Looking for feedback on my manuscript!
Yeah- what the title said. In November, I wrote the first draft of a novel. I am currently doing prep work for my second draft, which will be a complete rewrite with (hopefully) improved pacing, plot, and characterization.
That’s where YOU come in! I want you to read my book. And then give me feedback on the pacing, plot, and characterization. I also want stuff on character arcs, motivations, plot holes/inconsistencies, etc. etc. the big overarching stuff. I don’t want tiny nitpicky details right now, I’m waiting for draft 3 to do that.
so, what’s my book about? I don’t have an ‘ooo professional pitch.’ I have a tumblrized pitch though?
1870s closeted transmasc guy accidentally convinces barons son he is a cis guy, and they team up to solve murders the town blames on a monster as m/c turns into a bird monster.
it’s historical fiction / psychological horror / body horror / QUEER / slight romance
If you’re interested, lmk! I can read/give feedback on your writing in exchange, or draw your characters.
