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Some shots of my story planning notebook....
I ended up mixing two different languages while writing lol
i love a creepy/intimate whumper who isn't that like because they genuinely have affection for whumpee, but because they know how disturbing it is to whumpee. twisting intimacy or affection into another weapon in their arsenal <3
Right now I'm thinking about Caretaker sitting bedside vigil to a Whumpee who's in such excruciating pain, the ragged breath, soaked in sweat, eyes clenched, can barely move or think type of pain. They have no painkillers, so Caretaker offers their hand, their wrist, their upper arm and tells Whumpee "squeeze". Whumpee takes the offer, and Caretaker can feel the slight tremble as Whumpee holds onto them for dear life, desperate to focus on anything else besides the agony. Caretaker wincing as Whumpee squeezes harder and harder, but refusing to pull away or complain. Whumpee feeling guilty the next day when the worst of it is over and they can see the the dark finger-shaped bruises they pressed into Caretaker. Caretaker reassuring them, Caretaker offered after all, and they're just glad Whumpee is doing better. Do you see my vision
Whumpee who holds out during torture. They're sassy, fight back, refuse to break.
They finally get saved. They smile at their rescuers through bloody teeth, joking with 'what took you so long huh?', but it's weak, their voice already trembling.
When their bonds are being cut loose, they start to show more cracks. "I- I'm sorry". They feel bad for even needing to be rescued.
Caretaker reassures them it's not their fault, and they'll always rescue them.
Whumpee has been holding out, but they were scared and in pain, and when the bonds are finally gone and Caretaker is here, they break. They're pulled up and they start crying, wiping at their face with shaky 'I'm sorry''s.
Caretaker just pulls them into a hug and lets Whumpee break.
no but I love it when a recovering character has to be restrained as a cover-up. when caretaker or leader needs the facade of bringing them in, so they clasp the handcuffs closed, carefully avoiding the long since scarred wounds on their wrists. that lingering pity when whumpee takes a shaky breath and lets it happen. ropes loose enough to break if they panic, thick chains that drag for the show of it. and a whumpee, who wants to be brave, to be strong, just... can't. who forgets where they are; shuts down; expression sinking to despaired nothingness as the locks click into place.
daily reminder to make your stoic whumpee hide their injury/sickness until they physically canât :)
oh and make sure to include some fever-induced vulnerability that they would normally never show because of whumper for unknown reasonsâŚ
Whump prompts I canât get enough of:
1. The shifty and embarrassed look in a stoic leaderâs eyes as they finally are forced to reveal an injury to their friends, reluctantly allowing themselves to be treated for the first time. The awkwardness as they strip, and/or lay down to be examined. The subtle fighting to maintain some choice or control ( would rather sit up, âI can do that myself thanksâ) and so on.
2. The limp warmth of a Whumpeeâs sleeping body as they are treated in the middle of the night. The change in their breathing as the covers are gently pulled back. The clumsiness of their movements as they flit in and out of sleep, sudden gasps or flinching as their wounds are tended. The caretakerâs whispers of comfort, hushing them back to sleep.
3. Whumpee lashing out in sudden rage at some petty action of another, before collapsing and breaking down in sobs. Everyone standing around awkwardly in shock, before caretaker goes in to grab whumpee in a crushing embrace, trying to calm their shaking.
4. Stoic whumpee being humiliated by Whumper. Orders like: âstripâ, âface the wallâ, âkneelâ, âdown on your hands and kneesâ, etc etc.
5. Slightly delusional whumpee being tied/held down for some potentially lifesaving procedure and quietly begging caretaker to stop, please please stop. Then more loudly, desperately, until they are crying out and fighting in a panic. Caretaker meanwhile is (1)staring at them in stoic silence while their heart is wrung with pity, or (2) they are quietly reassuring them, telling them itâs going to be alright.
Feel free to use as you like.
Fantasy drugs đ
-A stimulant that enhances every sensation. Every touch, no matter how gentle, feel like sandpaper on your skin. What would be mild pain becomes agony, pleasure becomes overwhelming to the point of pain
-Ever heard of locked in syndrome? Make it a drug. The body is paralyzed, unable to move. But every sensation remains, and the mind? The mind is fully aware. Whumpee hears, sees and feels everything. They're all too aware, and they will remember. Unwanted touches, excruciating pain, they're aware of it all, completely, totally helpless. They can't even scream.
-a drug that temporarily mutes all your senses. You're still very much aware, you're fully conscious, and it differs from locked-in drug in that you're not paralysed. You're just deafened, blinded, you can't smell or taste or feel anything. You won't even feel the pain until it wears off. It probably wears of gradually too - maybe you smell the blood before anything else. Maybe you see the horrific wounds before you feel them. Or hear cruel taunts as they tell you what they've done to you before you can see or feel it for yourself.
-Enthralling drug. With a mix of whumpers DNA, they render you an empty shell, existing only to serve them. You take orders only from Whumper, who has to order you to sleep, eat, do ANYTHING. You feel nothing. You're aware of nothing. You're barely even alive. It'll wear off... eventually. Better hope Whumper doesn't find a way to make it permanent.
Feel free to add on with more ideas
A whumpee who wonât stop fighting until they physically canât anymore. A whumpee who will kick, bite, claw, pinch- anything they can manage in their current state or position. A whumpee who finally loses their will to fight when the hopelessness sets in, and they give up- only to immediately be filled with revulsion and self loathing. A whumpee who doesnât listen when theyâre told that they did everything they could. When theyâre told anyone would have done what they did. When theyâre told itâs okay.
Because itâs not. They said they would never give up. But they did. And now theyâre sure they deserve what ever comes after.
Because you canât lose as long as you keep fighting.
âŚAnd whumpee lost.
whumpee surrendering themselves to something they don't want to do, something they know will hurt them, because there is no other alternative. perhaps it's their only way out of a sticky situation. perhaps the threat of whumper punishing them is more than enough to make them comply. either way, they have to fight against their own instincts, their own desires, their own dignity, in order to give themselves up to the torment. it's like a swine walking into a slaughterhouse; a death march.
bonus if whumpee is usually very defiant and self-assured, even if the face of danger. what possibly could've broken their spirit bad enough to make them behave like this?
"Don't touch me." + Caretaker?
"I'm not. I'm not touching you. I'm not even close."
"I have to."
"It's just me, sweetheart, you're safe with me."
"I won't, I just need to see that wound. No touching, I promise."
"You'll bleed out if I don't."
I really like the trope where the whumpee is emotionally exhausted from something and then slowly and silently⌠rests their forehead against the caretakerâs chest. Maybe theyâll cry, maybe theyâll stay quiet, maybe theyâll hug it out. But the moment where whumpee shows that small amount of vulnerability and trust towards caretaker is beautiful to me.
whump tropes in everything i write pt. 2:
⢠that pause and dizzy sway A does after a fight/ordeal/magic overuse. B grabs a fistful of Aâs shirt to steady them
⢠running a character into the ground: every time they get a second to rest, another fight happens/theyâre on the run again/theyâre attacked. bonus points if theyâre in the same outfit the whole time and it progressively gets bloodier, more stained and rippedâmakes that final collapse sooo good
⢠A is on the verge of completely losing it, shaking hands/frantic pacing, whether thatâs bc anxiety/the horrorsâ˘ď¸/the plot etc. B is the only person who can ground them. Love a good forced hug that A resists but Bâs stronger and it turns into B guiding A to the floor as A melts into them
⢠A hiding an illness/injury right up until they literally tip over and give B the fright of their life
⢠a character coughing up blood and still pushing thru
⢠obligatory homoerotic wound cleaning: A and B both covered in Aâs blood. lots of shushing. frantic soothing. very handsy. bonus points if B is inexperienced and freaking the f out while A is delirious & breathlessly trying to comfort them
Caretaker held Aâs hand back at they were about to shake whumpee awake.
âLet them rest,â Caretaker whispered, not even looking up at A. They just continued to softly gaze at whumpeeâs sleeping form, swaddled up in blankets.
A furrowed their eyebrows and shook their head, âbut we need whumpee right nowââ
âAnd whumpee needs rest right now. You can wake whumpee up later. But for now? Let them sleep,â Caretaker cut A off, their voice slightly firmer. They then looked up at A with an unreadable expression on their face, âIâm sure you guys can handle a day or two without whumpee.â
A didnât respond to Caretaker, they just stared down at them with an annoyed expression before letting out a scoff and walking out of the room. Caretaker sighed and looked back down at whumpeeâs sleeping form, carefully brushed some hair out of their face.
âSome days I really do wonder how you manage all thisâŚâ Caretaker murmured, their expression growing concerned.
One day or another, caretaker is most certainly going to have aâŚtalk with the others about how reliant they are on Whumpee.
Military whump prompts
(because Reddit is down and Iâm chronically online)
Hearing the whumpeeâs screams over the radio as theyâre captured, the rest of the team frozen in horror.
⢠Patch job in the middle of the battlefield, someone pressing down on a wound with their bare hands, whispering, âStay with me, okay? Just stay.â
⢠Post-mission debrief, but the whumpee is barely holding it together, swaying on their feet as the adrenaline wears off.
⢠The whumpee refusing pain meds because they need to âstay sharp,â only to pass out mid-conversation.
⢠âI donât leave people behind,â they growl, limping and bleeding but refusing to abandon the unconscious teammate over their shoulder.
⢠Waking up in a field hospital, disoriented and panicked, pulling out the IV before being restrained by a firm but gentle voice.
⢠âWeâre not going to make it.â âYes, we are.â Cue one of them doing something reckless to ensure the other gets out alive.
⢠Cold, soaked to the bone, huddled in a ruined building during a downpour, one of them feverish while the other desperately tries to keep them awake.
⢠Hiding an injury to avoid being benched, only for it to get worse at the worst possible moment.
⢠âYou donât understandâI canât go back. I canât be discharged.â
⢠A high-ranking officer demanding a mission debrief while the whumpee is barely conscious, words slurring, bleeding through their uniform.
⢠A medic struggling to save the whumpee in the back of a jolting vehicle, yelling for the driver to go faster.
⢠Post-rescue, sitting by the whumpeeâs bedside, counting every beep of the heart monitor like a prayer.
Stoic whumpee things I want to do more of:
Content: mention of rape, torture, noncon touch
Eye contact with whumper just following them across the room
Whumper going to touch them and they just lean out of the way as far as they can
Whumper touches them anyway. "Ew." Whumpee growls.
A solid sense of boundaries that slowly wears away, until finally, they just close their eyes, waiting for it to be over
Or, glaring at the wall when whumper touches them
Not having the same "scream" response to pain. Instead maybe they have something more animalistic, like whines or broken moans, or even gagging sounds
Bonus--whumper makes fun of them for this, cause they were hoping for some better screams out of them
A lack of fear turning very quickly into depression. (whumpee accepts their situation? They're going to quickly see how hopeless it is, too.)
Calm bargaining. "I'll kiss your feet." "No." "...I'll suck your dick." "Haha, nice try." *Exasperated sigh* "really? You said I was really good."
Never giving the information they're being tortured for, but compromising literally anything else because they are desperate, they're just also stubborn as hell
Whumper getting curious because of their silence and trying to get them to talk about themselves or their feelings. Locking them in a room and saying they won't leave until they talk.
"we'll play a game. You tell me one thing about yourself, and I'll give you one pretzel for each thing." *Starving whumpee rubs their face and sighs* "Fine. ...My middle name starts with N."
Discordant reactions--Whumpee just miserably laughing at how crazy evil whumper is. Breaking by going defiant. or by just being annoying (picking at whumper's sleeve, singing etc)
Maybe they just feel more depressed than anxious/desperate. Whumper trying to draw out their other feelings gets a chuckle. "That's very nice. I don't care."
Stoic works really well with certain traits--honest, loyal, morose, uncertain, thoughtful, autistic
Whumpee who is recovering after the whumpTM, but it's not going great. They're so frustrated with themselves, with their caretakers, just with everything. Everyone is so soft and understanding and it bothers them and they want to scream, but they know they should be grateful.
Until Caretaker comes along. Caretaker isn't 'nice' like the others, they don't take bullshit. They're good for Whumpee, but they don't baby them. They treat them like an adult with anatomy, and it's so refreshing for Whumpee.
"You want to stay up, fine. But you will tell me when you can't anymore, because if I have to drag you off the floor we're both in trouble. Understand?"
"Stop whining. What do you need?" (And then they get or do whatever it is without issues or judgement.)
"Want to tell me why you're doing worse today?" -- "No..." -- "Okay."
"Where does it hurt?" -- "It doesn-" -- "Don't give me that, I can see it hurts. Now tell me where."
Caretaker trusts Whumpee to know what they need, and lets them know again and again they won't take this nonsense of hiding their pain. They're practical, and kind, and Whumpee needed that.