I wanna get this out there and out of my chest, because frantically? I don't like the MC of SCM
Disclaimer: This post is not meant to offend anyone who likes the MC or to "mAkE yOu sEe ThE cOrREcT tHinG". I'm simply sharing my opinion without trying to target anyone!
This topic about MCs was originally brought up by @the-voltage-diaries
I'm gonna keep count of my points so they can make sense- :"D
1. She can be really offensive
I believe MC doesn't know how to read the room first of all and this also goes hand in hand with what I said about MC being "blind" in what's happening around her. For example, she thinks all things can be fixed in life. Now don't get me wrong! Trying and having hope about something can be really wonderful, but there's a finishing line in this. For example: You don't pass your exams the first time. You can keep trying until you do and get the future of your dreams. That's the positive way of where not giving up is good. But looking at it from a negative perspective, let's say you realize your partner is abusive (in any sense). If you keep trying, because "I cAn fIx tHem" is bad. If someone abuses you, it's time to give up in this relationship.
An example of this where the MC encouraged something she shouldn't, is in Scorpio's "musings on love" *spoilers* Basically at some point in the story, Scorpio saves small girl abused by her parents during a punishments job and the parents are arrested by the police. And there goes the MC.......... "I wish one day the little girl can return to her mother"...... MC-..... THIS WOMAN ABUSED HER. And you're wishing for them to get back together?!? I don't think a person like that should be trusted near a child EVER again! She could've wished for the kid to find a new, REAL family or happiness in general, but instead she said this.
Another example is in Teorus' sequel. It happens in the free sample episode of this story. Teorus' father neglected him from a terribly young age and basically stigmatized Teorus emotionally. Now what Teorus finds the worst is being compared to that man, who he doesn't even refer to as his father, because he hates him so much. And what does the MC do?.......... Compare him to his father. And let's say she didn't know Teorus felt uncomfortable with that. I think it became really obvious when Teorus' mood instantly dropped and his whole demeanor basically changed, because that hurt him!! And yet she didn't stop.
Now this might be only me, but that's still my opinion. In Karno's epilogue. (The story where they had sex for the first time basically. I think it's the epilogue.) MC thinks Karno doesn't find her appealing enough and that's why he hasn't had sex with her yet and basically, MC is trying to get him to see her as a woman by dressing differently or wearing a perfume Partheno gave her to ensure he'll be infatuated with her and stuff like that. At first I didn't mind it. She was putting out there the fact that she's ready. But then was when I grew to dislike her actions. She saw Karno didn't make a move and she kept pushing. Karno is not an innocent little flower, he knows when someone is trying to insinuate a sexy time and the fact that he doesn't give in might mean that he's not ready for it. That wasn't the case in his epilogue, but it could've been and by that I mean: Men are not always down for sex. I hate this trope that a man is always ready to move into sex and only women need time. Karno could've not been ready to do that yet and she kept pushing! I would've liked it if she simply let him know she's ready and patiently wait for him to come out and say he's ready too.
2. The writers say she's strong, feisty and independent, but they don't SHOW it.
An example I'm gonna present is in Leon's epilogue. The part I want to mention is when she arrives at the mansion and Teorus with Ichthys pull a prank on her like- "You and Leon kissed and made out and blah blah, why don't you spend time like that with us too???" And all MC did was STAND THERE and BEG LEON TO SAVE HER. Like- if you try and see you can't make it out, sure, ask for help, it's not a shame, but she didn't even try!! She just stood there and took everything they were throwing her way. She never once tried to say "stop, you're making me uncomfortable" or something like that.
Or many times when she can do something herself, but instead just waits on her god to save her.
MC needs to realize that dating someone doesn't mean you're not your own individual person anymore. Of course, if you need help, it's not a shame to ask for help. And it shouldn't have anything to do with genders. It should be a being helping another being through a hard time. Not "a MaN hElpInG a wOmAn bEcAuSe hE caN Do iT bEtTeR". I want the MC for once to stand up and say: "You have no right to disrespect me!" "You have no right to overstep my boundaries!" I want her to show herself some respect and fight for her rights, without waiting on Knights In Shining Armours™
3. I don't like her dynamics with the gods
One example is what I mentioned about Karno above.
Another one is something that gets on my nerves so SO much. It's whenever Scorpio does something nice for her and she laughs in his face. Everyone familiar with SCM knows that Scorpio is really shy and it's not easy for him to voice his love for her, but he tries hard, he really does. So when he tries and does something for her, it makes my blood boil how she makes fun of him like- "omG yOu ARe dOinG SomEthInG nIcE?? haHaHaAAhH!" Like- this man is trusting you with a part of himself he hasn't shown anyone else and you laugh in his face?! I want her to just freaking appreciate him and build a welcoming space for him to slowly step out of his shell more and more at his own pace. I see her doing that and every time Scorpio shuts down again, because she proves Scorpio's fears. That he'll be made fun of for his feelings. (I'm not saying teasing him and making him blush is bad during playful moments. I'm talking about times where the mood is serious and he feels ready to open up to her and what he receives is so rude of her.)
She dates someone and them goes around complaining about them. Like- if they're not what you want, why are you with them??? Don't try to change them! That's toxic! I'm not talking about times where a love interest has a flaw and it needs to be fixed. In those cases, she has every right to call them out. I'm talking about her complaining about a character's whole personality!! Like- She complained that Leon was not lovely dovey enough. That's not the way Leon expresses his love, but he has other ways and the MC technically pressured him into going into an amusement park where she was basically having fun all on her own!! She could've still asked to go on a date with him, at least to give it a try and see if he actually likes it or dislikes it, but for goodness' sake. She could've picked something Leon had chances of enjoying as well and not just go about what's more popular. Like- just because some couples do it, doesn't mean it's enjoyable for all couples. Like- some couples prefer fancy dinners, some amusement parks, some a simple walk around the park AND I'M MAD SHE DIDN'T SPARE A SINGLE SECOND TO ACTUALLY LEARN SOMETHING MORE ABOUT HIM AND PICK SOMETHING BOTH OF THEM COULD'VE HAD ENJOYED.
She also disrespected Hue's boundaries, when he said: "don't go around asking people for my personal information. Let me show them to you on my own." AND SHE DID THE VERY THING HE TOLD HER NOT TO. Hue was not hiding anything. He just wanted to take things slow and get to know each other on a deep, TRUE lever. And MC started rushing, disregarding his wants completely. Which once again proves my previous point of: men are not inherently ready to move quickly into things. They too need time.
Also..... In every... Story... With Huedhaut...... Dear MC, maybe you should start putting trust in your boyfriend, because he has proven to you so many times (and not with actions of bare minimum) that he adores you and he'd never betray you. If the MC had something bad happen to her and now she's scared of abandonment or something like that, I would've understood. I would COMPLETELY understand. But THIS MC is written with the perfect life and nothing burdens her, so she's just being delusional. Which is a perfect cue for my next point:
4. She's terribly unrealistic
She's written as perfect, with the perfect background, with the perfect life, perfect personality AND THAT'S REALLY UNREALISTIC!
Unfortunately, bad moments are a part of life, so instead of making those moments feel like failures and worthy of costing you a happy future, media should start showing MCs who yes. They have been through thick and thin. And yes. They have felt really hopeless. But yes! They're still getting their happy future, because nothing can take that away from you. The only problem MC seems to have is about her relationship with her god. Which again, makes the MC appear like she doesn't exist outside the relationship, like she's not her own person.
Sometimes families can be toxic, we might find out a friend is toxic and loose them. We might loose our job, face mental or physical health complications and by not giving the MC any of it and labeling her as perfect makes me think they lebel people who have faced difficulties as less than perfect. AND THAT'S NOT TRUE! NO MATTER WHAT YOU'VE FACED, THERE'S ALWAYS SOMETHING WONDERFUL WAITING FOR YOU AND YOU SHOULDN'T GIVE UP, BECAUSE YOU MATTER AND THERE'S ALWAYS A PLACE FOR YOU AMONG US.
Also, they say she has the "perfect personality" (even though they actually write her to be the opposite), which again: is so unrealistic!! No one is perfect, but that doesn't mean they're not worthy of beautiful things in life. You can't always be fair and selfless. Sometimes you'll face dark moments and you'll act selflessly, maybe you'll even snap at people during your anger. Human nature is so complicated, nothing is black or white. We have many shades. Humans make mistakes, but what matters is doing our best to pick ourselves up again and make up for them, like apologize to someone we might have wronged or snapped at.
Also, you can't be liked by everyone. Some people will dislike you, but that doesn't mean there's inherently something wrong with you. That's how humans work. Not everyone is made for everyone. (But we still have someone who will love us unconditionally.)
So i wish they didn't try so hard to portray a flawless MC. I want them to gives her flaws and watch her try and atone for them. I want to see her face difficulties and survive her way though them, because that will give the readers hope that, "I can do it." "I will make it." "My past doesn't define me." The future is in my hands and no one can strip me of my happiness, because I deserve to be happy too!"
Oooof that was long. I'm sorry!!! And I hope I didn't offend anyone with this, I love you all💕💕💕💕 also, yes, @the-voltage-diaries I read the tags💖 and yes. I'd love some book recs if you have any😚
Warnings: I don’t know now to rate this, be advised? May take some time reading.
Characters belong to:
- Obey me – Shall we Date
- Voltage: Star Crossed Myth
Mc is Y/N, I have written her as female. Can gender bend if you please. ENJOY!!
Chapter 1: Goldie
Just another typical day, well typical in the last year of your life anyways. Not many humans had the opportunity you did to study in another realm. You were recruited to study in Devildom under an exchange program to prove, demons, angels, mortals etc can live and respect each other side by side.
‘Diavolo’s dream’
To say it had been a pretty hectic few months would be an understatement. Luckily everything seemed to have worked itself out, you’d finished the exchange program (and passed!) even with all the ups and downs. Thankfully making it through alive, Belphie hadn’t killed you; hell, even Lucifer’s faithfully devoted and very scary temperament hadn’t killed you…. Yet, anyways.
Also adding that you found out you were a reincarnated, descendent of Lillith. The brothers’ sister not weird at all or something like that, to be honest there was a lot to take in for a simple human like you. Here you were though, furthering your study under the permission grant of Diavolo. Proving that, even when faced with adversity, when we (demons/humans/and angels) work together; we can get through anything.
Praying this year was going to be better, for all of you.
Beel seemed happier and hungrier with Belphie back, Mammon was still up to his usual antics to get rich quick. Lucifer working away and keeping order within the house, Satan reading away his life. Asmo as conceited as always, and Levi being Levi – going to school, gaming and anime.
Yup, another typical day in the House of Lamentation.
“Hey Y/N, next week there’s a school trip. We’re traveling to the outer limits of the city to study some of the earth for our essays regarding remedies. Want to be study partners?” Satan quietly sits next to you, prompting you to look at the D.D.D notification.
“Yea sure, I have yet to see the outside of the city! Is it like, devildom’s country side to human world country side?”
Satan shakes his head, “No, it’s barren waste land. Not even safe for low graded demons to be out in. So, with that said try not to wonder, yea?” he quirks his eyebrow up.
That was a dig at me wasn’t it?
You give him a pouty look, before laughing it off and nodding, “yea, yea, thanks for the warning.”
“Ah man, normally another school trip wouldn’t be so bad, but the outer limits are a bit boring!” Asmo folds his arms in exasperation. “Were literally going to spend the day, looking around stinking areas for rocks! Just to write about it, so dumb. I just done my nails, and the smell is going to take weeks to come out of my uniform.”
“Smell?” You curiously ask Asmo.
A voice jumps in the conversation, from behind “Ever smelt burning flesh of hundreds of rotting corpses?” Belphie inputs as he and Beel take their seats at the table.
Your eyes widen and you shake your head ever so slowly, the only thing you could imagine was that one time the candle flame lit a couple of your hairs on fire. That smell was bad enough, but burning flesh? Hundreds of rotting corpses? You had seen and smelt a lot of things but that would be a first, and you couldn’t exactly say you were curious to find out.
Just as you were sinking into a mind fuck, Lucifer appears at the head of the table, “Enough, no need to worry Y/N. Belphie is exaggerating.”
Your pulled from your thoughts with a look of relief.
“It’s just the smell of burning flesh, now no more talk, let’s try to have a peaceful breakfast.” He calmly states as he picks up his folk and knife unbothered.
WHAT!?!
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The school hours passed by rather quick, you couldn’t help but to wonder, why in the hell did the outer limits smell of burning flesh? Was it like the bible stated, sinners burned in hell? All day your thoughts were plagued by this. When you ran into Simeon and Luke on your way out of school, they too were granted another year to study. Which was strange Luke couldn’t wait to go back to the celestial realm? Another year?
“Hey, you guys got a moment?” You didn’t mean to sound pathetic but your voice came off almost non-coherent.
“Y/N dear, what’s the matter?” Simeon gently caresses your cheek, “You look pale, has something happened?”
Head shaking side to side, before turning into a nod, “No not really, it’s more about what’s going to happen. This trip our class is going on later this week, the outer limits…. I was told of the smell…” Your voice getting quieter and quieter.
“Ah, you’re wondering why it smells of burning flesh? Luckily you were told before going, at least you can prepare yourself for it.” Luke pipes up beside Simeon, shaking his head in thought.
Nodding, “Yes, why exactly?”
“To be frank, we don’t ‘exactly’ know ourselves, this whole place has a variety of smells. The out skirts of the city are forbidden to even us, unless granted otherwise. It’s dangerous, If I were to give an educated guess, I assume hells fire. Creatures out there getting to close? Like moths to a flame.” Simeon grabs his chin, looking down to the floor.
Is that it? Guess I’ll have to ask one of the brothers, they might know; you think. “Hm, okay thanx a bunch. I better be going; I’m supposed to meet Mammon and Levi at the gates.” You turned and left.
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“You’re not going to tell her?” Luke looks up at Simeon.
“No, didn’t you see her face? Its best if she didn’t know…” Simeon watching as your figure disappears.
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“Where have you been, keeping me waiting with this scum.” You were approaching the gates of the school when Levi walked up to you.
“Sorry, I bumped into Simeon and Luke on the way.”
“The goodie two-shoes and the chihuahua, and stop calling me scum, I’m your older brother. Show me some damn respect.” Mammon joins, walking on the other side of you.
You debated bringing up the question but failed to, Levi was going on about another anime Solomon suggested. Mammon ridiculing over how dumb amines are, maybe another time you thought. The walk home was noisy but good, kept you from overthinking.
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Days went quick, before you knew, it was the morning of the school trip. Oh shit, and you failed to find out, why?! Frantically getting ready in your room, it was like you didn’t even know your own room. Couldn’t find anything you needed, and even better, a bad hair day. Great way to start your day.
Just as you were rushing around the room, a light knock at the door caught your attention, “Come in!”
Lucifer appeared, “Y/N, breakfast was ready 19 minutes and 3 – no, now 4 seconds ago. Why are you not down yet? It’s going to be cold at this…” He scanned you over and sighed. “Your nervous about todays events? Don’t be, there’s no need to concern yourself with things you can not control. Here...” In his hands a small tin. “These are a special devildom coffee bean, open the tin and hold it under your nose if the smell today becomes a bit too much.”
You accepted and cracked open the tin, the smell was pleasant and strong. The smell exploded into your room, let alone your nostrils. “Thank you, Lucifer, how did you know?”
He slightly chuckles and ruffles your hair, “You look like a ‘hot mess’.”
“Hot you say?” Giving him your best flirty smile.
“Yes, but you seemed to have ignored the mess part. Now, quickly go brush your hair and straighten your uniform. Breakfast and then school, no more stalling.” Shutting you down and exiting with a shake of his head.
The tin was a nice thought, and he called you hot. Yes, you heard that right. Ha, ha, today worries seemed like yesterdays, you felt much better after Lucifer’s visit.
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The trip towards the limits was full of chatter, Asmo sat behind you and Satan on the bus. Leaning over the top of the seat and filling in the silence with conversation. You subconsciously found yourself tapping the tin in the pocket of your uniform.
“Watcha got there?!” Asmo points. Satan’s attention follows the direction of Asmo’s finger.
“Lucifer gave me some coffee beans, to help deal with the smell.” You pulled the tin out and gave a gentle shake.
“Wow, that ass hat actually gave a damn about some one else rather then Diavolo.” Satan says with a scowl on his face. “is hell freezing over?”
Asmo and you slightly giggle, Satan’s calm persona really clashed with his temper. One would think he was a Gemini, hard to believe he was a Libra.
The bus stopped at its destination, after the class head gave a simple and short instruction, off you two went.
When they said barren waste land, you imagined nothing but rock for miles. No, the sky was dark shades of red, green and blues. There were trees, or dead ones anyway, every hundred yards; scattered about. Far and in between the trees and nothingness, was pits of crimson flames. The ground was a peculiar orange/brown colour, unlike the dirt at home, this felt of sandpaper. Near trees, and the pits you seen giant cliffs of rock. Minus the burning souls and demons dancing around with pitch forks, this was the perfect envision of what you were told hell looked like. Nothing like the realm of Devildom, which actually deemed lively and civilized.
The smell was overbearingly grotesque, is this the smell of burning flesh? You wanted to vomit; the tin of coffee though did help. Satan joked about shoving a couple of the beans up your nose to stop you from the dry heaving, every time you caught your breath.
You thought seriously about what he joked, anything to help with the smell.
So, you did.
Satan was first stunned and then fell to his knees in a fit of laughter. “You really are something else, Y/N”
You honestly couldn’t care how stupid you looked, at least the smell wasn’t so strong. You walked along the areas permitted, examining and collecting rocks and soil samples. When in the distance you swore you heard voices. You scanned the lands before you, nothing, you were about to return to collecting.
“Can you hear me?”
There it was again! The voices, were more of a voice, over laced like an echo.
“Satan, can you hear that?” You scoot closer to him crouched nearby.
“Hear what?” He asks not even looking from the rock and book in hand.
Maybe you were freaking yourself out, I mean there’s nothing out here.
**FLASHBACK** Hadn’t Belphie contacted me similar before? No, there’s definitely something out here with us.
“Satan, I think we should make our way back to the group.” Not breaking eye contact with the eerie terrain ahead.
“Yea, we just need a fire toads pebble. They’re usually found near the cliffs, just there. Come on.” Seemingly ignoring your warning, he grabs your hand and walks towards the cliffs which seemed soooooo far away from were you wanted to be right now.
“Can you hear me?”
No, no, no. The further out you two walked the louder the voice seemed.
“Don’t be afraid, I mean you no harm my dear~.”
Just like that, the anxiety that was growing was gone, like a spell had been casted over you. You looked around again, nothing.
Who are you?? You thought to yourself.
“Who am I? There are many things here my dear, I am just one of many...” it replied to your thought! The voice sounded soft, calming and cooing.
Finally feeling at ease, your feet started to walk on their own accord. Straight out towards one of the pits, Satan quickly grabbed your arm, breaking you out of your trance. “Yo, best not wonder, remember?”
Shaking your head, “Right, got the pebble?”
“Yea, thanx for all the help by the way.” He sarcastically counters.
“I’m sorry, I’m just not used to… well this” You gesture your hands around.
“It’s fine, but you’re not using that same excuse too when it comes to writing the paper, just so you know.” He smiles as he drags you back to the bus.
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Back at the house, you stripped from your uniform and ran yourself a bath. Asmo was right, it was going to take some time to rid yourselves of the smell.
You slumped into the warm, lavender scented water.
“Can you hear me?”
You bolted straight up, covering your chest and rapidly looking around your bathroom. Again? But how?
“It’s alright, don’t be alarmed, my name is Daz.”
“I don’t mean to come off as rude ‘Daz’, but I’m a little busy at the moment could you possibly not!” You spoke out loud, trying to figure out where the voice was coming from. It sounded right by your ear.
A knock at your door. “Yo, Y/N? You alright in there? Who are you talking too?” Mammon’s voice sounds from the other side of the door.
“No-one, go away! I’m bathing!” You quickly slump back into the water.
“Weirdo, your hanging out with Levi too much, starting to talk to yourself now too!” Banging on your door before exiting your room.
“Why didn’t you tell him my dear?”
You closed your eyes and whispered, “Look, I’ve seen and experienced a lot of weird things here. Today being no different, go away, id like to bath in peace.”
The voice did not respond, thank god! You took your time bathing, trying to unwind, accidentally falling asleep.
** The dream started off back at the bus, that same voice, echoing.
- Can you hear me?
You turned around and found you were all alone, no one on the bus. No driver, no classmates, just you.
- It’s alright don’t be afraid.
Your attention drawn to what looked like a trail of grey light, leading out into the barren land… You followed it.
- That’s right, come to me. I’m alone, I could use a friend, just like you. The voice seemingly getting louder by a few nots.
You ask, - Daz? That you?
- Yes dear, I am here, or near I should say.
- Daz, where are you, or who are you sorry?
- I’m a soul dear, but I’m afraid I need your help. I’m stuck.
- Stuck? Where, why can’t I see you?
- Keep coming my dear, you’ll see.
The trail ended near a cliff drop, you had never been here before but yet it felt familiar to you.
- Daz? Where am I?
- You’re here.
- Here?
- Yes, look over, I’m here.
You glanced around and found a huge boulder, engraved into the stone a large black bird? Finely detailed, behind the black bird was a ring of flames, unlike anything you’d ever seen before. You reached out to touch the mark, and in that moment a loud and powerful voice boomed like thunder –
DON’T!!!! *****
You woke from your dream startled, sitting in now cold water. Shivering you step out and wrap yourself with a towel, glancing at the time.
3 Hours, you’d fallen asleep for 3 hours?!
Luckily you didn’t drown, quickly getting dressed, you decided to go seek out one of the brothers. Any of the brothers, this feeling and this dream really had you bothered.
Wasn’t hard to find anyone though, you could hear banter back and forth ringing from the kitchen. You approached the doorway, and pushed open the swing door. Mammon, Beel and Belphie were chattering and cooking. Upon entering they all glanced your way and froze.
“Oh my, are you alright!” Belphie asked with eyes as if he’d seen a ghost.
Mammon rushed to you next and placed his hands on each side of your cheeks, “By Diavolo! Y/N, you’re ice cold and your lips are practically blue. Did you fall asleep in the tub after I left?” He whipped off his sweater and draped it on your shoulders.
“I’ll make you tea.” Beel turned to put the kettle on, Belphie eyeing you suspiciously.
You wanted to speak, but felt as if you couldn’t. Even though you slept 3 hours, you felt so tired, too tired to even speak. Mammon guided you to a stool next to the counter, you sat and nuzzled into his sweater. Mammon lectured you on how easily you could have died, during which you could feel Belphie’s eyes staring into you.
As if he could sense what was going on, “Y/N, speak.”
You looked at him and tried.
Nothing.
The three of them looked at you in shock. “You can’t speak, can you?” Belphie reaches over to tuck a strand of hair behind your ear.
You nod, you didn’t understand why, as if your voice was gone. You felt this overbearing weight in your chest when you tried, a force stealing away your energy.
Belphie barked out, “I’ll get Lucifer.” He scurried out of the kitchen. Beel and Mammon gave each other a look, before Mammon said he’d take you back to your room for rest.
Not long after, Lucifer, Belphie and Satan appeared in your room. Lucifer was given a quick run up about the trip today, Mammon explained you falling asleep. You couldn’t even tell them about the voice, about Daz or the dream. You watched helplessly, shaking and nodding when prompted with questions. When an idea popped into your mind, you tried to get up to get paper and pen.
“Whoa, whoa, whoa! Slow down there crazy lady, you’re obviously sick. Stay in bed” Mammon tries to push you back. You shake your head and point to the direction of your desk; Satan catches on and retrieves a notebook and a pen.
You summarized everything they spoke about only including, the voice, Daz, the dream, and the marking followed by yet another more powerful voice. You ended the page with how you believe its related to how your feeling. Then handed it to Lucifer, he immediately began reading it. His face hard to read, until.
“Who’s Daz and…...” His eyebrows knit together; face plastered in anger. “I need to speak to Diavolo immediately! You are all to watch over Y/N, I will send a medic.” Then he was gone, he took the notebook with him.
“What the hell was that all about?” Mammon observes.
“Y/N, this has something to do with the voice you mentioned today isn’t in?” Satan looks at you pitifully.
You nod your head.
“Wait, were you talking to this said voice earlier when I came to your room?!” Mammon grabbed a hold of your shoulders and gave you a shake. Belphie silently pulled Mammon from you, still looking over quietly.
You nodded again; silence followed, everyone looked to be thinking about something.
“I think its best we take turns watching over Y/N until Lucifer gets back, and Y/N if you hear that voice again, be sure to say… or write, sorry….” Satan reaches out and places a hand atop of your head.
You closed your eyes, was this a dangerous soul? What was with that dream, why was Lucifer so angry then?
You began to ponder; you should write your own ‘Guide for Dummies’, what to do and what not to do. Would save future students or visitors from all the troubles you seemed to have always found yourself in.
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A medic came to the house along with Solomon, Simeon and Luke. Everyone was whispering outside your door, only you, the medic and Satan remained in your room. After a thorough assessment the medic gestured Satan to follow him outside. Solomon, Simeon and Luke entered.
“Oh Y/N, we’ve heard, I’m sorry you’re not well.” Solomon places a get-well card at your side table, along with a fruit basket.
Simeon takes a seat next to you on your bed, “Whatever happens, just know you are safe. They are watching.” He takes your hand, cold, oh so cold.
They? Who are they? You wonder.
“Liars, all liars, so many secrets... This is not my doing my dear, do believe me.”
Your hand grips Simeon’s tightly, Luke and Simeon exchange stares. Luke opens the door and ushers one of the brothers in, Belphie. He grabs another notebook and pen and places it before you. As you write, a striking headache befalls you, enabling you from finishing. All you could write was, ‘He’s sayin-‘, the medic rushing in next, using weird tools and gadgets around your head.
“How strange, I can not detect any black magic, or any sorts of soul tampering.” The medic removes the tool from your chest, and turns to the others. “I need to report back to Diavolo with these results.”
You pick up the pen with what little strength you have, ‘what’s going on?’ and place it for Simeon to take. He gently graces your hand before taking the note, “It’s going to be alright; I promise.” He said no more and left, Luke following close.
Answers you just wanted answers.
“You won’t get answers, can’t see you the secrets before you”
You closed your eyes, and decided to speak to the voice, the only one who answered to your questions. – what do you want?
“Answers, and Justice. Just. Like. YOU.”
Daz? Is that even your name? What justice?
“I’m known by many names, but Daz is fine for now. Free me, I was wrongly imprisoned… Diavolo is a liar, his father is a liar, THEY’RE ALL LIARS! Free me, and I will help you dear. Anything you want. Help me, help you.”
Next thing you knew everything went quiet. Everything was dark.
You saw visions of black and white lights vigorously smashing one another, then a great light illuminated. You felt weak, a fading feeling, cries… you heard sobbing. You saw Belphie and Beel, only briefly, then another figure. He had blue hair, a uniform of white and gold. An angel? No, he felt much stronger than the presence Simeon and Luke gave off. The figure turned to you, holding one of the lights in his eyes in hand, the other spilling over with tears.
- Who are you?
“It will all be alright, my love...” He said this and reached out his free hand.
In that split second, your eyes opened. As your head cleared, you felt increasingly better.
“You’re awake!” Asmo jumped on the bed peppering you in kisses.
“I’m fine.”
YOU SPOKE! You looked at Asmo, I have a voice again!!
“Yayy, that pretty little voice of yours is back.” Wrapping you in a hug. “Best not over do it though, we don’t quite know why or how. As much as we like to hear it, let’s not push it.” Tapping the sides of your arms.
You agreed, and slowly got up, even your energy was coming back too.
After a quick wash up, a meeting was held. Diavolo had ordered Lucifer to keep you home for the time being, each one of the brothers had a privilege duty to stay home with you throughout the week. Taking turns each day, today you had Asmo, he didn’t mind either of the latter. Lucifer collected study materials and notes for you to be occupied with, and instructed you not to communicate with the voice in your head.
“Why, who is he, is he dangerous?” You just wanted answers.
“I can not discuss this with you. I’m sorry, just heed my order.” He gives you a stern look before turning and taking his leave as well.
“I told you”
You take a deep breath, and sit at a dining room table to work. Asmo was painting his nails opposite of you, chirping away about colour contrast and matching his outfits. His D.D.D rings and he leaves to take the call; you paid no attention. Mid reading, you heard Asmo scream, you darted from your seat and sprinted to the direction Asmo walked out of. As you passed through the doorway everything warped, you felt dizzy; falling to your knees. Sight moderately blurry, you forced yourself up and looked around.
You were no longer in the House of Lamentation.
You were standing on the out skirts of the city, in exactly the same spot in the dream, where the bus should have been. You looked around and seen a trail of footsteps heading into a direction, your foot prints. How? Was it not a dream? Or is this another dream…
“Y/N, you came.”
The voice returned, sounding sickly sweet.
But how? I was just at home.
“Home? How touching, do you think they care for you as Y/N? or perhaps they care about you because of Lillith.”
No, that’s not why… What he said stung a little, you wanted to deny it but apart of you festered. A part of you agreed.
“Come to me dear, help me, help you.”
You were off again, following the previous path you had set. Until you stood just before that very same boulder, with the very same marking from the dream. You reached out and touched it, no voices were heard.
The ground began to rumble, shaking with an earthquake force, the boulder before you began to crack.
“That’s it, just a little more!”
An image began to appear in your mind, a dark figure, with pitch black hair. Dark markings on his forehead and eyes, and a black robe covering his body. His skin was sickly pale and his voice churning from the calm and cooing state to dark and haunting one. He gave you a creepy smile and a blood curdling laugh, which pierced your body and soul like electric bolts of energy. Some bolts began to curl and strangle within you, like a snake, strangling your organs of life. Fear took hold, spreading in your mind like wild fire.
Darkness embezzled you, “Lucifer! Satan! Beel? MAMMON?! SOMEBODY, ANYBODY!?!” You screamed their names for dear life while you fell into the abyss.
“Your life is now mine former goddess! I’m free at last, I will destroy all of you for placing me here! Foolish girl, don’t you know not to go talking to strangers!”
His face contorted, an even wickeder smile ripping into his higher cheeks, up to his ears.
How were you supposed to know though, the voice calling to you sounded, calming? Cooing you to obey and come, so you did.
How were you supposed to know, there wasn’t a sign saying do not touch!
How were you supposed to know, nobody told you anything!
You felt the life slowly leaving your body, death. This time there’s no going back. They didn’t come, no one’s saving me this time. So many secrets, so many lies.
With the last of your thoughts, the last of your hope.
Please, oh please, I wish this would end quickly.
Just as you accepted your fate, a blinding and powerful light engulfed the area.
Tears welled in your eyes, “You came, you guys actually came!”
….
As the light dimmed, and your vision cleared, 6 figures stood before you.
…..
Weakly, “Wait, who are you?”
“If we would have waited, you would have died filthy human.” The one with black hair styled a little like Lucifer’s spat out. He frightened you!
“Be kind Scorpy, can’t you see she’s been through hell, like literally! Ha-ha” The one with soft brown hair chummed in, like a happy child.
“Silly Goldie, were gods obviously.” This one who spoke had beautiful blonde hair, and flashed you a charming smile which caused your pulse to quicken.
Not exactly listening to what was being said, to engrossed in what they were wearing. They had on white uniforms with gold, some of white, gold and black. You scanned the men before you –
One stood out most, he seemed familiar, like you’d seen him before. The blue haired one from you vision! Your eyes widen, suddenly another light and a voice that followed.
“Welcome to Paradise Y/N, daughter of Man.” That same voice, the one that warned you like thunder, spooling across the sky.
You squinted your eyes to get a better look, he looked just like the wicked monster in black. Only he was not him, this man was surrounded by light, warm light. His hair long and almost a white gold, laying upon his head, a crown. Beautifully draped in white and gold attire, he was stunning, prettier than any man or woman alive.
“You flatter me child, but we are no mere man.” He didn’t speak out loud but replied directly to your thoughts, warm and inviting “We are gods.”
Gods? Oh, okay…
Wait.
GODS!?!?
That was the final straw, you had fainted. All your energy gone, the last of your strength exasperated from the crippling events.
To be continued….
CH2 - CH3 - CH4 - CH5
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So I just started playing Love Nikki, and the outfits are absolutely gorgeous...so much so that they remind me of magical girl outfits (which I love). I’m also a huge fan of magical girls, so this AU came to fruition lmao
Background:
In this AU, the MCs are a magical girl group dedicated to keeping the city safe from evildoers. They became magical girls in exchange for having their one true wish granted. What they don’t know is that their newfound powers come with a setback: every time they use their powers, their lifespan slowly decreases.
KBTBB MC
The leader of the magical girl group. She’s plucky and confident when leading everyone...but her real personality is shy and insecure. Outside her magical girl duties, she keeps to herself and has a hard time speaking up for herself.
She still keeps her day job at the Tres Spades, but when trouble happens, she rushes to the scene immediately to try and help.
Her wish: To love herself.
Her powers: She follows an Alice in Wonderland motif, so her powers center around playing cards. Depending on the card she draws, the kind of attack + power level changes (with the 2 of clubs being the lowest and the ace of spades being the highest).
Outfit inspo:
SLBP MC
In the group, she’s the mom friend who always looks out for her more reckless teammates. She’s a bit old-fashioned, and she sometimes acts like she isn’t from the modern era for some reason...
She runs a really small, but cozy family restaurant with her mother. But since the city’s mayor has been threatening her to close it down, she’s been struggling financially to make ends meet, especially since her mom is sick.
Her wish: To be able to provide for her family.
Her powers: Her powers are cherry blossom-themed! She wields a magical katana that turns into cherry blossoms to cut up her opponents.
Outfit inspo:
SCM MC
The heart of the group. Arguably has the strongest hero complex, too. She’s always feels like she has to help virtually everyone, from a cat stuck in a tree to a stranger who trips on the curb. It reaches the point where she doesn’t even have regard for herself anymore sometimes.
She works at the planetarium and loves the stars, but sometimes she swears the stars look down on her.
Her wish: For everyone to be happy.
Her powers: She follows a zodiac constellation motif. Her powers change depending on the zodiac (Leo/Scorpio for offensive powers and Aquarius/Pisces for defensive powers, for example).
Outfit inspo:
SITS MC
The most laid-back member of the group. She has a naturally easygoing personality and is good at making other people laugh. She’s also been known to daydream sometimes, though.
She’s a struggling lyricist who’s been working hard to get into the music scene for the longest time, but she’s always been rejected by everyone she’s ever met. Because of that, she gave up on her dream and chose to work an office job.
Her wish: To have people listen to her music.
Her powers: She follows a music motif! Depending on the song she chooses to play, she can damage her opponent or heal her allies.
Note: I tried to post this once and it glitched, rip
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In order, top to bottom, right to left:
Musca (Scorpio's daughter) - tomboy
Perseus (Dui's son) - soft boy
Volans (Ichthys' son) - hipster, will probably grow ridiculous facial hair at some point
Circinus & Pyxis (Zyglavis' twins) - Circinus works at a shrine, which is actually undercover work for the Punishments department. Pyxis is secretly a goth, but since Punishments uses black in the uniform, he gets away with it.
idk how to feel about takes of mc being the therapist/mc being the babysitter bcuz shes just as chaotic as the gods. Granted S1 is just her being the s1 gods therapists but its more of 'hey guys thats really fucked up' and provides resources/experiences for them.
Homegirl is a force of nature she only acts on pure emotion at the best and worst of times.
