I haven't written traditional writing with structure in forever. So, here's my attempt to do so. Please critique me, I think I did this wrong. Still learning how to truly write other type of poetry structures outside of mental dumps and free write...cheers to @writtenconsiderations for a great writing prompt!
[Objective: Nature & Love | Required Words: Rust, leaf, dim, fall, crept | Aim: Traditions 5/7/5 Haiku]
Dim, I fall like leaf
Fall, I rust for a reason
Unknown, love crept in
Dim, love crept in
Fall, I rust for a reason
Daydreaming on leaf
Fall often, leaf me, dim
for a reason uncertain
Seasons crept in bliss
Seasons crept in, fall
Dim, I rust for reasons,
becoming leaf, again
Creation birthed
Dim people, rust like fall leaf,
Sin crept in with them
