How to Write an Engaging First Chapter
I probably get this question every day, so I think itâs about time I did a post on it. Many writers are concerned with writing their first chapters and they have trouble figuring out what they should include and what they should leave out until later.
When youâre submitting a manuscript in order to get an agent or find a publisher, itâs important that you hook them from the opening paragraph. A lot of agents have admitted that sometimes they ONLY read the first few sentences and if theyâre not intrigued, they wonât read the rest of it. That might sound cruel, but why should they continue to read something that they think is boring when there are so many other stories in their âslush pileâ to read? You need to engage the reader right from the beginning if you want them to care about your novel.
I learned this the hard way. The first few stories I wrote lacked an engaging opening. I think the best way to learn is to revisit some of your favorite books. Most of the time, they had something that caught your attention right away. There was something to it that made you keep reading. You need to make sure you have âthat thingâ in your own novel.
Here are the dos and donâts of writing an engaging opening hook:
Construct a scene that best represents your character
Iâm not going to tell you thereâs a wrong and right way to open your novel, because it really all depends on your novel. You need to know your character before you can begin writing your story, so only you will know how you should start it off. The best advice I can give is to construct a scene that helps us best understand your character. If theyâre on the run, show us that theyâre being chased. If theyâre sad and lonely, construct a scene that lets us feel their isolation. You donât necessarily need to open your book with action, but you do need to introduce the conflict. Think about what your character wants and go from there.
The first chapter is a good time to explore the setting of your novel. Youâre not going to use this chapter to completely describe your world, but you need to give your readers a taste of it. Use all your senses to present the setting to us. What does your character feel? Are they afraid? Are they happy? Are they cautious? Putting emotion into your scenes from the beginning will not only help set the tone, but weâll get an immediate understanding of your world.
Introduce only important information
The first chapter is not the time to give us a long, drawn-out explanation of your world and characters. You need to find the simplest and most exciting way to get information across to your readers, so that theyâll be hooked from the beginning. Get your audience to care about your story. Donât drag it down with details that donât matter yet. Think of your first chapter as an introduction to an essay. You donât go right into the points immediately, but you set us up for something good.
Describe your main character in detail
We donât need to know everything about your main character in the first chapter. We donât need to know everything about what they look like, their best friends, how they would describe themselves in the mirror, etc. If you want to do these things, theyâre best left for later chapters. Your readers do not need to know everything from the beginning to get into your story. Give them a taste and draw them in.
When writing a scene, itâs easy to get caught up in everything that you want to talk about all at once. You have to remember that youâll have time to explain things later and it will probably be much more interesting if your readers have to wait. You donât need to mention everything thatâs happening and why itâs important. Present the information in the most engaging way possible and avoid these long explanations. We donât need you main character to make a page long speech in the first chapter of your novel.
Fill your readers with unnecessary back story
Again, too much back story in your first chapter will kill your momentum. Anything thatâs unnecessary to know from the beginning can be put off until later. I know itâs exciting to get into the meat of your novel, but your readers have to care about your world and characters before you keep talking about it. Donât be afraid to cut something or push something back to later chapters. Youâll also improve the pacing of your novel if you keep these things in mind.
Itâs super important to remember that all of these things wonât apply to every novel. There are times when the opening of your novel will break all these rules and there will be exceptions to every single one of them. However, if you keep getting feedback that people âcanât get into your novelâ; it might be because your first chapter is weak. Also, if youâre having trouble with your first chapter and canât seem to get it right, leave it for later. You can always go back and change something if you donât love it.
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