As part of the reflection process of Design Project 1, I have to air my thoughts about three or more designs from other teams in my Studio session. I have chosen to reflect upon the following designs: Serene Spiral, A-Maze-Ing Change and the Asian Garden.
Serene Spiral: The first design that was presented to the class was the Serene Spiral. I felt that the key objective of visually representing flow through it's most typical form, water, was achieved quite successfully. While I do not necessarily agree that it creates peace and tranquility, I do think that it will evoke natural awe in children specifically, who would find the spiraling slope and their "command" over the water visually and emotionally stimulating. I also think that the lighting creates a sense of natural awe and helps the artifact stand out in the darkness. However, I am worried that the lack of running water will serve to influence people to avoid the Serene Spiral, as they may think it's broken and/or not in use. Overall, I think that the artifact does, although in it's most basic form, represent flow. Despite this however, it is not as thought provoking as it could be, although it can be stimulating for children.
A-Maze-Ing Change: The next project I chose to reflect on was the A-Maze-Ing Change. The primary angle on this group's design was that their self-proclaimed "interactive piece of art" would represent the flow of change, life discovery and movement. Their idea was quite intriguing with 37 wooden doors, each with unique and limited swinging movement, that would at all times create a constantly changing mazes. Each of these doors feature images that would relate to the flow of life, thus promoting multiple uses of the maze. I found this aspect somewhat ambiguous, as I wasn't completely sure what these images were (it may have been that I just missed it during the presentation). Judging by this team's presentation, a lot of thought and effort went into the making of their artifact. Not only did the team have diagrams including dimensions for the doors, but they also had 3D models of the artifact. From their presentation, I took away a sense that this group wanted to be there and wanted to do their best and take control of their learning, and I too learned something from them.
If I could provide any criticism of their piece, it's that the doors might be dangerous in the case that other people are in the maze. It may be possible for people to be hit by doors if other people are not cautious. However, disregarding this, as long as the images on the doors are fleshed out and thought provoking, I think it would be a legitimately viable choice for the City Botanical Gardens.
Asian Garden: The final project that I decided to reflect upon was the Asian Garden. The respective group's main inspiration was their concept of various Asian cultures and the emphasis of peace and tranquility (which I thought they could have better summarized as "zen"). The Asian Garden was to feature a Torii Gate, which is more commonly known as a Japanese Gate, and a large Yin-Yang themed fountain. Visitors could enter the Garden and feel tranquil within the living space. Additionally, they could take their shoes off and step into the fountain itself.
I had a few complaints with this group's idea.
Firstly, the use of the Torii Gate and the Yin-Yang symbol as a fountain confused me, as they're from different cultures, Japanese and Chinese respectively. This is perhaps a more subjective issue, but it felt to some extent they were cheapening other cultures and simply lumping them in together. Secondly, it seemed odd to allow visitors to take their shoes off and enter the shallow fountain, as it raises the question: what do the patrons do with wet feet? Walking through the city with wet, bare feet is both dangerous and extremely unhygienic, and the Botanical Gardens and University are not much better.
Lastly, the team seemed to target a demographic of office workers and people who worked day-in, day-out in the city. However, it's extremely unlikely that those people would walk past the Botanical Gardens on any regular basis. Instead, they should be targeting stressed University students. If they did this, the (hypothetical) Asian Garden would get a lot more usage.
In the end, I thought there was some basic idea here, but there needed to be more focus, on a specific culture and who they were targeting.
I definitely learned a lot by paying attention and reflecting upon the ideas of other groups. Not only did I learn about ideas and how to make them conceivable and valid, but I learned about working hard and the amount of effort that should go into something to communicate a design and surprise a room full of people.