Name: Cloria Aemeon
Nicknames:
- Violet Blood Bitch (by Syntea)
- Complete Asshole (also by Syntea)
- Good Fish Friend (by Demiti)
Species: Seadweller Troll
Gender: Female
Age: 6.46 sweeps (14 human years old)
Derse or Prospit?: Derse
Appearance:
-Â TalkspriteÂ
-Â Hero Mode
-Â Trickster
-Â Dead
-Â Game Over
-Â God Tier
-Â Sprite
Fetch Modus: The Nowhere Modus (Cloria has to reach into a “gap” in a box of which every item has no look or scent, only feel, whatever she picks out she can use until captchalogued again)
Strife Specibus: Umbrellakind (her main strife specibus) & Fistkind (if she loses her main weapon)
Weapon: A lavender parasol with a fancy design and a silver tipÂ
Game Entry Item: A purple ribbon
Sprite: Jellysprite (A sprite prototyped with a jellyfish and a glowstick)
Exile: Pre-exileÂ
Server Player: Demiti AyagadÂ
Client Player: Syntea Nagati
Title: Witch of VoidÂ
Witches are enthusiastic, confident and optimistic rebels. They break and change the physical and metaphysical “Rules” of their Aspect. Their challenge is to use their rule breaking powers in a morally conscious way
A Witch of Void would rebel against the notion that things are inherently meaningless or unimportant. They would break the rules of obscurity and indifference, finding the most hard to find things and moving away the Void that hid them, bringing them into awareness. They might also cover up and hide things that are important to them, not letting their discoveries truly see the Light and be shared with others. They might be kind of like hipsters in that regard, having a lot of obscure or hard to find interests and things, but not wanting them to become popular or well known.
They might even talk down or wave away people not already aware of their obscure interests, manipulating others with indifference and ignorance. They might be able to literally manipulate what people ignore or don’t ignore. They might manipulate people by merely acting indifferent or disregarding them, giving them the cold shoulder or the silent treatment. They might be more secretive people, manipulating others by pretending to be ignorant or unaware of things, or pretending to be indifferent towards something they actually like. They might not be very honest about or with their own emotions because of this.
They might also manipulate people with secrets, either ones they keep or ones they reveal. They could be good or bad secret keepers depending on their purposes. They can break the rules of what’s supposed to be hidden or irrelevant and clear away the shadow and mystery that surrounds things that would otherwise never see the Light. If they wanted to, they could easily delve into someone’s deepest darkest secrets to manipulate them. They might also simply just be quiet, silent and shy, not sharing any other their cool interests with others because reasons and also because they have trouble opening up to others.Â
Active or Passive?: Active
Medium: Land of Stairs and Ice (LOSAI) (Stairs represent her need to keep going higher and higher and Ice represents her cold nature.)
Denizen:Â Nike (The Goddess of Victory)
Blood color: Amethyst Violet (A bit darker than Eridan’s blood but not too similar at the same time.)
Symbol: Her symbol represents a gap, and the straight line is to represent to two boundaries
Lusus: “Jelly Mom” A jellyfish armed with poisonous stingers that can paralyse a troll, but is kept in a tank and is mostly harmless
Ancestor: “The Sempster” -  a seamstress
Hive: A cavern deep below the ocean surface, it has nearly everything barely visible on the outside due to it’s cavernous details similar to one of a rock, the only thing to recognize is the small door on the very top as glowing lanterns float around
Trolltag:Â cacaesthesiaArmageddon (CA)
Quirk: All sentences are within a “gap” and all o’s are capitalized
Ex:Â -( Are you sure abOut that? )-
Matesprit: None
Kismesis: Syntea Nagati (Like so, another OC)Â
Moirail: Demiti Ayagad (Another OC of mine)Â
Auspistice: None
General Appearance: (All characters must fill out from here down!)
Do they need to wear glasses or contacts?: No but she wears contacts anyway
If yes, are they nearsighted or farsighted?: No
They should wear their glasses, but do they always?: No
Weight: A/N
Height: A/N
Notable features: Her chipped horns, sensitive fins
Hair: Â Long/Straight, one long ponytail
Disabilities/Health Concerns: None
Favorites and Least Favorites:
Color: Violet, blue, green, anyfin representing the sea
Music: Vaporwave
Movie: None
Book:Â None
Food: Grubs, Lowblood troll meat, ESPECIALLY gold, green and sometimes… blue bloods :>
Clothing: Silky white shirt and skirt, CAN be mistaken as a dress
Prized possession(s): Her parasol
Personality:
Biggest goal: To know all the secrets of Alternian History, ALL of themÂ
Greatest fear: Death by Impalation (which ironically is how she dies)
Darkest secret: She wears contacts
Does anyone know?: No
If yes, how did they find out?: Let’s say, Demiti bumped her arm in Cloria’s face causing one of the contacts to fall off (THIS IS STUPID.)
Greatest strength: She is good at stealth (Because at ONE times she was babysitting 5 grubs, there were only 3 left to survive.)
Greatest weakness: Can be killed easily if caught off guard
Greatest accomplishment: Discovering multiple constellations (yet nobody cared)Â
Biggest regret: Becoming a cannibalÂ
Are they more aggressive, assertive, or passive?: Aggressive
Are they emotional or stoic?: Emotional
Which do they trust more, their head or their heart?: Their heart
Extra:
-Â Linura Aemeon (Dancestor)
-Â The Sempster
-Â -( Cannibal bitch. )-
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Okay, I’ve found quite a few concerning things, hopefully we can straighten those out.
Firstly, her outfit. Trolls wear black and grey, an all white outfit like that as an every day thing would probably get her culled. (Yes, Vriska had a white dress for her fairy costume, but that was only an outfit she wore occasionally.) Honestly, her dancestor looks more like an alternian troll than she does, to me at least. Maybe think of switching their outfits?
I really like her Fetch modus, very creative idea! It really fits with her god tier, which I also enjoy. Her strife specibi also checks out fine. The info about her land is also pretty solid, good job on that!
Her trolltag, quirk, lusus, ancestor, and hive are all fine, I don’t see anything that should be changed.
Now for appearance (aside from clothes); Why exactly does she wear contacts, if she doesnt need them? That makes no sense to me, and isn’t really something that Alternia would support since its an extra waste of time to put in something unnecessary. That’s my biggest concern there. The only other thing is that if she’s a seadweller, it wouldn’t hurt to add fins to her hero mode drawings and such since with a ponytail, they’d be exposed.
For personality, there are some really good things, and others that could be tweaked. The goal to know all of alternian history is pretty unobtainable, but I can think of plenty of goals like that I’ve had, especially at the age of 14. I kind of like that about her. Also having her fear by death by impaling, while oddly specific, that is also fine! I want to know why her biggest secret is someone finding out she wears contacts, despite not needing them anyways. If she was self conscious about them in some way, couldn’t she just not wear them? The only other really big question is about her apparently being a cannibal. How did she become one? Why does she suddenly regret it? It doesn’t make much sense to me. If you’re going to keep that detail, I suggest adding a bit of info on it so it doesnt just seem like some “edgy” trait to give her on a whim.
(Side note - I like the designs of the ancestor and dancestor, they look really good!)
TL;DR : Fix the clothing colors, re-evaluate the contact wearing and cannibalism, and maybe give her a “dark secret” with more meaning.
