I am so bad at writing filler information scenes. They always turn out stilted and stupid. I'm not one to info dump so I need to integrate these details strategically when theyre necessary so the reader doesn't get distracted or confused but still knows these things. What do you suggest?
Hiya! Thanks so much for your question. Spreading out information can be tricky, but it’s important to avoid info dumps.
On Filler Scenes and Info Dumps:
Filler scenes are never necessary. Every scene needs a purpose and needs to keep the reader’s attention, and filler scenes tend to have no purpose and be very bland. It’s best to avoid them altogether.
Info dumps are just as bad as filler scenes. Avoid them at all costs. Slowly sprinkle in information as the story progresses. Reveal information as the reader and/or characters need to know it. There’s lots of ways to introduce aspects of your world or characters. Have your characters read a passage of a book. Have them go to a street market filled with food, clothes, toys, etc. Casually put details into conversations.
The general rule of thumb is: do not put more than 5 major world building or character details in a chapter. If the chapter is really long, you can put more than 5. If it’s really short, put less than 5. Putting any more than that can confuse your readers and distract them from the plot.
Thanks again for your question! If you need help with anything else writing-related, feel free to send in another ask. Happy writing!
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