Chapter 20: Production Art: probably removed scene
I believe this scene matches with some dialogue set at YUZI in the same chapter. That scene at YUZI is impossible in the final version of the game, so I believe these two scenes are remnants of an earlier version of the game. They must have been missed when the devs were taking out obsolete content, probably because they're so close to the end of the game.
It looks like there are different versions of this conversation, so maybe this earlier version of the game let Arthur get reinfected by another Silent, or emotionally damaged by some earlier dialogue choice?
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そんな放送があったのか……。
な、何をバカげたことを……。
Ｓｏ ｔｈａｔ ｗａｓ ｏｎ ＴＶ．．．？
Ｗｈａｔ ｋｉｎｄ ｏｆ ｓｔｕｐｉｄ．．．
[ARTHUR:] So that's what the broadcast was...?
What kind of nonsense...
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彼女たちが関係ないことは
街の住人が良く知っているだろう？
バカげている……本当に。
Ｅｖｅｒｙｏｎｅ ｋｎｏｗｓ ｔｈｅｙ ａｒｅｎ’ｔ
ｉｎｖｏｌｖｅｄ， ｒｉｇｈｔ？
Ｉｔ’ｓ ｓｏ ｓｔｕｐｉｄ．．． ｆｏｒ ｒｅａｌ．
[ARTHUR:] The people who live here must know well enough those two weren't involved.
It's ridiculous... honestly.
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だけど、それが事実ならば、
まだしなければならないことが
あるようだ。
Ｂｕｔ， ｉｆ ｔｈａｔ’ｓ ｔｈｅ ｔｒｕｔｈ，
ｔｈｅｎ ｉｔ ｓｅｅｍｓ ｔｈｅｒｅ’ｓ ｓｔｉｌｌ
ｓｏｍｅｔｈｉｎｇ Ｉ ｍｕｓｔ ｄｏ．
[ARTHUR:] But since this is really happening...
...then it seems there's still something I must do.
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ここで、１人情けなく
怯えている場合ではないとね。
私は教師だ。
あの２人を探しに行く。
Ｔｈｉｓ ｉｓ ｎｏ ｔｉｍｅ ｔｏ ｓｔａｎｄ
ａｒｏｕｎｄ ｂｅｉｎｇ ｓｃａｒｅｄ．
Ｉ’ｍ ａ ｔｅａｃｈｅｒ．
Ｉ’ｌｌ ｇｏ ｆｉｎｄ ｔｈｏｓｅ ｔｗｏ．
[ARTHUR:] This is no time to be standing around on my own, pathetic and scared.
/The frigid sensation grew more intense and tightened keenly around Atsuki’s body.
The air was so cold it felt like it was freezing. [Atsuki felt] the presence of something unknown, about to appear.
Somebody’s form emerged slowly from the darkness./
[note: 人影 is literally “person + shadow”, but it refers to a person’s outline, not the actual shadow they cast on the ground.]
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ほうっ、これは意外だった。
もっと品性卑しいルポライターの類、
とでも思っていたのだが、
いやなんのなんの、上品で知的な
青年ではないか？
Ｏｈ， ｔｈｉｓ ｉｓ ａ ｓｕｒｐｒｉｓｅ．
Ｉ ｅｘｐｅｃｔｅｄ ａ ｌｏｗｌｙ ｓｏｒｔ
ｏｆ ｒｅｐｏｗｒｉｔｅｒ，
ｂｕｔ ｈｅｒｅ ｉｓ ａ ｃｌａｓｓｙ，
ｉｎｔｅｌｌｉｇｅｎｔ ｙｏｕｎｇ ｍａｎ！
[Edward:] Oh, this is unexpected.
I was expecting something more like an uncouth eyewitness journalist.
But quite the contrary! You seem quite the polished, intelligent young man.
[note: I’m.... pretty sure repowriter isn’t actually an English word, anywhere?? Not sure how it made it all the way into the voiced lines too. Apparently it’s a little different from a journalist, in that a ルポライター is on-the-spot coverage that remains as objective as possible. You may notice it’s pronounced with a rupo instead of a ripo; that’s because it’s from the French reportage, not the English reporting.]
/The chill, grim atmosphere thickened, and a sinister mood filled the air.
If [Atsuki] relaxed, he would collapse./
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相手が思念操作をしている
ことは明らかだった。
Ｉｔ’ｓ ｏｂｖｉｏｕｓ ｔｈａｔ ｈｅ’ｓ
ｗｏｒｋｉｎｇ ｈｉｓ Ｓｈｉｎｅｎ．
/It was clear that the other man was manipulating [Atsuki’s] Thoughts./
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{ROUTE 1: KIRYUU DEAD. (In this case, the text is found at the end of the bank_19 file; I assume this means that this version of the scene has Edward just standing there and using his full sprite. In the Japanese version, some of the dialogue is the same between the dead Kiryuu and living Kiryuu versions, but because the text is stored in different files, it was translated differently in the English version.)
[Edward:] The good people of FORT took care of the Kiryuu Hibiki matter for me.
This time, I'm the one extending an invitation. Come with me, now.
[NOTE: This part is really annoying me because it makes it sound like HE was the one who left that Residual Thought at the Liu Yee-Hibiki fight, and then showed up at the hospital because he wanted to get rid of loose ends. But that was actually Graham!]
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{ROUTE 2: Kiryuu is alive. (In this case, because Atsuki is also talking, the scene turns into one of the "talking heads" sequences, and its text is stored in the scene002 file. Some of these lines are identical to the first version in Japanese, but because the text was translated separately, they sound different in the English version.)
ふふふ、まあ言わずともよい。
普通の人間ならば、気死する恐れも
あるこの場に、立っていられることが、
すなわち君の素性を、
私に知らせてくれることになる。
Ｈｅｈｅ， ｎｏ ｎｅｅｄ ｔｏ ｓａｙ ｉｔ．
Ｍｏｓｔ ｐｅｏｐｌｅ ａｒｅ ａｆｒａｉｄ ｏｆ
ｌｏｓｉｎｇ ｓｏｍｅｔｈｉｎｇ．
Ｔｈａｔ’ｓ ｗｈｙ Ｓｕｎａｗａｃｈｉ ｔｏｌｄ
ｍｅ ａｂｏｕｔ ｈｉｓ ｌｉｎｅａｇｅ．
[Edward:] Heh heh heh, there’s no need to speak.
The fact that you're capable of standing here, where an ordinary human would faint in terror...
...that alone tells me your identity.
[NOTE: Okay... here's the answer to the Sunawachi thing. The translator read the third line as "Sunawachi-kun", but it's supposed to be read as "sunawachi kimi".]
[NOTE: This is what happens if you left her infected this whole time. Most of it doesn't need to be retranslated, but there are two exclusive Thoughts that demonstrate Graham is also after her (and Takuya if you left him infected) because she is now a psychic.]
/Sayuri was seized by the group of officers. As they were taking her away, she passed by Atsuki./
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……っまたあなたなの！？
あなた変態なんじゃない？
．．．．．．Ｙｏｕ ａｇａｉｎ？！
Ｙｏｕ ｓｏｍｅ ｋｉｎｄ ｏｆ ｐｅｒｖｅｒｔ？！
[SAYURI:] ...You again?!
What are you, some kind of pervert?
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私を付け回しているんでしょ！
寒気がするわ。
サユリの思念が
黒くよどめき始めた。
Ｙｏｕ’ｖｅ ｂｅｅｎ ｆｏｌｌｏｗｉｎｇ ｍｅ！
Ｉｔ’ｓ ｓｏ ｃｒｅｅｐｙ．
Ｓａｙｕｒｉ’ｓ Ｓｈｉｎｅｎ ｂｅｇｉｎｓ
ｔｏ ｔｕｒｎ ｂｌａｃｋ．
[SAYURI:] You're following me! It's creeping me out.
Sayuri's Thoughts began to stagnate blackly.
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[HERE you can choose to fight the Silent (you can also get the usual game over from Ray if you fail to scrape the worms in time), or ignore her infection again]
"Death is salvation. Do what thou wilt. That is Truth."
[NOTE: Even though Edward was the one in Kiryuu's backstory, this one line identifies the stranger as Graham. In your final battle, his Silent quotes the same line from Saint Augustine of Hippo: "Do what thou wilt." So he used his mind control abilities, which, as we learned from Hoshino and Yamato, can be used on someone without infecting them. But the Silent infection we removed yesterday was part of Edward's Silent, Maggot. You have to go by this one line and a statement in the good route that she and Hibiki both had their senses of self eroded like Tanaka.
It seems like Aleister Crowley also used the phrase "Do what thou wilt" when defining his philosophy of Thelema: "Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the Law." It's possible the devs got the quotation from him instead, since we know they were looking through books about the occult while writing the Silent dialogue.]
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『なに言ってやがるんだい！』
って蹴飛ばしてやろうと思ったら、
もうどこにも居ない。
”Ｗｈａｔ ｔｈｅ ｈｅｌｌ ｉｓ ｔｈａｔ？！”
Ｉ ｗａｓ ｇｏｎｎａ ｂｅａｔ ｈｉｍ
ｄｏｗｎ， ｂｕｔ ｈｅ ｗａｓ ｇｏｎｅ．
[HONOKA:] I was about to give him a good kick and yell,
"What the hell are you talking about?!"... but he was already gone.
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気味の悪い話だろ？
まるで真昼の幽霊だよ
そこから何かさ、気分がすっかり
落ち込んでしまってね。
Ｉｓｎ’ｔ ｔｈａｔ ｃｒｅｅｐｙ？ Ｌｉｋｅ
ａ ｇｈｏｓｔ ｉｎ ｔｈｅ ａｆｔｅｒｎｏｏｎ．
Ｓｉｎｃｅ ｔｈｅｎ， Ｉ’ｄ ｂｅｅｎ
ｆｅｅｌｉｎｇ ｓｏ ｄｅｐｒｅｓｓｅｄ．
[HONOKA:] Isn't that creepy? Like seeing a ghost in the middle of the day.
After that, I started feeling completely depressed.
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悪いことや不幸なことばかり
考えるようになったのは……。
だけど、もう大丈夫さ！
Ｉ ｏｎｌｙ ｔｈｏｕｇｈｔ ａｂｏｕｔ ｂａｄ
ａｎｄ ｕｎｈａｐｐｙ ｔｈｉｎｇｓ．．．
Ｂｕｔ ｎｏｗ Ｉ’ｍ ｆｉｎｅ！
[HONOKA:] I was only thinking about bad stuff and things that could go wrong...
But I'm fine now!
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名カウンセラーの西条に
治療してもらったんだからね。
それじゃ、行って来るね！
Ｉ ｈａｄ Ｓａｉｊｏ ｔｈｅ Ｆａｍｏｕｓ
Ｃｏｕｎｓｅｌｏｒ ｈｅｌｐ ｍｅ ｏｕｔ．
ＯＫ， Ｉ’ｍ ｇｏｉｎｇ ｎｏｗ！
[HONOKA:] Saijou the famous counselor fixed me right up.
[NOTE: As with the other scene in chapter 20, there are actually four different versions of this scene, depending on whether you left them infected or not. I fixed both of them, so I can't see versions 2-4 in my game, but luckily you can tell exactly who's talking just from their speaking styles .]
[Version 2: Yuuji infected and Hirooka arrested (That is, you left them both infected)]
「おやっ？ これはこれは
いらっしゃいませ！」
ようこそいらっしゃいました。
この如月市民会館へ！
Ｈｅｌｌｏ！
Ｗｅｌｃｏｍｅ ｔｏ
Ｋｉｓａｒａｇｉ Ｃｉｔｙ Ｈａｌｌ
[YUUJI, off screen:] "Oh? Well, well! Welcome, sir!"
[YUUJI:] Welcome and good day to you. This is the Kisaragi Civic Hall!
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私、今代理でここを管理しております
大倉ユウジと申します。
市民のみな様に、より良い時間を
過ごしていただけるように、
これから精一杯やらせて頂きますので
よろしくお願い致します！
Ｉ’ｍ Ｙｕｚｉ Ｏｓｈｉｍａ， ａ
ｓｕｂｓｔｉｔｕｔｅ ｒｅｐｒｅｓｅｎｔａｔｉｖｅ．
Ｉ’ｌｌ ｄｏ ｍｙ ｂｅｓｔ．
Ｅｖｅｒｙｏｎｅ ｉｎ ｔｈｅ ｔｏｗｎ
ｈａｓ ａ ｇｏｏｄ ｔｉｍｅ ｈｅｒｅ．
[YUUJI:] My name is Ookura Yuuji. At the moment, I'm standing in as the manager here.
I intend to do my utmost to ensure a good time for the people of our fair city...
...so I ask for your continued support!
[NOTE: Looks like the TL somehow mistook 大倉 for 大島? This must've been the guy who didn't have access to the series bible, and in this case made some weird sloppy errors from just sight-reading.]
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そう言えば、あなた様は
私が以前経営しておりました、
インターネットカフェＹＵＺＩで
お会いしたことが多々ございますよね？
Ｉ’ｖｅ ｍｅｔ ｙｏｕ ｂｅｆｏｒｅ．
Ａｔ ｔｈｅ ｉｎｔｅｒｎｅｔ ｃａｆｅ
ｔｈａｔ Ｉ ｕｓｅｄ ｔｏ ｒｕｎ．
[YUUJI:] Ah, come to think of it, I believe I've met you on numerous occasions...
...during my previous tenure as manager of the internet cafe YUZI.
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まだ、私を追ってきて下さったとは
本当にありがとうございます！
今後ともよろしくお願い致しますね！
Ｉ’ｍ ｈａｐｐｙ ｔｏ ｓｅｅ
ｙｏｕ ａｇａｉｎ！
Ｉｔ’ｓ ａ ｐｌｅａｓｕｒｅ！
[YUUJI:] Permit me to extend my thanks for your ongoing patronage!
Thank you for your future support!
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それでは、私は掃除の方に戻りますね。
大倉ユウジは楽しそうに
鼻歌を歌いながら
掃除をし始めた。
Ｉ ｎｅｅｄ ｔｏ ｃｌｅａｎ ｕｐ．
Ｙｕｚｉ ｃｌｅａｎｓ ａｎｄ
ｓｔａｒｔｓ ｈｕｍｍｉｎｇ．
Ｉｔ ｌｏｏｋｓ ｆｕｎ．
[YUUJI:] Now, I must return to my cleaning duties.
/Ookura Yuuji began to clean up while humming a happy tune./
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[VERSION 3: Yuuji normal, Hirooka arrested (You fixed him but left her infected)]
あれ？ なになに、どうしたの？
もしかして、ボクを探しに
来てくれたとか？
あははっ、いやぁ～嬉しいな～。
Ｗｈａｔ？
Ｌｏｏｋｉｎｇ ｆｏｒ ｍｅ？
Ｉ’ｍ ｓｏ ｈａｐｐｙ！
[YUUJI:] Huh? Huh, what? What's goin' on?
Were you maybe looking for me?
Ahahah, boy! I sure am happy!
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あのさ、ここの人あんまり来なくて
寂しいなって思ってたところなんだ。
あのクールビューティーさんに
店を貸してからというもの、
ちょっと住むところ
無くなっちゃってさ。
Ｉ ｍｉｓｓ ｐｅｏｐｌｅ ｂｅｃａｕｓｅ
ｎｏｂｏｄｙ ｖｉｓｉｔｓ．
Ｉ ｒｅｎｔｅｄ ｍｙ ｐｌａｃｅ ｏｕｔ
ｔｏ ａ ”Ｃｏｏｌ Ｂｅａｕｔｙ”．
Ｉ ｃｏｕｌｄｎ’ｔ ｌｉｖｅ ｔｈｅｒｅ
ａｎｙｍｏｒｅ．
[YUUJI:] Know what? I was feeling lonely because nobody comes here.
Ever since I rented my shop out to Miss Cool Beauty...
...I don't really have anyplace to live.
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あっ、別にお金が無いとかじゃ
ないよ？
たださ、あの店に変わるような場所が
なかなか見つからないんだ。
Ｉ’ｍ ｎｏｔ ｐｏｏｒ．
Ｉ ｊｕｓｔ ｃａｎ’ｔ ｆｉｎｄ ｔｈｅ
ｒｉｇｈｔ ｐｌａｃｅ ｔｏ ｌｉｖｅ．
[YUUJI:] Oh, but it's not like I don't have the money?
It's just that I'm having a hard time finding somewhere that can replace that store.
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だから、家が見つかるまで、ここの
一角を貸してもらうことになったんだ。
ここの管理者さん凄く優しいんだよ。
知ってた？
Ｉ’ｍ ｌｉｖｉｎｇ ｈｅｒｅ ｕｎｔｉｌ
Ｉ ｄｏ．
Ｄｉｄ ｙｏｕ ｋｎｏｗ ｔｈｅ
ｍａｎａｇｅｒ ｈｅｒｅ ｉｓ ｓｏ ｓｗｅｅｔ！
[YUUJI:] So until I find a home, I'm just borrowing an office here.
The manager here is really nice. Did you know that?
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最初『ボクがお金払います！』て
言ったんだけど、
『ここは市民に開放する場ですから
それはしまって下さい』だって。
Ｉ ｔｏｌｄ ｈｉｍ Ｉ’ｄ ｐａｙ ｒｅｎｔ
Ｂｕｔ ｈｅ ｓａｉｄ ｎｏ ｂｅｃａｕｓｅ
Ｃｉｔｙ Ｈａｌｌ ｉｓ ｆｏｒ ｅｖｅｒｙｏｎｅ．
[YUUJI:] When I got here I told him, "I'll pay you rent!"...
...but he said, "Please don't. This place is supposed to be open to the public."
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くぅ～～～っ！
しびれちゃうよね！
ボクも、あんな渋くてかっこいい
おじいさんになりたいな～。あははっ。
Ｉ ｗａｓ ｓｏｏｏ ｉｍｐｒｅｓｓｅｄ！
Ｉ ｗａｎｔ ｔｏ ｂｅ ａ ｃｏｏｌ
ｏｌｄ ｍａｎ ｌｉｋｅ ｈｉｍ．
[YUUJI:] Oooh...! I was so impressed!
I wanna be that kind of cool, refined old guy too! Ahaha.
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あ、いや。特に早く年を取りたい
わけじゃないからね？
まあ、とりあえずボクがすることは
早くお家をお店を探すこと！
Ｗｅｌｌ， ｍａｙｂｅ ｎｏｔ ｏｌｄ．
Ｉ ｎｅｅｄ ｔｏ ｆｉｎｄ ｔｈｅ ｒｉｇｈｔ
ｐｌａｃｅ ｔｏ ｌｉｖｅ ａｎｄ ｗｏｒｋ．
[YUUJI:] Uh, wait. No. It's not like I'm a hurry to get older, y'know?
Anyway, what I gotta do for now is hurry up and find a shop I can live in!
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あれだけの額が手元にあるから、
次はもっと凄い店になるはず！
あははっ、キミも期待しててね。
それじゃ、ボク出掛けてくるから。
まったね～～。
Ｉ ｈａｖｅ ｔｏｎｓ ｏｆ ｍｏｎｅｙ
ｓｏ Ｉ’ｌｌ ｍａｋｅ ａ ｂｅｔｔｅｒ ｓｔｏｒｅ！
Ｙｏｕ ｃａｎ ｃｏｕｎｔ ｏｎ ｍｅ！
Ｉ ｎｅｅｄ ｔｏ ｇｏ！
Ｓｅｅ ｙｏｕ！
[YUUJI:] With all the money I have on hand, my next store is gonna be even better!
Ahaha, look forward to it!
Well, I was just heading out. See you later~~
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[VERSION 4: Yuuji infected, Hirooka present (You left him infected but fixed her)]
「だ・か・らっ、
アンタのそのお金、
私に預けてみないかい？」
「ははははっ！
またまたご冗談を！」
Ｓｏ ｙｏｕ ｄｏｎ’ｔ ｔｈｉｎｋ Ｉ
ｃａｎ ｍａｎａｇｅ ｙｏｕｒ ｍｏｎｅｙ？
Ｈａｈａｈａｈａ
Ｉ ｇｕｅｓｓ．
[HIROOKA, off screen:] "So? How about it? Why not let me manage your money?"
[YUUJI, off screen:] "Ha ha ha ha! Always with the jokes!"
/Hirooka Tomoyo could be seen snuggling up to a man and making eyes at him./
[HIROOKA, off screen:] "Oh, you... But I'm serious, you know? Love is all about... Oh. It's you."
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何しに来たんだい？
私たちは取り込んでいるんだよね～。
さっさと出て行って欲しいんだけど
アンタ、空気読めないのかい？
Ｗｈｙ ａｒｅ ｙｏｕ ｈｅｒｅ？
Ｗｅ’ｒｅ ｂｕｓｙ．
Ｗｅ ｗａｎｔ ｙｏｕ ｔｏ
ｌｅａｖｅ． Ｃａｎ’ｔ ｙｏｕ ｓｅｅ？
[HIROOKA and YUUJI enter]
[HIROOKA:] Why are you here? We're busy.
Can't you read the mood? We want you to hurry up and leave.
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おや？ これはこれは！
もしかして、私を探しに来て
くれたのですか？
Ｏｈ， ｉｓ ｉｔ ｙｏｕ？
Ａｒｅ ｙｏｕ ｌｏｏｋｉｎｇ
ｆｏｒ ｍｅ？
[YUUJI:] Oh? Well, well, well!
Might you be looking for me?
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あっはははっ、これは嬉しいですね。
おや？ アンタたちは知り合いかい？
Ｈｅｈｅｈｅ． Ｉ’ｍ ｓｏ ｈａｐｐｙ！
Ｈｕｈ？ Ｙｏｕ ｋｎｏｗ ｅａｃｈ
ｏｔｈｅｒ？
[YUUJI:] Ahahaha, I'm so happy!
[HIROOKA:] What? You two know each other?
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ええ、もちろんですよ！
彼は、私の店の超お得意様
なんですからね。
Ｙｅｓ ｗｅ ｄｏ．
Ｈｅ’ｓ ｍｙ ｆａｖｏｒｉｔｅ
ｃｕｓｔｏｍｅｒ！
[YUUJI:] We certainly do!
He's one of the most regular visitors at my shop.
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私が忘れるはずもございません。
本当に、あなた様には感謝ばかりで
ございます。ありがとうございます。
Ｉ ｃａｎ’ｔ ｆｏｒｇｅｔ ｈｉｍ．
Ｉ ｒｅａｌｌｙ ａｐｐｒｅｃｉａｔｅ
ｙｏｕｒ ｂｕｓｉｎｅｓｓ．
[YUUJI:] I couldn't possibly forget him.
I'm very grateful for your patronage. Thank you so much.
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だけどさ、もうアンタは店を
辞めちまったんだろう？
だったら、お得意とか関係ないじゃ
ないか。
Ｂｕｔ ｙｏｕ ｑｕｉｔ，
ｄｉｄｎ’ｔ ｙｏｕ？
Ｈｅ’ｓ ｎｏｔ ｙｏｕｒ
ｃｕｓｔｏｍｅｒ ａｎｙｍｏｒｅ！
[HIROOKA:] But you quit, didn't you?
So he's not your customer anymore.
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いえいえ、それは違いますよ？
お得意様というのは、私の店を
心から愛して下さった方たちです。
Ｎｏ ｎｏ ｎｏ．
Ｃｕｓｔｏｍｅｒｓ ｌｏｖｅｄ
ｍｙ ｓｔｏｒｅ．
[YUUJI:] No, no. Hardly the case.
A regular customer is someone who had a deep love for my shop.
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そんな方たちを、私が忘れるとでも
お思いですか？
たとえ、店が無くなったとしても、
お得意様たちの愛は永遠に残るのです。
Ｈｏｗ ｃｏｕｌｄ Ｉ ｆｏｒｇｅｔ
ｔｈｅｍ？
Ｅｖｅｎ ｉｆ ｔｈｅ ｓｔｏｒｅ ｉｓ ｇｏｎｅ
ｍｙ ｌｏｖｅ ｆｏｒ ｔｈｅｍ ｓｔａｙｓ．
[YUUJI:] How could I ever forget such a person?
Even if my shop is gone, the love of my regulars remains eternally.
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ああ、そういった考えもあるよね。
いや～、やっぱりアンタは素敵だね。
Ｕｈ－ｈｕｈ．
Ｙｏｕ’ｒｅ ｖｅｒｙ ｓｗｅｅｔ．
[HIROOKA:] Ah, yes, that's one way of looking at it.
My, you really are wonderful.
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やっぱり私が見込んだだけのことは
あるよ、輝いてるからね～。
あははははっ！
ありがとうございます。
Ｙｏｕ ｒｅａｌｌｙ ａｒｅ ａ ｎｉｃｅ
ｇｕｙ．
Ａｈ， Ｈａｈａ！
Ｔｈａｎｋ ｙｏｕ！
[HIROOKA:] You're a real shining star. I sure can pick 'em.
[YUUJI:] Ahahahaha! Thank you.
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そう言って頂けると私も
まだまだ頑張らねばと思いますからね。
だから、何を言ってるんだいって
さっきから言ってるじゃないか。
Ｉ ｈａｖｅ ｔｏ ｍａｋｅ
ｍｏｒｅ ｏｆ ａｎ ｅｆｆｏｒｔ．
Ｉ ｋｎｏｗ， Ｉ ｋｅｐｔ
ｔｅｌｌｉｎｇ ｙｏｕ ｔｈａｔ．
[YUUJI:] Now that I've heard that, I'll have to work even harder.
[HIROOKA:] And isn't that just what I've been telling you?
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アンタは今までず～っと１人で
頑張って来たんだろう？
それも、あんなに大きくて
大変な店をだね。
Ｙｏｕ’ｖｅ ｂｅｅｎ ｗｏｒｋｉｎｇ ｓｏ
ｈａｒｄ ｂｙ ｙｏｕｒｓｅｌｆ．
Ａｎｄ ｙｏｕ ｍａｎａｇｅｄ ｓｕｃｈ
ａ ｂｉｇ ｈｏｕｓｅ．
[HIROOKA:] You've spent all this time working hard on your own.
And managing such a big, complicated shop, at that.
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それがようやく開放されたんだ。
少しくらい休んだって、
バチはあたりゃしないよ。
Ａｎｄ ｎｏｗ ｙｏｕ’ｒｅ ｆｒｅｅ．
Ｙｏｕ ｃａｎ ｒｅｌａｘ！
[HIROOKA:] You're finally free of all that.
You won't get in trouble for taking a little break.
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ですが、やはり若いうちは
少しでも稼ぎたいものですからね。
だから、それには心配及ばないってさ。
私が良いあてを知っているんだ。
アンタのそのお金を預からせて
くれたら、倍額にしてやるよ。
Ｂｕｔ Ｉ’ｍ ｙｏｕｎｇ ａｎｄ
ｗａｎｔ ｔｏ ｍａｋｅ ｍｏｒｅ ｍｏｎｅｙ！
Ｉ ｋｎｏｗ ｈｏｗ ｔｏ ｄｏ ｔｈａｔ
ｓｏ ｄｏｎ’ｔ ｗｏｒｒｙ．
Ｉｆ ｙｏｕ ｌｅｔ ｍｅ ｍａｎａｇｅ ｉｔ
Ｉ’ｌｌ ｍａｋｅ ｉｔ ｄｏｕｂｌｅ！
[YUUJI:] But I want to make money while I'm still young.
[HIROOKA:] I'm telling you, I know how to do that. There's no need to worry.
If you let me manage your money, I'll double it.
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あはははっ！
ですから、そんなバカな話が
あるはずないじゃないですか。
Ｈａｈａｈａｈａ！
Ｉ ｃａｎ’ｔ ｂｅｌｉｅｖｅ ｔｈａｔ．
[YUUJI:] Ahahaha!
But there's no way that could possibly be true, right?
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言ってくれるね～。
こう見えても、今まで付き合ってきた
男たちの金を稼いだのは私だよ？
ヤツラも私に全て渡して
倍額にして返してやったんだ。
Ｙｏｕ ｓａｉｄ ｓｏ！
Ｉ’ｖｅ ｍａｄｅ ｐｌｅｎｔｙ ｏｆ ｍｏｎｅｙ
ｆｏｒ ｍｙ ｐａｓｔ ｂｏｙｆｒｉｅｎｄｓ．
Ｔｈｅｙ ｌｅｔ ｍｅ ｍａｎａｇｅ ｉｔ
ａｎｄ ｉｔ ｄｏｕｂｌｅｄ．
[HIROOKA:] Haven't I been telling you?
You may not think it to look at me, but I'm the one who made money for all my other boyfriends.
They gave it all to me and I doubled it.
[NOTE: I actually can't tell which one of them is saying the first line from the script. I'm guessing it's supposed to continue into Hirooka's next lines.]
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だってそうだろう～？
彼の財布が潤っていると、
私だって幸せになれるんだ。
Ｄｏｎ’ｔ ｙｏｕ ｋｎｏｗ？
Ｉｆ ｍｙ ｂｏｙｆｒｉｅｎｄ’ｓ ｒｉｃｈ，
Ｉ’ｍ ｈａｐｐｉｅｒ．
[HIROOKA:] Don't you get it?
When my boyfriend's wallet is full, it makes me happy too.
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彼女として当然の行いと
いえるじゃないか。
う～～ん、そうですね～。
Ｉｔ’ｓ ｎａｔｕｒａｌ ｆｏｒ ａ
ｇｉｒｌｆｒｉｅｎｄ．
Ｕｍｍｍ Ｉ ｇｕｅｓｓ．
[HIROOKA:] It's only natural as a girlfriend.
[YUUJI:] Hmm, I suppose.
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そうだろう？ だったら……。
考えておくことにします。
は？ な、なんでだい？
Ｙｏｕ ｄｏｎ’ｔ ｔｈｉｎｋ ｓｏ？
Ｉ’ｌｌ ｋｅｅｐ ｉｔ ｉｎ ｍｉｎｄ．
Ｗｈｙ？
[HIROOKA:] Isn't that right? So then...
[YUUJI:] I'll think it over.
[HIROOKA:] Hah? Wh-why?
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そうですね。金銭面のことは
色々と因縁を生みやすい物ですから、
何かとしっかり考えて行動
しなくてはいけないと思うんです。
Ｍｏｎｅｙ ｏｆｔｅｎ ｃａｕｓｅｓ
ｐｒｏｂｌｅｍｓ．
Ｉ ｈａｖｅ ｔｏ ｂｅ ｃａｒｅｆｕｌ．
[YUUJI:] You're right. Finances are apt to create many different problems.
I feel bound to consider my actions carefully.
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あなた様を疑っているわけでは
ございませんが、
ここは慎重に決断を下したい
と言うところなのです。
Ｉｔ ｄｏｅｓｎ’ｔ ｍｅａｎ
Ｉ ｄｏｕｂｔ ｙｏｕ．
Ｉ ｊｕｓｔ ｗａｎｎａ ｍａｋｅ ａ
ｃａｒｅｆｕｌ ｄｅｃｉｓｉｏｎ．
[YUUJI:] I don't mean to say that I doubt you...
...only that I need to make a careful decision here.
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あ、ああ、そうかい。
なら私は待つとしようかね。
ふふっ、私は結構気が長いんだ。
Ｏｈ． Ｉ ｇｏｔ ｉｔ．
Ｉ’ｌｌ ｗａｉｔ．
Ｐｌｅａｓｅ ｈａｖｅ ｐａｔｉｅｎｃｅ．
[HIROOKA:] O-oh, I see. I guess I'll wait, then.
I'm very patient, heh heh.
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アンタが決断するまで、
ずっとここに居るがいいさ。
ありがとうございます！
Ｙｏｕ ｃａｎ ｓｔａｙ ｈｅｒｅ ｕｎｔｉｌ
ｙｏｕｒ ｍｉｎｄ ｉｓ ｍａｄｅ ｕｐ．
Ｔｈａｎｋｓ．
[HIROOKA:] You can stay here until your mind is made up.
[YUUJI:] Thank you!
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それでは、私はとりあえず家を
探してくることにします。
それじゃ、広岡さん、青年様、
失礼致します。
Ｉ’ｍ ｇｏｉｎｇ ｔｏ ｌｏｏｋ ｆｏｒ
ａ ｎｅｗ ｈｏｕｓｅ．
Ｓｅｅ ｙｏｕ！
[YUUJI:] Well, I'm going to go look for a new house.
[HONOKA:] Sorry, but if you need something, please hurry up and ask.
I'm a little tired.
[NOTE: The first line is a good example of how Honoka's speech often comes across as masculine. "Warui kedo" and "tanomu" are less formal ways of saying "Sorry, but..." and "please" that women typically wouldn't use in media, especially in the workplace. If this were Aoi, she would use "sumimasen desukedo" and "onegaishimasu". Honoka sounds like a male student talking casually with his friends.]
