" human beings we've been doing the same things over and over and over again. The past is not as far back as you think it is. As a black person it's really like frightening but also like fortifying to understand these things"
Ryan Coogler , from video 'How Blues Music Inspired SINNERS with Ludwig Göransson and Ryan Coogler | IN PROXIMITY: SINNERS'
I keep thinking about this section of this interview and thinking everything repeats and we can look to our past to strengthen us now. We made it and will keep making it.
“Lestat thought the best color at all times for vampires was black, possibly the only aesthetic principle he steadfastly maintained..” — Anne Rice, Interview with the Vampire
You don't owe me nothing! The first time a comic actually made me cry. I've only read Volume 1 and half of Volume 2 but I understand why people say Sinners is similar at least with what I read so far. But it also reminds me of a lot of other Good vs Evil vs in between stories. I love it.
Its about a Southern family of monsters (Jinoo) healers/ hunters.
"Thus all Art is propaganda and ever must be, despite the wailing of the purists. I stand in utter shameless- ness and say that whatever art I have for writing has been used always for propaganda for gaining the right of black folk to love and enjoy. I do not care a damn for any art that is not used for propaganda. But I do care when propaganda is confined to one side while the other is stripped and silent."
-from Criteria of Negro Art by WEB DuBois (1926)
This was one of the quotes included among the articles included in volume one.
Best part - the people involved really care about its impact and in part use it as a way to teach.
I borrowed the digital copy from the library - then ended up buying it.
And him walking towards Mary with that cigarette Yes!
I have too many but its usually whenever he gets a little vulnerable or protective. So him fixing his jacket before he goes to see Annie, how he follows her around, how he looks at her when she walks to him, how he constantly checked to see what she said before he made a decision and when he pulls her behind him because exactly.
Look I haven't watched Scenes from a marriage but the way Oscar and Jessica were acting during the press tour I should have known they were not playing around in the movie. 🫠
What do you think about Sammie as the final girl trope in horror movies?
SAMMEH
Also whats your favourite sinners song?
Brilliant execution.
The Final Girl is treated as delicate and vulnerable, coveted by the narrative for being the person that just HAS to survive above all else. It's rare to see such a sensitive role be applied to a young Black man, but it is certainly welcomed. It really emphasizes the community that Black people have cultivated for generations, but in even within the realms of Black media, Sinners still outdoes itself.
To protect Sammie in spite of him being a "sinner", in spite of his rejection of the Christian faith. To protect Sammie BECAUSE they care for him and love him and he is family, because he is the magick of their ancestors made manifest and preserving that skill is important, because he is simply being targeted, having done no wrong, and that just isn't right...
Sammie IS the best final girl. Hands down.
My favorite song? Tie between "Pale Pale Moon" and "I Lied To You".
Summary: A mixtape, a confession, a punch, and one very public cookout meltdown. Annie and Smoke finally tell the truth. Too bad the truth came with witnesses.
A/N: Be gentle with me and remember what Erykah Badu said about her shit! 🫣
W/C: 11k
Annie laughed. The sound came out sharp.
“You wanna know why?”
Smoke’s jaw tightened.
“Why I look at you like that.” Her grip tightened around the suitcase handle. “Because the last time I saw you, you acted like you couldn’t wait for me to get the fuck outta Mississippi.”
A murmur moved through the yard.
Smoke’s head jerked back slightly. “What?”
“You heard me.” The tears were coming faster now. “I came to yo’ house so excited to see you.”
She pointed at him. “I was nervous as fuck.” She stepped closer. “But you ain’t even want me there.”
The memory hit her all over again. Standing in that house. Sitting at the kitchen table. Trying to make conversation with him when he felt a million miles away despite being right in front of her.
“You barely talked to me.”
Smoke stared at her. “Annie—”
“No.” Her voice cracked. “You stood most of the time.”
Another step.
“You looked miserable.”
Another.
“You was more interested in whoever called your phone, than talkin’ to me.”
Something flashed across Smoke’s face.
Memory.
Finally.
“Then I told you I was leavin’.” Her voice dropped. “And all you could say was ‘aight.’”
The yard went silent, because now they weren’t talking about the years after. They were talking about the last day. The last face-to-face meeting.
Annie laughed bitterly. “I said I’d call you.” Her eyes burned. “You ain’t even act like you cared if I did.”
She shook her head. “I wasn’t even halfway down them porch steps before you closed the fuckin’ door.”
Smoke just stared at her.
Then he laughed.
The sound wasn’t amused. It wasn’t even angry. It sounded exhausted. Like somebody reaching the end of their rope.
“You really believe that delusional shit, huh?”
Annie froze.
Smoke shook his head.
“I sent you letters.”
His voice rose.
“I sent you birthday cards.”
Another step.
“I sent you Christmas cards.”
The hurt was gone now. This was frustration.
Years of it.
“Any fuckin’ thing I could think of to get you to talk to me.”
Smoke pointed at the mixtape still clutched in his hand.
“That mixtape was the last fuckin’ straw.”
Annie’s face faltered.
Smoke kept going. “I put everything I couldn’t say in that muthafucka.” His chest rose sharply. “I told you I loved you in that shit.”
The words cracked. “Without sayin’ the words.”
Another step.
“And you still gave my ass nothin’.”
Annie stared at him. Confused. Hurt.
Smoke laughed again. Broken this time.
“No call.”
Another breath.
“No letter.”
Another.
“No card.”
His eyes burned. “Nothing.”
The silence stretched tight between them.
Then his face hardened. “And when I finally did talk to yo’ ass?”
Annie felt her stomach drop.
Smoke nodded once. Slow. Deliberate. “You got some nigga laughin’ in the background.”
The entire yard went still. Someone gasped.
Annie blinked.
“What are you—?”
“You heard me.”
His jaw clenched.
“I called.”
Another breath.
“And some nigga in the background laughin’ while I’m listenin’ feelin’ stupid as fuck.”
Recognition flickered across Annie’s face.
Finally.
Because he’d been carrying that one for years.
“How the fuck you think that felt, huh?”
Annie opened her mouth. “Elijah…”
Smoke shook his head.
Then finally answered the question she’d been asking this entire time. The one underneath everything else. The one about why he hadn’t begged.
Why he hadn’t chased.
Why he hadn’t stopped her.
His voice dropped. Dangerously quiet.
“You wanted me to tell you to stay?”
Annie’s eyes filled with tears instantly.
Smoke nodded.
“You wanted me to tell you not to go?”
The hurt surfaced one final time.
Raw.
Unprotected.
“How was I to fight for you when I already thought you was gone?”
The words landed between them with enough force to steal the air from her lungs.
For the first time since she stepped back into Mississippi, Annie realized something she had never considered.
The last time she saw Elijah Moore, he wasn’t sitting across that kitchen thinking she was leaving.
He was sitting there thinking she had already left.
Jada couldn’t remember the last time she felt this invisible.
The strange part was that neither of them had forgotten she was there.
Annie had looked directly at her. Smoke had answered questions about her. Her name had been spoken more than once since this conversation started.
Yet standing here now, she had the uncomfortable feeling that she was watching something that had started years before she arrived and would continue long after she left.
Around them, the cookout had faded into background noise. Not literally. Mrs. Jones still stood beside the grill. The dominoes game remained abandoned. Children still tore through the yard with water guns while somebody’s uncle argued about football loud enough for half the neighborhood to hear.
But none of it seemed to matter to the two people standing in the middle of the yard.
They had stopped talking about her several minutes ago.
Maybe they had never really been talking about her at all.
The thought settled uneasily in her chest.
She had spent the last year believing she understood what existed between her and Smoke. He hadn’t promised her anything. If anything, he had been frustratingly honest from the beginning. He wasn’t looking for a relationship. He wasn’t making promises. More than once he had told her she deserved somebody capable of giving her more than he could.
At the time, she thought he was protecting himself.
Now she wasn’t so sure.
Now she stood here listening to Annie talk about North Carolina and loneliness and missing Smoke, and for the first time Jada found herself wondering if she had misunderstood the entire situation from the beginning.
Because whatever this was, it didn’t feel unfinished.
It felt… interrupted.
To make it worse she heard him say—
“I thought you knew how much I fuckin’ love you.”
She felt the sentence before she fully understood it.
Her mind tried to correct what he had said. Tried to bend the words into something easier to survive. Loved. Had loved. Used to love. Any version that belonged safely in the past, where old heartbreaks and high school memories were supposed to stay. But Smoke hadn’t said it that way. He stood in the middle of Mrs. Jones’ yard with his voice cracked open, eyes fixed on Annie like nobody else existed, and said he loved her in the present tense.
Love.
It wasn’t nostalgia, regret or some unfinished thing he had outgrown, but never properly buried. Love. The kind of word Jada had spent the last year trying not to ask for because she already knew better. The kind of word Smoke had never offered her, not even accidentally, not even in one of their after-midnight moments when sometimes people said more than they meant to. He had been kind to her. Honest with her. Careful in his own way. But he had never been open.
Not like this.
Not exposed in front of half the town with his pride bleeding out at Annie’s feet.
The pieces came together slowly at first, then all at once. Every dinner made sense. The silence after Annie’s name came up. Every conversation he ended before it could become something more.
Every moment she had mistaken for progress suddenly looked different.
She had spent a year telling herself Smoke was guarded, emotionally unavailable, too damaged by whatever had happened back then to let anybody all the way in. Standing here now, watching him look at Annie like the last eight years had never been able to touch the deepest part of him, Jada understood the truth with a humiliation so quiet it almost felt private.
He hadn’t been unavailable.
He was just unavailable to her.
She looked at Annie then, really looked at her. Tears were coming down her face so freely now that she didn’t seem aware of them anymore. The suitcase was still in her hand, though her grip had gone slack around the handle. She looked wrecked. Angry. Drunk enough to say too much and sober enough to feel every bit of it. Jada wanted to hate her for standing there holding the one thing Jada had spent years hoping for. But the anger wouldn’t hold the way it used to. Not now. Not while Annie looked like she had been bleeding from the same wound all along.
Then she looked at Smoke.
He wasn’t watching the crowd. Not Stack, Pearline, Mary or the dominoes table that had gone still behind him.
He wasn’t even watching her.
The thought settled strangely in her chest because, despite everything, she knew things about Smoke. She knew how he took his coffee. Knew what kind of music he listened to when he thought nobody was paying attention.
But standing here now, she found herself seeing how much of him had always remained just out of reach.
She knew his real name.
She had just used it not even an hour prior.
But standing here now, she realized there was a difference between knowing a name and belonging to it.
To most people he was Smoke. Even when they called him Elijah, it sounded like a substitute. A government name. Something official.
Annie said it differently.
Elijah when she was angry. Elijah when she was crying. Elijah when she wanted him to understand exactly how much he had hurt her.
And every single time she said it, his attention sharpened.
Friends had called him Elijah before. His family certainly had. But Jada couldn’t remember ever hearing another person say it and have him answer it so completely.
The realization settled quietly.
The name didn’t belong to Annie.
But somehow, the version of him that answered to it always had.
He was looking at Annie the same way he had looked past Jada in that parking lot freshman year. The same way he had looked every time Jada convinced herself she was imagining it, because the alternative meant admitting there had never really been a contest.
That was the part that finally settled.
There had never been a contest.
She had spent years wondering what Annie had that she didn’t. Beauty, softness, ease, some invisible thing people seemed to recognize before she could name it. She had treated the question like something she could solve if she studied it long enough. As though understanding Annie would somehow teach her how to be chosen over her. But standing there with Smoke’s confession still hanging in the humid air, she realized the question had always been wrong.
It was never about what Annie had.
It was Annie.
It had always been Annie.
Standing in Mrs. Jones’s backyard, listening to Smoke confess a love he never stopped carrying, she finally understood.
It was Annie then.
It was still Annie now.
Stack should have felt surprised.
Instead, he felt like somebody had finally handed him the missing pages of a story he’d been trying to understand for years.
Around him, nobody was pretending to mind their business anymore.
Aunt Cheryl had abandoned the grill entirely. The tongs she’d been carrying were long gone now, forgotten somewhere behind her. Uncle Lewis stood beside her with his arms folded across his chest, his expression unreadable beneath the evening light. Geneva and Max had drifted closer too. Even the dominoes game had dissolved. The men still sat around the table, but nobody was touching the tiles. The entire yard seemed suspended between one moment and the next, waiting to see what would happen.
He barely noticed any of it.
His attention remained fixed on Annie and Smoke.
For the first time since Annie came home, Smoke and Annie were finally talking. Really talking. Not the careful conversations they’d been having for the last two days or the polite versions of themselves they showed everybody else.
This was the ugly shit. The buried shit. Shit both of them should’ve said years ago, but never did.
Then Smoke said it.
“When I finally talked to yo’ ass, I heard some nigga in the background laughin’.”
The words settled over the yard.
He felt something click into place. He didn’t know exactly what Smoke was talking about, but suddenly he understood something he hadn’t understood in years.
Back then, he’d known something happened. He just never knew what.
After Annie moved to North Carolina, Smoke had still talked about her at first. Not constantly. That wasn’t his style. But enough. Enough that he knew she stayed on his mind. Then one day it seemed like somebody flipped a switch.
Smoke stopped bringing her up. He wasn’t checking the mailbox on the regular. And he stopped looking at the phone every time it rang.
The change hadn’t happened at once. It was slow enough that most wouldn’t have noticed it.
But he did.
They were sitting on the back patio steps one evening when he’d finally gotten tired of pretending not to know something was wrong.
“What happened wit’ Annie?”
Smoke didn’t answer. He’d kept staring out into the yard like he hadn’t heard the question.
“Nothin’.”
“C’mon bruh.”
A long silence followed.
Then Smoke finally spoke. “Me and Annie done.”
Stack remembered waiting for more. An explanation. A reason.
Anything.
None came.
Smoke stood, flicked his cigarette into the dirt, and walked inside.
That had been the end of it.
Every time Stack tried bringing Annie up afterward, the conversation died before it started. Smoke changed the subject. Left the room. Found something else to do. Looking back, Stack realized he hadn’t been protecting a secret.
He’d been protecting a wound.
Standing in Aunt Cheryl’s backyard now, listening to eight years of misunderstandings unravel in real time, he finally knew what he’d been looking at back then.
Smoke hadn’t stopped talking because he stopped caring. He stopped talking because something convinced him Annie was already gone.
The knowledge of this sat heavy. He watched the two of them. Shit, the whole reason he’d pushed Annie to come over that last time she was in town was because he’d been hoping they would talk.
He remembered practically forcing the issue. Telling her to stop being scary and come through. Watching her walk into the house carrying that overnight bag. Watching Smoke look up when she stepped through the door. Then leaving because he’d thought privacy was all they needed.
Now he wanted to go back in time and knock both of them upside the fucking head.
Apparently they’d spent the entire visit doing exactly what they were doing before now—avoiding conversations that mattered.
Annie thought Smoke had sent her a goodbye.
Smoke thought Annie had moved on.
Neither one of them said any of it.
Stack looked towards Pearline.
She stood with her arms folded tightly across her chest, her face still carrying traces of the argument she’d had upstairs. If there was anybody in the yard having a worse day than Annie and Smoke, it was probably her.
Between Annie cussing her out and Mary standing twenty feet away pretending she hadn’t started half this bullshit, Pearline was already hanging on by a thread. Add in the fact that Mary had slept with Stack while she and Stack were still trying to figure out whatever the hell they were becoming, and Pearline looked one inconvenience away from committing a felony.
Despite everything else going on, they both seemed to arrive at the same conclusion at exactly the same time.
These two had spent eight years makin’ themselves miserable when all they had to do was open their muthafuckin’ mouths and talk.
Annie stared at him.
For several seconds, she couldn’t make herself respond. Not because she had nothing to say, but because too many things arrived at once and crowded her throat before any one of them could become words. The heat in her face sharpened into something closer to embarrassment, then anger, then disbelief. She could see him standing there at eighteen with the phone pressed to his ear, hearing some boy laugh somewhere behind her and deciding the worst possible thing because hurt people were good at doing that.
She could see it. That was the problem. She could finally see it, and seeing it didn’t make her less angry.
“That was probably somebody from class,” she said, her voice rough from crying. “I don’t know, Elijah. I had people around me.”
Smoke laughed once, and the sound cut through what little softness had tried to form between them. “Of course you did.”
Annie’s eyes narrowed. “What the fuck that supposed to mean?”
“It mean exactly what it sound like.”
His grip tightened around the mixtape without him seeming to realize it.
“I been standin’ here listenin’ to you tell me what you thought, what you felt, what you needed, like I was supposed to know all that from three states away when half the time I couldn’t even get you on the fuckin’ phone. I tried everything I could think of just to get you to talk to me. And you still gave me your ass to kiss.”
The words hit hard enough to make someone in the crowd inhale sharply.
Annie felt the force of them too, but pride rose before hurt could fully show. It crawled up her spine and locked her shoulders in place, the same stubbornness that had carried her through years of pretending she hadn’t spent half her life missing him.
Across the yard, Pearline’s face tightened like she already knew Annie was about to say something she would regret.
Maybe she did. Maybe everyone did. Maybe that’s why she started moving towards Annie.
Smoke kept going, his voice lower now but no less dangerous. “So yeah, when I finally heard yo’ voice and some nigga was in the background laughin’ like he had a reason to be comfortable around you, I was done. By the time you came to my house, I already thought you was gone. Hell yeah I was distant. Hell yeah I didn’t know what to say. What the fuck you expect me to do, Annie? Sit there and beg you to stay after you had spent months showin’ me you ain’t wanna be kept?”
Annie flinched before she could stop herself.
The reaction crossed Smoke’s face quickly. Satisfaction didn’t follow it. If anything, he looked worse for having said it.
Tired.
Angry.
Hurt enough to keep swinging because stopping would mean feeling the full weight of what he had just admitted in front of everybody.
“That’s what you thought?” Annie asked.
“What else was I supposed to think?”
“You could’ve asked me.”
Smoke’s laugh was sharp. “Oh, you would’ve answered this time?”
The words landed exactly where he aimed them.
Annie’s mouth parted, but nothing came out at first.
Around them, the yard seemed to draw even closer. Aunt Cheryl had moved off to the side of them, Uncle Lewis beside her with a hand hovering near her elbow like he was not sure whether to hold her back or follow her in. Geneva and Aunt Max stood just behind them, their faces set with the kind of concern that understood this was no longer simply messy.
This was two people cutting each other because bleeding alone had stopped feeling fair.
Annie swallowed hard, but her pride would not let her lower her voice. “Sorry,” she said, the word brittle enough to break. “I forgot who I was talkin’ to.”
Smoke’s eyes darkened. “What that mean?”
She laughed, and it came out uglier than she intended. “Mr. Talkative. My fault. I forgot I was supposed to read your mind and listen to a mixtape wit’ no note, no explanation, no call, no nothin’, and somehow understand everything you were too fuckin’ scared to say out loud.”
Stack’s hand came up toward his face, not quite covering his eyes but close enough. Pearline closed hers. Mary, who had been chewing on the inside of her cheek so hard she looked like she might draw blood, went completely still. Even Jada seemed to wince, though whether it was for Annie or Smoke, nobody could tell.
Smoke stared at Annie like she had reached over and put her hand directly on an old bruise.
“You wanna talk about that day at my house?” he asked.
Annie lifted her chin. “I been talkin’ about it.”
“Nah.” Smoke shook his head once, slow and controlled. “You been talkin’ about what you decided it was. You walked in there already thinkin’ I had moved on, and everything I did after that, you made it fit.”
Her eyes flashed. “And you didn’t?”
The question stopped him for a moment, just long enough for Annie to see that it landed. She stepped closer before she could think better of it, the suitcase forgotten at her side, the tequila still moving through her blood in warm, reckless waves.
“You stood there lookin’ at your phone,” she said. “That’s what you were doin’ while I was sittin’ there feelin’ stupid. So since we talkin’ about assumptions, what was I supposed to think? You thought I moved on, you did too?”
Smoke’s jaw clenched. “That wasn’t—”
“Wasn’t, what, Smoke?” she cut in.
The name landed wrong.
Everybody felt it.
Smoke’s face changed immediately, the anger tightening into something sharper because she knew exactly what she had done. She always called him Elijah, and today dragging his real name out of him with every accusation and every confession, and now she had put Smoke between them like a door slamming shut.
Annie saw the reaction and kept going anyway.
“That your phone wasn’t blowin’ up? That you wasn’t waitin’ on somebody else to call? What, you was fuckin’ Jada back then too? Couldn’t wait to call her pick-me ass once I left?”
Mary choked on whatever was in her cup. It came out half cough, half strangled laugh, and Aunt Max shot her a look sharp enough to cut. Jada’s face went completely still, all the earlier humiliation hardening into something colder as she looked from Annie to Smoke and back again. She didn’t smirk. She didn’t defend herself. She only shook her head once, small and tired, like even she knew this had stopped being about her a long time ago and somehow Annie had dragged her back into it anyway.
Smoke’s voice dropped. “That was my boss.”
Annie blinked.
Smoke took a step closer. “That phone you keep talkin’ about? That was my boss tellin’ me what job site to be at the next mornin’.”
For one humiliating instant, Annie felt the ground quake under her. She saw the kitchen again. Smoke glancing at the phone. Her stomach twisting. Her mind building a whole story out of one look because she had been scared enough to believe almost anything by then. The obviousness of it should have made her quiet.
Instead, pride rushed in to save her from the shame.
“Sure, Smoke.”
His eyes narrowed. “Don’t do that.”
“The way you looked at that phone wasn’t no damn job site look.”
“And I’m supposed to believe that nigga was just a classmate?” Smoke fired back, his voice rising again. “Not with the way he was laughin’. Not with that little ‘oh, Annie’ shit in the background like he knew somethin’ I didn’t.”
Recognition flashed across her face before she could hide it.
Smoke caught it.
“Yeah,” he said, the word rough. “I remember that part too.”
Annie’s stomach tightened because now she remembered it clearly enough to hate how messy memory could be. A study group. Somebody joking around. A boy from class who had been harmless and annoying and nowhere near important enough to have shaped eight years of pain. She couldn’t even remember his name. Could barely remember his face.
Yet here Elijah stood, holding onto his laugh like evidence.
“Again…you could’ve asked,” she said through clenched teeth.
Smoke’s laugh came fast and mean. “Again… you would’ve answered?”
The yard flinched with her.
Annie took a step toward him, anger burning through the embarrassment now. “Maybe if you learned how to open your fuckin’ mouth instead of sittin’ around actin’ like silence make you deep, we wouldn’t be here.”
Stack moved before anyone else did. Not fully between them yet, but closer. Pearline reached for Annie at the same time, her hand closing around her arm just above the elbow.
“Annie,” Pearline warned softly.
Annie snatched her arm back without looking at her. “No, don’t Annie me. Everybody wanna talk now, right? Everybody got all this shit to say now.”
Smoke stepped forward too, and Stack’s hand landed flat against his chest.
“Back up,” Stack muttered.
Smoke didn’t look at him. “Move.”
“Nah, back up bruh.”
Aunt Cheryl finally stepped into the center of it, and though her voice was not loud, it carried across the yard with enough force to cut through the shouting.
“ENOUGH.”
Nobody moved at first.
She looked at Annie, then at Smoke, and the disappointment in her face somehow made both of them look younger. “Y’all are bein’ real damn silly right now, and I know both of y’all got more sense than this.”
Annie’s chest rose and fell too quickly. “I’m leaving.”
“Baby, don’t walk outta here like this,” Aunt Cheryl said.
“I said I’m leaving.”
“You hear me talkin’ to you?”
Annie looked away because if she looked at Aunt Cheryl too long, she might break in a way anger could not hide. “I can’t be here.”
Smoke laughed under his breath, and the sound made something in her snap before he even spoke.
“Go on then.”
The yard went still.
Stack’s head turned sharply toward his brother. “Smoke.”
Smoke ignored him, his eyes locked on Annie. “Run away like you always do. That’s what you good at anyway.”
The words hit harder than anything else he had said, maybe because this one was not about old phone calls or letters or a mixtape or some boy laughing in the background. This one was about her. About the pattern he believed he knew.
About the thing she feared might be true.
Annie moved before she thought.
Pearline caught her around the waist just as Stack caught Smoke by the shoulders.
“Let me go,” Annie snapped.
“No,” Pearline said, voice shaking now. “No, you not doin’ this.”
Smoke tried to shrug Stack off. “Get off me.”
“Bruh, chill the fuck out,” Stack said, tightening his grip. “Both of y’all look stupid.”
The whole yard had shifted into motion now. Aunt Cheryl was yelling for everybody to back up. Uncle Lewis stepped between two cousins trying to get closer. Geneva had one hand pressed to her mouth while Aunt Max kept saying Annie’s name like repetition might bring her back to herself.
Cornbread stood near the edge of the yard with Therise tucked behind him, his eyes moving between Smoke and anyone who looked like they might be foolish enough to step in wrong. Bo hovered near the dominoes table, uncertain whether to help or stay out of grown folks’ business. Mike and Isoo stood a little farther away with Grace beside them, all three looking like they had accidentally wandered into the part of a family gathering nobody was supposed to see.
Then Annie saw Isoo.
It happened fast enough that nobody could stop it and slow enough that everybody understood what she was doing.
Her eyes found him across the yard, and the expression on her face changed. It wasn’t soft or calm. Her expression changed into something petty, wounded, and desperate to regain control of a situation that had stripped her bare in front of all the people she knew.
“Isoo.”
Smoke went still in Stack’s arms.
Pearline’s grip tightened around Annie immediately. “Annie, don’t.”
Isoo looked caught off guard at first. Then he straightened, his gaze flicking from Annie to Smoke and back again. “Uhh, yeah?”
Annie wiped her face with the back of her hand, still breathing too hard. “Will you get me outta here? I don’t wanna be here no more.”
A low sound moved through the yard.
Smoke’s entire body moved forward, but Stack shoved him back hard enough to make him stumble a half step.
“Don’t,” Stack said.
Smoke’s eyes never left Annie. “You serious?”
Annie looked directly at him when she answered. “Yeah.”
Pearline turned her slightly, trying to make Annie look at her instead. “Please don’t do this. Not like this.”
Aunt Cheryl stepped closer. “Annie, baby, you makin’ a mistake.”
“I already made plenty today.”
“Then don’t make another one,” Geneva said, her voice gentle but firm.
Annie heard them. She did. Somewhere underneath the hurt and the tequila and the humiliation, she heard every warning being offered to her. But hearing was not the same as stopping. Not when Smoke was still looking at her like he had been right about her all along.
Not when the word run was still sitting in the air between them.
Isoo took a cautious step forward.
Mike immediately caught his arm. “Bro, don’t do it.”
Isoo looked at him. “She don’t wanna be here, Mike.”
“I said don’t do it.”
“She asked me for a ride.”
Mike’s expression tightened because everybody knew it was more than that. Annie knew it too. So did Isoo. So did Smoke. The entire yard could see it, which only made it worse.
Smoke shoved Stack’s hands off him hard enough this time that Stack had to step in front of him fully. “Annie, you don’t gotta leave. I’ll go.”
The words should have softened something.
They did.
For a second.
Then Isoo spoke.
“She said she don’t wanna be here, Smoke. Let her go.”
Smoke turned his head slowly.
The yard seemed to feel the change before anybody moved. Stack’s hand went back to Smoke’s chest. Mike stepped in front of Isoo. Aunt Cheryl said Smoke’s name in a voice that should have stopped him.
It did not.
Isoo stepped around Mike and lifted his chin just enough to make the whole thing worse. “You done said enough to her.”
Smoke moved so fast Stack barely managed to get a hand on him.
It slowed the first step.
It didn’t stop the second.
The punch landed with a sick, clean sound that cut through the entire yard. Isoo stumbled backward into Mike, one hand flying to his mouth as Grace screamed and Cornbread cursed loud enough to shake the trees.
Everything exploded at once.
Stack grabbed Smoke from behind, dragging him back with both arms locked around his chest. Mike shoved Isoo behind him while Bo and Cornbread rushed forward. Aunt Cheryl’s voice rose above everybody else, furious and heartbroken all at once, but Annie barely heard it.
Annie stood frozen with Pearline’s arms still around her.
Because a minute ago she had wanted to leave.
A minute ago she had wanted to hurt him.
A minute ago she had wanted to prove she could walk away first.
Now Elijah stood several feet away, breathing hard, eyes still locked on hers while half the yard tried to keep him from doing something worse, and Annie realized with a sick, sinking feeling that the thing between them had not broken open.
It had finally broken all the way loose.
Stack didn’t stop walking until they were well past the edge of the cookout.
The music still carried through the trees, muffled now by distance. Every so often laughter drifted across the yard, strange and out of place after everything that had just happened. The farther they moved from the crowd, the easier it became to pretend the entire scene had happened somewhere else.
Smoke knew better.
His jaw still ached from how hard he’d been clenching it. His knuckles hurt too. Every few steps he flexed his hand without realizing it, the sting settling deeper each time.
Neither brother spoke.
Not at first.
The silence between them wasn’t uncomfortable. It rarely was. Most people expected twins to talk constantly. Stack and Smoke had never needed to. Half the time they communicated through looks, shrugs, or the simple understanding that came from spending an entire lifetime beside somebody.
They stopped beneath the old pecan tree near the edge of the property.
The same tree they’d hidden behind as kids whenever Aunt Cheryl started handing out chores.
Smoke leaned against the trunk of the tree and reached into his pocket for a cigarette.
The movement felt automatic. Familiar. Something to do with his hands while his head tried and failed to catch up with everything that had happened over the last hour. His fingers found the pack easily enough, but when he reached for the lighter, the tremor hit immediately. Not enough for most people to notice. Enough for Stack.
The wheel clicked beneath his thumb.
Nothing.
Smoke frowned and tried again. This time a flame appeared before sputtering out. “Fuck,” he cursed under his breath as frustration tightened his jaw. Before he could try a third time, the lighter disappeared from his hand altogether.
He looked up.
Stack stood there holding it.
Neither brother acknowledged what had just happened. They didn’t need to. Stack flicked the wheel once and a steady flame appeared immediately. Smoke leaned forward, lit the cigarette, and took a long drag. The burn settled harshly in his lungs, but it gave him something to focus on besides the image of Annie standing in the middle of Aunt Cheryl’s yard with tears on her face, fire in her eyes, and a suitcase in her hand.
For a while neither of them spoke. The sounds of the cookout drifted through the trees in pieces. Somebody shouted something that earned a chorus of responses. Music floated lazily through the humid evening air. Life was already trying to move on from the scene they had left behind.
Smoke wasn’t.
His attention kept drifting toward the house. The porch. The front yard. The windows upstairs. Anywhere Annie might appear.
Stack followed his brother’s gaze and immediately understood what he was looking for.
Or rather who.
It sat heavily on his chest. Even after the argument, after the screaming. And even after the punch. Smoke was still checking to see if Annie had left.
Again.
Stack rubbed a hand across his jaw and sighed.
“You know what’s crazy?”
Smoke already hated where this was going.
“No.”
“You punched the wrong nigga.”
The cigarette paused halfway to Smoke’s mouth. He turned slowly toward his brother, prepared to tell him exactly where he could go with that opinion, but the words never came. Stack wasn’t smiling. There wasn’t even a hint of amusement on his face.
That was how Smoke knew he was serious.
“Isoo ain’t why you mad.”
Smoke looked away.
Unfortunately, that only proved the point.
Stack watched him before his attention drifted downward. The mixtape was still in Smoke’s hand.
That stopped him.
Because of what it represented. Because somehow, through the argument, the walk across the yard, and the fight, Smoke had never put the damn CD down.
“You still got it.”
Smoke frowned.
“What?”
Stack nodded toward the plastic case.
“You ain’t even notice, did you?”
For the first time Smoke followed his gaze. His eyes settled on the familiar handwriting stretched across the cover, and something tightened in his chest so suddenly it almost annoyed him.
Annie’s handwriting.
Uneven.
Familiar.
The same handwriting he’d spent years pretending didn’t matter anymore.
Two weeks.
She’d spent two weeks making it. Two weeks choosing songs and recording tracks and carrying around thoughts she apparently never intended to say out loud. Then she’d brought it all the way from North Carolina just to throw it at his head in the middle of a family cookout.
The memory should’ve irritated him. Instead, the corner of his mouth twitched.
Stack caught it immediately.
“There he is.”
Smoke rolled his eyes. “Shut up.”
“Nah.” A laugh escaped Stack before he could stop it. “That girl been stressin’ yo’ ass out since freshman year.”
The comment should’ve been easy to ignore. Instead it pulled a memory loose.
Not a fight or an argument.
Something worse.
A Saturday afternoon at Mary’s house nearly ten years ago.
The backyard had been packed with teenagers pretending they were older than they actually were. Music blasted from a speaker somebody’s cousin swore cost more than his first car. Folding chairs circled coolers full of drinks nobody was supposed to have. Half the boys spent the afternoon trying to look cool while half the girls pretended not to notice them trying.
Annie had been sitting on the hood of somebody’s car laughing so hard she nearly slid off the edge.
Stack remembered that part clearly.
The sunlight catching the gold in her earrings. Her hair pulled back. The way she laughed with her whole body when something genuinely caught her off guard.
Isoo stood nearby, running his mouth the way Isoo always did.
Talking.
Joking.
Trying to make everybody laugh.
For a while nobody paid much attention. Then Annie hopped down from the hood and wandered off toward the house with Pearline and a few other girls.
The conversation turned naturally after that.
At least until Isoo looked in the direction she’d disappeared and shook his head.
“Maaaannn, Annie get any thicker and somebody gon’ have to do somethin’ about it.”
A few of the boys laughed. Stack remembered laughing too.
At first.
Isoo grinned. “Y’all laughin’, but I’m serious.”
More laughter.
Mike threw a chip at him. “Shut yo’ dumb ass up.”
Isoo caught it and kept talking anyway. “Landry act all shy and innocent, bet it won’t take much to get in them pants.”
The laughter died just enough for the guys to start looking at each other. Enough for Mike to stop smiling and for Stack to notice Smoke. Because Smoke had gone completely still. Not the usual version everybody knew.
This was different.
The kind of stillness that felt dangerous.
Isoo either didn’t notice or didn’t care.
“What?” he laughed. “Y’all know I’m right.”
Nobody answered.
Stack remembered watching Smoke set his drink down.
Slowly.
Carefully.
The way people did when they were trying very hard not to break something.
Or someone.
“Aight.”
The single word cut through the conversation.
Isoo looked over. “What?”
Smoke’s face gave away nothing. “Aight.”
The backyard had gone completely silent by then. Even the music seemed farther away.
Isoo laughed nervously. “What?”
Smoke took one step forward. “Don’t do that.”
The smile faded from Isoo’s face. “Do what?”
“Talk about Annie.”
The answer came calm. Too calm.
Stack remembered exchanging a look with Mike. Both of them already knew where this was headed.
Isoo tried to laugh again. It didn’t sound nearly as confident this time. “Man, I ain’t say nothin’.”
Smoke took another step. “Then keep it that way.”
Nobody spoke. The tension sat thick enough to touch. Then Mike stepped between them before either one of them could do something stupid.
“Everybody chill.”
Smoke didn’t take his eyes off Isoo. Isoo didn’t take his eyes off Smoke. Eventually somebody changed the subject. Somebody turned the music up.
The moment passed.
At least on the surface.
Later that night Stack finally asked about it. “You really don’t like Isoo?”
Smoke hadn’t even looked up from whatever he was pretending to focus on. “I tolerate him.”
Stack remembered laughing. “What the hell that mean?”
“It mean I tolerate him.”
That had been the end of the conversation.
At least until now.
Standing beneath the pecan tree nearly ten years later, the memory came back so clearly Stack almost laughed.
Almost.
Because looking at Smoke now, looking at the bruised knuckles, the cigarette hanging from his mouth, and the mixtape still clutched in his hand, Stack finally understood something he probably should’ve understood a long time ago.
Smoke never got over anything when it came to Annie. Not the comments. Not the misunderstandings. Not the silence. And definitely not her.
The memory hit Stack hard enough that he started laughing all over again.
Smoke shot him a glare. “What?”
“You serious?”
“What the fuck so funny?”
Stack shook his head. “Man.”
“What?”
“Nigga, you almost fought Isoo over Annie before she was even yo’ girl.”
Smoke frowned. “That ain’t what happened.”
“That’s exactly what happened.”
“It ain’t.”
Stack laughed. “Nigga, you been holdin’ a grudge against that man for almost ten years.”
Smoke dragged on the cigarette and looked away.
Which was answer enough.
Stack laughed one final time before the amusement faded from his face. Something more serious settled into its place as his eyes looked back towards the house. Somewhere behind them Aunt Cheryl was probably still fussing. Pearline was probably trying to keep Annie from doing something she’d regret. Mary was probably regretting every decision that led her to this afternoon.
Eventually Stack sighed. “You know what really got you tho?”
Smoke didn’t answer.
Stack kept going anyway. “She was leavin’.”
The words hit home.
Smoke’s shoulders tightened.
Stack noticed.
“That’s what this really about.”
The cigarette burned quietly between Smoke’s fingers as he stared toward the trees.
“You thought she was stayin’.”
Silence.
“And then she grabbed that suitcase.”
The image came back instantly. Annie walking across the yard. Suitcase in one hand. Mixtape tucked beneath her arm.
Leaving.
Again.
The feeling that followed made Smoke’s stomach turn.
Stack saw the exact moment it happened. Saw the way his brother looked away. Saw the way his jaw tightened.
“You ain’t punch Isoo because Annie asked him to get her outta there.”
His voice came quieter now.
More careful.
“You punched him because she grabbed that suitcase again and the first person she reached for wasn’t you.”
The truth settled heavy between them.
Smoke stared out toward the trees and, for once, had absolutely nothing to say. Because his brother was right.
And they both knew it.
After a while Stack nodded toward the mixtape still resting in Smoke’s hand.
“You gon’ listen to it?”
Smoke looked down.
The handwriting seemed heavier now somehow. Not because it had changed, but because he finally understood what it cost her to make it. The physical proof that Annie had loved him enough to create something. Loved him enough to carry it across state lines. Loved him enough to spend eight years holding onto pieces of him she should’ve left behind a long time ago.
“I don’t know.”
Stack snorted. “That’s a lie.”
Smoke glanced up.
Stack shook his head. “You been listenin’ to Annie for damn near ten years.”
The words lingered beneath the pecan tree long after neither brother said anything else. Smoke looked down at the mixtape again and, for the first time all day, allowed himself to consider the possibility that everything he thought he knew about the last eight years might’ve been wrong.
The yard didn’t go quiet after Stack dragged Smoke away, but something in it changed. The music still played from the speakers near the patio, and the children eventually started running again once the adults stopped looking like somebody might get knocked into the grass next. A few people returned to their plates because food was food, even when the family business had just embarrassed everybody in a twenty-foot radius.
But nobody really went back to normal.
The dominoes table remained half-abandoned. Aunt Cheryl’s grill smoked unattended. Uncle Lewis stood near the center of the yard with his hands on his hips, looking at everybody like he was daring one more person to act a fool. The whole cookout felt bruised.
Annie stood in the middle of it with Pearline’s hand still wrapped around her arm and realized, slowly and then with a sickening drop in her stomach, that she had done exactly what she swore she hated.
She had made everybody watch her hurt.
She had dragged Pearline into it. Jada into it.
And now Isoo.
Elijah was dragged into the worst, ugliest parts of herself and then stood there shocked when he bled too.
The anger that had carried her across the yard and into the argument had started to burn out, leaving behind humiliation, tequila, and the awful clarity of consequences. Across from her, Isoo stood with Mike beside him, rubbing his jaw while pretending the punch had not landed as hard as everybody heard it land.
Annie swallowed around the knot in her throat and pulled herself out of Pearline’s hold. For a moment Pearline tightened her fingers like she thought Annie might do something else, but Annie only shook her head and stepped toward Isoo. The movement made several people pause, including Mike, who immediately stepped halfway in front of his cousin like he didn’t trust this day to stop being stupid on its own. Annie could not blame him. She barely trusted herself.
“I’m sorry,” she said, and the words felt too small for the amount of damage sitting around them.
Isoo blinked at her like he had not expected to be included in her regret. “For what?”
Annie almost laughed, but the sound would have come out wrong, so she looked down instead. “For pullin’ you into this. For askin’ you to take me away from here when I knew exactly what I was doin’.” Her voice thinned slightly on the last part because saying it out loud made it real in a way thinking it had not. “You ain’t deserve to get hit because I was tryin’ to make him mad.”
Mike made a sound under his breath that sounded suspiciously like agreement, but Isoo lifted a hand before he could start. There was still irritation in his face, and there should’ve been, but there was also enough understanding to make Annie feel worse. “Yeah,” he said after a moment, rubbing his jaw again. “You kinda did put me in the middle of the shit.”
“I know.” Annie nodded, blinking back tears she was tired of shedding in public. “And I’m sorry.”
Isoo looked past her toward the side of the house where Stack had taken Smoke, then back at her. “You good?”
That almost broke her. It wasn’t because she was good, it was because Isoo asking after taking a punch from the man she had actually been trying to hurt made her feel about two inches tall. “No,” she admitted, barely above a whisper. “But that still wasn’t fair to you.”
Behind her, Aunt Cheryl gave a low hum that said she approved of the apology but not nearly enough to be finished with Annie.
That sound alone made Annie’s shoulders drop. She knew what was coming before she turned around. Aunt Cheryl had moved closer, Aunt Max and Geneva with her, and Pearline stood slightly behind them with her arms crossed tight against her chest and dried tears still on her face. The four of them together looked less like comfort and more like judgment with earrings on.
Before Aunt Cheryl could speak, movement near the driveway caught Annie’s attention. Jada was standing beside her car with her keys in one hand and her purse tucked beneath her arm.
For a minute she simply stood there, looking towards Annie with an expression Annie couldn’t fully read. Not smug, angry or defeated exactly. Just tired in a way that made Annie’s own anger toward her feel suddenly old and useless.
Their eyes met across the yard, and neither woman said anything. There was too much history and not enough relationship for words to do anything helpful. Jada gave the smallest nod, not a forgiveness or friendship nod, but a nod of acknowledgment. She then opened her car door and left without turning the moment into anything bigger than it needed to be.
Mary, unfortunately, was not nearly as graceful.
“I just wanna say—”
The collective groan that rose around the yard cut her off quickly.
Pearline laughed. The sound held no amusement whatsoever.
“No.”
Mary blinked. “No?”
“No.” The exhaustion in Pearline’s voice somehow made the word sharper.
For one stunned moment she simply stared at Mary. The woman had spent the entire afternoon looking uncomfortable, defensive, confused, and mildly offended depending on who happened to be talking to her. Right now she looked all four at once.
Mary folded her arms. “I was just tryna help.”
That made Pearline laugh again.
This time several people looked over.
“Help who?”
“Annie.”
“By doin’ what?” Pearline asked. “Having Jada show up so you could embarrass Annie?”
Mary opened her mouth. Closed it. Then shrugged. “How was I supposed to know she didn’t know about Jada?”
Pearline stared at her for a long moment. The anger she’d been carrying around shifted into something else.
Disbelief maybe.
Because that answer would’ve meant a lot more if Mary hadn’t spent years inserting herself into situations that had absolutely nothing to do with her.
“Funny.”
Mary frowned. “What’s funny?”
“You suddenly worried about other people’s feelings besides your own.”
A few people nearby winced.
Mary’s expression hardened immediately. “Oh, here we go.”
“Yeah. Let’s go.” Pearline folded her arms across her chest. “You knew Stack and I was tryin’ to work on our shit.”
The tension in the yard changed, because now they weren’t talking about Annie and Smoke anymore. Now they were talking about something else.
Mary rolled her eyes. “Pearline—”
“No.”
The answer came quick.
Firm.
“You knew.”
Mary looked away briefly.
Pearline shook her head. “I knew Stack had a reputation. Shit, the whole county knew Stack had a reputation.”
That earned a snort from somewhere behind her.
Probably Cornbread.
She ignored it. “I knew what I was signin’ up for. I knew me and him wasn’t together.” Her eyes settled on Mary. “But you knew too.”
Mary’s jaw tightened.
The silence stretched just long enough for everybody to understand what Pearline was really saying. Mary didn’t owe her loyalty nor did she steal anything.
But Mary knew and still did it anyway.
Movement near the side of the house pulled several heads around.
Stack had reappeared.
He walked back into the yard from the direction he’d taken Smoke, hands shoved into his pockets and irritation written plainly across his face. One look at the group gathered around Mary and Pearline told him exactly where the conversation had gone while he was gone.
Unfortunately for him, when Pearline saw him, her eyes narrowed.
“Here come Satan himself.”
Stack sighed immediately. “Maaaannn.”
Mary looked relieved to see him. Pearline looked anything but.
Stack stopped a few feet away. “What happened now?”
Pearline pointed at Mary. Then pointed at him. Then pointed back at Mary. The gesture somehow communicated an entire argument without requiring a single additional word.
Stack understood every bit of it.
Unfortunately.
Mary looked toward Stack as though he might somehow rescue her from the argument. “Tell her.”
The request earned a sharp laugh from Pearline. “Tell me what?”
Mary threw her hands into the air, visibly frustrated by the fact that nobody seemed interested in helping her case. “That y’all wasn’t even together when Stack and I hooked up.”
From where Annie stood, she watched something flicker across Pearline’s face. It didn’t look like anger. Not exactly. More like exhaustion. The kind that came from having the same conversation too many times with somebody determined not to understand it.
The problem had never been whether Mary and Stack were technically together.
Everybody knew they weren’t.
That wasn’t the point.
Apparently Stack had finally reached the same conclusion.
“She know that.”
Mary frowned immediately. “Then why she actin’ like—”
“Because that ain’t what she mad about.”
The interruption landed hard enough to stop her.
Annie watched Mary blink. Then stare. Then look at Stack like he’d suddenly switched sides in the middle of the game.
Stack sighed and rubbed a hand across the back of his neck. The gesture reminded Annie of Elijah. Not because they looked alike. It was the way both brothers seemed to reach for their necks whenever they were about to say something they didn’t particularly want to say.
“The point ain’t whether me and her was together.”
Mary folded her arms. “Then what is it?”
Stack looked directly at her. “The point is you knew me and Pearline was tryna figure somethin’ out.”
The yard seemed to settle around the statement. Enough for Annie to see Mary’s expression change, and to see Pearline stop looking angry and start looking hurt. Enough for everybody listening to understand exactly what Stack meant.
Mary opened her mouth as if she intended to argue. Nothing came out.
Stack nodded once. “And so did I,” he added quietly. “And I still did it anyway.”
That seemed to surprise everybody.
Including Pearline.
The admission lingered in the air longer than Annie expected. For most of the afternoon people had been defending themselves. Explaining themselves. Finding ways to make their mistakes belong to somebody else. Stack’s words carried none of that. No excuses or an attempt to soften the edges.
He owned it.
Annie watched Pearline look away first. Whatever answer she had been expecting from him clearly wasn’t that one.
Stack’s attention followed her immediately. “Pea.”
Pearline’s eyes found him almost against her will. “What?”
The answer came sharp enough to draw a few smiles from the people standing nearby.
Stack accepted it without complaint. “You right.” His jaw tightened briefly before he continued. “We wasn’t together.”
Pearline rolled her eyes so hard Annie almost laughed. “Stack.”
“Let me finish.”
Pearline crossed her arms. The look she gave him suggested she was considering several forms of violence.
Still, she stayed quiet.
Stack took a slow breath. “We wasn’t together,” he repeated. “But I knew how you felt.”
Something changed in Pearline’s face. Small. Quick. Easy to miss if Annie hadn’t been watching.
The crowd seemed to fade away. For one brief moment it looked like only the two of them existed.
“And if I’m bein’ honest,” Stack continued, “I knew how I felt too.”
The confession seemed to make him uncomfortable almost immediately.
Good. Annie thought he deserved it.
Stack shoved his hands into his pockets and glanced toward the ground before looking back at Pearline. “I should’ve never did it.”
The words came rougher now.
Real.
“I’m sorry I hurt you.”
The entire yard seemed to pause, because Stack rarely apologized. Not without being forced.
Pearline stared at him for so long Annie started wondering if she intended to leave him hanging.
Then she shook her head. “You really practiced that and still sounded stupid.”
The laugh that escaped Aunt Max came out so suddenly she nearly choked on her drink.
A few other people joined in.
Even Stack smiled.
Briefly.
“Probably.”
“Definitely.”
That earned another round of laughter. Some of the tension that had been suffocating the yard all afternoon finally loosened. Not completely. There were still too many wounds walking around for that. But enough for people to breathe again.
Annie smiled despite herself.
Pearline was making a joke out of it because that was easier than standing in the middle of a cookout and admitting she’d been waiting to hear those words for months.
But Annie knew what she was really saying.
I heard you.
I’m still mad.
But I heard you.
Aunt Max pointed immediately. “Good. We done here.”
Several heads turned toward her.
She pointed directly at Pearline next. “And stop cussin’.”
Pearline stared at her. “I only said one bad word.”
“That was enough.”
A few people laughed.
Including Pearline.
Finally.
Aunt Cheryl, who had spent most of the exchange watching everybody with the patience of a woman entirely too old for the foolishness surrounding her, pushed herself away from the grill and dusted her hands together.
“Alright.”
The single word cut through every conversation happening nearby.
People stopped talking.
Aunt Cheryl pointed directly at Mary. “Mary, go on home.”
Mary blinked and pointed at herself. “Me?”
“Yes, you.” Aunt Cheryl’s expression never changed. “Take your pale ass home before you “accidentally” ruin somebody else’s relationship.”
The yard erupted. Even Uncle Lewis laughed.
Mary looked genuinely offended. “Everybody actin’ like I’m the reason all this happened.”
The gasp that left Pearline’s mouth was so dramatic Annie actually turned toward her.
“Oh, this bitch—”
“PEA.”
“I know!”
Pearline threw her hands into the air.
“I know!”
Unfortunately, Mary kept talking. “Like I got magical powers or somethin’.”
Annie saw Pearline start forward before she fully committed to it. She also saw Stack recognize the danger immediately.
“Don’t.”
“I’m not.”
“Pearline.”
“I’m not!”
She absolutely was.
As soon as she took another step, Stack wrapped an arm around her waist and hauled her backward.
Pearline’s protest echoed across the yard. “LET ME GO.”
“No.”
“Just one.”
“No.”
“Stack.”
“No.”
The entire exchange happened so fast Annie barely had time to process it. Pearline twisted in his grip and pointed toward Mary, who had stopped beside her car to watch the chaos she’d created.
“PLEASE LET ME FIGHT HER.”
The request sent half the yard into laughter. Aunt Max bent over so suddenly Annie worried she might actually fall.
Mary looked offended. “Fight me for what?”
Pearline pointed harder. “THAT.”
Stack dropped his forehead against Pearline’s shoulder because he was laughing too hard to stay upright.
“Just one punch,” Pearline begged. “One slap. Somethin’.”
“Absolutely not.”
“Please.”
“No.”
“Please.”
“Pea.”
She groaned loudly. “This is why women be choosin’ violence.”
Aunt Cheryl closed her eyes. “Lord.”
Before Pearline could argue again, Geneva spoke up from behind them.
“Go on.”
The yard went quiet.
Pearline blinked. “…What?”
Geneva pointed toward Mary’s car. “My auntie said go.”
Everyone watched Geneva, waiting to see what she would do next. Even Stack lifted his head.
Geneva folded her arms. “Everybody else wanna be mature about this shit, coddling this ho. But I’m ‘bout to slap this bitch if she don’t get the fuck on.”
The entire yard erupted.
Aunt Max nearly folded in half laughing.
Mary looked horrified and glanced around the yard as though searching for a single ally.
Nobody volunteered.
Not one person.
“Whatever, I’m outta here.” She exclaimed as she turned on her heels and left.
“Drive safe, ho,” Geneva called.
The laughter got louder.
Even Annie found herself smiling despite everything.
By the time Mary finally climbed into her car and drove away, the yard felt lighter than it had all afternoon.
Aunt Cheryl stared off into the yard a little while longer before looking back at Annie. “Now you. Come inside.”
Annie wanted to argue. Wanted to say she was grown, that she didn’t need to be summoned like a child, that she had already been embarrassed enough for one afternoon. But Aunt Cheryl’s tone left no room for any of that. And more than anything, Annie was tired. Tired of fighting. Tired of crying. Tired of standing in the yard while everybody looked at her like they had watched her come apart and were now trying to decide how much of her could be put back together before dinner.
The kitchen felt cooler than the yard, but not any easier to breathe in. Annie sat at Aunt Cheryl’s table with a glass of water she had not asked for and couldn’t make herself drink. Pearline sat across from her, still quiet in that dangerous way that meant the hurt hadn’t gone anywhere. Geneva leaned against the counter with her arms folded, soft-eyed but not soft enough to let Annie hide. Aunt Max stood near the stove, shaking her head every few seconds like she was replaying the whole scene and finding new foolishness each time. Aunt Cheryl remained standing at the head of the table, which somehow made Annie feel even more like she had been called into the principal’s office.
For a while nobody said anything. That was worse than yelling. Annie stared into the water and watched the surface tremble slightly every time her fingers brushed the glass. The tequila had left her with a warm, dull ache behind her eyes, but the buzz was fading fast enough to be cruel. Without it, every choice she had made in the last hour stood in front of her with perfect clarity.
Aunt Cheryl finally sighed. “Baby, I love you. I do. But you acted a damn fool out there.”
Annie closed her eyes.
“And before you start,” Aunt Max added, pointing at her, “yes, Smoke acted a fool too. We ain’t takin’ sides and he ain’t sittin’ at this table right now. You are.”
That made Geneva glance down, but she didn’t disagree.
Annie wiped at her cheek, even though there were no fresh tears there yet. “I know.”
“No,” Pearline said quietly. “I don’t think you do.”
Annie looked at her and the guilt from upstairs came back so quickly it nearly stole her breath. Pearline’s face was still tender from everything Annie had thrown at her. Not physically, but emotionally. The words had landed. Annie could see that now. She had wanted Pearline to hurt because she had been hurting, and that thought sat inside her like something rotten.
“I’m sorry,” Annie said.
Pearline looked away, pressing her lips together. “I know you are.”
“I shouldn’t have said all that to you.”
“Nah, you shouldn’t have.” Pearline’s voice remained even, which somehow made it worse. “And I shouldn’t have kept what I knew from you. Both can be true.”
Annie nodded, but Pearline was not finished.
“You hurt me, Annie. I get why you was mad. I do. But you looked at me like I brought you down here to humiliate you on purpose.” Pearline’s voice cracked slightly, and she swallowed before continuing. “I was wrong. I should’ve told you from the minute I saw him with Jada. But I wasn’t tryin’ to make you look stupid. I was tryin’ to protect some little piece of hope because I knew you still had it, and I knew he did too.”
The kitchen went quiet again.
Annie stared at her hands.
Geneva moved from the counter and sat beside her, close enough that her knee brushed Annie’s. “That’s the part you keep missin’. You keep talkin’ like you was the only one everybody could see hurtin’. But we saw him too.”
Annie’s throat tightened.
Geneva’s voice softened. “You really didn’t know, did you?”
Annie shook her head, and this time the tears came with no fight left behind them. “No.”
Aunt Max huffed, not unkindly. “Chile, that boy loved you so loud for somebody who barely opened his mouth.”
Despite herself, Pearline let out a broken little laugh. Geneva smiled sadly.
Aunt Cheryl didn’t smile at all.
“He loved you,” Aunt Cheryl said. “And from what I just saw out there, he still do. But love ain’t worth much if all y’all do is use it to hurt each other.”
That one landed deep.
Annie covered her mouth with one hand, trying to hold something in that was already breaking loose. She had spent eight years telling herself Elijah hadn’t loved her enough to come after her, only to find out he had been reaching in every way he knew how. Letters. Calls. Cards. A mixtape. All these pieces she had not seen or had not understood, scattered behind them like evidence from a life neither of them had been able to explain.
And even after learning all of that, even after hearing him say love in the present tense, she had still found a way to pick up the sharpest thing near her and swing.
Aunt Cheryl pulled out the chair across from Annie and sat down at last. That scared Annie more than when she had been standing. “You spent eight years waitin’ on that boy to come get you,” she said, her voice quieter now. “That’s what you told him out there. You waited for him to show up, say the right thing, fight for you the right way, know what you needed without you ever havin’ to say it plain.”
Annie could not look away from her.
“But what if it’s your turn now?” Aunt Cheryl asked. “What if the thing you been waitin’ on him to do is the thing you gotta do for him?”
The words moved through Annie slowly, then all at once.
Her chair scraped against the floor before she fully realized she had stood. Pearline looked up, and something like relief crossed her face. Geneva’s hand fell away from Annie’s arm as though she had known this was coming. Aunt Max stepped aside before Annie even reached the doorway.
“Go,” Pearline said.
Annie did.
She moved through the living room with her heart pounding so hard it made her chest hurt. The sounds of the cookout rushed back the moment she opened the front door, humid evening air wrapping around her as she stepped onto the porch. A few people looked over. Someone called her name. She didn’t stop. She took the steps too fast, nearly stumbled at the bottom, caught herself, and kept going across the yard, past the folding tables, past the abandoned plates, past Mike and Isoo sitting near the cooler.
She ran because walking felt impossible.
The driveway seemed longer than it had earlier. The road beyond it stretched under the fading Mississippi sun, quiet except for the distant hum of cicadas and the sound of her own breathing. Annie reached the edge of the gravel and looked both ways, searching for his truck, for taillights, for dust lifting off the road, for any sign that she had not waited too long this time.
There was nothing.
No truck.
No Elijah.
Only the empty road stretching ahead of her, wide and indifferent.
Annie stood there breathing hard, one hand pressed to her chest as the truth settled over her with a cruelty she had earned.
For eight years she had waited for Elijah to come after her. For eight years she had told herself that if he loved her enough, he would find a way to show up.
Now she had finally gone after him.
And he was already gone.
End Note: I wanted to get this out to y'all as soon as possible, because the next chapter is going to take me some time. It will be HEAVY Smoke, possibly all Smoke. So I have to get my mind right to get into his mind as he listens to Annie's mixtape. 💿🥹 But let me know what you think about this chapter.
This story really inspired me to make a playlist (mixtape), of all the songs you mentioned and a few that remind me of this story and my own young, wild and crazy times. You really did your thing @myheartsaysyes - have me wanting to reminisce.
