So I'm using @abimee as a style study for art class right now, and my next step in this project is basically just drawing a comic til I run out of time and the exam projects are released. I started with a piece of writing I did for whumptober last year, and drew 7 sides of a comic based on just the opening as a practice, originally in my own (?) lazy style. I then did some work based on abimee's art, and he very kindly gave me feedback on that, which my art teachers were soooooo excited about, so I went back to those first seven pages and redid them (over the same sketch) trying to follow abimee's feedback.
Anywho, here they are:
I focussed on adding texture (side #2 is my favourite for that) and letting my lines go where they wanted to rather than sticking really close to my sketch or anatomy.
Overall, I'm pretty happy with how they turned out! I think I'm gonna keep working on texture as I continue with this comic, and make sure I keep referencing abimee's art in terms of how the linework looks. I recon this is about halfway between where it was and where I wanted it to be