7. Something you hate to see in dialogue. 17. How are you procrastinating today?
Something you hate to see in dialogue
Two things come to mind, mostly from recent fics I’ve read, lol
A) A lack of character voice. Your characters shouldn’t sound interchangeable. Hunk’s word choice and syntax are as different as his hobbies and posture from Keith, whose are different from Lance, ect ect. So often characters are given lines that would just never come out of their mouth and it instantly shoves me out of the story.
B) Tildes. If you don’t recognize the name, these things: ~. I get using them in internet chat speak. But they absolutely do not belong in a character’s dialogue, either. And if you do use it, it should be extremely sparingly and also extremely character specific.
I’m fired up about these currently, but they have absolutely ruined fics for me before.
How are you procrastinating today?
Ironically, I’m procrastinating from cleaning up and work by actually doing my writing. Yay!












