help on developing a character?
Guys I need a little bit of help. There is a character I came up recently for a story I was writing. So I was thinking, if y’all could help me by telling me if you like her or if I need to change something about her. And probably how to show her character development.
Traits:
Rude yet kind.
sweet yet sarcastic
can’t bare stupidity
dislikes people with narcissist mindset
likes helping people
observant
good listener
short-tempered (sudden outburst, even if it is unintentional)
loud voice (unintentionally)
varying self-concept (like low to high and vice versa)
average at studying
focus level: low
mediocre at most things
ambivert
insecure
Physical features:
leaf-shaped oak brown eyes
black hair
thin lips
long neck
long nose ( kind of b/w long and medium)
pear-shaped body (fat thighs)
pixie cut (maybe not that, but I don’t know what its called)
average height :
Big hands
long fat fingers
long legs
heavy voice
your view on her would be really appreciated!
thank you!!
(please share….I would really like to hear people’s view point on her.)


















