Made this to store all the writing stuff I've reblogged and whenever I feel like writing my own things. I don't write as often but I want to try to . ( @ilikemicrowaves )
Hello !!! So around 2 days ago I got an idea 4 a Flowerpin fic and wrote a plot outline thingy 4 it . But I'm not good at finishing fics , so I'm just going 2 go ahead and post it here . Enjoy my Yuri slop 👅
Originally I wrote it at 1 am in the morning so this is the writing I spent the next day rewriting 2 where it would be comprehensible . Btw I use it/she 4 both Flower n Pin in this
Pin and Flower have not actually met met in canon so far , they just know of each other's existence . So I found a way 2 make them at least cross paths . Pin has been known 2 show an interest in gardening , and Flower is a plant.do I see where I'm going w/ this
I got 3 reasons/ideas for Pin 2 approach Flower . 1) she needs help w/ her garden ( say she already has one ) 2) she wants 2 learn more about gardening so she can take care of her plants more efficiently . 3) doesn't have a garden and wants 2 start but needs some help . Who better 2 ask than the plan herself ?
Pin makes a trip 2 where ever Flower is residing in this timeline ( I'm still figuring out timeline stuff as of rn .I like the idea of them getting 2 know each other in idfb but also that would mean none of the growth they had in bfb/tpot would be w/ them ) 2 ask about gardening n surprise !!! 😁 Bitch doesn't take care of herself or know basic self care , meaning she don't know gardening well , despite being a plant .
It's obvious that Flower doesn't take care of itself . Its petals are fading , its stem n limbs r turning yellow and dying , there's scratches and scabs from obsessive picking at the skin and her leaves , it's pale from where it doesn't go out and get sunlight like she needs 2 .
Flower feels incredibly embarrassed and shameful about this , she knows this is not a good look on it . She's a wilting mess w/ a barely living social life and now she had just disappointed another person because she lacks the common knowledge of basic needs .
However Pin doesn't see it that way , it sees this as an opportunity for both of them 2 learn together :D AWW. So cute 🥺 so cute 🥰 . This is where they begin getting 2 know each other yay !!!
They make plans and begin gardening , and it's improving their mental and physical health . They're both strengthening their cores from the physical work of it all ( Helping Flower gain her strength back since she mostly just stays in her room all day and it is finally getting a healthy amount of sunlight and photosynthesising . Pin is helping her body stay strong bc she is easily weakened when not doing much physical activity bc of dyspraxia and hypotonia.)
Now that they are both physically feeling well and less exhausted , their mental state is being boosted ( both are getting more confident w/ socializing. Flower feelings like she finally has a friend that is her #1 pick and Pin is allowing herself to welcome another person into her circle ( that currently consists of like . Coiny and Golfball ) ) .
The garden is sort of like . A symbol of their relationship in a way ??? It brought them together if that makes sense . It makes sense in my head ok ? ok
Eventually they start spending time w/ each other outside of gardening , they are now at a new level of their relationship .
By this point Coiny has obviously noticed Pin is spending less time w/ him , but he has like . Idfk others like Firey 2 go nag . And.donut .I think . Him and Snowball seemed like friends in season 1 let's go w/ those 3 guys . So he notices but he still has other people 2 hang out w/ . Ruby wouldn't really notice Flower spending more time w/ Pin much because she's probably busy hanging out w/ Freesmart .
That means Pin n Flower haven't rlly gotten the chance 2 tell anyone that they talk to that they're now friends , so even the possibility of them being into each other is in nobodies minds ( at least not consciously )
Spending time outside of gardening leads into spending time at each other's houses every now and then , until one night when they're at Pin's place . They're in Pin's room sitting on the side of its bed and chatting . Somehow they get on the topic that they were kind of lacking something until they became friends . This gets deep n emotional wouuudghh scary , they're Venting about themselves , they're allowing themselves to open up , to be vulnerable , and they're being listened 2 .
Someone is listening 2 their story for what feels like is once in their life w/ being shut down with " oh you completed ur dream goal you must be so happy and not empty at all " or " u don't need consoling bc u got a cool mech suit despite being attacked and bullied for being different . " They have found another person like them , they have found a missing piece of themselves in the other .
The lighting is low , only a dim nightlight in the corner of the room remains ( small hc that Pin can't sleep in the dark bc of the time she spent w/ no face , w/ no light , that was taken away from her in bfdia ) it's late , very late . It's probably close or past midnight by now , they don't really know .
They're a little exhausted from the day , this is the time 2 finally wind down and rest .
They have privacy . The door was closed so that way they wouldn't wake up Coiny w/ their loud laughter and chatting . ( For context Coiny n Pin r roommates in this timeline ok ? Ok )
Neither of them planned for Flower 2 sleepover , not realizing the time after getting caught up in long conversations w/ each other .
Their setting is comfortable , they've opened up about themselves , they've admitted things they've never said 2 anyone , they've been listened 2 , they feel safe and comfortable .
Except 4 one topic . The fact that they can't help but feel and believe they're unlovable people . They've been treated as unlovable before , those things stay w/ someone . Even when things got better and they've improved as a person , they still have little 2 no social life .
One of them confesses that no matter what they do , they don't think they can ever feel like a lovable being . They feel like they're still not deserving of love despite fixing things they've broken . They themself don't feel they're capable of loving themself ever again .
They both are burdened w/ this voice in their head that they will never be loved , they are alone in this world and will forever be . However , they just found someone who understands them and this feeling . They mutually understand each other when no one else could
Neither of them can lose this opportunity that they have at this moment . If they let this chance slip away from them , neither of them would be able 2 forgive themselves for it .
The other rests their paw on the others , both of them looking at each other in the eyes . But their gaze keeps flickering back and forth between the others eyes and mouth until they can no longer keep eye contact .
They didn't lean into a kiss . They rushed into a sudden and scared , spur of the moment kiss :))) GiggkeLES OK :)) MY THINGS MY THINGS R KISSING :)) EEEEE EEEEEE. EEYAYAYYAYYA
They do the boombeyah 🫰🥹
They have never done this B4 , w/ anyone , it's both of their first times . So like uhhh this big 4 them on top of the big emotional talk they had 👍yaeh .yk what this is the first time sex has ever happened in the bfdi universe ty Flowerpin 4 inventing Goiky sex ig 🌈🌈🌈
Okay we've officially made it 2 the sneaking out part I made as a joke 2 the art and then.i wrote all this ♥️
They were vulnerable w/ each other , but they're not ready for anyone else 2 see them vulnerable . So Flower has 2 sneak out w/ Coiny seeing it . But they kind of fail 2 realize Flower can just walk out and be seen w/ out Coiny realizing bc he's kind of a dumbass . He's not gonna connect those dots ✌️😭
But it would be boring if Coiny didn't find out . Bc he's kind of a loud mouth and he's going 2 be a loud mouth here ! 😁
So they get caught , and it looks suspicious ofc bc why would Pin need 2 hide the fact that Flower stayed the night ? Then Coiny connects the dots
So now they have their first worry on top of all the other Worries I'm going 2 give them leading on 🌈🌈♥️ first worry being Coiny knows and eventually this news will spread bc Coiny can't keep his trap shut .
The worries they get as the days go on is that they're scared of themselves hurting the other and being left 2 be alone again . This mutual thought causes them 2 subconsciously distance a bit from each other . In their head , staying away from the other will protect the other from seeing the actual monster they believe themself 2 be . Also deep down they also want 2 protect themselves from more hurt .
As they both start 2 do this , they see the other distancing and get scared about it . They see it as the other saw the evil fucked up person they actually are and are getting away while they have a chance 2 escape
Ofc word does get out , even if Coiny told 1 person bc nobody can keep their mouths shut apparently .
Flower's first thought is 2 talk 2 Ruby about , she is one of the only other closest ppl she has . Ruby doesn't know anything or want anything 2 do w/ relationship stuff #aromamticism 🌈🎉🎉 But Ruby does help out w/ what she can . Ruby gives Flower the idea 2 show Pin her appreciation through gift giving . Tossing Book in there as well bc #FlowerBookPropaganda while I'm at it . Book gives her input as well n the 3 decide 2 try and find the perfect gift 4 Pin .
Pin on the other hand has nnooo idea who else 2 go 2 other than Coiny , but Coiny sucks ass at this stuff and she is well aware of that ( COUGH saying she doesn't need consoling even though bfdia fucked her up badly ) , which is why she avoids talking about anything heavy with him .
Pin decides she needs 2 talk 2 a smart person . Golfbal :)yay . Golfball has helped Pin B4 , so she figures maybe Golfball can help Pin w/ this as well .
This is where I had it left off ! I'll expand on it more eventually but ty 4 reading my slop , have some bonus doodles
Uhh hi 👋 idk how to . Post fanfics and what not but here I go . Sweats
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Welcome to the BFDIE: Wilted Rose AU. An Au where Rose won the Rejoin challenge instead of Money . This au focuses on Rose and the conflicts in The Cheaters Alliance , while also shining light on the other contestants . ( Ur at the prologue so it's just Rose and BB rn . I hope you like BeachRose slop / silly )
Prologue Summary: Stuck in the TLC for 2 weeks has definitely given Rose enough time to reflect on her time in the game. She wishes she did things differently, while also feeling like she did things right. But no matter how much she replays those memories in her head, she's still stuck in the TLC, stuck with the very person she betrayed.
Everything was cramped. You could barely move around and get comfortable in the Tinier Loser Chamber. The lid was so low that if Rose stood up, her head would hit the hard steel locking them away. There wasn’t any leg room with Money at her feet, or arm room, or any room. At night the metal box was cold to touch, which made it difficult to get any amount of sleep.
The only thing Rose could really do to pass the time was reflect on the game, but that wasn’t what Rose wanted to do at all.
Rose didn’t want to revisit the memory of meeting Beach Ball and Sticker for the first time, it only made her feel upset now that their alliance was now broken up, and that the blame was completely put on top of her shoulder.
It didn’t help her case with the fact that one of the alliance members was trapped in the same metal prison as her. The one that she betrayed.
Rose knows that everyone making a big deal out of killing Beach Ball is ludicrous. “It’s a competition, not a picnic.” Just like she had said. Therefore she shouldn't feel guilty, everyone else was irrational. Yet, the guilt grew like vines strangling her throat.
Rose could see Beach Ball’s round shape, she could see their bright stripes, muted by the darkness of the chamber, she could feel their body whenever they all shuffled around to try and find comfort. The TLC was so cramped that Rose was sure that she could feel BB’s breath.
“Rose, are you mad at me?” a voice slashed a cut into the palpable silence, despite it being a gentle whisper. Only Hotdog and Money remained asleep.
She did not answer, she did not move. Maybe if she stayed still enough, BB would think she had finally fallen asleep and leave her be. She did not want to talk about her feelings, she did not want to be near anyone, let alone be trapped in a tiny chamber with others.
She just wanted to be left alone.
The palpable silence was returning, as the cut from Beach Ball’s voice began to seal. She forced the words that were forming in her mouth down, but she didn't know what she could bear; the suffocating silence or a conversation.
Trapping the words in her throat made it feel like the thorns that grew on her body had started to grow inwards, clogging her throat and making it hard to breath. But that could honestly just be the lack of fresh air inside the chamber.
“No.” Despite her internal protest, the word slipped out of her mouth. She regretted it immediately. Maybe BB would stay content with that answer and not ask any further questions.
The silence returned, just like she had hoped. But the same silence she had hoped for didn’t come. This new silence was taunting her, making her feel like the thorns were doubling in size as she tried to swallow her words.
“Why would I be mad at you?” face in her palms, she should have stayed quiet. She was scared of any answer, positive or negative. At least the break in silence gave her a short moment of relief.
Beach Ball shuffled to try and face her, but she didn’t want to look at them. The thought of making eye contact was almost nauseating.
“You haven’t talked to me, or anyone.” There was a large frown on BB’s face. Rose didn’t even need to look to know, she could feel the expression.
Good job me, you hurt them even more.
Rose hadn’t realized she hadn’t responded until the feeling of BB staring at her and waiting for a response grew unbearable.
“I thought you were mad at me”
“Mad at you?” BB said, “Why would I be mad at you?”
The thought didn’t occur to her that there was a chance BB wasn’t upset. She just assumed because, well you know, everyone else was. It made sense to her.
“Because I killed you, and got you eliminated.” She emphasized eliminated, because that was really the only bad thing that happened. Death is regular. However, saying that left a nasty taste in her mouth. Repeating what she had done made her feel the same wave of guilt she got when Sticker left. This time, it was much stronger, she was more upset than before to feel this amount of guilt then.
She really just wanted the subject to change, or to just stop talking and sleep forever.
“Silly, that was Sticker who got me eliminated” BB didn’t point out the Rose Killing Them Part thankfully.
“Everyone else just put the blame on me..” Rose said.
Only a head tilt and a baffled expression as a response was what Rose got from BB.
That’s right, Beach Ball wasn’t there to see everyone’s reaction. They were dead, they didn’t see the shocked and horrified faces of the others. Even though death occurs all the time, it’s normal. Though she knows repeating that to herself isn’t going to change anything. It was more of wishful thinking.
But of course, when all eyes were on Rose, she just had to mess up. Now she’s stuck in this chamber for several more agonizingly slow weeks to go.
“But you were doing the challenge, They weren’t mad at Sticker too, were they?” The way Beach Ball worded their question made Rose wilt a little inside. She wanted Beach Ball to worry about her, not Sticker. This conversation was about her right now. But she suppressed that feeling of irritation towards Beach Ball quickly.
Sticker.. The mention of him made Rose fume a bit. No one was mad at Sticker, they were only mad at her. She was mad at them too, they didn’t even give her a chance to redeem herself.
Though, she did kind of prove everyone’s claim that she was this monster, with the whole. Flamethrower thing.
She did technically betray Sticker.
She cut that thought off immediately. “Sticker called me a backstabber.” Beach Ball didn’t need to know that. She didn’t need that look on her.
Beach Ball only stared down at their hands and fiddled with their fingers, they looked almost as if they were deflating a little.
“But,” they began, “They killed me too, and I’m not upset.”
BB almost looked pathetic, hurt by Sticker’s actions even though it didn’t affect them. Watching her friend look and sound this hurt stung Rose. That stinging feeling began to feed her annoyance towards Sticker. Sticker hurt her, and now they've hurt Beach Ball.
“So, we’re on good terms then?” Rose knew Beach Ball wasn’t upset, but there was still a sense of doubt and felt the need to seek reassurance.
Beach Ball immediately grew their bright smile that Rose was used to seeing again and leaped into Rose’s arms for a sudden tight hug. Rose squirmed to not pop BB by any of her thorns.
“Of course we are! You’re my friend,” they gushed, smiling up at her, “And friends forgive.”
Rose wasn’t one who hugged or initiated much affection towards others. In fact, she couldn’t recall the last time she hugged or received a hug from anyone. BB’s affection almost frightened her. The impulse to push them away was strong, but the impulse quickly faded.
Her own arms wrapped around BB. It made things feel easier staying in this claustrophobic box. The small amount of fresh air that drafted in from the crack of the lid felt more plentiful than before, her legs felt more free than they really were, and the steel was no longer a sharp cold, but a relaxing and comfortable cold that didn’t make her shiver. The sound of crickets from the outside brightened, Rose hadn’t even noticed them before. As if they were blocked out from the tension.
The Closure with Beach Ball lifted tension off of Rose, she felt more comfortable and content staying in this box for several more weeks. Despite being forgiven, Rose still felt immense guilt for killing them. She felt like forgiveness wasn’t deserved for herself, it didn’t feel right. Yet, at the same time she felt that everyone owed her an apology, even if they weren’t actually targeting her.
Especially Sticker. She deserved the biggest apology from her. If Beach Ball, the very person she killed was able to forgive her, then why didn’t Sticker? Sticker should have seen everyone else’s ludicrous reaction, and how she was being targeted by them. Sticker should have stood by her instead of turning against her like everyone else, because obviously Rose didn’t do anything terrible. The feelings of annoyance and irritation only intensified for this, she wanted to yell at Sticker so badly for leaving her like that.
She didn’t realize how hard she was squeezing Beach Ball, dwelling in her emotions that long. But she didn’t release her grip, she didn’t want to let them go just yet. She leaned her head on Beach Ball. When she tilted her head she got a glimpse of a metallic blue spray can down by her side. It was the explosion repellent that BB bought before they were eliminated. Rose kept it with her sense then. She didn't know why, but she just carried it around with her. She could give it back to them now, but she wanted to hold on to it a little longer. She still felt like anything could happen and Beach Ball would just disappear somehow. Thinking about it, she knew it sounded stupid, but she couldn’t bury this feeling. She would give it back when she felt safe again, if they even wanted it back.
Rose was just happy that Beach Ball wasn’t mad at her.
I haven't written in an incredibly long time , and I've kind of lost my writing style , so this is throwing spaghetti at the wall . I hope you like spaghetti . If not let me just , clean that up ig IDK . criticism and tips are welcomed just don't act like an asshole or be harsh pretty please 🥺
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Oh hi again you made it to the bottom . That's so awesome sauce 🥹 thank you for reading this 🥹🥹 I really really really love Rose and hopefully my rose propaganda pulled you in to 🥹🥹🥹 j oin me .
Any questions about this au go to the ask inbox of @ilikemicrowaves . Mandi signing out 🫡
Some of it won't make bc I didn't apply the wof timeline so shush if your wondering why there's a LeaWing Settlement outside of the Poison Jungle or stuff like that 🫶
Beach Ball
SeaWing / SandWing with a little bit of RainWing ancestry
SeaWing build , scales , gills , webbed talons , but no bioluminescent scales
SandWing sail , wars , wings , heat resistant scales , but no barbed tail
Grew up in a coastal SeaWing Village with SeaWing culture
David
Albino allowing
Has mostly HiveWing and NightWing traits
Unknown if he has any abilities from any of his ancestors
No idea where David grew up or which tribe/tribes culture he would have . Most likely on the move all the time instead of settling down
Fern
LeafWing
Very little LeafSpeak , just enough to communicate with plants but not command or control them . In order to do so Fern would have to do a lot of convincing
Grew up in a LeafWing settlement in a temperature forest , SapWing culture
Hotdog
I literally cannot think of a tribe because I don't really care about Hotdog , sorry Hotdog fans 💔 so we default to my favorite tribe , MudWings
If he had a troop than I think it would consist of ,,, 5 including him ig
MudWing culture
Jammy
HiveWing with little SilkWing ancestry
Does not have wrist stingers , tail stingers , or the smell defense thing I forget what it's called
Grew up in one of the hives with HiveWing and SilkWing culture
Money
SkyWing / LeafWing
No fire breath , but has the strong SkyWing eyesight
Same LeafSpeak situation as Fern
SkyWing culture
Needy
RainWing / NightWing
Slight foresight ( how she knows she won't need to do anything for the challenges ) but no mind reading , does have Nightwing star scales
RainWing venom and tail , but no color shifting scales
Grew up on the borders of the Rainforest with mostly NightWing culture
Rose
LeafWing / HiveWing with little RainWing ancestry
LeafWing wings and stronger LeafSpeak than Fern and Money
HiveWing wrist stringers and back spikes
RainWing tail and scales , no RainWing venom or color shifting scales
Leaf and Hive culture
Ruler
SandWing / LeafWing
SandWing scales , eyes , and Barbed tail
No LeafSpeak
SandWing culture
Sidewalky
MudWing
Bulkier than most MudWings
No troop , grew up on his own in marshes
Sticker
RainWing
Grew up near the SeaWing borders in a Coastal RainWing village
Toothpaste
SilkWing
No firesilk
Never had a permanent settlement
The only one I have doodles for so far is a few concepts for Rose's design because I have favoritism
YAYUHH THAT'S IT , I like listening to people yap so if you have any ideas or input I'd love to hear :]]
Connecting Pin and Lullaby for an Angels Egg pt.1 - STOMACH BOOK
HI HELLO I MADE THIS AT ONE IN THE MORNING I HOPE YOU ENJOY. if anyone has any input, see smth I missed, or smth I got wrong LET ME KNOW :]
Made this to help me organize my thoughts, but I also wrote it down as text in case Tumblr messes up the quality and it's unreadable. MASSIVE YAPPING UNDERCUT AND TW FOR SUICIDE, BLOOD, AND DEATH
"Did you do that to yourself? There's things we don't talk about." Pin blaming herself for all the awful things that have been done to her. She caused/deserved her limbs, face, size, any form of expression being taken away from her, because she did the crime of being different and not following the brutal nature of BFDIA. Following this, a specific event she could also blame herself for, is the elimination of Teardrop. Teardrop could have stayed in, if Pin hadn't spoken up. Pin blames herself for her only "friend" being eliminated just for speaking. She caused this and believes she deserves punishment.
"Stop it, I don't like it!" Okkk this is a far stretch bUT I could connect this to when Pin spoke out about how she found it sad they were destroying spacefaring technology for a silly little challenge, before her team ripped her in half just for her harmless statement.
"the little girl will not look at any of this stuff. She was looking backwards at the little ones who were still inside of her, at the little one who is trying to stand up, the little one that is still crawling. At the little boys and the little girls who are still in there, at the ten year olds and the teenagers. And she was looking back at mommy, who still holds power to her and still holds the ring, and outside of them is anger. I'm angry. I'm angry that it's taking so many goddamn people to put me back together again"
OKAY THIS IS , BIG PART . how I interpret the outro , is Pin reflecting on herself after getting the mech suit , because once again , everything is changing and she has to get with it in order to survive. reflecting on herself, she is realizing the person she once was , has died , because of the excessive bullying she went through has ripped her original self away from her.
"the little girl will not look at any of this stuff." Pin isn't looking ahead in this imaginary moment, she can't think about anything else other than what has happened to her.
"She was looking backwards at the little ones who were still inside of her, at the little one who is trying to stand up, the little one that's still crawling." Pin is looking at her former self before her mech suit. The pin trying to survive in an environment where even if she SPOKE her own words would get her punished for being different. That Pin is still inside, but she is now standing up, and no longer crawling, she is angry.
"at the little boys and the little girls who are still in there, at the ten year olds and the teenagers." This represents the building blocks that make Pin, who she is, the pin who is herself, wanting to play the game and be the heroic leader everyone needs. These blocks are knocked down by everyone else around her.
"And she was looking back at mommy, who still holds power to her and still holds the ring, and outside of them is anger." The "Mommy" and "Control" represents the rest of the contestants of bfdia and how they forced Pin to conform to the nature of bfdia that was confusing and didn't make sense to her. The ring represents Pin, despite her gaining her expression back, mommy (bfdia players) still hold the ring (Pin), and she is angry.
this is what leads us to the Verse I have not touched yet. "drips down your neck, oh" I have two interpretations of this line, first one being what most people would think. the drips down Pin's neck are tears, which is the support for the next line: "She is in the floor." This implies, she is dead. but in this context of Pin reflecting on herself, This is Pin mourning the loss of her original self, the original Pin is dead and she feels that is something she can never get back, something everyone took away from her forever.
NOW FOR THE SECOND INTERPRETATION. This one is a little more dark. The drips done Pin's neck COULD imply blood, meaning Pin has killed herself. THE WAY I MAKE THIS MAKE SENSE, is that because Pin was forced to conform to survive, she basically killed her original self in order to do so.
A THIRD POINT I THOUGHT OF IN THE MIDDLE OF WRITING THIS, still plays into Pin killing her former self because of conformity, but it's actually mech Pin fully conforming to the game. she had to put a bullet in a part of herself if she wants to win, she has to get rid of her dead weight.
non-writers will never understand the mental illness of writing an entire conversation in your head while doing dishes and then forgetting every word the second you open a blank doc
"I love you but you're doing wrong in a way I cannot condone" and "I hate you but you're being wronged in a way I cannot stomach" are top tier and I need more of them.
IF YOU GET STUCK!! IN A SCENE!! DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO!! end it where you are and don't touch it again until later. wait until you rewrite. go back when the inspiration hits. if you think about it too much, you're gonna drive yourself bananas (this is so targeted please ignore me). just move on!! go back later!! write the next scene or fifty and then worry about it. trust. or don't . but trust.
screaming, crying, throwing up, as I force myself to write a story i'm very passionate about and love writing and have no obligation to write except that i want to
I've always loved the characterization I see with Vee where she's mean and rude , when people do it correctly . I see it done with the wrong intentions with Vee and it shows a lot of your guy's reading comprehension and emotional understanding of characters . Before I go further I wanna state there is no incorrect or correct way to characterize a character ( other than complete mischaracterization with nothing to back it up with imo ) , I just don't really know how else to word it . Like , play with your dolls but how you play with dolls shows how you perceive things , and I perceive those as incorrect/false ( ??? ) ok ? ok
Back on topic but what I mean by characterization with the wrong intentions , is that , I see people make Vee mean and rude , not because they want to add more depth to her character , but because that's how they think canon Vee is . They fell for the trap bc they didn't realize that Vee does have good intentions , but has bad communication/emotional understanding . She states what's on her mind or her opinions , not thinking twice how it would make the person she is talking to feel . She doesn't think " if I say this , will it make _____ feel awkward ? Would they be offended ? Hurt even ? "
What makes her look worse is the fact that she doesn't really point out the positives or compliments toons much . If it's a job well done , then why should she congratulate them ? It was done correctly , this is how it's supposed to be , the default , nothing to be rewarded happened . A toon may accomplish something they struggle with , something that is easy to the average person . Obviously , there's going to be errors in that accomplishment , and Vee will be there to point that out instead of congratulating the toon . Your posture is poor , your handwriting is illegible , you set the oven to the incorrect temperature , you missed a spot while sweeping , etc .
The toons around her treat her as if she DOES have ill intentions , which I think this is a contributing factor to the common belief that Vee is intentionally rude . Another thing that leads to this belief is the fact that there is a lot to read about Dandy's World and some people don't have that time to learn all the lore and think about the characters in depth , i don't blame them . Some people have lives , but I'm sitting on my living room couch rn writing about a TV host from a Roblox game .
But that's the Vee mischaracterization I see most often .
Now , there is a way to make ur Vee mean and rude without it being mischaracterization . I present , character development but the development is in a negative direction !!! 🥳🎉🎉 Smiles
My Vee still has good intentions , but she can be mean and harsh at times but she doesn't overdue it , but she definitely does it a lot more than canon Vee , and it's noticeable enough that I've had a few anons and ppl complain about it ( also to the like 3 ppl who complained about my characterization : just keep doomscrolling and let me play with my dolls ) . She's more easily irritated and annoyed , and has a shorter temper . She wasn't like this before though . She was like canon Vee during the beginning of Gardenview . But just as in canon , because of how she has trouble regulating emotions , toning her voice , and choosing her words , she comes off as rude and harsh to the toons . She can't control that , no matter what she does , they'll always see her as straightforward without good intentions in mind . The toons painted my Vee this way for so long and so much , that she started to BELIEVE she was that version of Vee everyone saw . The more that idealization of herself was drilled into her head , the more she became that grumpy Vee everyone now knows her as back then and today . If everyone says she's this way , then it must be the default and she is making an incredible error that she must fix . So , she's grown bitter , more stern and strict than she was . Molded herself into the Vee everyone saw . Even if there were a few toons and people who knew the real Vee and her genuine good intentions .
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