off anon to submit a long block oā text and yes i am the OCvees submitter from wayyy back too if you remember that (i have a lot of eevee ideas)
its sort of medieval but not, because its supposed to be that the eeveelutions have divided into kingdoms with different power structures and they all hate each other ofc, and each kingdom demands you turn into the e-lution (Ex: all umbre-doms must become umbreons or else they are Thrown To The Dungeons for being ātraitorsā).
the main character is an eevee named Ordi who hails from the Umbreon Kingdom. Ordi (12yo he/they AroAce) is very stoic/bland/serious and follows the kingdomās rules to the T (like a loser). He has a best friend named Jewel, whose outgoing and not afraid to voice her opinions, and he has an older bro (18) named Blanche, who is an umbre that dyed his fur white and his rings blue because heās Edgy and Unique and a Rebel who hates the umbre kingdom
the theoreticalĀ comic would start with Ordi in class learning all of this stuff, then the kids whoāve evolved into umbreons pick on him for not being an umbre yet (11-12yo is the typical evolve age). Ordi ignores them and goes home. at home he talks to his parents (stern government official mom and bored nerd dad, both sort of distant parents but still loving towards their kids, just not obviously) abt not evolving, since his bro Blanche evolved when he was just 9, to which they reassure him that his dad was a late bloomer and evolved at 17 (note: eevees who dont evolve by 18 are sent to facilities to force them to evolve or exile them). Ordi feels slightly better
Ordi runs into his brother as heās applying his blue rings (sorta like stickers over the normal rings? or contacts?) and they banter, Ordi kinda hates him in that āwhy is he so rebellious ugh!!!ā he cant understand why his brother wants to look so flashy. their mom does have red ring contacts and plenty of other umbres have ring contacts too, but its kinda frowned upon to dye ur fur another colorĀ cause the black color is kinda a symbol of the umbreons.
anyway Ordi sees his bro sneak out and is partially just curious and partially worried heās doing something against the umbreon code. welp, Ordi is proven right as he follows his bro to the border (to which Ordi is worried about a Vaporeon attack since they border the Vapors, NOT the Flareons which is a trauma thing for the momās backstory thats not important rn also Blancheās father might secretly be a Flare oop-). there, he sees his brother meet with an Espeon. NOT JUST ANY ESPEON. this Espeon is green. and not just dyed fur!!! sheās shiny.
this is the Princess of the Espeons.
Ordi is horrified to realize his brother is meeting with and DATING (and totally conspiring with!!!!) the heir to their mortal enemiesā thrown. so ofc he confronts his brother and they get in a screaming match where Blanche tells him not to be a sheep and that he loves Beauty and nothing can keep them apart and Ordi is like āim gonna tell mom!!ā Blanche is obvs like āno dont!!!ā and Beauty sits there like āuh, im just gonna go-ā
so somehow Blanche convinces Ordi NOT to tell mom or dad, and they head home all angy. they sleep and the next day occurs, Ordi goes to school, blah blah, exposition with bullies (the lead bullies are twins who also evolved young BTW. i forget their names or if i even gave them, but oneās a guy, oneās a girl and they come from a typicallyĀ rich kid high pressure family).Ā so the typical bullies pick on Ordi and call him an āever 'veeā but Jewel defends him and gives the bullies a good olā punch. a Middle School Playground fight ensues and Jewel starts evolving from the exp gained!
but Uh Oh itās morning, and exp gain + friendship (with Ordi) + sunlight = Espeon. so Jewel evolves into an Espeon which is a big No No and she gets taken to Jail. Ordi is shocked and horrified and wants to save his friend. he goes home and his parents sadly tell him this is the way, and his dad says he just has to stay quiet and obedient and do as heās told like always. his mom grimly (hesitantly?) agrees.
Ordi canāt accept that his best friend is just gone forever now, possibly in harmās way, because she evolved into something she didnt even mean to!! so he HAS to save her, and, bitterly, he turns to his big bro and asks if his Espeon gf can help save Jewel. Blanche agrees and is like āsee how corrupt the system is!ā but Ordi wont admit so and says its just one mistake. so Ordi and Blanche go to meet Princess Beauty, who, of course agrees to help them, and Ordi thinks its just cause Beauty wants to save a fellow Espeon and have insight into Umbreon life via Jewel, but Beauty explains its because she believes all the kingdoms should learn to love each other, and that they need to live together in harmony, and that everyone should evolve into what they want. Ordi thinks thats BS but Blanche believes in it whole-heartedly with a side of pessimism like ābut like thatāll ever happen, all the kingdoms are rotten.ā
anyway, Beauty says she knows a 'vee who can help them, and that Ordi just needs to find out where Beauty is being held. so Ordi goes home and asks his mom (government official) and she tells him after a bit, and Ordi reports to Beauty. then, at night, Beauty sends a Vaporeon named Dewdrop (they/them) to do the rescue, which shocks Ordi because how the hell does an Espeon know a Vaporeon??? (then it starts to make sense cause duh, Beauty is meeting Blanche at the Vaporeon-Umbreon border, how ELSE would she be there? ā¦further more, why isnt she at her kindomās royal castle??)
so Dew uses the river to get to the side of the Jail with Ordi (Ordi is not happy abt the swimming and water and makes sure to extra hate it bcus eevees arent supposed to learn to swim until after they evolve in fear they become Vapors). Ordi is also unnerved because Dew doesnāt say a single word at all to him, and they look super emotionless and kinda scary (which makes Ordi suspect/fear that Dew wants to kidnap them). Dew uses waterbeam or whatever to try and break a hole/wear down the water, and they do manage to get in!!! Ordi sees Jewel locked up (along with other evolved vees and even a few umbreons, all of which he thinks poorly of tho he does realize the hypocriticalness of his throughts). he tells Jewel heās gonna get her out of there but sheās telling him to run, now, and heās like why??
and, predictably, thereās an Umbreon police team there and they see Ordi and chase him. Dew takes Ordi and runs and Ordi screams and is like āno!! not without Jewel!ā but Jewel uses a new Espeon move of hers (idk which) to knock Ordi away, and he and Dew barely manage to escape into the depths of the river and into the heart of Vapor territoryā¦
or so Ordi thinks. once they surface and stay surfaced, Ordi screams at Dew to take him back and that they cant kidnap him, but Dew just shakes his head and starts walking. with no choice, Ordi follows him and they go to some strangeā¦ tunnel, bunker of sorts, that leads to a giant shelter. Beauty is there, and Ordi isnt sure if heās relieved or nervous to see her, but she greets him and questions where Jewel is and Ordi snaps that it failed. Beauty says that now that the guards know their face, they will be after them, and that Ordi cannot go home. Ordi is horrified and denies it and basically throws a temper tantrum, kicking and screaming and yelling (and crying), but then a Sylveon appears and Ordi is shocked into silence because a Sylveon??
everyone knows that Sylveons live like nuns in the mountains, far away from the war, living in bliss and peace and whatever lies they tell themselves. ALL kingdoms hate Sylveons because Sylveons think theyāre so noble and great being all 'peacefulā and wistful, but that theyāre naive and think that all kingdoms should just love each other like its a fairy tale.
this Sylveon is named Pixie and she is very hyper. so hyper that she shocks Ordi into silence because he just wasnt expecting it. she welcomes him to the Ever Vee resistance and that heāll love it here and isnāt he Blancheās little bro??? aww how cute she can see the family resemblance!! Ordi questions what the heck sheās talking about and Pixie lays out some plot stuff, saying that sheās the leader of this Ever Vee base, where survivors of the wars and rebels and, well, ever vees can live together. Ordi is stunned, cause he thought that, aside from an insult, Ever Vees were just a group of outcasted unevolved eevees, not a.. rebellion group? Pixie just chuckles and says surprise! and welcomes him once more and says he can room with the other kids since they dont have space! then she just Leaves (giving Beauty a flirty goodbye).
Ordi has shutdown by this point and allows Dew to lead him to his room, where he meets a small, scared Jolteon who has bandages all over one side of her face and eye and is missing an ear. she doesnt say anything, just stares in fear, but then the other girl, a very loud and equally energetic as Pixie Glaceon greets Ordi (the Jolteon also flinches at her volume). Dew leaves them, and when the Glaceon introduces herself as Autumn (ābut you can just call me Autie!ā) and the Jolteon as Jolty (ābecause we have no idea what her name is cause she wont tell us- well she doesnt say much anyway! more than Dew tho, they never ever talk ever!!ā) and then asks Ordi for his name and backstory, but Ordi just snaps at her to shut up and that heās had a difficult day. he storms to his bed and crawls in and puts the blankets over his head. he thinks Autie is quiet for once but then hears her whispering very loudly to Jolty about what weedle stung him or some other poke-metaphor for Cranky
the next day, Autie loudly walks Ordi up and he begrudgingly follows her (and she talks the entire way about how sheās gonna be the greatest Glaceon warrior one day) and Jolty as they lead him to get breakfast. there, they meet the rest of the cast. the first is Vine the Leafeon, who is Autieās older brother. Vine is reprimanding Autie for being so obnoxious. then walks in Inferno the Flareon, who sneers at the newcomer and complains about having more dumb little kids in the building. Vine tells him that theirs more adults than kids and Ferno tells him to shut up, to which Vine does. Ferno demands Vine get him something to eat and Vine does and Autie glares at Ferno and says he doesnt like him and Ferno says the feelings mutual brat. Autie sticks her tongue out and then, of course, being a rational and mature 17 nearing 18yo, Ferno lits up a fireball at her, a 13yo child. (note: Jolty is also terrified and shaking and clinging to Ordi during this, which he hates/is confused by)
thankfully, another Flareon interrupts, with Dew at her side. this Flareon has a scar down her face, and glares firmly at Ferno and reprimands him. Ferno grumbles and says āSorry aunt Smolderā and angrily walks away to Vine, who just came back and is oblivious to Ferno attempting to lit his sis on fire. Ferno roughly drags him along with him, even tho Vine wanted to eat with his sis. anyway, the adult, wartorn Flareon introduces herself as former General of the Flareons, Smolder. Ordi tenses, knowing how awful the Flareons are. As Ferno just proved, they are angry, blood-thirsty, aggressive, and vicious monsters who take no prisoners, merely kill for the fun of it. after all, thatās why his mom moved away from the Flareon border ('isnāt it?ā he wonders).
but Autie happily greets and hugs Smolder, calling her mama Smolder. Smolder chuckles and says hello to you to, patting the energetic girlās back. Ordi questions if sheās really her mom, but Smolder says no, Autie just enjoys calling her that. Smolder says that Pixie may be the leader, but sheās the one in charge of the care for all 'vees in this base, the little ones especially. Ordi feels surprisingly calm with Smolder, but Jolty is still clinging to him and staring at Smolder like she murdered Joltyās family, so heās hesitant to truly trust Smolder or Dew or anyone else for that matter.
anyway, they eat, or whatever, yada yada. thereās some yucky āflirtingā between Vine and Ferno where it clearly establishes that Ferno is abusive/toxic towards Vine and just using him and Vine is spineless/desperate and stays with him regardless. also establish that Dew is mute and never speaks. some (reluctant on Oreās part)) Autie, Ordi, and Jolty bonding as quick friends. later, Smolder tells Ordi that his brother is here to see him and Ordi mad dashes to his bro.
he is upset to see Beauty with Blanche, but then demands that both of them take him home. Blanche says they cant, that he will be arrested on sight, that even mom and dad know now. Beauty says heās safest here and Ordi argues with them, but, ya know, eventually Ordi realizes that if he goes back he will be treated as thoughĀ heĀ had evolved into an Espeon, and that he truly is a traitor and then he has some Feelings about that and shuts down once more.
Beauty says sheās gonna go talk to Pixie and gives Blanche a quick goodbye peak, then Blanche and Ordi make their way to (somewhere idk, lunch?), where Blanche tries to comfort Ordi that everything will be okay, that he knows its scary but that heāll be safe here and theyāll still try to rescue Jewel, but Ordi doesnāt respond at all and Blanche gets worried. but theyāre interrupted when Vine walks out of a room with a bruise on his cheek, to which Blanche is like āwoah! Vine, right? are you okay?ā and Vine is like āuh, yeah, uhm, its cool, I, uh,ā and stutters into oblivion when Blanche offers to get a berry to heal him. luckily, Autie saves Vine from his gay malfunction by squealing and hugging her bro happily. she then gets super interested in Blanche because heās āwhite and blue like a Glaceon!!!ā
as Autie pesters him and inspects him, Vine tells Autumn to stop bothering him, to which Blanche questions why she has a Leafeon name when sheās a Glaceon. Vine explains that they were from a Leafeon family, but that Autie had been obsessed with being a Glaceon since she was young. Ordi questions in disgust why a vee would ever want to not be what their kingdom was (doesnt she have any pride?) to which Autie exclaims that Glaceons are the coolest ever and who wouldnt wanna be one!!!! Vine explains further, saying that Glaceons rescued them when they were young and had gotten caught in an avalanche. Ordi is shocked and questions why Glaceons would save Leafeons when everyone knows they hate each other as much as Umbreons and Espeons do. Blanche starts saying that its ridiculous propaganda and that vees of any kingdom can get along but Vine interrupts to say āthen they destroyed our entire village and left us orphaned.ā
thereās a beat of silence and Blanche just goes āwhat?ā
Vine goes into Backstory Mode and explains that the Glaceons that saved them were soldiers awaiting orders. they saved Autie and him for whatever reason, and were truly kinda nice to them, but that they were still young. Autie and Vine were too young to realize that Glaceons being in Leafeon turf was suspicious and didnt realize they were stationed there, awaiting ordersā¦ to destroy their town and capture the icy area that the Leafeons had stolen from them previously. Autie and Vine escaped when the Glaceon that had previously saved them recognized them and gave them mercy. Vine took Autie and ran way, but, Autie could not understand what had happened and idolized the Glaceons still, and, of course, evolved into one. now that she had done so, Vine knew they couldnāt go to a Leafeon village, so instead he searched for the Ever Vees until he found Pixie.
And then Autie finishes it with āAnd now Iām gonna be the bestest Glaceon soldier ever and become their General just like Smolder was!!ā
anyway not sure exactly what happens after that, but, basically, Ordi angsts some more but finds himself reluctantly becoming friends with Autie and Jolty, eventually he becomes good enough friends with Jolty that she quietly admits to him her real name is Emma, and also that her family and home was burned to the ground by Flareons. Ordi also becomes closer to Smolder and Dew, as they are both kinda parental figures and mentors to him. Smolder would admit to Ordi that her children were killed by the war and thats why she left despite being a General who had killed so many mercilessly; she could never imagine harming a child but hadnt stopped to realize that she had been killing many via orders to her troops. she forced Ferno to come with her per her brotherās request, not that Ferno was happy about that as he still thinks Flareons are superior (and loves how afraid Jolty is of him).
thereās some more Vine and Ferno being in a toxic relationship and Ferno being an a-hole to everyone always without remorse. he actually injuries Autie once and that makes Vine snap at him, but then Ferno smacks him and says he cant yell at him like that because heās just a stupid Leafeon whoād be nothing without him (yikes). Blanche comes to Vineās defense and Vine is blushy-blushy. Blanche and Vine become good friends.
there would be some cuts in the comic to Ordiās parents. his mom is super worried (dad is too, but the focus is on the mom), as she thinks about her past and, shocker, itās revealed she had fallen in love with a Flareon, but when she got preggo with his kid, he wanted her to join the Flareonās side, that the kid had to be a Flareon, it was in its blood, but she refused and the Flareon got angry and he and his buddies burned down her neighborhood (no deaths tho). she ran away where she met Ordiās father, who was kind and understanding and boring and they pretending Blanche was his instead of the Flareonās and no one was the wiser.
thereās also cuts to Jewel, who plots her escape. when she goes to face a judge for her 'sinsā, which she thinks is totally stupid cause sheāll be imprisoned forever anyway. but then, to her surprise, they say they have a special mission for her, that she can be a spyā¦ at first she denies, but thenā¦ shocker!!! her former school bully (purple rings, female twin) appears when sheās moping about her decision in a jail cell and the former bully says that she arranged for this by convincing her dad to do so, so that Jewel could have a chance at life! Jewel is shocked and questions why sheād do that and the bully (damn i need a name for her and her broā¦ Nora and Aron, there) gets a slight blush but says that she admired Jewel for being so strong and defending her friend like thatā¦ Jewel questions why sheās a bully and Nora is like āi dont know! ā¦cause my brother is? ā¦everyone expects me to be perfect cause i evolved early and my dadās rich but iā¦ i dont even know if i wanted to be an umbreon in the first placeā¦ā Jewel is shocked, but ends up accepting being a spy per Noraās request.
so anyway, thereās some implied romance between Smolder and Dew too. nobody knows Dew backstory but Smolder, who teases them over it sometimes, but only kindly. Dew never says anything, even to Smolder, but theyāre close anyway (and sign language exists, ya know, although Dew still doesnāt use it often). they are the eldest adults at the facility, as its actually kinda just the cast plus a few people who come in and out. even Pixie is younger than them. Smolder has a distrust in overly happy Pixie, who is supposed to be their caretaker, but is never really there when it matters, leaving the responsibility to Smolder.
Ordi also still wants to rescue his bff Jewel, as he doesnt know sheās out of jail, and obviously Autie is super eager to stage a rescue, and Jolty is horrified but will follow them anywhere regardless. so, sneaking past their older bros, they leave and attack to sneak into jail again. honestly not sure what happens (Ordi nearly evolves tho? into an umbreon but he doesnt), but it fails, and then Pixie has to rescue them or something. Pixie is unusually cold as she acts like an adult for once and scolds them and says they have to ask her for permission first before they stage pointless rescue missions! when they return, Pixie takes Ordi aside and presents him with an everstone, which immediately horrifies Ordi and he attempts to run away but the door is locked.
Pixie tells Ordi that evolving is a curse and doesnt he want to be free of it? he can be a true Ever Vee then, and he can know everything he wants to. Ordi denies it and tries the door again, it opens, and he slams into Beauty. he hides behind her and tells her what Pixie tried to do, and Beauty is like āwhat? ā¦Pixie would never, are you insane? she wants everyone to have the freedom to evolve. i think youāre just worn out after your adventure today, why dont you go back to bed?ā and Ordi is shocked Beauty doesnt believe him but leaves. Beauty then turns to Pixie like āreally?ā to which Pixie is like āwhaaaat? we need more eevees! not eeveelutions!ā Beauty just sighs and says she canāt just scare her boyfriendās lil bro like that, or else what will Blanche do if he found out? Pixie gets pouty and is like āyour boyfriend??? excuse me. what am i chopped liver?ā Beauty laughs and they kiss. (gaslight, girlboss, gatekeep)
anyway, i dunno how the rest goes exactly but its sort of like: we cut to Jewel spying (and Nora being blushy around her when Jewel relays info to her. Aron is still a whiny brat bully to her tho), and she learns stuff about the Espeons who have taken her in. they love their royal family a lot, and Beauty shows up at events to just kinda be paraded around. Espeons, to Jewelās disgust, pride themselves on being pretty (cause stereotypes), and dont have a super strict structure. they hate Umbreons and other 'lutions, but theyāre kinda lame in Jewelās opinion, because sheās always prided herself on her strength, but they think sheās weird for focusing on fighting and stuff. anyway, somehow Jewel would get close to the royal fam enough to follow Beauty, and wonders where sheās going. she finds out Beauty is going to meet the Sylveons and Jewel finds out that the Sylveons donāt just want 'world peaceā, they want everyone to be 'ever veesā so that they cant be 'cursed into eeveelution unless its pure like a Sylveon, who evolves from affection and love.ā
so somehow Jewel and Nora would get into contact with Blanche (cause Jewel is worried about Ordi) and theyād go meet Ordi+ and Ordi and Jewel would have a tearful reunion (and Ordi would question why Nora was there but Jewel would defend her), but then Beauty would recognize Jewel and be like āwait a minute-ā and there would be tension and then itād be revealed what Beauty and Pixieās plans are (that the whole shelter for outcasts and orphans is kinda a lie. its complicated). Beauty and Pixie reveal their backstory, that they used to be BFFs from a young age (both born into the Espeon kingdom; typical Beauty was the princess and Pixie her maid), but as they grew, Pixie loved Beauty so much she evolved into a Sylveon, which then meant Pixie was outcasted, and Beauty was forced through many trials to become an Espeon. Beauty became bitter while Pixie was forced to find the other Sylveons by herself. the Sylveons then kinda brainwashed Pixie into their ideology (not that Pixie realizes that), and Beauty went on to hate her own kind/family for tearing Pixie away from her.
Beauty ended up meeting Blanche by accident because Beauty kept running away from home. she enjoyed running away to meet him cause it made her feel rebellious and stuff, but then Pixie found her and Pixie told her her plans/ideas, and Beauty agreed and also immediately had to date Pixie, but, ugh, Blanche was still her boyfriend and they had to break up. but Pixie told her not to, that they could use him, because Blancheās mother had connections as an official and trusted government official. if they could gain her trust through Blanche, they could use her to upend the Umbreon government while Beauty worked on destroying the royal Espeon family. (to clarify Beauty and Pixie are both evil and bad people who manipulate others for their own selfish goals)
so Smolder steps up and defends the kids but to her surprise her nephew Ferno would defend them/join their side and say that he knew this whole thing was stupid (heās just siding with the more powerful side) and then, when Smolder prepares to fight her own nephew, Beauty and Pixie, Dew joins them. Smolder is shocked, but Dew just guiltily looks away, and then Smolder wont fight, but Blanche, in complete anger, does, and Jewel, Nora, and the other kiddos do too, but obvs Beauty and Pixie are higher level + more experienced (Dew does not fight them; Ferno does but getās K'Oād be Blanche) so Smolder joins and chases them off. Dew looks back apologetically and signs āim sorryā
Vine comforts Blanche for Beauty cheating on him and everything, yada yada aaaanddā¦. then i kinda dont have any more idea juice lol. Dew would eventually come back and redeem themself/explain themself!! and their backstory would be properly revealed >;3. ā¦honestly idk their backstory lmao. but yaeh, thats what i can remember of it
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