Heās the Alpha
EPUB cover by @valeries-creations
Written by @yslarrysl
G: ABO Footie AU
T: strangers to lovers
W: 37K
Based on She is the Man film.
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Lint Roller? I Barely Know Her
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he wasn't even looking at me and he found me
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@yslarrysl
Heās the Alpha
EPUB cover by @valeries-creations
Written by @yslarrysl
G: ABO Footie AU
T: strangers to lovers
W: 37K
Based on She is the Man film.
āELLOā
London - 9/24
So glad to see you're back !!
aw, thatās sweet. iām intermittently on tumblr lol. i visit every once in a while but im more active on twitter!
Writing tips: He said, she said...
Readers don't tend to notice 'said', while it's there in the sentence, it doesn't give the sentence any life. It gets the job done, mostly...
Here are some options to try!
whispered / muttered / mumbled ā soft or secretive
shouted / yelled / barked ā anger, urgency
growled / hissed ā danger, teasing, frustration
murmured / breathed ā intimacy, vulnerability
snapped / barked / snapped back ā irritation, defensiveness
laughed / chuckled / giggled ā laughing, fun, playful or flirty
asked / questioned / queried / inquired ā curiosity, questioning
demanded / insisted ā authority or control
sighed / groaned ā fatigue, exasperation, longing
When you're looking to replace said, think about why. You'll generally want to do this when you need the following:
when the tone of the line needs more context.
when you want to show emotion instead of telling it.
when your characterās body language, action, or expression can do the talking instead.
Take a look at the scene you're writing, is the character saying their line? Or are they yelling it? Screaming it? Are they enraged, or perhaps is their voice a broken whisper from grief?
That being said, you shouldn't always avoid using 'said.' It's easy to read in long sentences, and it keeps the focus on the dialogue rather than the rest of the scenes. That may be beneficial and a key component to parts of your story.
im sorry. im not woke. i dont think the pathetic and shy character should top to subvert expectations. i just want to see them shiver and whimper and get fucked within an inch of their life. #sorry
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2012 // 2015
Apple Music
Okay so everyone knows this fuckin gif
Well i took it and put in in frame by frameā¦.. (U may want to sit down)
Louis has his hand on Harryās neck
tHEN HE PULLS HIM CLOSEER
dO YOU NOT SEE THAT SHIT
im done.
The suggestive eyebrow wiggle.
March 16, 2012
He's still a good doggo
are you the author of two of a kind on ao3?
yepš