Things are going okay, actually. Sorry I haven't updated in a bit; I don't know if I'll ever be back to daily posting. Thank you so much to anyone who gave me world building advice; I have the post saved.
So, I've been thinking a lot about TSP. Around the time I made the world building post, I had a little depressive spiral about all of its flaws, and I felt like I could never get TSP fixed. Then I had a thought I'd never thought about TSP before, in the 12+ years since I've had the idea: "give up."
It was a haunting and terrible thought. I've poured so much time and effort into it. I love it, and I want to make it as good as it can be. But it was so overwhelming, I didn't know where to start.
So I decided with world building. Then I started doing some of that off and on.
I've thought more and more about what needs to change, and I don't think I'll be starting a Draft Six until it's a little clearer.
So the following are the directions I'll be focusing on before Draft Six begins:
World build! Figure out the power system, religions, celebrations, animals, etc to make Alium feel alive! And man, I gotta utilize Occam's razor.
Perspectives. I have a lot of first person narrators, and while I tried very hard to make everyone distinct, I realized I was going to either need to switch to third person or do something creative. I've decided on the latter, though idk how it will turn out.
Conflict. What a mess. I keep trying to make it work, but it needs an overhaul.
Themes. I have series long themes that need to be developed in Part One. I need to be very firm on these for cohension's sake.
Plot. Yeah, there's an overarching plot and TSP is episodic by nature, but I know it gets meandering off. I need a focus, or a couple, to make it feel cohesive.
Idk how long this will take. Feels like forever; I won't have a lot of motivation for a while, but thinking about TSP in a positive light for the first time in months is actually so refreshing.
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