I'm thinking about writing my first fic in awhile and i'm looking for suggestions and feed back on my concept.
the story is a meta story taking place in the human domestication guide universe
The basic premise is that the entire fic is a book written by a concerned affini on things that terrans do and say that concern her.
I plan for the story to operate on a slight black comedy angle.
Working title: I am concerned about the terrans
names for chapters
chapter 1: "at least i'm not dead", and other concerning terran phrases.
chapter 2: dark souls and pain games. they are literally torturing themselves for fun.
chapter 3: A energy drink and a protean bar is not a meal. the concerning dietary habits of several terrans.
looking for any and all feedback as well as suggestions for chapter names and concepts.















