Revised Story Beats & Treatment:
1. We see three tough looking characters walking through a city.
2. They come to a crosswalk with other people.
3. They help an old lady across the street.
4. We see the three in an alleyway spray painting the walls with cute things.
5. We then see them loitering next to a car.
6. A man walks toward the car and beeps it open from his keys.
7. The three angrily point out that he is parked over the line.
8. The man apologizes while getting into his car.
9. The three nod approvingly to him and tell him not to do it again, it’s annoying.
10. We see the three talking to a bunch of kids in baseball uniforms.
11. The kids point to a house with a large gate around the backyard.
12. One tallest delinquent runs to the front of the house and rings the doorbell.
13. The other two begin to climb the fence.
14. The tallest delinquent walks through the house with the homeowner chatting.
15. The tallest delinquent and homeowner open the back door to the backyard.
16. They see the other two struggling to hop back across the fence after successfully reclaiming the ball.
17. The tallest one turns to the homeowner and apologizes.
18. We see the three walking together again.
19. They see a little girl crying next to a tree.
21. The little girl points upwards to a kitten in the tree.
22. We see the three stacked on top of each other.
23. The delinquent on top grabs the kitten.
24. They fall over, the kitten is unharmed.
25. The little girl hugs her kitten.
27. They start joking around and pushing each other playfully.
28. One of them gets pushed and almost falls over.
29. He berates the others saying how they: “almost made him drop his purse.”
30. He realizes that he does not own this purse.
31. The three sprint back.
32. They are shown out of breath talking to:
a. The little girl and her kitten.
c. The man who parked his car (correctly this time)
33. The three are shown running through the colorful spray painted alley.
34. They see the old woman at the bus stop.
35. She is crying and wiping tears from her eyes.
37. They all talk, the old woman is relieved.
38. The old woman gets on the bus and waves goodbye.
39. The delinquents look down and see her glasses on the bus stop bench.
40. The delinquents run after the bus shouting and waving.
Three juvenile delinquents spend the day “terrorizing” their neighborhood. They start by helping an old woman cross the street. They then run off and spray paint bunnies and rainbows in dark alleyways. They come across a car parked incorrectly and scold the owner when they come back. They help a group of kids playing baseball get their ball back from someone’s yard. Then they help a little girl get her kitten out of a tree. On the way home the three are roughhousing and playing around. One of them pushes another a little too hard and the middle delinquent yells that he almost dropped his purse. They all look at the purse and realize that they accidentally stole the old woman’s purse! They all immediately turn around and run back. As they are looking for the old woman they come across the little girl and her kitten, the baseball team, the owner of the car that was parked incorrectly; all of whom point them in the same direction. They run through the alleyway that they painted and find the little old woman sitting at a bus stop looking worried and wiping tears from her eyes. The three rush over and apologize profusely for accidentally stealing her purse. The old woman is delighted and relieved to see her purse again. She talks with the delinquent’s before the bus comes and she gets on and the bus leaves. We then realize that the old lady has left her glasses at the bus stop. It ends with the three delinquents chasing after the bus waving as the sun sets.
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