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that hair must be a hassle

#star butterfly #star vs the forces of evil #star vs

afosremade

Got bored. Time for screencap redraw hour! (Yes I did hand paint the background and YES it took me way too longn)

#eclipsa #eclipsa butterfly #mewni #star vs the forces of evil #disney xd

She's super cute ngl

#star vs #star vs the forces of evil #star butterfly

afosremade

shes perfect

#eclipsa butterfly #eclipsa

i made a kakegurui joke there-

#cookie run #alchemist cookie #cr #kakegurui

Decided to enter in @snowysasu ‘s Snow Sugar Contest (TM)! I honestly had so much fun drawing this uwu

#sasu400artcontest #snow sugar cookie #snow sugar #cookie run #Cookie Run OvenBreak #cr

he! wears a toga?!

#herb cookie #cookie run #cr

@ everyone okay hear me out theyre kinda cute

#sparklingcream #whipped cream cookie #sparkling cookie #cookie run #Cookie Run OvenBreak

No one told me she was wife material

#orange cookie #cookie run #cookie run ovenbreak

afoscookie

i got bored and drew an iconic lesbian

#ghostly doodles✨#cookie run #moonlight cookie #heck uh #this took me too long

the-right-writing

How to make a character's death sadder

Don’t have them die of old age after a long, fulfilling life. Many people don’t even think of this as sad (note that this can still work if you have enough of the other factors).

Leave one of their major goals unfinished. The more enthusiastic they are about completing the goal, the sadder.

Give them strong relationships with other characters.

Make them fight against whatever is causing their death. Their ultimate loss is sadder if they struggle.

Kill them in the middle of their character arc.

Don’t describe their funeral in detail. Maybe it’s just me, but I find that long descriptions of funerals kill the sadness.

artistizzyrae

That’s enough Satan’s publisher…

iceb0x

>B)

theirisianprincess

7. If possible, try to kill them off in the middle of the story, so we had time to like them and we will have time to let the loss settle in.

8. Also, place surviving characters in a situation where having the deceased person there would help them get out. You can choose whether you will point this fact out or if you want the audience to make the connection themselves.

thehellspawnhero-deactivated202

peachdoxie

9. Make them die by sacrificing themselves to save someone they love from a danger created by the antagonist.

socialjusticeprincesses

based on a few deaths that made me blub like a baby…

10. have their loved one, broken hearted, tell the team to stop fighting because “its over.”

11. have their pet come looking for them.

12. have their loved one perform a popular song at their funeral so it makes the fans cry whenever it’s played.

13. family witnessing the death and/or blaming themselves.

~ Mulan

asbehsam

so… let’s add some frustration to your dear readers’ sadness, shall we?

14. kill the character in the middle of making a joke, smiling, or expressing/experiencing joy/happiness.

15. make the character’s death slow and painful, but make them unable to call out for help even though they can literally see the other characters nearby.

16. after killing the character, have others think the character had betrayed them so they’d always hate them and remember them as traitors and never say nice things about them… Give your readers no chance to have group-therapy with other characters by making them the only ones who know the truth.

17. right before their death, show a side of them nobody has seen. (someone who is always tough and brave being genuinely scared of dying alone; someone who is always laughing being in tears before dying, etc.)

18. make them the only person who knows a big important secret that would help other characters in the story.

19. have them being lied to before dying. (thinking they’ve been betrayed; thinking they weren’t loved; thinking they’ve lost their loved ones, etc)

20. make the character very enthusiastic/passionate about a certain goal, constantly put stress on their goal, have them die unexpectedly before they can reach their goal.

and the best one…

21. have another beloved character kill them–better be a close friend to your character, one that absolutely nobody suspects, one that everyone can’t help but love, one who is always enthusiastic about things and encourages your character. THEN

reveal the truth only later when it’s too late and the a-hole character has already escaped.

have a cowardly character know the truth and never tell anyone else

have another character find out the truth and have them die before revealing it to others.

have the said character ^ not actually die, but go through something so they’d forget the friend of the deceased character is actually an asshole.

This way only your readers will know the truth, thus the frustration would be… most enjoyable for you.

Satan out.

sundownwinter3-blog

22. Don’t kill their body. Kill their mind.

Leave the physical shell walking and talking, but strip out everything that made that person who they were. Make them forget all about their loved ones, themselves, their experiences and past, their skills, and have them have to start over completely from scratch. Physical and mental disabilities bonus points.

And keep them in a place where their loved ones will be taunted every day by a living ghost.

#h heck #writing reference