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[darkhero67]

I'm thinking about writing my first fic in awhile and i'm looking for suggestions and feed back on my concept.

the story is a meta story taking place in the human domestication guide universe

The basic premise is that the entire fic is a book written by a concerned affini on things that terrans do and say that concern her.

I plan for the story to operate on a slight black comedy angle.

Working title: I am concerned about the terrans

names for chapters

chapter 1: "at least i'm not dead", and other concerning terran phrases.

chapter 2: dark souls and pain games. they are literally torturing themselves for fun.

chapter 3: A energy drink and a protean bar is not a meal. the concerning dietary habits of several terrans.

looking for any and all feedback as well as suggestions for chapter names and concepts.

[arroscnleche]

couldn't dark choco technically be their ship name

[commiechair]

a fluffy sketch dump for chapter 4 cause I'm still in shock and coping hard. (Some angst slipped in there oops)

[liuphrog]

i think she is balding

[0490pho6]

currently i have 2k coins in crk and i dont know how to get more help

hey guys edit here i forgot her wings on her crown lol💔

[darkhero67]

apparently this is something that needs to be said

when you ask someone if their angry and they say no, it means that their not angry and leave it alone. It does not mean keep pushing it until they are pissed off, and no them being angry now does not mean you were right about them being angry before it just means that you are an annoying dumb ass  

[ffreacher]

Ladies, would you agree?

[darkhero67]

actually it's was made in world war 2 as a medical device for battlefield medics

[whensmahvelgoddamit-deactivated]

Brianna Wu thinks mods are part of original games.

Brianna Wu confirmed as a console peasant

(me, I install a mod on GTAIV that lets me play as Elsa from Frozen. In Brianna’s logic, Rockstar is Disney

[darkhero67]

you know what's really great about this gtav is not on pc yet their are no mods for gtav. she is pretty much talking out of her ass.