"Bill Bernhardt has an article called, 'A Short Course in Writing' which, far more than anything I have ever seen, offers really helpful advice and suggestions to the many people, some very good students, some very bad, who find it an agony to get their thoughts down on paper. People had been asking him for a long time where they could go to take a course in "just writing." Only after many years did he see what they really needed and wanted, and that none of the usual writing courses or textbooks could offer it to them. Out of his thinking about his own writing, and some seminars he took with Dr. Caleb Gattegno, he worked out a short course of exercises to help people, however unskilled, to write more easily and effectively. His short course comes in five short pages. He asks his students to read and do Page 1 first; after that, they can take the others in any order they want. He says, in part:
Page 1
—Which comes first when you speak, knowing that you have something you want to say, or the words? Test yourself to find out.
—Make a short statement out loud.
—Write down the same words you said.
Are you sure that you wrote the same words? How can you tell? Can you make a much longer statement and write down the words accurately? (It doesn't matter if you misspell).
—Think of something else you could say but, instead of speaking, write it down without speaking.
—Can you think of something to say and write the words down as they come into your mind without taking the time to say them to yourself first?
With respect to that last question, sometimes I can, sometimes I can't. Very often I have to say something over and over again a great many times before I find a way of saying it that I like enough to want to write it down. At other times the idea, and the words to say it, appear appear together. Sometimes they please me so much I have to get them down on paper right away. Bernhardt continues:
Page 2
—Take a pencil and piece of blank paper and write continuously for three minutes without removing your pencil from the paper [...]
Pay no attention to whether what you write makes sense or is spelled correctly. If you can't think of anything to say, just write down all the words you can think of. When you finish, turn the paper over without reading what you wrote.
—Write for three more minutes on the reverse side of the paper, following the same directions.
—Write for three more minutes on a second sheet of paper.
Count how many words you wrote each time. Did your output increase the second and/or the third time? Have you written more than you usually write in the same amount of time?
Read what you wrote aloud and listen to yourself. Does it make sense? Does it sound like the English you speak? [italics mine]
Page 3
—Complete the following sentence by adding one word at the end: [italics mine]
As they turned the corner they saw
Copy the completed sentence onto the top of a blank sheet paper and continue by writing a second sentence which begins with the following word:
Maybe
Add a third sentence to the story.
Add five more sentences to the story.
End the story.
How much of the story was given to you and how much did you have to provide? [...] Could you see in your mind what was happening in the story? If so, was it like a picture or a movie? Did you see all of it at the beginning or did more come into your mind as you continued? Can you see it all again when you read the story over?
—Close your eyes and picture in your mind a difficult or embarrassing situation which you would not like to find yourself in.
Describe in writing what the situation is.
Write what you would say to get yourself out of that situation.
Again, as a way of putting the fearful writer in touch with his own real powers of imagination and expression and making them available to him, these instructions are a work of genius. I am lost in admiration of them. All the would-be writer is asked to do at first if add one word to a sentence. Anyone can do that. But as soon as he does it, he is, benignly speaking, hooked. His creative powers are already at work. In his mind's eye he must see that corner, and the characters he created, who have just turned it. With this beginning he can easily fill in after the "maybe." By then the story is on its way. It has a life of its own, and has taken possession of the writer, which is what stories do, and what it feels like to be a writer. The next instruction is just as clever. Most people have waking nightmares, dreaded scenes they play over and over again in their mind, and know well enough so that they can easily write about them. (We might also suggest that the writers imagine a very pleasant situation that they would like very much to find themselves in.)
Page 4 continues to explore and develop the writer's power to imagine and describe. On Page 5 Bernhardt gives writers more sensible and usable, and, as the Appendix shows, more effective ways to judge and improve their writing:
Page 5
—Write rapidly for 10 minutes without stopping or pausing to make corrections. When you have finished writing, put the paper aside, without reading what you wrote, for at least 20 minutes.
—Read what you wrote aloud, making sure you do two things:
(1) Read exactly what is written on the paper.
(2) Listen to yourself reading and catch the points when what you hear fails to make sense or sounds "funny."
If you find anything which doesn't make sense, change the words so that it does make sense.
If you find anything which sounds funny, change it so that it sounds right.
When you finish, read the corrected copy over again to see if you need to make further changes.
—Is it easier to make corrections and improvements at the same moment you are writing down what you want to say or at a later time?
—Do writing and making corrections require the same state of mind? Different states of mind?
The simple ideas and exercises in these few short pages would do more to help most people to write better, and to enjoy writing more, than all the things I ever did in my own work as an English teacher, and probably, than all the work of all English teachers put together. As a way to show the pupil his own powers, and ways to use and develop them, and above all, to free him more and more from his need for outside correction and judgment, it is a superb example of the teaching art.”
—John Holt, Instead of Education