Low-Stakes Date Chapter 8
look ma! i didn’t quit for 3 years before the next chapter this time!
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Low-Stakes Date Chapter 8
look ma! i didn’t quit for 3 years before the next chapter this time!
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low-stakes date is back
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3 2 new chapters and a ratings bump posted over the last week. weekend, 3 years late for KKSK month 2021 🙃
lost the plot, if you find it, plz help.
A handy guide for Betas
I thought I should make this post in light of a recent experience a friend of mine had. I’m in no way an expert on the art of editing, but I believe these etiquette tips won’t hurt anyone.
Being someone’s beta is perhaps a dubious privilege, but it doesn’t change that it requires a foundation of trust. A writer’s confidence can be very easily crippled; giving an unpolished piece to someone can very nerve-wracking! I think most betas tend to be authors themselves, can you remember your early days as a writer sharing your work? I’d imagine it was pretty scary.
Not to mention, not all writers are veterans of their craft, some are trying their hand at a new hobby. I think to beta someone’s piece, it takes a certain amount delicacy. And if you’re not that type of editor, that’s also fine, as some writers prefer a blunt, direct approach.
The trick is being clear about that from the get-go!
So here are some general tips:
1. Establish what the writer is looking for; grammar? Spelling? Flow? Dialogue tags? Punctuation? Or perhaps they would appreciate a second opinion on things like plot? Maybe they struggle with writing fight scenes or smut, and would prefer suggestions on sentence construction, for example. It doesn’t hurt to know what you’re looking for.
2. Remember that when editing someone’s piece, you’re refining their work, not rewriting it to your taste. It can be a fine line! It’s important to remember you’re fixing errors and occasionally making suggestions, but to each author their writing style!
3. Be sure to word your suggestions as suggestions, not demands. Text doesn’t have a facial expression and can easily come off as rude/demanding.
For Example
Delete this, it doesn’t make sense
Can easily be: consider clarifying this sentence or removing it as it could confuse the reader. Tone is everything.
What does this mean? Say this differently.
Can easily be: consider rewording this sentence for clarity. Give suggestions.
Notice these examples leave it up to the writer to decide.
These are general examples of course, the point is, like writing, the choice of words here changes everything, has a certain impact.
4. Avoid stating a negative opinion like ‘this sounds corny’, ‘this is cliche’, ‘this is cheesy’. Give suggestions on alternatives. Suggest a rewording for the problematic dialogue.
Just like unsolicited critique on a fanfic can cripple an author’s confidence, demanding or curt remarks from a beta can have the same effect.
There are some additional things betas can do that are pretty great but not required:
1. Praise parts you particularly liked: a beautifully constructed sentence, a clever line, a funny bit of dialogue. That kind of confidence boost is invaluable!
2. Give feedback on the overall piece which can include both praise and advice.
3. Offer to take a second look if the author would like after they look over your suggestions.
Generally, the message is to be kind and considerate. Be sure to use gentle words when making suggestions. Make sure to respect the author’s style.
Feel free to add to/contradict this post with suggestions of your own, or to use any personal experience as basis for advice.
Happy editing 🌸
fantastic advice! i whole heartedly sign off on all of this.
boiled down, it’s a matter of 1) setting clear boundaries on what feedback a writer is looking for, and then 2) respecting those boundaries (no exceptions).
my only suggestion: take some time after you’ve finished to check in with each other. give the writer the chance to share what feedback they found most helpful (so you can grow as a beta!) and check in with each other emotionally. betaing is a thing of trust and vulnerability, make space and time for caring for each other once the work is done.
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HBD KKS
Dear Urusai-san! How are you? Hope you are healthy and thriving! I had a few questions I wanted to ask you about Low-Stakes Date. I was wondering when you think the next update will be ready? I also wanted to ask whether you envision this to be a long fic, or is it nearing the final chapter? 😊 I really enjoyed the first three chapters and the way you characterised Kakashi specifically. Is the dress Sakura wears for the wedding the same pink one she wore in canon? I've been trying to visualise what it looks like!
Be safe and take care :)
idk when, but i hope before november! plz see previous post.
this one may end up unfinished or, like others, something i return to in a few years.
i picked pink bc of canon ☺️
Hi author-san! Hope you are well :) I just wanted to ask if there will be future updates for Low-Stakes Date? That trope is my favourite of all and I love the way you wrote Kakashi in that. 😍. I just re-read your latest chapter even. Hehe. Much love to you and your stories! ❤❤
hi! thank you for checking in. my writing slowed when i started a new job and found out shortly after that my family will be growing 🤗 i’m still writing and intend to finish LSD before launching a new nanowrimo project, but i’m not letting writing become a chore. i don’t want it to lose its joy for me!
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arms
pairing: Haruno Sakura/Hatake Kakashi
rating: T
complete | 3.5k
summary:
he can hold the very world in his arms (it is as if she belongs there.)
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Chapters: 1/7 Fandom: Naruto Rating: Explicit Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence Relationships: Haruno Sakura/Hatake Kakashi Characters: Haruno Sakura, Hatake Kakashi, Hatake Sakumo, Danzo Additional Tags:
Alternate Universe - Fairy Tale
Fairy Tale Retellings
Alternate Universe - Bluebeard Fusion
Blood and Gore
Knifeplay
Summary:
fairytale (noun) Definition of fairy tale (Entry 2 of 2) 1a: a story (as for children) involving fantastic forces and beings (such as fairies, wizards, and goblins)
b: a story in which improbable events lead to a happy ending
2: a made-up story usually designed to mislead
In which Sakura is Bluebeard and Kakashi is the final wife who survives.
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it’s still kakasaku month week 2 in urusai world, sorry @kakasaku-haven & SS KKSK for tardiness. here’s chapter 3. she comes with a rating change.
Rating: Mature
Archive Warning: No Archive Warnings Apply
Category: F/M
Relationship: Haruno Sakura/Hatake Kakashi
Characters: Haruno Sakura, Hatake Kakashi, Nara Shikamaru, Temari (Naruto), Yamato | Tenzou, Terumi Mei
Additional Tags: Fake/Pretend Relationship, KakaSaku Month 2021, Slow Burn, Fluff and Angst, Not Canon Compliant, Aged-Up Character(s), Recreational Drug Use
Unsatisfactory | A KakaSaku Story
Surprise!! (Both for you and for me, tbh...) Here's my Starving/Jealousy prompt submission for KS Month: Week 2, Day 1!
Read it here on Ao3!
Pairing: KakaSaku Rating: E Tags: not sfw, jealousy, Kakashi on an ego trip, dominant Kakashi, dirty talk, voyeurism through retelling, c*m play, non-mass AU
Summary: Kakashi was content to let lesser men do the chasing. When they were finished, he would reap the rewards.
so excite for thissssss
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here’s week 2! more fake dating, now with a little jealousy!
Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Archive Warning: No Archive Warnings Apply
Category: F/M
Fandom: Naruto
Relationship: Haruno Sakura/Hatake Kakashi
Additional Tags: Fake/Pretend Relationship, Kakasaku Month 2021, Slow Burn, Fluff and Angst, Not Canon Compliant, Aged-Up Character(s), Recreational Drug Use
thanks again @sleepyfoxfanworks @bouncyirwin @kakasaku-haven! and thanks to the SS KKSK 🛳 (that’s all of you) for creating & supporting each other this month! this is so very fun!
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Warnings: Major Character Death Rated T Pairings: Hatake Kakashi & Haruno Sakura, Haruno Sakura & Uchiha Sasuke, Hatake Kakashi & Uchiha Obito Summary: They’ve been fighting for years. Fighting, and losing. In order for a new world to take shape, the old one must die. Or…maybe, just maybe, they can rewrite it. KakaSaku Month 2021 Day 3: Time Travel. @kakasaku-haven
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happy kakasaku month! here’s the beginnings of a fake-dating fic for you 🤗
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Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Archive Warning: No Archive Warnings Apply
Category: F/M
Additional Tags: Fake/Pretend Relationship, Kakasaku Month 2021, Slow Burn, Fluff and Angst, Not Canon Compliant, Aged-Up Character(s)
Summary: Sakura takes a low-stakes date to Naruto’s wedding.
thanks to @sleepyfoxfanworks @bouncyirwin & the @kakasaku-haven for putting this event together! <3
You know the Tune so the Words Don't Matter
KakaSaku Month 2021 Week 1 Day 1: Soulmates AU // @kakasaku-haven
Rating: Mature (for language and dark themes)
Relationship(s): Haruno Sakura/Hatake Kakashi
Summary: Soulmate Attack: when your Soulmate is going through a trauma and it debilitates you. Soulmate Attacks can put you out of commission for days, sometimes a week. Sakura is a hopeless romantic who just wants to fall in love naturally. Kakashi is a cynic who doesn't believe in love anymore after a lifetime of pain. What happens when those destined to meet, finally do?
Link: Ao3
yesssss
Iniciamos el KakaSakuMonth 🌸⚡
Día 1: Soulmates/College
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thank you @kakasaku-haven for planning KakaSaku Month 2021~~
This is for Week 1, Day 2: Fake Dating AU.
Rating: General Audiences Relationships: Haruno Sakura/Hatake Kakashi Characters: Hatake Kakashi, Haruno Sakura
Summary:
“I just need someone to tote around the room, Sakura-chan. It will be fun!” she mocked. “Do you remember that? Hm? That was three years ago. And since then, I’ve gone from your date, to your girlfriend, to your fiancée. Then we got married. Now I’m pregnant!”
Hearing it laid out like that did make him feel just a little bit ridiculous. - In which Sakura is Kakashi’s go-to excuse for ducking out of official Hokage business early, and she is sick of it.
KakaSaku Month 2021 | Week 1, Day 2: Fake Dating AU
Straight A student Haruno Sakura doesn't appreciate being belittled. Especially not from some new professor.
I will be posting my entries to for the event in my KakaSaku 2021 series in Ao3 as well.
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