instead of bingge or bingmei, what if we spoke about OUTLINE luo binghe? i will be calling him bingdi from here on out
bingdi wasn’t supposed to have a harem. he was supposed to end up alone. like yeah he’d bang when he wanted to but no wives. shen jiu was supposed to have a fleshed out back story. the entire thing was supposed to be deeper and darker.
let’s drop shen yuan into the mix (as per usual) and see what happens. i personally think he’d be a wandering cultivator and shen jiu’s little brother. that adds to his og fleshed-out backstory. ofc he’s gonna meet airplane (platonic soulmates in the worst way possible) and he’s gonna wifebeam bingdi into submission
i just think it would be fun and new and interesting to drop him into THIS universe because i’ve never seen anyone use the draft as a setting. it’s just so fun to think of a non-bingmei binghe not occupied with wives. wtf is that guy doing? i wanna know. AIRPLANE ANSWER ME. anyways what is svsss fanfiction for if not experimenting??
also if anyone has recommendations like this tell me please i’ve looked everywhere
In the extra, it says the system gave Shen a “gift.” 𝙎𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙌𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙦𝙞𝙪 𝙖𝙨𝙠𝙚𝙙 𝙩𝙞𝙢𝙞𝙙𝙡𝙮: — 𝙄𝙛 𝙄 𝙝𝙚𝙡𝙥 𝙮𝙤𝙪, 𝙬𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙬𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙜𝙞𝙫𝙚 𝙢𝙚 𝙞𝙣 𝙧𝙚𝙩𝙪𝙧𝙣? 𝙎𝙮𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙢: “𝙄𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙖𝙧𝙚 𝙬𝙞𝙡𝙡𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙤 𝙝𝙚𝙡𝙥, 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙮𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙢 𝙬𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙜𝙧𝙖𝙣𝙩 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙖 ‘𝘿𝙚𝙨𝙘𝙧𝙞𝙥𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙂𝙞𝙛𝙩 𝙋𝙖𝙘𝙠’ 𝙩𝙤 𝙚𝙭𝙥𝙡𝙖𝙞𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙢𝙮𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙮 𝙗𝙚𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙙 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙮𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙢’𝙨 𝙤𝙧𝙞𝙜𝙞𝙣!”
That was when it became clear where everything came from. If the original PIDW (Bingzu) had merely been one of Shang’s drafts, the system would not have needed to give a “gift,” nor would Shen have needed to spend points to summarize all of that information, because he could have simply asked Shang directly.
If it were only one of Shang’s “drafts,” the world would not have come to an end. That means the original PIDW world was written by someone else.
Every story is written by someone. On top of that, everyone there possesses powers; there is no way a world could simply appear out of nowhere and sustain someone as powerful as Bingzun. A world cannot generate that kind of “energy” on its own, so the original PIDW story must have been another novel written by somebody else.
It says “the original world,” not “the draft world” or anything similar, so this confirms that the story behind PIDW (Bingzu) truly existed and was not one of Shang’s drafts.
This is where the important part begins: “His fate could no longer be changed.” That means the possibility of Shang’s PIDW being a “final version” of Bingzun’s story does not exist.
“Even if someone returned to the past, it would only create A NEW world.” This proves that there are not only three worlds: the modern world, PIDW, and SVSSS.
There is another one: the fourth world, the world of “Luo Binghe,” which we will now call Bingzun.
A draft could never create a fourth world. Not to mention that it makes no sense for one world to exist through a draft and then for another world to emerge later from the finalized version of that draft.
This is where I wanted to scream and tell everyone that Bingzun is already dead and no longer exists, because I constantly see comments and edits claiming Bingzun is the system, when in reality the system is only a “fragment” of him. Not to mention there is not just one system, but many; these spirits are the “systems.”
This is where the fourth world was destroyed; it no longer exists. And if that world no longer exists, then Bingzun no longer exists either, because the “Luo Binghes” are the very source of their worlds. That is why it makes no sense for Bingzun to still be alive and acting as a system.
If you think about it, when PIDW’s Luo Bingge traveled into the BL version of his world, the PIDW world was not destroyed.
That means even if Bingzun had become a system and left his original world, his world still would not have been destroyed. So yes, Bingzun is dead.
Another thing is that in the Bingmei vs. Bingge extras, Shen Yuan says something that fits perfectly here. He says he does not know what kind of catastrophe might occur if Bingge were killed by Bingmei, because Bingge is the “original,” and if he dies, the world might be destroyed or Bingmei himself might disappear.
That makes sense, but Bingmei would not disappear, nor would the SVSSS world cease to exist if Bingge died. Only Bingge himself would disappear, and the PIDW world would cease to exist.
Because Bingzun died. He is the original Luo Binghe, and even though these worlds (PIDW/SVSSS) were created after his death, the worlds remain intact because each one possesses its own Luo Binghe.
Okay, this is where they infiltrate the modern world: the systems, not Bingzun, okay?
“They sent that person to the point of Luo Binghe’s birth.” Further below (almost at the end), I explain that Shen is basically a non-playable player, because he transmigrated after Luo Binghe had already been born and at a point where he already possessed impure thoughts.
So this is where Shang appears. This proves that the original novel was not created by Shang, nor was it one of his drafts, and that the original PIDW story already existed. That is why the plot holes Shang left in his novel, PIDW, were filled by the original story itself.
This is where Shang receives the “fragments” of the original story, and I think this is where many people got confused, because they focus on “in his original outline” while forgetting that this outline consisted of the “fragments” he received and wrote down so he would not forget them and could finally change Bingzun’s fate by creating the “new” story he intended to write.
Shang abandoned his “original” idea, and this is where he creates PIDW.
It explicitly says he “abandoned everything and decided to take the risk” in order to “cater to the market.” That means that, at first, he was posting the original plotline (Bingzu), and then later changed everything. That was the moment our beloved Bingge was born.
So the beginning of PIDW would actually be Bingzun’s “new” life — the different destiny he always wanted. And this is precisely when Shen Yuan discovers Shang’s novel.
This also means that the essence of the original world (Bingzun) remains inside the world of PIDW, filling in all the gaps Shang left behind while trying to appeal to the market.
I mentioned earlier that when Shang received fragments of the original story, he wrote them down so he would not forget them. That means there really was a “draft created by him.” So if he wrote an entire outline corresponding to the original world, then it can be confirmed that when he later created PIDW from that outline, the “draft” — which is the original world itself — continued to exist as part of PIDW.
This part is a little difficult to explain.
But it’s basically like this: the “draft” Shang wrote already existed beforehand, because it is the original story itself (Bingzun). So this once again confirms that the original story was a complete and finished work, not a draft entirely created by Shang.
Second: a draft of a novel cannot create a world. Which means the “draft,” being the original world itself, continues to exist as part of PIDW and works as a patch for the final PIDW story.
So every plot hole that exists in PIDW is filled by the “draft.” And the draft is the original story without alterations. In other words, everything left unexplained in PIDW — and everything that happens there — is not simply because “the villain is evil” and “the protagonist is pitiful.” Everything has cause and effect, and that is where the “draft” enters the structure of PIDW, because it is what builds the entire logic of cause and effect within the story.
For example: in PIDW, Yingying is treated well by Shen Jiu because Shen Jiu is portrayed as a scumbag who likes women and frequents brothels. He hates everyone and mistreats Bingge purely out of jealousy toward his cultivation.
That is what is written in the novel. But it is full of holes, and that is where the draft fills everything in by adding cause and effect.
For example: Yingying is treated well by Shen Jiu because she resembles his childhood friend, and Shen Jiu wants to protect and spoil her (not romantically). Shen Jiu goes to brothels whenever he feels stressed because he is constantly surrounded by men; he feels more comfortable and SAFE around women. He does not hate everyone, but believes everyone hates him and sees him as a threat, so he acts cold and ignorant in order to avoid giving people any opening against him.
He mistreats only one disciple because he sees himself in that child. That boy’s past was exactly like his own. So why does this child deserve a good life when he himself was never allowed one? Why does this child get to have Yingying as a childhood friend when he could not stay with his own? Why is this child’s cultivation allowed to progress while his own was deliberately obstructed?
That is why he hates Bingge: envy, jealousy, and resentment.
This is the true “patch” of PIDW’s plot. And people need to remember that Shen Yuan is not a reliable narrator — but they forget that Bingge is not a reliable narrator either.
People say: “Bingmei suffered so much. Imagine what he must have gone through in the Abyss. He is not just a crybaby.”
And this is exactly where PIDW’s hidden “patchwork” enters the story, because Bingge’s past is the same as Bingmei’s. So we know his perspective is distorted by what he experienced and by everything he went through with Shen Jiu.
But that is not a plot hole, because this fact is actually stated in the novel. The only thing we need to pay attention to is the unreliable narration so we do not lose track of the truth.
PIDW, however, is different. Beyond the unreliable narration, the PIDW novel itself says almost nothing about the characters’ pasts or the reasons they behave the way they do. That is why the draft fills all the gaps in the novel without ever directly appearing on the surface.
I hope that made sense. This part is genuinely complicated to explain.
But seriously, a draft cannot create a world and then later have the finalized version of that same draft create another world. I think I’ve already repeated that a hundred times.
So, once again: the original PIDW is not a draft, but a fully completed work, because it makes no sense for a character that powerful to be merely a “draft” that can be freely altered.
This is where the whole “low IQ” aspect of the other characters comes in. Everyone around Luo Bingge loses IQ points, and this is mentioned multiple times in SVSSS because it is literally one of Shen Yuan’s genuine complaints.
That is why I say Shen Jiu is actually very intelligent. He is a well-written and highly clever villain. He only seems stupid when standing next to the protagonist.
This is also where Bingge gets mentioned directly. I absolutely love this part because Bingge basically became warped due to the stupidity of the people around him, and I find that hilarious.
So yes, for the people who say “Luo Bingge would never change because of Shen Yuan,” that is simply false. If he stayed in the SVSSS world long enough, he would gradually become more normal.
(Remember: Bingzu’s world no longer exists. If it still existed, the order would be: Bingzu’s world → modern world → PIDW → SVSSS. But since it has already been destroyed, the order becomes: modern world → PIDW → SVSSS.)
So the second world is created because Shang successfully transformed one story into something completely different. It is like taking inspiration from something and changing so much that it ultimately becomes your own original work.
And that is what caused the world itself to be created, because PIDW became an original story rather than merely an imitation of Bingzu’s world. So if Shang had continued following the “draft,” which is the original story, and had changed only a few things, a new world would never have been born.
This point is barely discussed, but we can see that there were more hosts besides Shen and Shang. And they had many more missions, activities, and protagonist favorability points to gain.
I only have one question: were these worlds with different hosts erased? Or did they always exist within the broader framework of the SVSSS world?
I imagine this and immediately think about what Bingmei must have gone through with multiple random people suddenly trying to “take care” of him. But I do not think it worked, because it is confirmed that in the end only Shen and Shang remained.
Still, I also think those worlds may have been erased, because it says Shang was Host Number One of the SVSSS world.
And remember what I said earlier about how a world ends when its Binghe dies? I think those multiple hosts ended up killing multiple Luo Binghes.
The new extra explicitly mentions that when Shen Yuan encountered problems during transmigration — because the timing was wrong and he ended up in the wrong body (Shen Jiu) — the systems did not want to erase/reset the world because it was too troublesome.
That implies that for a world to be erased, the Luo Binghe of that world must die. And that is not impossible, because the systems specifically send hosts into the world in order to save Luo Binghe.
Which means Luo Binghe needs to still be a child, at a stage where he has not yet developed malicious thoughts — or perhaps he has not even been born yet.
This is where it explains that Shen arrived at the wrong point in time and also possessed the wrong body.
Another thing confirmed here is that the systems treat their hosts like players.
Since everyone believed Shen was an “unplayable account” doomed to fail no matter what, none of the systems wanted to stay with him. So that whole part about “each system being tailor-made for its user” and “testing how much pressure the player/host could endure” does not apply to Shen, because the systems simply abandoned him to fend for himself. They also gave up on Shang.
And this is extremely important, because the systems were actively increasing the difficulty for their hosts. That is probably the exact reason why they were never able to save Luo Binghe.
Once again, this confirms that Bingzu is dead and that each system was originally assigned to a specific host. Which means there were multiple hosts before Shang and Shen.
This is where I talk about how the characters become stupid around the protagonist, and yes, Shen Yuan has enough influence to turn Luo Bingge into a normal person, which is honestly a very interesting concept.
“No one had ever managed to surpass.” Yet another confirmation that there were previous hosts before them.
Hashahhajah I wanted to put all the information in one place because this single extra chapter basically reveals all of it, and I also followed the order of the writing itself, so you can read the extra while analyzing it with me. Just keep in mind that I used a translation of the extra in my own language, so some parts might be slightly different :33
I can try to find the extras in English and include images of the lines if you want
