final confrontation with him but I’m the hand I know it’s gonna be so hard for y/n
JAY MY LOVE!! I have missed you! I know right??? Also I do apologise for being awol on you, 😔 I HAVE NOT BEEN ABLE TO KEEP MY HEAD ABOVE WATER in like alot of aspects. I mean Im good, but also, there's alot. You get me. You get me.
- Ria and Y/n, easily an underrated duo. And they work well in terms of opposites attract. It's so great to see them bring that to light a bit more.
(and whatever Ria said, whatever words you resonated with, I am happy that they have helped, in anyway that it has <3 I love you Jay)
- aaah that Huru conversation was liked barbed wire OMG, in my brain I was like, do guys have to be like this? Where when you're nice to them, they think you wana fuck them? Coz like, that needs to stop being a norm.
- OHMYGODDDDD JUNGKOOK literally just always takes my heart and squeezes it. He is just that weakness and the fact that he wants to be so adulty and put his own plan in motion it's so amazing of him, but also, like jungkook plz do not get hurt
- I think y/n and Namjoon finally realize that they're endgame. They're literally that couple and through all the shit, they will still be together. I LOVED writing them in this update. It was just so raw and real and human but also so so loving idk it was probably one of my top five convos between them.
- GODDAMN THAT JAB ABOUT HOBI HAD ME LIKE
- As for Kwang,,, I can't comment. I literally can't. Not until this Finale is over anyway. Is he a bastard, yes hell yes. And I cannot explain to you how hard it has been to manoeuvre my writing around a character like his. The SA topic is a really real and heavy topic that literally changes everything and yet its treated as something so normal... It's ridiculous. But there was no way I wasn't going to include the issue in here. It wouldn't sit right with me if I didn't. And yn has to be strong enough to face it.
Thank you Jay, 🥺 for this ask, for dropping in, and for being a great friend to me always. ❤️❤️ I love you babe.
* heels click against the floor as i walk up to the podium and clear my throat *
sooooo.. yn i am wishing you luck when you and joon finally do the do cause im getting a vibe that you'll have to get reacquainted with... him. 😏
hobi, i know your heart is preoccupied right now but just know that im ready and waiting whenever you wanna open up your taste for a new flavor andgive love a chance.. 😘😉
Tae smirks and crosses his hands, 'I bet everyone the last slice of pizza in all the boxes we buy, that yn is gonna ask about jays shoes first,'
Yn raises a finger, 'okay,,, don't know me like that, but also jay, heels are weakness, ima need the deets, and second,' she covers her face with her hands, her fingers making space for her eyes to show through,' not a single day goes by, that I do not think of being railed by this man, and it is truly a problem I do not want to fix, so I appreciate that so much,'
Jin stares at yn, 'You're heinous,'
She shrugs, 'Jay gets it,'
Hoseok smacks the back of Namjoon's head
'What the --,'
'Oh sorry, your smile was so wide I thought it was stuck or something,'
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'Right, Dee, how many more updates am I present?'
Dee looks up from her outline, 'why?'
'jays offered me new flavor and so I have to know my schedule, so I can either clear it or...'
Dee narrows her eyes at him, 'Hobi, go touch some grass,'
'I'm serious, I was propositioned,' he flips through his diary, 'I have three prospects, don't you want me to fall in love,'
'Have you had therapy, Hobi?'
'No, but...'
'Are you over yn?'
'No, I mean...'
'You're in this au till the end,' Dee points to the chairs, 'so go sit by Yoongi,'
Dee @onlythehobi @casnextdoor @jaysdimples ayt, fess up, whose hidden acc is this 👀
I have another question that’s really more of an author ask rather than a character ask lol! What made u want to create a story like this? Ofc if u feel comfortable answering. It’s really cool observing the depth of the characters and how the plot has expanded onto so much more than the core event
Aaah I love author asks! They're so easy because they're about me 🤪
So
I was in a writing slump and I complained so much to @casnextdoor and she basically popped up in my asks with a prompt that we both knew would challenge me because I cringe at the sign of cheating, and it really seriously was only supposed to be a one shot.
Like if you notice the ending of Stalemate, I felt like I should leave it to the reader to figure out if they worked things out or of she left, but as I discussed it more with my betas and mind you I could not shut up, I thought, hmm how about the other woman and then it became five parts, then I talked about the band and then it was ten and twelve, fifteen, twenty for a good couple of months and well,,, we are on part 28 so,
I went in blind. I have 94 documents for Nerve, 🤣 and that's planning and links and aesthetics, I juggled three endings, and I spent the longest time discussing the pros and cons of yn staying and leaving, and I guess with the readers, such as yourself and the feedback, it's become what it is.
soooooo …. there is absolutely nothing wrong with your dick joon? im just saying it wouldn’t be nice if there was… especially since you and your wife have been heading toward hot and heavy very quickly😗
now YOONGI AND HOBI !!!! how do you like your eggs in the morning ? scrambled? sunny side up ? eggs Benedict ? fertilized ? you tell me and i can make it happen captain😏
'Very quickly,' Namjoon repeats to himself
He grabs a hold of yns shoulders, 'Am I moving too fast,'
'It's Dee's problem if you're moving fast but I'm good, now do you want me to check if there's something wrong with your dick or not?'
'THERE'S nothing wrong with --, oh, oh,,,' he side-eyes yn, and whispers, 'am I interpreting this right?'
She leans down to whisper at him, 'There's a closet down the hall, we can snea --,'
The sound of a lock turning breaks her off and they both look up to see Jin at the door, sporting a raised eyebrow, daring them silently. 'We are in the middle of something!' He motions to the room.
Jin turns to you, a very parent-like energy surrounding him. 'if he's excited about that little escapade, his dick should be fine,'
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Hoseok leans back in his chair. 'yn is your friend propositioning a threesome,'
Yn shrugs.
'Hyung,' Hoseok taps Yoongi, 'psst, hyung, have you ever done a threesome?'
'Look at me.' Yoongi replied deadpan. 'Do you think I would do a threesome or I would sleep.'
'He'd sleep.' Jin supplied without looking up from his phone as he texted the maknaes to keep their earmuffs on.
'Don't jump the gun Hobi, she's clearly offering us breakfast,' Yoongi answers you with a soft smile, 'I like egg yolks in my soup, usually, and Hobi likes scrambled.'
