So basically after planning out the next 10 pages, we realize the initial panels and script made for those pages do not flow well with the previous pages, so we have to rewrite the entirety of the next 10 pages. Here’s the thing, with the pacing we’re doing, it may very well be possible that we’ll go beyond just 10 pages left and go even higher, maybe making the total page count for this section to be like 40 pages.
We’ve been working on this comic since late march-early April, and we’ve been keeping you guys waiting for way too long in our opinion.
So we’d like to ask you all to vote in a poll, would you rather like us to post what we have now in a sort of 5ish pages per post kind of format? Or would you guys want us to finish the initial goal of our stopping point? The total currently done is 20 pages, enough for yall to chew on. We’d post about 5 pages per post if you decide for us to post now, and in the future we’ll be doing that method, post every 5 pages, possibly on a scheduled day, but we’ll see.
Thank you for your input!
Post what we have now or wait till we finish the intended section
Can you get the... | Animatic Meme | Asriel and Chara Dynamic Concept
When hearing this audio, it helped me a lot to figure out the dynamic I wanted with these two characters. With how long Undertale has been around most of what'd been done with these characters has already been done, so what I'm doing may not be new but it isn't something seen a lot so I hope y'all will like the concept.
Asriel and Chara have a lot of care for one another, but that doesn't mean there aren't flaws. Chara in Undertale Rainbow didn't fall down in the best state of mind which still affected them even when they were fully integrated with the Dreemur family. As a result, Asriel made it his mission to make Chara the happiest kid in the Underground. Thus they fell into the role of Asriel being an indulgent caretaker of Chara, saying yes to every request. Whilst Chara, never had that support and is still a child at the end of the day, took advantage of it. This dynamic might've been fine if they lived long enough to grow out of it, but this was a toxic combination once the Buttercup idea filled Chara's head.
I want to be very clear: BOTH are responsible for their fates. Chara knew what they were doing and shouldn't have asked that of Asriel. And Asriel knew this was too far and should've stopped. The buttercups didn't instantly kill Chara after one dose, and they needed more and more over the course of DAYS to kill them, but Asriel never stopped this once, and Chara of course egged it on too. But that's not the only thing. It's one thing to aid in this, after all, it's for a good cause freeing everyone from the underground, but that didn't happen. Asriel couldn't kill those humans out of fear and his kind heart. This just wasted Chara's sacrifice and became the catalyst of so much heartbreak and other sufferings in the Underground. As the EPIC: Musical song Ruthlessness would put it: "You are the worst kind of good 'cause you're not even great. A Greek who reeks of false righteousness, that's what I hate. 'Cause you fight to save lives but won't kill and don't get the job done.". There was no room for half-measures here, he had to either be all in or stop it in its tracks. He did neither, now they're both in limbo.
Neither blames the other for what happened, rather they blame themselves. Asriel wished he wasn't such a coward and had just done what Chara said, or even better yet said no to Chara so they could be a family still. Meanwhile, Chara wished they hadn't asked this of Asriel, they knew what he was like and still did this anyway. It was cruel to put him in this position, thus they see themselves as a corruptor or better yet a demon. This is what the final frame means, not what others think of them nor what is true, but rather what they think of themselves. They both wanted to play hero till reality slapped them in the face. Now no one's happy.
I thought making Asriel more of a caretaker personality instead of "owo crybaby who can't do anything wrong" that I've seen growing up would be refreshing to write. Plus it also translates well to flowey, as flowey was a guardian/caretaker of a sorts for all the kids, whether they liked it or not. Like he was watching over Frisk from the distance like a damn mother hen-
Cowardice is going to be a huge theme for Asriel and Flowey in the story, which is a flaw gained by his father and something he needs to overcome.
I hope you like the Animatic and the concept, sorry for the long read, if you made it to the end you earned a yippee Clover
This yippee clover was made by tbh-daily, this is not mine
Seven human souls were what was needed to break the barrier…it has been many moons passed since the monsters have been sealed down here by those they considered friends…that betrayal has long felt with the patrons in the underground, but they still held out hope for reconciliation. Then…they took away their hope from them once again.
They decided never again. Blood for dust, soul for soul, till their debt has been fulfilled and they could free them once again.
Six humans have passed by there since, each bringing their own impact and tragedy to the underground.
One slipped through the cracks, until they were killed by the king
One banded brothers in arms, until they were turned over to the king
One killed every monster in their way, until they finally stopped and worked towards penance which then they themselves were killed when off their guard
One worked hard to provide a better life to the monsters, only to be torn apart by the very people they wanted to help
One finished that work and brought peace to the underground, only for their will to be withered down by the king and their soul taken
And the final learned of the ones before, learning of the monsters plight, what it would take to get out of here, and decided it wasn’t just, thus giving their soul to settle the score.
These children’s souls may be with the king, but their spirits linger on in the items they held so near and dear to their hearts.
Waiting, for someone to wake them up…. For them to guide them with their experience and knowledge…for the final to live.
Undertale Rainbow
Hi everyone! This is an au me and my two writing friends decided to do after playing undertale yellow and adoring clover. We saw undertale red and yellow and thought “huh what if frisk had ALL of the soul kids inside their head?” And thus Undertale Rainbow! This is going to be a prequel story to what we later will make our surface story called UnderOver, but that’s far off in the future. My friends and I have an idea of how to play out this story, but we need time to iron out the smaller details, the kids characters is mostly actualized though!
So in the meanwhile, we’ll be accepting asks/answering questions and do scenarios you’ll suggest. There are future ships in mind, but only four out of the eight characters would actually be paired together. Otherwise the others are single Pringles, or their characters are going to be in UnderOver. All the kids are 13 and most of their ships are supposed to start later in UnderOver for reference. Here’s everyone’s character sheet and a little info (sorry clover’s eyes look wonky for some reason I couldn’t fix it—)
The Underground’s sense of time flow is very different from the surface. While it’s been hundreds of years since the monsters and humans war for humans, for monsters it’s only been 30-50 thanks to resets and other barrier oddities.
The character sheet format was inspired by this creator who has lovely character designs for the kids, check them out their art is eye candy ✨
Here’s also the blogs banner in a fuller view
Thank you all so much for reading this, I’m very excited to start this and so are my friends. I hope you like our versions of the characters as you get to know them more. Cya next time! 💛💛💛
Well I suppose it’s finally my turn. This here will be my Anonsona- The EverBoy. I don’t want to get to lengthy on what his history is but to sum it up he’s essentially an observer that stumbled into here not long before Hajime and Chiaki went to the island. He observes what’s going on with the QC and finds it very interesting so he involves himself by giving his opinion. He usually only asks questions whenever the situation is bad or if someone is emotionally or mentally in trouble(Has worries for Hajime in particular as he’s the one who needs a fucking break like Jesus). He serves as a good mediator and tries to help the characters if they need it. On occasion he asks stupid questions but only for the sake of satisfying his own curiousity. Lastly, despite good intentions sometimes he can be very blunt and apathetic in tone which may confuse characters when he asks something. In conclusion, The EverBoy Anon is a very helpful and supportive Anon but is very reserved and lazy as he only inputs whenever the timing is right for him. Aaaand there you have it. That is my Anonsona mod...Hopefully that’s good enough and fits.
. . .Latah- The EverBoy Anon
(Note: the art does not belong to me and should credit the original artist on the amino: http://aminoapps.com/p/gk4wsv)
★ We paint our own realities, we are created to create ★
You know Hajime- I know we’re long past the Kamakura project at this point, but damn it would’ve been better if you still had all those talents. I mean I’m sure you could easily track wherever everyone was kidnapped too and idk- bust in and save everyone while wrecking sh*t? Now I know that’s a long shot but remember when you invaded future foundation? Yeah..sorry didn’t mean to bring up previous memories.
(Sorry if this is too late to ask, I’m just now starting your series and thought it should be brought up as a joke lol. Btw keep up the great work!)
//Thank you for your support ^^
It’s fine. It’s not like I haven’t thought about it before.
But there’s no way in hell I’m going through all that again. Not even for this. We’ll find them another way.
This start of a new story in progress from a random stranger, making a story with my amazing girlfriend, Here is mah main man and protagonist of this story
Ben Alaerth
I hope that in the far future I can make content of this so keep watch if your interested, trust me, it’ll be a HEART-breaker
[Art is done by me, anywhere where you see the signature of “Ender” is me, PLS dont steal, anyways good to ya’ll!]
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