overhauls?
Hey, Lynx here. I want to vibe check something with yall.
As I’m working on the family trees for QH, my past mistakes in not properly gauging the ages of cats are catching up with me. I’ve been getting better at combing through the wiki and texts to gauge the approximate ages/birth times of the background cast, and my inaccurate earlier guesses are befuddling me as I plan for future litters. Compounding my frustration is the fact I displaced many cats from their home generations in my earlier drafts (such as Commanose/Olivenose. an apprentice in late Po3, birthed in the first arc. what was I thinking).
I’ve asked Dullard for permission to overhaul the background cast and to ask you guys if yall are okay with this too.
There will be some intentional displacement (we purposefully aged down One/Wrenwhisker and Silverstream to be in Fireheart’s apprentice generation and I have no issue with that), but I hope to sort everyone who only got two scenes if that into roughly when they’d be born.
Shadowclan in particular is going to have quite a lot of displacement, Yellowfang’s Secret introduced FAR TOO MANY CATS to be useful, and Brokenstar’s reign killed SO MANY KITTENS that the Clan’s population is severely bottlenecked. Look at this-
So, long story short, here’s what I plan to do:
- Overhaul the allegiances of Shadowclan, Windclan, and Riverclan to better reflect their approximate ages and provide easier planning in future arcs.
- Canon story material may be touched up, like fixing a name or appearance.
- Major characters will be minimally altered at most (such as Russetfur’s child being Commanose, another kitten(s) will take her place), but appearances and names will not be touched, nor any relations depicted in the fics proper.
Here are the alterations I can think of off the top of my head:
Shadowclan: make Nightpelt a young elder; get rid of Cloudpelt; change Russetfur’s litter and Wigeonfur’s second litter.
Windclan: take out Aspenfall and Ashendawn, replace with Sorrelshine and Pigeonflight, add more old people.
Riverclan: it’s mostly tidied up, it’s just Emberdawn that’s pissing me off.
So yeah. What do you guys think.
Dullard note: I have approved of making these changes as needed. It’ll be up to you guys if or how Lynx goes about them.










