How they could’ve made Jax abstraction happen without mischaracterising Pomni:
- Have Jax never reach out to her
- Pomni would still get worried about her silence and would go talk to the
- Jax would just be her usual cartoony self
- Jax would push Pomni away in a discreet way, not in a mean way. Just like annoy her until she leaves.
- Have the same scene happen
- Jax keeps denying “I said it’s nothing!”
- When Pomni reaches her, Jax pushes her away (physically or verbally)
- Pomni still tries to get her to talk
- Jax in the meantime would’ve reached another room
- Jax enters the room with one of her keys, leaving Pomni behind
- Pomni goes to the others, telling them something is wrong with Jax
- Even if, let’s say, Zooble and Gangle don’t wanna help out, Ragatha will, and so will (sane) Kinger
- After a short brain storming montage or whatever they open the room
- They find Jax abstracted/in the exact moment of the abstraction.
- Pomni tries to get close, but Ragatha and Kinger stop her
With this we get to scene in the episode, with Zooble criticising Jax.
Time really was the enemy for this finale