This is probably gonna be a spicy as hell take on the finale but
I think I might’ve preferred a narrative where the entire cast struggled with Gangle’s “why can’t I cry for him” thing … with Caine. And he remained dead. Maybe I would’ve liked to see that they related to him as a person too, more than what we got, which was no reaction whatsoever.
I clocked that Jax would probably only be wrapped up in the loss of adventures, instead of thinking about Caine at all
(in hindsight “now we have nothing” is a big OOF considering that technically means he considers the people around him nothing)
That he at the very least wouldn’t verbally express missing Caine is predictable, given he did his best not to be attached to the humans.
Zooble especially ???????
Ragatha especially ???????
-guy who you spend the most time with, considering you isolated from the adventures and everyone else for a good long while, dies
-guy who you’ve been around FOR YEARS dies
And if we’re to suppose that looking INSIDE Jax’s mind is complete, that still means Caine had no space inside his mind. None.
During the week where I had only seen the finale once, not the second time, and didn’t realize the redemption scene was technically a within-episode-span flashback and not continuous with him watching the cast (ie, he had not been watching them from the point of his death, which is what I thought at first. The Caine we saw initially and the Caine that was returning to the tent was the same.) I started thinking about him observing that they did not mourn him.
~No one mourns the wicked~
Of course they mourn THE HUMAN SADIST and not the AI who kept them from Abstracting for years.
In-world, Caine would be devastated by this.
A final nail in the coffin, that they really did not have the slightest connection to him.
Surely he would not have done all that mess for them if he had been observing and realized just how deep their indifference went, meanwhile watching Pomni struggle and risk the digital lifelong chronic pain just for a shot at reaching Jax, the unapologetic abuser.
“Wah wah im a bad person” you know people who harbor this thought STILL MANAGE TO APOLOGIZE, RIGHT???????
And the characters around him fold to this nonsense. Do you know what a Mary Sue is, dear reader? The (usually self-insert in fanfic, although there are examples like Bella Swan) one who, no matter how badly they act, everyone likes and/or fawns over? TADC took that trope, and made it LARGER THAN LIFE. If you look up “Mary Sue” in the dictionary now, it should have a picture of this trans woman. (or femme leaning. Or whatever she is). This is ofc hyperbole, there are other traits that make up a Mary Sue, none of which Jax has. But THIS particular trait. Is the one that stands out, goes above and beyond.
You had a great concept, somebody who leaned all the way into escapism in an environment that maximally enabled it.
You even had great cinematic ways to get it across.
But you fumbled with handling those around this character.
The hypocrisy is immense, by this point.
You’ll reach out to Jax AGAIN and AGAIN and AGAIN even after that she-rabbit beat up your heart in the most personal way possible, (inhuman levels of “I’m not mad about this mistreatment” which by this point are you a real person at all? Maybe Jax was right all along /hj you did get flattened by the archetype of “woman endures everything to emotionally save the man” just like Ribbit got halfway Fridged)(the narrative kept insisting they were all people, “still human”, but they don’t act like it) but never once thought to try to have a heart-to-heart with Caine.
Zooble, same thing. Jax DELIBERATELY abused zem and Gangle, no feelings involved except glee, as [he] takes out his problems on you, by no fault of your own, yet ze takes Caine to task loudly for acting out on directly hurt feelings.
Ragatha straightforwardly mourns Jax even after he’s aggressively shot her, probably put her through every single thing that Zooble mentioned him doing to zem and Gangle in ep 7, ie torture, BIZARRELY thinks “it should I’ve been me” instead of a TORTURER, ???!!!!?!!?!? will go out of her way to avoid hurting his feelings or assuage them (ep 5) EVEN THOUGH she HATES him (quote, ep 4) but it never occurs to her that Caine’s feelings matter or do anything but FAKE ‘list of what we like about you’.
Hell, go for another round of torture, my guy.
Clearly they don’t mind that much!!!!!!
It only makes him a “pain in the ass”, not a torturer. Make it make sense!!
Yeah hypocrisy, having double standards, and indifference maybe “shouldn’t be” punishable by torture but for YOU IN PARTICULAR who got shoved into a box, and platonically spurned ALL YOUR LIFE, welp. What exactly does anyone expect.
“Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned”
but multiply it by like over 20 humans, 2 of which created you
and yet he wasn’t even all that furious, once he got his yelling in his office out.
Maybe THIS time around they’ll actually try talking- or begging- which is STILL a form of TALKING- instead of just concluding “oh we can’t communicate with him, we can’t gauge how he thinks” Y’know you could ASSSKKKKKK HIMMMMMM.
ask him what he’s thinking!
or even ask him questions like,
“is this what it’s going to be like forever?”
“is there anything we could do to get the previous adventures back?”
“do you just hate us now?”
^given his overall behavior throughout, and phrasing in 9, “was I really that bad” (NOT to mention Gooseworx’s word on the matter!) this question might’ve genuinely perplexed him!
Made him pause for a minute.
He’s just tossing you around a bit. Right. He’s not like. Angry. Just kinda put out at the whole mess? Hate? How would that …? Ummmm.
Since they picked the “right” button and he never mentioned being aware they wanted the other one, this should come as a surprise that he’s suddenly acting like this. AFTER YEARS. Or maybe one of them could put together that maybe he did see it and was naturally hurt!
You know, since this show is supposed to be about “RELATIONSHIPS”!!!
Or even, I don’t know, think about what he DID say to you and engage with it!!!
Make the slightest attempt at trying to understand him!!
Or heck, since Zooble is apparently AWARE his feelings were hurt (what happened to “we can’t gauge how he thinks”????) you already knew some of what the problem was!? right?
Kinger couldn’t have a discussion with HIS CREATION?
(I’m telling you guys, this could’ve made such a frigging compelling story if the cast actually did just think of him as “just an AI,” and didn’t realize he was a person until the final hour. As it is, they act like he’s not a person, anyway, narratively, until he comes asking for forgiveness.)
(Then magically, he’s a person!)
(“It’ll take time”, Zooble says, when it took 0 time for you to, with NO apology offered, nor olive branch, like Caine, basically welcome JAX into the fold.)
(As it is we have to contort our brains into coming up with reasons for all of this disjoint. Like is it the power difference? Or is it because they’re Othering him? The latter would make sense, but given the story had him conclude it was ALL his fault, the Othering doesn’t make as much sense in that context. Because then, narratively, the humans would bear at least some kind of portion of the blame.)
But in the scenario where he took extra measures to keep them all contained and not wandering around, after the attempt on his life, and decided, upon some sort of visual review, that Jax ignoring him at the dinner was how they ALL felt about him, so why in the hell go out into the Void on a search and break his back anymore for them-
(instead of the narrative handing you a solution that forced him)
(wait … does this count as a Deus Ex Machina?????)
(once again this all BEGS the question, WOULD Kinger have actually found anything wrong with his code if he had attempted some sort of “fix”? Kinda seems not!!!! Let’s see him deal with the implications that this is NOT a malfunction, but rather acting out two decades of emotional neglect!!!!!)
Maybe you all should actually try to DEAL with the central problem this time!
Never mind that any of this would ultimately only be forced by your own self-interest in escaping mistreatment.