this fic would be so much shorter if i just focused on the sexy lesbians wanting to fuck but. i keep being like.
but wait! did you expand on how her need to perfect stems from her people pleasing mommy issues?
and wait! you need 5 paragraphs about how of she makes it she’ll be leaving everything she’s ever worked for and how will she grapple with disappointing her father?
and why does the disappointment make her feel so subhuman? u need to include how her entire identity has been tied to success and praise
godd i just wanna write them being freaks but ugh
(but anyways im at the end of ch1 but i def need to go back and add some scenes to dive deeper into their motivations. and then editing.)
who knew gay cheerleaders were so exhausting.














