Hey, so I’m looking for a beta to read two things for me:
1.) A story I already posted : Floating Vials (found here on Ao3)
And 2.) a new story which is mostly humor and semi-crack that I haven’t posted yet. It’s centered around Moira, McCree, and Reyes (non-romantic In all directions) and her choice of weapon when coming into Blackwatch.
Mostly I’m looking for someone to help me with tenses (sometimes I slip out of the correct tense), the fact that my spell check HATES Moira’s last name, and just another set of eyes.
Both are completed stories. Both Floating Vials and the new work are about 6k words in length.
I don’t know what I can do in return, but talk to me and we’ll figure somethings out.
Or if I don’t find a Beta I’ll just post it as edited as I can in about a week.
Here’s a sample of the new story:
Jesse’s gut feeling was rarely wrong (except for when it came to certain foods – why his stomach hated the Strike Commander’s cooking was anyone’s guess, but it never failed to force him into camping in the bathroom for a day afterwards, no matter how good/inoffensively bland it tasted.)
Right now his gut was unhappy with boss’s new… “doctor”, Moira O’Deorain.
Ok, maybe putting doctor in quotations was a bit much (as far as he knew, this spindly, beanpole of a woman DID actually have a doctorate in… something? Something medical based, he was sure, but he had been spacing out when the boss had gone over her credentials.)
Reyes had been cagey about why he wanted this giraffe-human hybrid to be in Blackwatch, which was setting off all sorts of warning bells in Jesse’s head and guts.
“To patch up your sorry ass during a mission, ingrate. Or do you not remember the time in Cairo?”
“I was fine! It was just a graze!”
“A graze that required 35 stitches and a blood bag when we got back to base?”
“Yeah, exactly. A graze.”
Reyes’s eyebrow arched at him.