What You Do To Me

Carmen is a 23 year old woman who owns a clothing Boutique in Downtown LA. She seems to have it all going for herself on the outside, but in the inside she is DAMAGED. Carmen is in a BATTLE with love, when her fiance' Lance becomes controlling towards her after announcing the engagement. She does what she can to make him happy by doing what he asks of her, but it's NEVER ENOUGH! After a night of arguing, she finds herself at a party, and stumbles across someone who will not only teach her the True meaning of love, but also show her what it can do!

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Any fans out there? I re-read this story for the millionth time and I fall in love with Trey and Carmen all over again. Wow. 10 years. 😅

What are somethings you would like to see happen with these characters ??

Trey is in love.

Carmen is working on self care with therapy and healing old wounds.

Chris’ music his taking new heights.

Casey is a rider

Layla is pregnant while Lance beats her and wants to continue on making Carmen’s life miserable.

I have sooooooo many ideas.

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Chapter 39

Trey

4 weeks Later

Our plane finally landed in Virginia. Back at home for our getaway trip. I wasn’t going to sit here and act like I wasn’t nervous to be here because I really was.

I was very nervous actually. It’s been a minute since I’ve been around my family. Let alone brought someone around whom I was in love with. Deeply in love at that.

I glanced over at her as she held onto my hand for majority of the plane ride. You can say she was nervous as well. Meeting the family can make anyone anxious, but I let her know it’ll just be close family. My mama, dad, brother, his girl and my nephew. She’s spoken to my mom before and they have had some pretty good conversations which should ease things hopefully. But I just want to make sure she will be comfortable at all times.

Her mental state and her being comfortable is the most important to me. Things have gotten so much better for us lately. We both are now in therapy, individually that is . Her going inspired me to start and it’s been helping us communicate more effectively towards each other. We voice if we need space and alone time rather than shutting each other off coldly. We agreed to not allow our minds to wonder or question each other actions or emotions while being each other’s safe space. It’s freeing if I’m being honest. I honestly have never been so open with a partner in this way and I’m sure she feels the same.

I guided her hand towards my lips, pressing them against her glowing skin. Her cheeks heightened instantly.

“I can’t believe we actually made it here baby. I’m nervous but at the same time excited to be away from everything while meeting everyone. I get to see how you are around your family, while being in your hometown. This will be my first time here in Virginia Beach.” She smiled.

“Just wait until yall see the beach house. It’s fucking crazy” Chris exclaimed from his seat behind us. Cheesing hard as hell I might add.

“Nigga it better be. It was the only task I gave your ass to do. And let me find out it’s nothing like what you showed me—“

“It’s going to be everything, TRUST ME” he cheesed again.

“I trust you babe.” Casey cheered him on. “I can’t wait to get in the pool tonight and we just vibing. We definitely need to make a liquor store run” Casey mentioned as we all agreed in unison.

Once we got our belongings and waited for the uber to pull up, we were on our way. The ladies were so excited. They were all smiles while taking selfies enjoying the moment.

Speaking of the moment, I couldn’t wait to pull up to this rental and get her ass out of that sundress she had on. Damn, I thought to myself while eyeing her all over. She just don’t know but we’re about to turn this place out. I don’t care who around I chuckled to myself.

She better be ready.

Carmen

It felt so good living in this moment with my favorite people. I was full of emotion. My man and Chris setting up this trip for us, with love at the forefront of it all was such a thoughtful and considerate gesture. I’m excited to be around those they consider family. I can’t tell you the last time we were together at a cookout that wasn’t a day party downtown and you have to pay to even get in, so I’m excited.

Not even 5 minutes of into dropping our baggage off in our beautiful room. Trey wanted me on the balcony. He opened the double doors to our room which led us to our private 3rd floor balcony that wrapped around. Each floor had its own. You can see the beautiful canal with a boat deck, and just a few blocks over the ocean view.

“A breath of fresh air…” I lightly whispered. I could feel his breath on the right side of my neck as his lips followed in pursuit.

“You most definitely are a breath of fresh air baby. I am about to inhale all of you.” He whispered leaning into the crook of my neck.

And that’s exactly what he did.

He carried me back inside placing me down on the bed while he undressed himself. Revealing his mouth watering physique.

With his strength, He yanked me to the edge of the bed, hiking my dress up revealing my moist laced undies. I bit down on my bottom lip as he dropped down face front pulling them down my legs.

He always tells me that I am his favorite meal. He eats me with so much delicacy. The way my body responds to every single twirl of his tongue, the motion as he slurps my pussy each time I erupted was so deliberating. Constantly surprising me.

“Ooooo, eat it just like that baby”‘I moaned out entirely, slowing grinding my pelvis all in his face. Grasping the sheets tightly as my head springs back in pleasure. My pussy tightening around his fingers and tongue as they simultaneously have their way with me.

I could feel my body about to release itself and within seconds I was squirting and squirming trying to back away from the pleasure of his mouth as I struggled to stay quiet as I could. His slurping echoed throughout the quietness. As my panting simmered and my body set back into place in the soaking wet from puddle of an orgasm.

He crept up towards me with his wet face dripping and that beautiful smirk I simply adored. He smelled amazing drenched in my juices. Our tongues collided as he inserted himself into me. Deep strokes in my gushy, wet insides. I wrap my body around him tightly pulling him into me as he deepened himself inside of me.

My head fell back into ecstasy as our bodies locked into each other. I loved making love to him. Every time was mind blowing and we always incorporated something different. It was never the same.

He pulls my titties out of my dress ramming them

Into his mouth and I go crazy. The sensation intensifies everything all at once and again I being to erupt. Back to back to back to back.

I moaned out so loud I didn’t care who heard me. My body tightened. I can hear the loud splashes from my pussy pour out onto the bed yet again.

“Damnnnnn. Shit” Trey expressed smacking my thighs as he too releases. He laid next to me as we slowly tried to catch our breaths while cheesing at each other. Locking eyes as our heartbeats matched.

“Now this is how a vacation start.” He teased while I agreed.

“This is I only the beginning. I’m glad to be here with you baby.” I smiled

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Chapter 38 (2026 Update)

Trey

The time was now 10:12 pm and I have yet to hear back from her. I am all for giving her space but it grinds my gears when she shuts down like this. I worry about her so much. Yes, she’s a grown independent ass woman, but she has my heart so weak. She makes me worry even though I shouldn’t. With the nightmares as of late, that nigga roughing her up, and her ex best friend reappearing. I honestly can’t imagine what she’s holding in.

All I know is I want to be her remedy. I want to protect her and respect her boundaries.

I unlocked my phone and went to our text thread “My World” I thought to myself looking at her contact photo. I pressed the audio button and began to talk…

“Hey love, I could’ve sent another text, but it seems….” I continued on with the message.

I hit send once my voice note was complete. I placed my phone on the charger and stared up at the darkness as I tried to rest my mind for a bit. Even though I was actually waiting for her to get back at me.

Carmen

I woke up feeling so depleted after therapy. The prosecco mixed with my feelings may have not been the best use of my coping skills. I thought on that while running my hand over my face and through my hair. I was mildly feeling it for sure, but still functional as I planted my feet onto the carpet of my bedroom.

I was still wrapped in my bath towel from when I stepped out of the tub. I made my way towards my bathroom as the music playing from Alexa because louder as I headed for the toilet. The prosecco was now exiting my body. “Whew…” I exhaled while “5 Miles to Empty” by Brownstone played in the background.

I need a man who's gonna do me right

(Hurry, hurry, quick, quick)

Somebody who will surely satisfy

(When I think of your love)

It only makes me stop and wonder truly why? (why? Oh, why?)

(Oh, why?) Why would you make me cry, oh, baby?

Five miles to empty

My heart is running low, whoa-oh

Oh, I need a good man to fill me up

I need a good man to give me love, babe

I gathered myself up, flushed the toilet and washed my hands. I looked around for my phone seeing that the time was now 11:22 from the Alexa display. Mentally preparing myself to see what missed notifications I had. I headed towards the front door where I had dropped my phone and keys off earlier when I first got home.

I just knew my sister and Trey were the main ones. I picked up my phone and the notifications confirmed my thoughts.

Casey’s message read “Hey sis! I love you. I hope you are being gentle with yourself today. I called to check in but I know you had therapy so, heart this when you see it so I know you’re safe and alright 🫶🏾💫”

I hearted the message and responded that I loved her too and that I would call her in the morning.

Trey sent a few messages one included a photo of us that he took while we were on the beach recently. My heart smiled. “I don’t like not hearing from you baby, call me back.” One text said. Then there was a voice note. I hit play on his voice-note which is something he hardly ever sends. I walked over to the couch taking a seat as I began to listen to His voice. I instantly felt him next to me. Chills began to form.

Hey love, I could’ve sent another text, but it seems you’re not in the best mood to respond to me. I hope you know how much I love you. I know you’re probably trying to process everything going on in that beautiful head of yours. It’s filled with so many memories, good and bad. But baby, you will overcome the bad. I promise you. It will not keep you down. You won’t let it, and I won’t either. I want to see you on your good days and your bad days. If today was a bad day for you, let me hold your hand through it.

You are so damn beautiful baby. I don’t just mean surface level. Your eyes lead me to your heart, it may feel bruised up or bandaged but baby I’m here to help repair it. Every day you smile and laugh is another day closer towards it. You’re no longer that version of yourself you once were. I want you to look in the mirror and I do mean really look at yourself and just know you are worthy. You deserve to be happy, to be healed, to be loved and to live this life. We deserve each other and I am ready to do this life with you. Whatever the hell comes our way. Damn, I want to see you so bad, but I am respecting your boundaries at the moment. It’s hard because I need you, even though you may not need me right now. Just know that I am here for you, and I love you baby.”

“Damn it Trey.” I whimpered. Absorbing his heartfelt words into my mind and soul. He see’s the good in me, even when I don’t see it or feel worthy of it. I’m truly fighting with past self so I can be the best version of myself, and yet, he already sees me at that.

I hustled back towards my room to throw on some clothes so I can rush over to be with him. It’s late but I have a code to his door to let myself in if he is asleep.

I unlocked my phone to call him, hoping that he was still awake. By the 4th ring I heard…

“Babe you good!?” He answered with his sleepy voice.

“Yes baby, I am. I am on my way over to you…” I let him know while tossing my hair in a messy bun. I can hear the energy break through his voice as he told me that he loved me and to hurry up but be safe driving.

I hung up and threw on a brown biker short set, Nike slides and was on my way out the door.

I pulled up to his spot and there he was, standing out waiting for me in a black white wide beater and some red basketball shorts. I can see his smile piercing through my tinted windows.

I turned the car off as I gathered my things. He came over opening my door for me as I hopped out to greet him.

We hugged each other so tight. I needed this. I need him. I was trying to get through today alone and I realized that didn’t have to. He reminded me of that.

He pulled me in for a kiss letting me know he missed me today.

“Baby, I’m so sorry I didn’t respond earlier. Reading your message touched my heart more than you know. Thank you for loving me with so much patience, understanding, and kindness. Sometimes I do get caught up in my thoughts and emotions, and it can be hard to find the right words, but please know it’s never because I don’t care about you.” I rubbed his face.

“Your reassurance means so much to me. Knowing that you want to stand beside me through both my good days and my difficult ones makes me feel safe and cared for. I’m still healing from things that have shaped me, but your love reminds me that I don't have to carry everything alone.

I appreciate you respecting my boundaries while still letting me know you're here. That kind of love is rare, and I don't take it for granted. I see your heart, your effort, and the way you continuously show up for me, and I cherish it more than I can explain. And even when I’m quiet, please remember that your words reach me, your love reaches me, and I carry it with me. Thank you for believing in me, reminding me of my worth, and loving me through every season. The good and the bad. I love you, and I’m grateful to have someone who wants to walk through life hand in hand with me.” I finished with tears in my eyes. Feeling like I just spilled my whole heart to him in just one breath. Everything I need is in this man. I can’t allow my struggles to push him away. It will be my turn to return the favor for him one day and I must be strong enough to do so. He won’t always be strong. Seeing how my isolation makes him weak, I just can’t bear it. For us, I will do better.

He wiped my tears and kissed me deeply with so much love and passion. He took my hand and said “Hand in hand as we walk through this life together. I got your back. Trust me.” He confirmed.

From there, he guided me into his home, and up the stairs into his room. Together we undressed climbed into each other. Tightly. His arms were my home. The heaviness of today fully lifted away as we stared into each other’s eyes. Taking in the moment. Both of us replaying the words we said to each other tonight.

God, whatever you are doing for us, I thank you.

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Chapter 26: What You Do To Me

Carmen

Carmen

I led Trey towards my bed without saying a word as the music from my iHome continued to play through the speakers. I was happy to see him, even though I couldn’t truly express it do the incident that occurred earlier with Lance.

I cried so much when I got back from the gym,only because I was so pissed off, and yet again hurt.

Even though I told myself not to cry, to just let it go and let the past be the past, but I couldn’t help it.

It hurt so bad I felt the need to break down. Something I haven’t done since I woke up from the coma. I just kept it all inside so I could make the best of this new life I had.

It worked up until today…

I honestly thought the day I would see him again, he would at least seem remorseful or apologetic after everything he put me through, especially that coma, but he wasn’t.

Instead I can’t believe he tried to force himself on me as if I would be willing to have him again.

How could he???

What did I ever do to him that he would want me to hurt so much??

I began to think maybe he never loved or cared for me in any way. Even before he became how he is now.

He wined and dined me early on when we first got together, you know talked that sweet talk, deep conversations, he showed me things I never seen or thought of before. It was amazing and fun and all, and I truly thought that was love.

Love is so much deeper than that.

According to 1 Corinthians 13 verse 4 states “Love is patient and kind. Love knows neither envy nor jealousy. Love is not forward and self-assertive, nor boastful and conceited.”

But what he and I shared wasn’t love. It was the total opposite.

He spoiled me with everything I thought I wanted, but not what I needed.

I needed respect, affection, emotional support, honesty, his love, and for him to be a real man, but he gave me pain, misery, and an ocean of tears along with heartache.

There was a time I needed all of him because he had all of me and more. I just wish there was a way that my heart could be unbroken, my pain could be relieved, and all the memories would just go away.

I felt Trey’s lips rub softly along my shoulder blades moving up in between the crook of my neck, as he held me tightly in his arms. He made his way up to my right ear whispering “You sure you’re okay?” softly inside.

I took a deep breath inhaling his luscious scent through my nose that sent such a warm tingly feeling through my entire body.

“I am now” I exhaled.

He held me closely from behind with his back against the padded headboard as he harmonized the lyrics to Jagged Edge’s “Gotta Be” in my ear. My previous thoughts quickly faded away as a smile appeared across my face. His warm touch was so relaxing and felt perfect against my skin and his voice…his voice was soothing to my soul.

It still amazes me how Trey has held me down throughout these last few months. He was always right there for me. I never had to beg him to be there when I needed him, act out in order to get his attention, or put him before myself to prove to him that I care. Not once because he always knows when I need him before I even have to fix my mouth to speak.

He knows me so well it’s like he can read my mind.

It’s unexplainable how he makes me feel.

I’m not even his woman, but he treats me like I am. He respects me like a Queen, and he adores the woman I am. I never have to pretend to be someone I’m not with him. He accepts everything I bring into this special thing we have. He supports me in every way, and overall he is everything any woman could ever need.

I just don’t know if I’m good enough for him. I’ve been damaged so much…I don’t think I can give him my all, but I can’t say I won’t try.

Trey

Time past us by as me and her finally discussed everything that happened today.

It took everything in my power to not storm the hell out of this damn room and ride over there to kill his muthafuckin ass for putting his hands on her yet again.

Before I could reach the door Carmen snatched me back down so quick telling me to let it go. She didn’t want me jeopardizing my life for another especially for a nothing ass nigga.

Truth was I didn’t care, but I respect how she feels. I fought hard for her before and she wasnt even mines. The fight in me now has grown massively now that we share a great bond.

At the end of the day I just wanted to protect her in whatever way I can. And if I keep turning my back and this nigga keep trying shit I’m going to kill him. Period.

“Babe, you don’t understand…” I sighed in frustration with my back now leaning against the locked door. Her big eyes just looked up at me as she raised one of her eyebrows.

“What is it that I’m not understanding? How you, me, an everybody want to take a piece out of him?” She asked. I could tell that this entire conversation was irritating her at this point.

“Look I just don’t want nothing else to happen to you. We all wanna protect you…and me personally I’m gonna do whatever it takes at the end of the day and that’s the end of this. The next time he tries any fuckin thing it’s his ass. ” I said with authority while making myself very clear.

Instead of her pleading me not to, a cute smirk came across her face before she nodded in agreeable while saying “It’s his ass” as she chuckled.

“Whats funny?”

“The serious look you had on your face…it’s rare when I see it and somehow I found it funny. I’m used to you being nice and sweet, not all hyped up, veins pumping, and sweat boiling on your forehead.” She laughed harder as I joined in.

“You got jokes I see, but it’s cool. If that’s what I gotta do to keep a smile on your face then so be it. I live to see you happy. It might sound crazy, but it’s the honest truth.” I let her know pulling her closer to me. My hands took the shape of her hips and I squeezed them making her giggle before locking my lips with hers. Our tongues frolicked while her hands made their way up my shirt. Within seconds it was going over my head and falling to the floor.

I stared at her for a few seconds before yanking the towel right off her body, revealing her beautiful bare skin. “Damn bae…” I expressed while picking her up in the air as she wrapped her golden legs around my waist as I led her back to the bed.

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Hard to believe I wrote this🫶🏾

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Wow

What a time this was! To write and create on here. Wow

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I hope all is well 😊🙏🏽 I miss writing.

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Hi I hope I'm not bothering you but are you still writing this story I love it BTW

You are just fine! And I am, I have a bad problem of working on the next two chapters and then scrapping them lol but I’m keeping this one❤️❤️ I will be posting very very soon

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Why’d you come back then disappear 😩😩😩😩

🤦🏾‍♀️ I really be trying I get so caught up with life 😩 FORGIVE ME!!! Updating this week!

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Im happy that ur back. love the chapter i do believe she has to talk about it so she can full move on.

It feels good to have more time to write again!! I’m happy that you guys keep the story alive and going!!

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Chapter 36 & 37 are up!! Enjoy. ❤️

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Chapter 37: What You Do To Me

Carmen

My eyes met back up with hers.

“I embarrassed him” I scoffed shaking my head. “I...embarrassed...him? He’s the one who embarrassed me. Before I knew it, I felt the power of his back hand for the very first time in that dark hallway. I remember dropping down to my knees in utter disbelief. I went from holding the back of my head to holding my cheek that burned even more at my own touch.” I finished wiping away tears that slowly dripped down my cheeks onto my black slacks quickly absorbing through.

Dr. Harris cleared her throat before speaking. I knew exactly what was about to come out of her mouth. She was going to ask me why did I stay with him? Why was that not enough to leave him alone. Why did you ignore that sign? Why? Why? Why?

“Before you ask me all the why’s as to WHY...I didn’t just leave him alone. Ask yourself? Have you ever been, so deeply in love with someone that the love that once was pure, innocent, respectful, passionate and sweet that the thought of it being gone forever was just unacceptable to you?” I cried more. “One day I woke up and instantly the man of my dreams was just gone. I did everything I could to get him to come back to me. Took every punch. His yelling. His disrespect. His lies. His cheating. All because I just knew he was in there somewhere. Somewhere deep down. Lost at the moment. When the truth was, he never existed.” I chuckled.

All of that for nothing.

After the session was over I felt so numb. The entire car ride home I remained silent but my thoughts were ringing. Everything from today was playing over in my head.

I walked into my town home throwing my keys down on the table and headed straight for the kitchen. I opened my mini wine cellar pulling out a fresh bottle of Prosecco. It was exactly what I needed after rehashing those harsh memories. I popped it open tossing the wine opener on the counter and made my way towards the bathroom to run me a long bath and sulk in my feelings.

Turning my Bluetooth speaker on as Kehlani’s “Advice” played, I began running the bath water while taking large gulps of the Prosecco in my hand before sitting it down to undress.

Once the hot water covered my body I almost felt at ease. Until those lyrics began to sting like a bee.

“I almost lost my mind. I left myself behind. I almost crashed and fell right from the skyyyy. I took a chance on this. I took too big of risk. And now I’m left with pain to get me high. Cause how is the man of my dreams, not a man of his words And how is the man for me just a man that makes me hurt...” I softly whispered those words.

How could I have been so stupid. So blinded. I started beating myself up again. I should’ve left him alone. If I had I wouldn’t be going through this. I wouldn’t be so wounded. And I never would’ve lost my child. He robbed me of so much. And I let him. It’s my fault just as much as it was his.

I felt like this whole therapy shit was making me face all of this pain head on like a collision. It was becoming too much for me. Dr. Harris says it’s good progress and that it’s normal. It’s going to help me be able to move forward mentally and emotionally. But today I just feel like an emotional wreck.

I didn’t even feel like being bothered. Not by anyone. Not even Trey at the moment.

I just needed to be alone with my feelings, music, and this wine.

God give me strength.

Trey

I closed down my MacBook Pro after spending the last hour or so finalizing this trip Chris and I had been secretly planning. It was a nice surprise that we were sure Carmen and Casey would enjoy. These last months were kinda crazy for all of us especially my baby. Getting out of this city for a few days would be great for her.

Speaking of, I checked my phone to see if she had texted or called me back. But there was nothing. It was now 7:47 and I was sure she’d hit me back by now. Normally she would after her therapy session.

She really didn’t like talking about it much and I never forced her to speak on it. I’m sure discussing her past was painful. I know the feeling.

It took me awhile to get over what my ex had done to me. Tanya. We were together for about 2 years while I attended college back home. I heard the rumors but chose to not listen. There was no way I could believe that the woman I said I love you too every day was cheating on me behind my back. With my cousin at that who was a known drug dealer. He had the money, the jewelry, the swag that most women want nowadays.

I was so caught up in school and making sure my future business venture was going to be everything I’d hoped it would be. I was making sacrifices and moves to build a family I’ve always wanted with her and what I thought was my unborn child.

I still remember that day. The day it all came crashing down a day I’ll never forget.

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Chapter 36: What You Do To Me

Carmen

“Tell me about that night and the first encounter with that side of him.” Dr. Harris she said to me while jotting down more notes. This was our 4th session and it was getting down to the nitty gritty. Each time it gets harder. It becomes more embarrassing. Admitting not only to her but finally to myself out loud, about things I’ve buried deep inside. The abuse I endured. There was no way I could tell all what this son of a bitch put me through. Not in a one hour setting. I wasn’t even sure where to start at first. I really had to think about that first time I caught him. That first time he disrespected me. It was the first time of many times, where I forgave him for everything wrong he’d done.

 She passed me a box of tissues as the tears began to slowly flood my cheeks. I could immediately feel my face burning red from embarrassment. As a woman, I let myself down during these times.

 I took a deep breath and let it flow out.

 “It was the eve of my college graduation.” I began. “I had just turned 21 two weeks prior on November 30th, so I was anticipating on having some fun now that I was legal to drink You know, hang out with my friends, especially after having a tough Fall semester. I didn’t think I would make the Deans List because I was in the process of getting my boutique off the ground. I did not want to jeopardize my summa cum laude, which I pulled off surprisingly! So I felt that it was the perfect time to relieve some stress. You know to celebrate my personal achievement.”

 “What did Lance think about you wanting to have some fun?” She asked with her eyes glued to mines.

 “Well, initially I thought he’d be more excited than I was. At the time when he’d go out, he would tell me I couldn’t go because I wasn’t 21.” I said out loud. I must admit, it sounded really stupid.

 “How would that make you feel?“ she questioned.

 “At the time, I honestly didn’t think much of it. I just didn’t want to be that girl that nagged about her boyfriend going out all the time. And I also understood that he hung out with an older crown So I...” I paused.

 “You were content with staying in? Allowing him to do whatever he wanted” She chimed in.

 I shrugged my shoulders as my eyes fell down to my hands. My fingers started fumbling with each other before answering. “You could say that. I tried keeping myself busy. In other ways, School and work were my main focus.” I elaborated.

 “Did it ever cross your mind that he was being unfaithful?” She continued to push.

  “No. Not until...that night.”

  Flashback

 “I am so ready for tonight! Finals are over and I am graduating TOMORROW!! Carmen King SUMMA CUM LAUDEEEEE ” I deepened my voice while looking at myself in the mirror goofing off.

 “WE are graduating tomorrow!” My roommate Sonya corrected me while approaching the mirror. “Wow you look amazing Carmen. All of this time I thought you were a book nerd and look at you in this skintight bodycon dress. Booty and Brains” she joked.

 “Why thank you honey!” I blushed. “I’m so excited I get to party with real adults tonight. Buy my own drinks even though my babe will be doing the buying” I laughed, noticing Sonya rolling her eyes. “What’s that about?” I questioned.

 “He’s going out with us?” She asked crossing her arms over her chest.

 “Well it’s not like he’s chauffeuring but yeah he’ll be there. His frat brother is hosting the party. It’s going to be a great night. Trust me!”

   By 11:00 we were turnt up on the dance floor getting it up with the whole damn club to Bobby Shmurder “Hot Nigga”. I’ve never felt so free and alive before and this moment was everything. A great celebration!

 The song changed to Juvenile’s “Slow Motion” one of those slow grinding songs so while my girls continued dance I decided to go find Lance. I called him twice when I was on the way to the club but he still hadn’t hit me back. My girls suggested that I shouldn’t find him and instead get my life with someone new for one night. Of course I couldn’t do that. My eyes were only meant for one man. Lance.

 After walking away from my girls for a moment, I noticed a group of his Alpha brothers ducked off in a booth section and made my way over to them. I knew Jared in particular because we went to high school together. He was not only a good friend to Lance but to me also.

 “Hey Jared!” I shouted over the music. He instantly looked over and shot me a look. It was clear who I was didn’t register with him at first.

 “Carmen? Damn that’s you?” His eyes traced me up and down. “Gotdamn...my nigga been hiding you for a long time! What’s up?” He said making his way closer to give me a hug. “Nice to see you too.” I breathed out. “Have you seen Lance, I can’t find him. Is he here?”

 “Uhhh, I saw him earlier. But to be honest I don’t think you need to be looking for him.“ a look of concern came across his face.

 “Wh...why would you say something like that” I asked with this confused look on my face. I watched as he knocked his Hennessy shot back and he pointed in the direction of the bar.

 My eyes followed to see Lance near the back posted up with some bitch against the wall with her leaning into him. I couldn’t make out the words that drifted from his lips towards her but within seconds he was pulling her into. Planting kissed on her neck, then to her lips.

 I gasped as my heart instantly shot up to my throat as rage began to take over my body while he fondled with her ass in his hands.

  “You’ve gotta be fucking kidding me” I gritted in disbelief.

“Fuck him, come dance with me”Jared whispered in my ears.

Instantly my feet began to head in their direction. Totally ignore his stupidity. Jared tried to pull me back but I wasn’t going to let him stop me. I jerked my arm and continued towards them.

 I began moving swiftly through the crowd headed straight for the man that I loved deeply with anger building up inside of me with every step.

 What was I to do? This had never happened to me before. Do I grab and sling her to ground? Do charge straight at him? Do I stand looking hurt? Or just allow the anger to do whatever and take its course?

 Before I could fully approach him he was already looking in my direction slightly pushing the girl back causing her to stumble.

 “Baby where you been I’ve been looking for you!?” He said all calm as if my own eyes were playing tricks on me as if this random broad wasn’t not standing right there looking more dumbfounded than I was for sure.

 “BABY!?” She questioned as her eyes rolled to the back of her head.

 “YES BITCH! BABY AS IN I’M HIS MUTHAFUCKIN GIRLFRIEND” I charged at her getting ready to attack. Before I knew it my feet were no longer touching the ground and I was lifted away by Lance. I struggled to get away from his tight grip but there was no way I could.

 “CALM THE FUCK DOWN!” He yelled out at me repeatedly.

 “NO FUCK YOU!! WHO THE FUCK IS SHE HUH??” I screamed back realizing we were no longer in the club, but in the back down the hallways. I could still hear the bass of the music in the distance even as we maneuvered further away.

 Until we stopped.

 He put me down slamming my body up against the cold wall causing my head to knock back against it while I groaned out in pain.

 “You need to fuckin chill right now” he gritted hard between his teeth. His blood shot red eyes stared me down hard as the smell of Hennessy from his breath traveled up my nostrils. My head started ringing from the impact as my facial expressions showed the pain I was slightly in. He didn’t even realize how hard he had slammed me up against the wall. He kept going on telling me to keep quiet and how I embarrassed him out there, which really set him off.

Then the unthinkable happened.

Flashback Ends....

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