Its good to read bad writing sometimes.
Tried slogging through a chapter and I couldn't bring myself to do it. It was explaining every single line gaaaaahhhh so painfully repeatitive.
Ie: "dude went to the fridge because he was hungry. He was hungry and so could really go for something to eat to fill his stomach.
"Hey are you hungry?" Dude asked because it was only fair to ask when it was sombody elses fridge he was about to eat from.
"No." Replied the other, who hated him. "I hate you."
Anyway went to my writing and immediately rewrote a line i couldn't figure out why it was bugging me so much shdjsjshs.










