Okokok I just read chapter 3 of island of enchantment and I liked it
The star hook scene was sksjsjdjjdjdjdjdjjd imma going to replay and make the other choices too but I legit died when she called me a good boy I- her illustration is gorgeous and made me feel so soft, how this fictional woman can make me blush AND be so pretty in this gentle way ?? I cry
ABOUT THE POWER how is mc so fucking stupiiiiid mc has this super op power and they’re all afraid of people trying to hurt them because of it which is fair so-
Makes a magic-y magic? Write that the only people to know about the power are who mc chooses to tell? They could even make tinker forget (I do not trust her, not in a “she’s an evil backstaber” way but in a “she isn’t concerned by sides so her actions will always be unknown” way)
Also I’d make my glasses magic?? Or any trinket mc has tbh, just write it has a protection/good luck spell on it
Idk I’d totally use the shit out of this power
Also the plot holes in rogues book? He didn’t talk about a body did he?? I wanted so much the option to ask if there was a body or body parts, I think mc would be perfectly capable of not changing the past but of making revaluations and stuff
Although I did think his sister being alive all along is just part of the ioe plot already, which was basically confirmed when talking to hook talked about how the islands magic couldn’t get the lost book even when it’s not with the only owner,, alive (so it’s totally with red, now where the fuck she is I have no idea)
I’m excited about them going to more magical places next (not talking about pan, yeah imma ignore him)
There was a line after the star scene where mc is is pouty (idk the word don’t judge me) because they have to take the magic book and go talk business
Unreal, I’d probably have already asked about the books and be stoked about fucking magic, I’m a fucking nerd and would be So Curiou about how the magic works in that world!!
Can anyone use it? Is there such a thing as being born magic or not? Do people just use a specific kind of magic (like the writing thing) or can they learn more? Are magicians a thing? What about about magical creatures? I know tinker is a fairy and mermaid are a thing but what abou things like idk a Pegasus?
Honestly I would want to know all about the world(building)












