Here’s a new entry for Fix It Friday!
I hope you are doing great today, This is the second time am sending you this letter, the truth is i got your email contact on the internet and decided to contact you regarding this business proposal.
I am Mrs.Maya Wilson head of accounting udit department of United OverSeas Bank Kuala Lumpur Branch, here in Malaysia. I am writing you about a business proposal that will be of an immense benefit to both of us. In my department, being the manager Kuala Lumpur regional office, I discovered a Sum amount of money in an account that belongs to one of our foreign customers late business mogul mr. moises saba masri billionaire, a Jew from mexico that was a victim of a helicopter crash 10 Jan, 2010, killtinging him and his family members. Saba was 46-years-old. Also in the chopper at the time of the crash was his wife, their son abraham (Alberto) and his daughter-in-law. the pilot was also dead.
Now our bank has been waiting for any of the relatives to come-up for the claim but nobody has done that. I seek your consent to present you as the next of kin/Will beneficiary to the deceased so that the proceeds of this account valued can be paid to you.
Please on your confirmation of this message and indicating your interest I will furnish you with more information.endeavor to let me know your decision rather than keep me waiting.
Thanking you in anticipation of your favorable reply.
Kind Regards
Mrs Maya Wilson
I hope you are doing great today. This is my second time sending you this letter. The truth is, I got your email address from the internet and decided to contact you regarding a business proposal that would be immensely beneficial to both of us.
I am Mrs. Maya Wilson, head of the accounting audit department at the United OverSeas Bank in Malaysia. As the manager of Kuala Lumpur’s regional office, I discovered a large sum of money in an account that belongs to one of our foreign customers. He is the late billionaire business mogul, Mr. Moises Saba Masri, who was killed in a helicopter crash on January 10, 2010. Saba was 46 years old. His wife, his son Abraham (Alberto), and his daughter-in-law were also killed, along with the pilot.
Our bank has been waiting for relatives to take Saba’s claim but no one has showed up. I seek your consent to present you as the next of kin/will beneficiary of the deceased so that the proceeds of this account can be paid to you.
After you confirm this message to indicate your interest, I will send you more information. Please let me know your decision rather than keep me waiting.
I anticipate your favorable reply. Thank you.
There were punctuation, spelling, and other grammar mistakes, but the new version is in much better shape.
Well, I hope this was helpful! If you want to submit something for Fix It Friday, please send it by 5pm on Thursday. Have a nice weekend ^^.