#tw danger

[gemsofgreece]

Never forget the real victims and the real heroes

I only care about them and those like them - for us who only sit and watch - braindead as we are - those who ruin this country unapologetically for decades, I don’t feel the slightest drop of empathy. Every nation has the governance it deserves - a saying that is very true.

[dandysworldheadcanons]

Mentions of death, agony, and violence.

the reason why most toons (excluding soulvester, shrimpo, blot, and my ocs.) wont hurt twisteds is because whatever pain in inflicted on the twisted the normal toon counterpart feels that pain. (Besides lethals, as they just turn into the twisteds. Whereas, to my knowledge, most twisteds are just copies of the normal toon counterpart.)

so, if soulvester decapitates a twisted or blot suffocates one, the normal toon counterpart will feel that agony.

…damn.

[writingquestionsanswered]

I’m not sure if you’ve answered this before but what are some tips for writing a fight/shooting scene in third person limited?

I feel as though I get stuck on the details and less the emotion and quickness

Stuck on Fight Scene in Third-Person Limited

In third-person limited, you really want to zero in on the POV character's experience. Putting things into sensory detail really helps with that. What can the POV character see, hear, taste, smell, feel? Since they're sensory details related to the immediate action of the fight, you can easily work them into what's actually happening (the "quickness" as you put it), and sensory details lead naturally into emotional details. If a character sees something dangerous, like a soldier coming their way, they may feel fear. If a character hears something like a call to action ("Forward!") they feel determination, readiness to fight. If they smell smoke, they may feel panic or a sense of wanting to locate the source. You get the idea. :)

Here are some previous posts that might also help:

Giving Fight Scenes More Impact Fight Scenes and Action Scenes with Impact

Happy writing!

[helenofsimblr]

Guy: Its alright dad, Apex is dead.

Bob: What!? Wha…

Elita: Suddenly my father got a good look at Guy through the little window and his jaw almost hit the deck…

Bob: Guy your… you’re uh…

Guy: Like you, I know. Listen we are fast out of time, there’s no heavy water in here, he dumped it all.

Bob: And… we are going to splat in just over 3 minutes Guy!

Guy: I have an idea! 

***

Guy: We still have the maneuvering thrusters drawing power from the reactor. That's how the station is relatively stable and not tumbling… All we have to do is overload the thrusters and we can alter the station trajectory!

Bob: The mathematics of it would be huge and the thrusters might explode…

Guy: Doesn’t matter if they do explode dad. The angle is 14 point SOMETHING degrees… I had almost worked it out before Apex dislocated my arm. If we aim for an azimuth of 15 degrees and accelerate using the aft thrusters, it will be enough to miss the city altogether and crash it into the ocean. 

Bob: The reactor though if it's not cooled it’ll still blow! And we won’t strike the water properly, the station will cause a massive wave as a result!

Guy:  It’s… it’s all I got Dad… The ocean is our only hope to stop an atomic catastrophe! Drown the reactor! 

Bob: That - should - work! Rip a few pipes in there to ensure fast flooding, I’ll run to the control room, on my signal send me the power, then we get to the escape pod, son! ONE minute no more! 

Guy: One minute! GO DAD! 

***

Elita: My father raced back to the control room where he and Apex had fought before and readied to do his side of the job. His body was already healing from the abuse Apex had given it, but he didn’t care if every bone in his body was broken, Guy was alive, no thanks to anybody but Guy himself. It was right there, my dad made a definitive decision about his future, if he survived that is, as I say, we weren’t out of the woods yet! 

[skipsjack]

Mafia AU. Luz goes +10 Gay for Amity big teef. What can Luz do for Amity to go +1000 Gay AAKDJJSKS In this AU Amity also has a tongue piercing?

Amity said “oh your a street type of person? do tell me more” and has never lived it down since. Luz all dirty or soaked n wiping blood off her face with the back of her hand? One hit K.O. Amity wasn’t ever one for the Fancy types but she sure as hell wasn’t expecting to b into This. Running hand through wet hair? She’s staring w Big Dumbass Eyes. if its messy and/or bloody n Luz does it Amity is Staring. Luz is also smug, she almost always is, but there are Levels. theres Extreme Smugness, where Luz just has this air of She Is The Captain Now and you could swear the girl was immortal by just how careless and snarky she was being. could hold a loaded gun and willingly put it up to her head with no prompting and keep it there with the most Confident look that no matter what happens shes going to come out Invincible. Amity (and the others tbh) yell at Luz a lot for pulling stunts like that but Amity does it 70% out of “you DUMBASS” & 30% “Nobody Can Know I Am Into That”

[oceansinthedesert]

tw for risky behavior lmao

I'm out in the city alone rn because I want to feel excitement and fear to have a change of pace from the soul-crushing sadness I've been going through lately

I'm 100% aware this is dangerous and dumb but I'm so sick of being sad

[mooshfluff]

Stop filling your paci nipples when you're gonna use them!!! That's dangerous and you can choke! Glitter can get in your lungs, tiny beads or other charms can choke you! Pacis break, they get chewed on and they break and if they're filled with anything, it's dangerous!

Report people who sell them!! Don't buy them even if you're just buying for display! Don't encourage bad and dangerous behavior! Stop this trend before someone dies!

[hannah-deactivated20220725]

I’m Safe, Guys!

I’ve escape, guys. But I don’t have long. They’ll be looking for me, and they’ll be after my head.

They... they did terrible things to me. I’m lucky to be alive right now.

Guys, seriously, I’m not kidding! These people we write about... we aren’t just people with vivid imaginations.

Apparently some people’s minds are portals into another person’s mind... or many people’s minds.

Some people are so good at “creating” a lot of characters because their minds are-

Shit! Guys, I have to go. They’re back. I can hear their