#please critique!!

[honeywlw]

i want to be her friend

but i want to be her girlfriend even more

so much that sometimes

i’m afraid that the longing

will swallow me whole

{e.r.}

march 23 2019

[honeywlw]

i’m not sure how i was able to sleep last night

she radiated electricity

even though we weren’t sleeping that close to each other

all i could do

was lie in the dark

and listen to her breathe

and wish

with all my heart

that she would realize

how much of an effect she has on me

march 28 2019

[honeywlw]

she doesn’t like being touched

but i crave the feel

of my skin touching hers

even in my dreams she’s soft

anything less than that

and she would just dissolve

vanish into thin air

with only black smoke

where she once stood

{e.r.}

march 18 2019

[honeywlw]

no matter how much i pine

she doesn’t return my feelings

and it aches deep inside my bones

but it feels oddly good to hurt

at least when i’m hurting i know i’m not numb

and when i’m not hurting

i’m thinking about her

and how she radiates the energy

of one thousand suns

{e.r.}

march 17 2019