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revisions on English research paper
I am also struggling on coming up with a strong thesis statement for my research paper. ericaw121 I totally agree with you that it is extremely hard to come up with a good strong thesis statement.
I agree, it was hard coming up with a strong thesis statement but once you get a good one going everything else is so much easier and falls right into the perfect spots for you in your body paragraphs.
Revision Struggle
There wasn't really much of a struggle when it came to the revision part of my final draft. It was all mostly little errors with punctuation but where I did mess up was when I did cite one of my sources about an article I did it completely wrong. I italicized it instead of putting it in quotation marks and made it look completely wrong. Otherwise that it really wasn't a problem I'm glad to be done with this final proposal.
CSW Reflection
For the time I was there (Set - up) , it looked like a big deal. The tables were all laid out, the teachers were excited, and the students were bringing in their projects. I looked around to see the other tables, that were there, and I was somewhat intrigued. I’m not too enthused about english but credit is due. Thank You Ms. Dieterich for a new experience here on campus.
I agree I liked how everyone was really excited and happy to be there. You're lucky you were there early because I felt likening really got Hott in there later on towards the end bc of all the people. But, it was a creative and fun experience and I liked it
CSW REFLECTION
I actually enjoyed myself at this convention. There were many interesting projects that were all around the whole room that I enjoyed checking out and asking questions about. I especially enjoyed one of the stations that I found about social medias and the way they were affecting teens and kids now a days. I also liked having all of our projects out for others to see as well because I really felt that a lot of is had very interesting genres and topics and I'm glad everyone got a chance to browse around and see them.
CSW
For the CSW sessions I think each one of us could bring in coffee grinds and put them in a separate jar. When people pass by to read them we could tell them each jar represents a different genre that can be told and explained to them.
Good idea buddy…..
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Ashley, I thought your story about the burning of the mill was very interesting and kind of seemed like a mysterious story. And i thought it was cool how its a prom tradition to go there and how it’s supposedly haunted and all. i just wish i knew what happened to the owners? but it was very interesting to me.
Speaking of questions..I had a question about both of your presentations because I peer reviewed both of your presentations. For Brogan, I was just curious to know really how important the zoo was to the city of Toledo and how beneficial it was..and for Ashley, like brogan I was curious to know what happened to the owners and why you never visited the place?! If I had a haunted mill in my town I woulda loved to search it and see whether it was really haunted or not.
I really like the idea of the “World Map” theme that everyone else in the class is coming up with! We all come from different places big and small and I really like the fact that we could highlight that, and make that something significant! In a way it could be like an “Around the World” type...
I really like the whole world idea map and think it is a really good idea considering the most of us are from different places. What I really liked was how we shouldn't use a whole map and just put together all the different states and cities that we are from together as one to represent our class.
CSW
For the CSW sessions I think each one of us could bring in coffee grinds and put them in a separate jar. When people pass by to read them we could tell them each jar represents a different genre that can be told and explained to them.
Genre Transformstion
I read Sarah Brethen's essay titled "Converse Chuck Taylors: A Personal Artifact". I found this article very puzzling and confusing at first but the more I read about all of her different pairs of shoes and the experiences that she had with them I began to understand the importance of the chuck Taylor's that she had owned. Each pair signified a struggle from her parents to go out and buy them for her and the year of school that she went through. I especially enjoyed how she memorably used them through her senior year and kept little memories on them as signals.
Extra Credit
When I went to the extra credit meeting the other day to listen to the young gentlemen and what he had to say I honestly could say that I did not think I was going to be interested. I was very wrong. I learned a lot about Detroit and the debt that we have gone through over the course of all these years that we have been a city. I learned that the debt that we are in now is higher than it has ever been. Back in the late 50's and early 60's we were doing the best money wise by things started piling up after those years. There was much more revenue comjng in and out of the city then than there is now. We have resources but are simply in so much debt that it makes it so much more hard to work on things around Detroit to make it better. One major thing that I learned is that Mayor kilpatrick did a lot more damage to our city than anyone realized scandal king over millions of dollars that could have helped rebuild Detroit better than ever and that is why e is in jail today.
Spring break
Honestly my spring break consisted of family time and basketball. I was able to go back and spend some quality time with my brothers. we came up with a big win against NIU on Saturday that helped us out a lot as a team. As usual caught up with some homework and enjoyed a little Netflix but the break overall helped me relax and chill out for a little.
I feel like I couldn’t have gone any further this break in terms of research collected. I’ve continued to read and search for more information about the Battle Of Franklin and such, but a lot of the info I found were things I have already previously found out. I hope I’m not running out of...
Trenton my good friend, seems like we are opposite sides when it comes to put research proposals. I am continuing to find plenty of info that is benefiting me and my mother has been helping me here and there with finding Info. As far as the break goes it seems like we've been doing the same stuff, hooping and winning ball games..gotta big on coming up Saturday let's work!
Research project
I honestly really have not have that much of a hard time finding all sorts of information on my research project because this specific topic is something has interested myself and the many citizens of Dearborn for many years to come. Incase you guys didn't know my topic is "why do the Arab-Americans,especially in Dearborn, frighten the world". There are many articles and sources that I have found online to help me answer all of these questions. I've learned a lot of new stuff as well that is helping me out.
My research question is "why do Arab-Americans frighten the world, especially the ones from Dearborn?" Right here is the exact reason. A few men from Arab descent decided to do something dumb enough that hurt so many innocent people so Almost all Arab-Americans are being judged because of this. Not everyone is like this, there are good and bad of every group of people and we have absolutely no link to them. That attack had the same effect on us that it did any other American citizen and I just wanted to clarify that all terrorists are bad no matter what the race.
I chose Small Town USA by Justin Moore for my Hometown Song. Although I say I hate my hometown, Homer is where I call home because it’s where I was born and raised. Everyone knows everyone too! Nothing really happens around Homer so it is a “simple life” and there are tons of dirt roads around my...
I'm not a big fan of country music but I enjoyed listening to this song because it reminded me of my hometown as well 👍 Dearborn's a pretty big city but at the same time it feels small because everyone knows Eachother as well and I wouldn't trade growing up there for anything in the world.
It was All a Dream 🎶🎤
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=gNPIOi2LiQk This song is called Juicy by the Notorious Biggie Smalls a very well known and famous rapper from New York. This song reminds me of Dearborn simply because the first line describes the whole way of life that we live by.."it was all a dream". Growing up in a small city you can only hope and dream to make it out one day and achieve your dreams when people doubted that you could. You grow up hustling and working hard to get where you want to be and that's all what this song was about. I still remember growing up no matter where you went you would hear this song and I memorized it down to the lyrics from how many times I've heard it. It's perfect for the people who struggled and finally made it out on top from our city.
We work hard everyday as a team for one reason and one reason only..that is to win the MAC championship ✊ growing up I always wanted to play college ball and the thought of getting a ring is just amazing enough to make me work even harder to help get my team to the top
