Rambling about the 'Operation Flopsy' script!
OSCAR: Bank accounts? Get more obvious!
This line is swapped with Rose in the episode! They also don't have Oscar's "If this lot had one good idea between them, we'd actually stand a chance against the Grand Master." that's in the episode.
He puts the top back on his pen.
They don't actually show this bit in the episode, but I think it's very telling that even though Shaw is supposedly willing to hear Carrie out, he definitely isn't going to have her idea in mind.
AVRIL: You just don't care about saving the planet at all, do you?
For a moment, she almost gets underneath OSCAR's skin.
OSCAR: You haven't got a clue what I do.
AVRIL: Come on then... what do you do that's so great?
OSCAR suddenly realises he can't say anything.
Okay, so this does happen in the episode, but the fact that he genuinely was going to let something slip. Again, unstoppable force meets immovable object! She actually pushes all his buttons, and I'm here for it. 😭
He looks at a calendar wall chart - it shows today as the 12th.
I do love that the script shows that the date of choice was actually intentional! It doesn't specifically say which month it is, but considering that the 12th on a Thursday in 2009 aligns with either February, March or November... Well, it was already February in 'Dark Star', and November wouldn't be a viable option either since they would have finished the year. Sorry, Oscar. It seems that March not being your month was already in the cards from the start, even if it is your birth month. 😬
ROSE: I took a copy of Flopsy's DNA when we had him confined during the US President's mission.
Okay, so I know Rose can't just say, "when Daisy, Blane and I," but the fact that she still says "we" and not "I", as if they're still there. Like they're always spiritually there with her... Ooh, I'll sob right now. (This is also in the episode as well, but seeing it written in the script hits different.)
She actually does the same thing in 'The New Grand Master' as well, when she says, "You released Ferrago, after all we went through to put him in jail?" As you can probably tell, I'm super normal about this fact.
ROSE: What was that all about?
FRANK: I'll have a talk with him. In the meantime, let's look at your plan. I think it might be even better with a gadget.
FRANK produces a thumb cap and pulls it on.
FRANK: The 'Magno-thumb'. Picks any standard lock. Yes, and I know you guys can do that with a paper clip, but just cut me some slack.
He goes to his own filing cabinet. Places his thumb against it, and the drawer slides open.
CARRIE: We'll take three.
I'M CRYINGGGGG. I know the writers were done thinking up new gadget ideas, because this part (and anything related to the Magno-thumb) is completely cut from the actual episode. "Yes, and I know you guys can do that with a paper clip, but just cut me some slack," is so meta, and it's hilarious.
ROSE (to CARRIE): Looks like we're running two teams on this mission.
This line is cut from the episode, but wow. You can already tell that she is mad that Oscar's not focusing on Carrie's operation. Something something Oscar disconnecting from the team that Rose has practically built her work on, which I will probably add to my post on Rose's view of teams in the programme at some point.
As he does, he absentmindedly takes the locket out of his pocket and fingers it.
It's so interesting to me that the scripted version of this scene reads as if Oscar playing with the locket was unintentional. However, he looks directly at the locket in the episode like he's really thinking about his mother. I think he does a similar thing with Edward's ring in 'Black Hole', but I thought it was an interesting detail.
The SKUL AGENT is more skilled but OSCAR is determined.
Ooh, he really wanted his mother back... I'm so sorry, Oscar. 😬
OSCAR is gripping the locket so hard, his hand is white.
Kind of wish they showed this in the episode. I mean, he is holding the locket in his hand, but he's not holding it that tightly. I think a close-up of him squeezing the locket when he sees Jade could've done nicely.
OSCAR: Mum!
He's about to go tearing towards her, but ROSE pulls him back.
ROSE: Wait, we have to do this like we planned.
OSCAR nods, struggling to keep his emotions in check.
They cut this from the episode! You can already tell how eager he is to get his mother back anyway, but I think it's so striking that he still wanted to run to her even though there was a plan set in place. It really is like all logic goes out the window for Oscar when his family is involved.
But AGENT DIXON HALLIDAY is already level with FLOPSY’S cage. She grabs it and looks for a fleeting moment back at the watching OSCAR.
I can't recall if she knew for a fact that it was Oscar there, but the way that she still looks back at him—almost as if she would recognise her son anywhere. Ooh, I wish they kept that in the episode. Jade really was still thinking about him. It was always about him. 😔
And that's all my thoughts about this script! It will be a long while until I get to read the next one.