Milo Murphy's Sins

Whatever can go wrong, will go wrong

[thepoparena]

We take our first little look at ChalkZone! We turn magic acts into sexy fly pranks, we threaten a teacher who wants to stamp out creativity, we put some cartoons into people's mouths, and we disco dance while making silly faces. We're having a lot of fun!

[thatretro]

NNtG: Spooksville #01: The Secret Path

Time to take a trip to another book series. And it's been one I've been wanting to talk about for a while but never got around to getting to

It's time to cover a GB-Like from Christopher Pike. Does this continuing saga start off good, or stray from the path?

New NNtG: Spooksville #01: The Secret Path

[thatretro]

NNtG: Spooksville #01: The Secret Path

Time to take a trip to another book series. And it's been one I've been wanting to talk about for a while but never got around to getting to

It's time to cover a GB-Like from Christopher Pike. Does this continuing saga start off good, or stray from the path?

New NNtG: Spooksville #01: The Secret Path

[kaijuno]

Shit this got me out here cryin in the club

TERFS do not interact

[kawaiipotatuh-deactivated202106]

it got an update!!

[pluralspidergwens]

i’ve been squealing with joy at this for a solid fifteen minutes y'all 😭❤️

[froginakettle]

I saw the original and I’m so pleased to see the update!

[harbingermotel]

Another small update in the comments! Sorry for light mode lol

[pathos-logical]

[ID: A collection of Reddit posts by u/takeyourmedsbro. They’re under r/MtF, and the first is marked as a discussion titled “To all of you ladies, from a cis man.” It reads:

I hope it isn’t totally out of order for me to post here, as a man I don’t want to take up your spaces so I’ll try and keep this as short as possible. Tw genital mention

I have full permission from my partner to post this and she’s read it all. There is a misconception that the only men a straight trans women can get with, is a chaser. It is very sad that many of you feel that way, and I’m sorry for how men treat you, but that’s not how it has to be. I met my girlfriend when I was 15. She was living as a boy then and was 13. I used to push her around when we played football at school. I thought she was one of the lads. Time goes on, I was never that close to her and we lost touch. Next thing is I meet her again on a fine art course. I didn’t recognise her at all and with her name change and generic surname I never made the connection. I developed quite the crush, we would go on dates and I’d sort of play them off as just hanging out with a friend. I was so giddy around her and I was terrified to tell her I liked her. One day we were going to the movies and I told myself ‘today is the day I ask her to be my girlfriend, and try to kiss her’ We ended up skipping the movie to go on a walk in the local forest. I held her hand and she squeezed mine - my heart was beating so damn fast. We finally kissed and it was like fireworks. I told her I liked her but she cut me off. She told me to stop talking because she needs to tell me something. Now in my mind I’m panicking thinking she’s in a relationship, but she says ‘l used to be a boy. I was at school with you, please don’t be mad I’m so sorry I didn’t tell you ‘and then to my absolute horror she said ‘please don’t hurt me’ She genuinely thought that there was a danger of me attacking her after finding out. This broke my fucking heart. I had my moment of being like wtf - mainly because I’d known this girl for almost 10 years and hadn’t pieced the 2 people together - but then we kissed again, and then again and again and we kissed so much my face hurt by the end. That was 5 years ago and boy this has been a learning curve. I’ve only ever dated cis women before. I am 100% straight and I had to unlearn some internalized shit for maybe a day or so, until I thought what the fuck does it matter who she used to be? Damn I used to be a baby, people change. But I love her the way she is now. I love her smile I love her eyes I love her body her curves her hands her hair and you know what? I love her penis too. I love it because it’s hers. and it gives her pleasure, and there isn’t anything wrong with it. I don’t have a fetish. I just fell in love with a woman and that means I fell in love with the whole package. I’m planning to propose to her on new years eve. I want to spend the rest of my life with her. I want to raise kids with her and I want her to lose all of these insecurities. Just because you can’t carry them, doesn’t mean you won’t be the mother of my children. There is hope, you’re not broken or unlovable or nothing but a kink. You’re a powerful woman.

The second post is titled “Update from the cis guy that proposed.“ It reads:

Hey ladies. I’ve been asked by a few of you to share an update. Here is my previous post: https://www.reddit.com/r/MtF/comments/e95hgx/to_all_of_you_ladies_from_a_cis_man/?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share

And here is your official soppy post warning - beware…

Soooo on exactly 00:00 new years (ok I was probably out by a couple minutes but I did try to time it) I proposed to my beautiful girlfriend (who also happens to be trans, hence why I’m posting on here) and she said YES

I don’t know if I can fully articulate how happy I am. I wanted to keep it lowkey and between the 2 of us so she didn’t feel any pressure, so I cooked her favourite meal ever (I would have liked to cook something fancy and elegant but honestly she would much rather eat spaghetti bolognese with garlic bread and then a loaded ice cream sundae for dessert ANY day of the week) we ate, played board games and did a competition to see who could make the best vehicle out of old egg cartons and toilet roll tubes. Then we decided to make cupcakes which were fucking vile because we forgot to add the sugar of all things. Not typical romantic evening but I felt all the love and when I dropped down on one knee she just wept. I didn’t even know I had a yes at first because she was crying so much. I actually got really scared I’d freaked her out so I stood up and hugged her and said I’m sorry and she finally told me yes yes yes and explained that she was crying because it was always beyond her wildest dreams as a youngster that she would ever be able to be a wife. This is not something I can relate to, but I think I do understand, as best as i can as a cis man. We literally just held each other for a bit before we both realized she hadn’t seen the ring yet! I’m not a wealthy guy at all so I was afraid she would be disappointed in my grandmothers wedding ring as her engagement ring (I will buy her a new ring for the wedding) but I did want her to have it as my grandmother always told me she wanted my future wife to wear it. Luck was on my side though people because the ring made her cry all over again, happy tears, because she said it made her feel like the fairytale she told herself as a child has finally come true. I think there maybe was something affirming about the fact that this ring was left from my grandma for me to give to the woman I want to spend my life with.

Ok I don’t want to bore you all to death with the ins and outs but I haven’t stopped smiling since she said yes. The fiancee (I love saying that, so exciting) has been obsessively wedding planning which is mighty convenient for me considering I have no clue on how to organize a wedding. It’s like the child in her has come out to play and its very endearing. She missed out on all the typical girly activities as a child so she’s making up for lost time. She ALREADY has a scrapbook for the wedding and she’s already browsing dresses!

I’m sorry for being all cliche and cringey. I know its insufferable to many and I do understand. I just feel drunk in love, and i did want to update and not leave people hanging! Other than my mother, my family does not know she is trans, because frankly it’s none of their business and my fiancee hasn’t wanted to open up to them about that part of her life. She confided in my mother because my mother knows a transgender boy and so it came up in conversation. As far as the rest of my family are concerned, it’s totally irrelevant to them and they will only ever know if she chooses to tell them. So I was wondering if incorporating rainbows anywhere in the theme at all would be too obviously lgbt pride themed? Or can I get away with some rainbow tokens and such just as a discreet acknowledgement of how far she’s come? Obviously I don’t want people to think of this wedding as anything other than what it is, a straight marriage between a man and a woman, so are rainbows risky? I’m just so damn proud of her and want to show that in some way. I was thinking of wearing rainbow cufflinks or something? Anyway sorry for the damn essay but I hope the new year goes well for you lovely ladies and sorry for being a cringe lord. I just can’t believe I’ve found my queen

in MtF by takeurmedsbro

Third is another post, which reads:

Also we have decided that on the big day, I will wear pink cufflinks and she will wear either blue eye makeup or a flower, and then the theme will be that classic white sorta theme. The colours of the trans flag, thanks to your suggestions. Like so subtle that only me and her will know it means anything at all. Hopefully that will work out tastefully but we also like the pink/blue/white elements of the cake idea. I showed her some of these comments and god damn it you lok she is now exploring sooo many more ideas and concepts, I didnt think she would expand past the scrapbook, but we now have a wedding ‘mood board’ of all things… takes up half the wall in our room. I proposed only 3 days ago! I love her enthusiasm but I’m finding it hard to rate all the dresses she shows me, when I cant tell the difference between any of them… a white dress is a white dress, but she says that’s typical male bullshit and she’s probably right there. But she can wear a bin bag to our wedding and still look perfect so I’m not worried about which compliments her body more, but then I do want her to put a dress on and have that feeling of ‘this is my dress’ and I have the feeling that could be a long process… anyway, the kindness means everything x. End ID]

[kaijuno]

Happy Pride

[parentheses-posts]

This post has 10 sets of parentheses and 2 sets of brackets.

[technoarcanist]

This. THIS is why I don’t put Cishet DNI in my bio btw

[bisexual-engineer-girl]

normally I don’t read super long posts like that but god damn. that was beautiful

[rainbowgod666]

He won.

[aroboxfolio]

they both did<3

[kaijuno]

Shit this got me out here cryin in the club

TERFS do not interact

[kawaiipotatuh-deactivated202106]

it got an update!!

[pluralspidergwens]

i’ve been squealing with joy at this for a solid fifteen minutes y'all 😭❤️

[froginakettle]

I saw the original and I’m so pleased to see the update!

[harbingermotel]

Another small update in the comments! Sorry for light mode lol

[pathos-logical]

[ID: A collection of Reddit posts by u/takeyourmedsbro. They’re under r/MtF, and the first is marked as a discussion titled “To all of you ladies, from a cis man.” It reads:

I hope it isn’t totally out of order for me to post here, as a man I don’t want to take up your spaces so I’ll try and keep this as short as possible. Tw genital mention

I have full permission from my partner to post this and she’s read it all. There is a misconception that the only men a straight trans women can get with, is a chaser. It is very sad that many of you feel that way, and I’m sorry for how men treat you, but that’s not how it has to be. I met my girlfriend when I was 15. She was living as a boy then and was 13. I used to push her around when we played football at school. I thought she was one of the lads. Time goes on, I was never that close to her and we lost touch. Next thing is I meet her again on a fine art course. I didn’t recognise her at all and with her name change and generic surname I never made the connection. I developed quite the crush, we would go on dates and I’d sort of play them off as just hanging out with a friend. I was so giddy around her and I was terrified to tell her I liked her. One day we were going to the movies and I told myself ‘today is the day I ask her to be my girlfriend, and try to kiss her’ We ended up skipping the movie to go on a walk in the local forest. I held her hand and she squeezed mine - my heart was beating so damn fast. We finally kissed and it was like fireworks. I told her I liked her but she cut me off. She told me to stop talking because she needs to tell me something. Now in my mind I’m panicking thinking she’s in a relationship, but she says ‘l used to be a boy. I was at school with you, please don’t be mad I’m so sorry I didn’t tell you ‘and then to my absolute horror she said ‘please don’t hurt me’ She genuinely thought that there was a danger of me attacking her after finding out. This broke my fucking heart. I had my moment of being like wtf - mainly because I’d known this girl for almost 10 years and hadn’t pieced the 2 people together - but then we kissed again, and then again and again and we kissed so much my face hurt by the end. That was 5 years ago and boy this has been a learning curve. I’ve only ever dated cis women before. I am 100% straight and I had to unlearn some internalized shit for maybe a day or so, until I thought what the fuck does it matter who she used to be? Damn I used to be a baby, people change. But I love her the way she is now. I love her smile I love her eyes I love her body her curves her hands her hair and you know what? I love her penis too. I love it because it’s hers. and it gives her pleasure, and there isn’t anything wrong with it. I don’t have a fetish. I just fell in love with a woman and that means I fell in love with the whole package. I’m planning to propose to her on new years eve. I want to spend the rest of my life with her. I want to raise kids with her and I want her to lose all of these insecurities. Just because you can’t carry them, doesn’t mean you won’t be the mother of my children. There is hope, you’re not broken or unlovable or nothing but a kink. You’re a powerful woman.

The second post is titled “Update from the cis guy that proposed.“ It reads:

Hey ladies. I’ve been asked by a few of you to share an update. Here is my previous post: https://www.reddit.com/r/MtF/comments/e95hgx/to_all_of_you_ladies_from_a_cis_man/?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share

And here is your official soppy post warning - beware…

Soooo on exactly 00:00 new years (ok I was probably out by a couple minutes but I did try to time it) I proposed to my beautiful girlfriend (who also happens to be trans, hence why I’m posting on here) and she said YES

I don’t know if I can fully articulate how happy I am. I wanted to keep it lowkey and between the 2 of us so she didn’t feel any pressure, so I cooked her favourite meal ever (I would have liked to cook something fancy and elegant but honestly she would much rather eat spaghetti bolognese with garlic bread and then a loaded ice cream sundae for dessert ANY day of the week) we ate, played board games and did a competition to see who could make the best vehicle out of old egg cartons and toilet roll tubes. Then we decided to make cupcakes which were fucking vile because we forgot to add the sugar of all things. Not typical romantic evening but I felt all the love and when I dropped down on one knee she just wept. I didn’t even know I had a yes at first because she was crying so much. I actually got really scared I’d freaked her out so I stood up and hugged her and said I’m sorry and she finally told me yes yes yes and explained that she was crying because it was always beyond her wildest dreams as a youngster that she would ever be able to be a wife. This is not something I can relate to, but I think I do understand, as best as i can as a cis man. We literally just held each other for a bit before we both realized she hadn’t seen the ring yet! I’m not a wealthy guy at all so I was afraid she would be disappointed in my grandmothers wedding ring as her engagement ring (I will buy her a new ring for the wedding) but I did want her to have it as my grandmother always told me she wanted my future wife to wear it. Luck was on my side though people because the ring made her cry all over again, happy tears, because she said it made her feel like the fairytale she told herself as a child has finally come true. I think there maybe was something affirming about the fact that this ring was left from my grandma for me to give to the woman I want to spend my life with.

Ok I don’t want to bore you all to death with the ins and outs but I haven’t stopped smiling since she said yes. The fiancee (I love saying that, so exciting) has been obsessively wedding planning which is mighty convenient for me considering I have no clue on how to organize a wedding. It’s like the child in her has come out to play and its very endearing. She missed out on all the typical girly activities as a child so she’s making up for lost time. She ALREADY has a scrapbook for the wedding and she’s already browsing dresses!

I’m sorry for being all cliche and cringey. I know its insufferable to many and I do understand. I just feel drunk in love, and i did want to update and not leave people hanging! Other than my mother, my family does not know she is trans, because frankly it’s none of their business and my fiancee hasn’t wanted to open up to them about that part of her life. She confided in my mother because my mother knows a transgender boy and so it came up in conversation. As far as the rest of my family are concerned, it’s totally irrelevant to them and they will only ever know if she chooses to tell them. So I was wondering if incorporating rainbows anywhere in the theme at all would be too obviously lgbt pride themed? Or can I get away with some rainbow tokens and such just as a discreet acknowledgement of how far she’s come? Obviously I don’t want people to think of this wedding as anything other than what it is, a straight marriage between a man and a woman, so are rainbows risky? I’m just so damn proud of her and want to show that in some way. I was thinking of wearing rainbow cufflinks or something? Anyway sorry for the damn essay but I hope the new year goes well for you lovely ladies and sorry for being a cringe lord. I just can’t believe I’ve found my queen

in MtF by takeurmedsbro

Third is another post, which reads:

Also we have decided that on the big day, I will wear pink cufflinks and she will wear either blue eye makeup or a flower, and then the theme will be that classic white sorta theme. The colours of the trans flag, thanks to your suggestions. Like so subtle that only me and her will know it means anything at all. Hopefully that will work out tastefully but we also like the pink/blue/white elements of the cake idea. I showed her some of these comments and god damn it you lok she is now exploring sooo many more ideas and concepts, I didnt think she would expand past the scrapbook, but we now have a wedding ‘mood board’ of all things… takes up half the wall in our room. I proposed only 3 days ago! I love her enthusiasm but I’m finding it hard to rate all the dresses she shows me, when I cant tell the difference between any of them… a white dress is a white dress, but she says that’s typical male bullshit and she’s probably right there. But she can wear a bin bag to our wedding and still look perfect so I’m not worried about which compliments her body more, but then I do want her to put a dress on and have that feeling of ‘this is my dress’ and I have the feeling that could be a long process… anyway, the kindness means everything x. End ID]

[kaijuno]

Happy Pride

[parentheses-posts]

This post has 10 sets of parentheses and 2 sets of brackets.

[technoarcanist]

This. THIS is why I don’t put Cishet DNI in my bio btw

[bisexual-engineer-girl]

normally I don’t read super long posts like that but god damn. that was beautiful

[rainbowgod666]

He won.

[aroboxfolio]

they both did<3

[pafsins2]

Can't wait for season 2 sins. :)

Yeah, it's gonna be...fun.

[pafsins2]

Everything RIGHT With A Christmas Peril

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[pafsins2]

Everything RIGHT With A Christmas Peril

I promised this, so here it is. Thanks to Disney, it’ll be quite a while until we sin more Milo, so in the meantime he’s some Christmas in July wins.

1.Love the use of S’winter

2.Family is definitely a great gift on Milo’s part.

3.Funny Mini Montage

4.”I mean, we're talking mother of all snowstorms! Picture a tornado that ate a hurricane and had a blizzard for dessert, and then double it!” I somehow didn’t hear this joke before, and it’s pretty funny!

5.Dakota being a pop star due to We’re Going to the Zoo is an amazing concept.

6.Right off the bat we get an interesting idea with Future Cavendish being screwed over due to a falling out, and see how bad he feels about it in hindsight.

7.And their fight being over an egg roll is so petty that it’s perfect. Mostly because it’s a symptom of a bigger issue Dakota has and it works.

8.”No loitering, flashbacks, or old men with unfinished business in this area” Nice.

9.What do you think happened to those other guys he dropped off? Either way, it’s pretty funny.

10.Nice to hear Candace Party in a good episode.

11.Also, I like the gag with Nate being in denial over Murphy’s Law.

12.Sara’s non reaction is priceless.

13.This joke with the grandparents talking over each other isn’t the funniest but it’s funny enough.

14.”s per usual, I'll do the adult thing and meddle with the time-space continuum, no matter what the consequences.”

15.”And I thought Milo was upbeat” Optimism!

16.The Dinosaur plan isn’t exactly smart but it’s funny!

17.Nice little moment with Milo being a bit unsure. It’s small but it’s nice to see, and the resulting moment is nice too.

18.2D Hamsaur!

19.Also, I just love the full on insanity going on now.

20.”-without each other” D’aww.

21.More fun insanity, this time with teamwork!

22.”You don’t get to talk” Lol.

23.Love the Future Block.

24.Incredibly sweet make up scene is incredibly sweet.

25.The others vanishing is funny, even if it again, sort of makes a whole episode make no sense.

26.The boat crashing along with the sorta jingle is pretty great.

27.Not the best song in the season but it’s still really nice and the sequence itself is quite sweet.

28.”Merry Christmas, Old Friend” D’aww.

29.The plot balancing isn’t perfect but aside from that this episode is great. The main plot is simple but it works and is decently fun-

30.but the subplot is what really shines here. It’s interesting, very funny, and very sweet.

31. And it all comes together in a nice Christmas-y package. I dig it.

EPISODE WIN TALLY: 31

AWARD: Egg Rolls!

Well,looks like we had more Wins than Sins. I noticed a couple Sins I missed but it would still be lower than the Win Tally. I like that.

So yeah, I might do some Win Posts for P&F or MML to pass the time before I get to sin Season 2 but in the meantime, SpongeBob is still going on if you want sin action.

With that said, Merry Christmas in July!

[pafsins2]

Everything Wrong With Everything Wrong With Across the 2nd Dimension

…Well, this is different. Over on Deviant Art, I’ve started doing Sins post for Sins video/posts because why not. Also, it’s fun and I got the idea from CinemaSinsSins and others.

And since I’m the most sinful person I know, I figured I’d sin one of my posts. I did myself in general, but it’s time to attack a full post. I picked the movie since it’s longer and thus has more problems. Time to see how wrong I am!

(Posting it here instead of DA cuz why not)

ORIGINAL POST: https://pafsins.tumblr.com/post/146397916776/everything-wrong-with-across-the-2nd-dimension

 1.I messed up the formatting and instead of taking the time to fix it, I just linked to someplace else I put this up on. Fixing it turned out to be easy so why didn’t I  do here?

2.”Wasn’t a Goozim a lot smaller in Doof’s flashback, or are they just bigger in this dimmension?” Likely the latter. Either way, it doesn’t matter.

3.”That’s the most abrasive alarm clock ever” Not really, it seems like more of a light prodding. Besides, I’d love an alarm clock that does that, to be honest.

4.”Candace just forgot she put a picture on a beloved stuff animal?” A Flaky teenager forgot something? I’m so surprised.

5.”How many Platypus themed sports are there?” That’s the joke.

6..”Yikes, Monogram did not age well.”That is not a sin, that is stating the obvious.

7.”It’s set up like this thing with the saftey on will be important, but it never is.” Again, that’s the joke. Also, not really.

8.”A woman of science who hangs out with kids that frequently defy the laws of physics” Jokes, do you understand them?!

9.Also, you forgot the quote you’re replying to, anyone who hasn’t seen the movie or doesn’t remember the line won’t know what you’re talking about.

10.”This whole thing starts because Doof wants a couch” Besides that being the joke,not really. I imagine he would have stepped into the portal to see what is on the other side even if the couch wasn’t there.

11.”Ballon-y can be seen all over the place, even though he shouldn’t exist here since Doof made him because he he had no friends, and that didn’t happen in this world”.

When did they ever say that? We just know things went better for Doof-2 and he lost the train, but they never state that this exact thing didn’t happen. There’s plenty of reasons he could have better Balloon-y in this world.

12.”“Just in case, vending machines become the dominant race!” You know some nut out there actually thinks this, thanks to thism ovie” Funny joke but not a sin.

13.”I see they save the “charecter finds out the big secret” plot for this movie.” I get how the use of the cliche is a sin but how is saving it for the movie a sin?

14.“You could have been cleaning your litter box this whole time?” That’s one of your biggest concerns about this?” Joke, that’s the.

15.”I’m with Doof, something as simple as that caused all this?” Sigh.

16.”This bit with Phineas-2 and Perry is so sad it’s sin because shut up.” Translation: It’s been more than a minute without a sin so I listed a random thing as a sin because reasons.

17.”Don’t think you can outlaw a season. You can outlaw Summer vacation though. Choose your words carefully, guys.” Oh shut up, you’re just being pedantic.

18.”Perry could find a way to explain to Phineas why he’s doing this, but whatever, this works too.” Phineas didn't exactly give him much of a chance to do. That should have been the sin here.

19.”Once again, good thing a Tv was here so they could see the news update.” In this case, it’s the TV Turning on that was convenient, no the TV itself. Yes that’s pedantic, shut up.

20.”It’s convincent that time works the exact same way in the 2nd dimension, not a second off.” Spongey is fine with a parallel dimension, but when that parallel dimension’s time works the same, that’s crossing the line Dammit!

21.”Candace-2 is a dick to the first dimmension people.” That’s the point

22.”The first scene is repeated, but with dialogue that clearly wasn’t there before.” Do you get points and jokes at all?

23.”How do half of these dimensions even work?” Doesn’t matter, these are just quick gags.

24.”These Citizens see crazy crap all the time but a bunch of robots has them running?” Robots coming out a portal is more alarming than anything P&F have done.

25.”I’m not sure how to word this but I’m sure this whole bit where someone planned out all this crazy stuff in adance that will now help the heroes get ready for the climax is a cliché. It’s also convenient.” Yes, but given how they set it up by establishing they clone Doof’s inventions, it at least makes sense.

26.“But it was obvious in Retrospect” “Buford is now smarter than most of the other kids. Huh.” He’s shown to be slightly smart before and after, how is this a sin?

27.”Quickest Villain Reformation ever.” You know the drill.

28.”How did Monogram and Carl get here so dang fast without anyone noticing?” The first part is fine but the 2nd part doesn’t matter.

29.”. I’d iked to hear Doof’s thoughts on all this. Guess he doesn’t agree cuz he’s locked in that Hannib Lector thing” You just pointed out why this is not a sin.

30.”Both this and the other Vanessa scene feel like those kind of deleted scenes that wouldn’t affected the film all that much if they were left in. The nature of them makes me think they were made FOR this  DVD, almost.” But that would have made Wannessa’s absence later on even more of a sin.

31.”If this was in the movie, it would be the first sign something is up as Doof-1 is pretty okay with her boyfriends usually, while Doof-2 is the “Boyfriend hating Dad” cliché” Yes. You’re point is…

32.”Guess this explains why more memories weren’t erased, but are they really that stupid?…Don’t answer that.” Too Bad: Yes.

SINS POST SIN TALLY: 32

SENTENCE: …

BONUS ROUND: Spelling/Grammar Errors!

(Errors in bold)

33.“or are they just bigger in this dimmension?”

“Wait, so Phineasc just wars a bland shirt-”+2

36.“Phineas looks way older then he did in the Flashback-”

37.“spoiling the twist/joking-”

38.”I don’t to remind but I’ll do it anyway” (Missing the “Need” in there)

39.“It’s set up like this thing with the saftey on will be important, but it never is.”

40..“Ballon-y can be seen all over the place-”

41.“You know some nut out there actually thinks this, thanks to thism ovie.”

42.Too many dumb visuals refernces too count..+

43.“I can’t help but notice that you’re scar goes over your eyepatch”

44.“If he truly meant Leorzna Llamas-”

“I see they save the “charecter finds out the big secret” plot for this movie.” + 2

47.“Gee it’s Trap” (Should be  A trap)

48.“It’s convincent that time works-”

49.“Candace-2 is a dick to the first dimmension people.”

50.“The bat head being from another dimension makes to much sense”

51.“I’m not sure how to word this but I’m sure this whole bit where someone planned out all this crazy stuff in adance-”

52.“Somethng from outside is mistaken for 3D” cliché”

53.“Add a sin of the WOLVERINES bit being a reference-”

54.“(who now has a change of clothes for some reson)”’

55.“. I’d iked to hear Doof’s thoughts on all this. Guess he doesn’t agree cuz he’s locked in that Hannib Lector thing.”

56.“Damn it, I don’t it do this so soon after the last one but…”(Should be “don’t usually”)

SINS POST SIN TALLY: 56

SENTENCE: Eaten by a Goozim

…Well, that was different and fun. For those who don’t follow my DA, check it out for more Sin Sins. Otherwise, head on to SpongeBob Sins next week for the return of it.

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Everything Wrong With Fungus Among Us

1.This episode has no fungus in it.

2.Also, the title is not only the same as a bad SpongeBob episode, but it’;s airdate was only 1 day away from being exactly 10 years after that one aired.

3.”You have a way you wanna die?” I mean most people would say they don’t wanna die by falling. Doesn’t mean they have an exact way, just means not by this dangerous way.

4.Future Dakota doesn’t keeps everything super vague because mystery!

5.”Before I was born!” We heard you the first time.

6.”Like me in the 60’;s talking like I’m in the 30’s” This guy would be great at MML Sins.

7.Also, shouldn’t he have given Orton notes about this when he pitched the idea, not after they already started filming?

8.So Orton is inspired by these 3 to make Doctor Zone but Milo being on Doctor Zone made them go back to begin with and my head hurts.

9.Dakota randomly steals the big block so Time Ape can exist.,

10.Milo launches into his favorite episode before explaining to Past Orton what Doctor Zone even is.

11.Random SpongeBob time card reference.

12.TV production went by shockingly fast in 1965.

13.”Why do you have a cattle prod?” That’s not even the weirdest thing he has in that backpack.

14.Okay, where did his Pataschion buddies come from? He was the last one, how did he make more?

15.”Oh, Fertilize me!” You know, for kids!

16.That sin from earlier now makes less sense now that we know Dakota already knew about the future when he said it.

17.Okay, so he started his replacing plan in 1965 and everyone’s been replaced, I got that. But if time has been changed so that’s going on, shouldn’t they have taken over way before the events of MML or shouldn’t Mellisa, Zack and possibly Milo now been replaced earlier?

18.And come to think of it, wouldn’t it make more sense to replace people with power like the president so you can take over more easily? Why even replace this many people?

(And yeah, you can say it’;s a ripple effect catching up to Melisa, Zack and Sara but some of this still stands)

19.Sara’s shirt has no time ape. And it comes back so it’s a sin even if the former makes sense.

20.”I don’t see how this could get much worse” Sigh.

21.Dakota vores small plant people.

22.Of course there is a boat anchored here.

23.Spoilers, this is DEI, but since when was there a parking area here?

24.Oh look it’s Doofenshmirtz, who would have gussied it except everyone because Disney spoiled it in the promos.

25.Also, if he truly is professor time and the real inventor of time travel aren’t addressed, this sin stays. If that’s not the case, you can remove this.

26. To be continued.

But the Doof cameo is pretty amazing so…

26. Mort and Zack’s Dad are credited even though they aren’t in this episode.

EPISODE SIN TALLY: 26

SENTENCE: How has your day been progressing?

Pretty solid tally, and a good one to end. With that, we’re done with Milo Murphy’s Law for now. We aren’t sure on exactly when Season 2 starts, much less when it ends so it could be quite awhile before we return to Milo. (I need Season 2 totally done so I confidently make certain sins, ya know?)

So this exactly blog will kinda rot again, except for the odd win post I might wanna do. I’m doing Christmas Peril in July, I know that much,

In the meantime, I’m still doing SpongeBob sins and sometime around when Season 3 of that starts, I’ll do another vote for a sin type series, since I don’t wanna stick be totally with SpongeBob for too long given how much more of that show I still have to go.

But yeah, that ends Milo for now. See ya for whatever happens next.

(Side note, MML Sin Posts at the moment tend to get more Notes than a typical P&F one would. Weird, but thanks!)

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Everything Wrong With A Christmas Peril

1.Using S’winter for the background music

2.”I’m so glad Mom and Dad let us swap cars”! Exposition.

3.Sara’s clover is red in this picture.

4.The outside of Sara’s car has decorations but in the close up, there are none.

5.”Might not be home for Christmas” cliche.

6.”Too bad it’s not the future-” Subtle.

7.”Maybe I thought I might want it more” “Typical selfish Dakota” He’s got a point.

8.”To you a friend is someone you get to correct all day” Cavendish would be great at MML Sins AND MML SinsSins!

9.Why include Cavendish in the book at all if you clearly don’t wanna talk about him?

10.While I’m glad Candace Party was finally used in a good episode, it’s a random choice.

11.”Who needs flying cars?” Another subtle transition.

12.Just tell them to speak one at a time, geez.

13.”It’s like the Titanic” Stay subtle, guys.

14.When we see Past Dakota and Cavendish walk in before, the latter said nothing but now he does.

15.I know it’s the joke but your first idea to get the egg rolls is to use a freaking dinosaur!

16.Speaking of, when they go back again, no one tries to stop the Dakota that used the dinosaur.

17.”We’ll be in disguise” You’re already in disguise.

18.They don’t think of maybe attacking the egg rolls, the source of all this.

19.This subplot is great but it’s so good that when we cut to Milo I just want them to get back to the other plot, which isn’t good.

20.I really wanna the story behind Old!Block going back.

21.Wait a minute, if the Dakota and Cavendish from the bad future vanish once it’s been fixed, then why the hell is The Island of Lost Dakotas even a thing?! Dakota would have just vanished instead of needing to go there!

22.”What restraunt would still be open on Christmas Eve” It cuts to a Chinese place. That’s…racist?

23.Why is Sara choosing to stay behind just to watch some dumb show?

“Merry Christmas old friend” ….Fine

EPISODE SIN TALLY: 22

SENTENCE: No egg rolls.

Pretty low for a 22 minute episode but I guess we can blame the Milo plot for having less to make fun of. Anyway, Merry Christmay! (Also, expect wins for this one at some point)

Next week, we finally finish off Milo for now with some fungus. Well, not really but it’s in the title so…

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Everything Wrong With that damn time grenade!

Okay, I wanted to simply list the sins I found with the whole Time Grenade plot point but I had too much to say for quick sins so I’m doing this post to dive into it. Mostly to address possible expectations for what I’m about to get into.

I should start by saying that this will be done in the same way I do any other sin, meaning none of this hurts my enjoyment of the episode.

Let’s start from the top, they just say that Halloween is an accent holiday that vanished around this time. I’ll address the big question later but here’s a slightly smaller one:

They clearly are able to go back to past Halloweens so how is it that no one at BOTT has ever gone back before to find out what happened? Or at least find out what Halloween is like so they can celebrate it again?

In the same scene we find out about Time Grenades which “erase time”. Later on a kid gets a hold of it and turns it on, which they figure out is the reason Halloween vanished.

But then later it goes off while they are in ancient Rome and it gets rid of Feb 29 , but Dakota was able to fix it slightly so it still happens every 4 years, thus making leap year.

There’s a lot to unpack here so let’s get started. The big thing I have to ask how exactly does this grenade work?

Does it get rid of any traces of the day from all time or does it just take it off the calendar from that point on? The Rome scene implies the latter as well as the fact that they can back to a previous Halloween.

I mean, if it indeed did vanish because of Dakota and Cavendish’s antics, there would be no longer be a Halloween for them to back to in order for this to happen…but it’s not like this series is above a time paradox.

But in that case, why did people stop celebrating it? If it only took off the Calendar for future years, how did everyone forget about it?

Maybe it erases everyone’s memories of it and traces of it from that point on, which makes some kind of sense but in that case how do Dakota and Cavendish know that Halloween is indeed a holiday that vanished?

It seems like they only forgot the details because it had been a looong time since everyone dropped it. And again, why did no one at BOTT think to go back to look into this if they clearly could?!

I’m just saying, it makes no sense that  the grenade doesn’t take away all hints of the day existing. I can forgive a time paradox with there still being a Halloween for them to travel to start this, but it seems like they only implied that the day just vanished from that point to cover that even though it created even more problems as we see.

As for the leap year thing, that checks out. If it it made it vanish in Ancient Rome, that’s enough time for it to make sense for people to not care that it’s gone or for BOTT to not care since leap year is just a commonly accepted thing.

But everything does not make sense and you can see why I had to add in 5 sins right there for all this.

If you have any of your own theories/explanations, feel free to send them my way. But for now, I return to your to your regularly scheduled sins.

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Everything Wrong With Milo Murphy's Halloween Scream-a-Torium

1.”Good evening children and immature adults” Shots fired!

2.”Dramatic moment ruined by realism” cliche.

3.Hey look, it’s Sabrina Carptner the Teenaged Witch! …That’s a sin on me.

4.”This baby isn’t going anywhere” “How much you wanna bet-” Zack would be good at MML Sins.

5.”Aren’t we a little too old to dress up for Halloween?’ “No!” …No we aren’t. Come on Dwampy, you had one job!

6.”Thinking they are too old for Halloween” cliche.

7.Zack’s Dad is a dick to Fetus Zack.

8.”She might have said Yes this time” “In your dreams” Well no, that’s kinda the point of your last dig.

I don’t usually do this but the entire plot point about Halloween vanishing and the reason it did so makes so little sense I did an entire post to go with this one where I dive deep into it, because I had too much to say for just a few sins.

So here’s 5 sins right now and here’s that post:

14.(After Savannah looks like the grudge girl) Because Dwampy doesn’t make enough Grudge jokes.

15.”Oh hi Diogee” Saying hi to dogs gives me flashbacks…

16.”-most dangerous non Religious Holiday Night of the latter half of the year” What is the most dangerous religious holiday night then?

17.”She didn’t like your shop class” He leaves out the legit reason because Zack is a dick.

18.If him not knowing about Giraffes was due to them being extinct in the future, that would still be a sin but Dakota confirms that isn’t the reason so yeah, what gives?

19.You think a quick Google search would tell him all the correct info right off the bat but whatever, funny gag.

Sin off for the sing.

19. Where did they get those extra costumes so fast?

20.Also, their bags don’t seem to get any bigger.

21.I was willingly to let the Perry costume go but the P&F ones, not so much.

22.Literal Cliffhanger.

23.”Feels like we’re really moving” That’s clearly Sara’s voice but Mellisa’s ,mouth is moving.

24.”You don’t know everything about me” Calbacks work better when the original joke wasn’t just a second ago.

25.Why did you bring the time grenade with you to begin with?! Even Canvendish points this out!

26.How does he know it’s something you can activate?

27.”Who needs an engine when you’re falling” “I have no response to that” Same.

28.They survive this.

29.Thank you Gargoyle, I didn’t get what was going on here.

30.”Nothing in December” Eh, getting rid of like the 4t would be harmless I think.

31.”It’s Halloween?” What other reason would have to randomly dress up like a fish? Or maybe he was joking, whatever.

EPISODE SIN TALLY: 31

SENTENCE: Milo Murphy’s Veggie Fest

Slightly fewer sins than I expected but there were less later on since I bulk added due to those damn time grenades.

Anyway, come back next week for Christmas in May!

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Everything Wrong With The Island of Lost Dakotas

1.”Do you even known what a corn dog is?” Are they gone in the future too?

2.And this is where all wonder how this aired on Disney.

3.Also, these workers are beyond incompetent if they can get a guy killed.

4.Okay, so each time he does, Dakota replaces the past one to save Cavendish and sends the other one away. That’s fine but what about the extra time vehicle, what happens with that?

6.The flashback to the first Hamosaur is fine but it shows off the bad CGI which will be replaced with 2D as we see later, which only calls attention to the art shift.

7.”About 11 minutes” Haw haw

8.Shoes with laces. Laces that could easily get caught in something due to Murphy’s law. Come on guys, this isn’t hard.

9.Okay, so there can’t be two Dakotas, I get that. But if Dakota were to go back to when he came from, time would be changed so Cavendish never died and thus Dakota never had to back, so shouldn’t the other Dakota just vanish?

10.Cavendish should know that walking out in space without a helmet=bad

11.Come on, Irving too?!

12.This part with him is hilarious but he has a parrot so he falls prey to the stereotype.

13.”This doesn’t make any sense!” Milo and Zack would be great at MML Sins.

14.”Welcome to the Island of Lost Dakotas” And Roll Credits.

15.Okay, so the other Dakotas having different outfits makes sense but how do some have totally different personalities with one being a Cannibal?

16.Splitting up a song, even if it’s a filler song.

17.This is all set in Danville so why isn’t Roger the mayor? (Swampy hinted this will be explained but until it is…)

18.”Do you know those plastic things are the end of shoelaces are called aglets?” Haw haw.

“Awww” I agree.

18.And the episode ends before anything really actually happens, making it a bit wonky as a story.

EPISODE SIN TALLY: 18

SENTENCE: Laces get caught up.

Now that’s a decent tally for this kind of episode. And that ends the 11 minute episodes. We’re in the final stretch, my friends.

Come back next week for some Halloween in May! (Yeah, we’re using production order)

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Everything Wrong With Love Toboggan

1.We don’t usually see her wearing a Hazmat suit around the house but for this gag, sure.

2.Just because she’s not Candace doesn’t mean she won’t have her own Boy problems I can sin!

3.Pretty sure concrete isn’t an “invention”

4.Isn’t one Baljeet appearance enough?!

5.”It was all a fantasy” cliche

6.The other end of Mellisa’s skis were curved like the front end but when Milo gets the new ski, event the one she had before now has a flat end.

7.”I don’t wanna tempt fate around Milo, but it seems pretty safe” That is the worst possibly follow up to the first statement.

8.”Provably should have told someone about it or done something” Ya think?

9.What magazine has free samples of coal and oil?!

10.If you look closely, you’ll the placard has part of the date missing/cut off, including the year. Sorry, you can’t pull that after the 2016 crap.

11.Also, does anyone else now want to see this guy’s full tragic story?

12.His award is taken away because…a faster one came by, that wasn’t even in the race!?

13.This guy is a dick to partridges.

14.This comic shop guy is clearly voiced by Greg Cipes doing a nasally version of Mort.

15.Ha ha, it’s a parody of Phineas song but Boat of Romance was already a parody. Parody-ception?

And of course it’s sin removal worthy

15.Okay, there is no way Diogee could get that…thing off with his teeth, sorry.

EPISODE SIN TALLY: 15

SENTENCE: Might hit a Deer

Fair sin tally given I didn’t start with too many. Hopefully we get more with out next ep, which is certainly interesting.

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Everything Wrong With The Race

1.”Those things may or may not make sense later” Even when they do, they still won’t.

2.”So we’re Nut Guards” That sounds wrong.

3.And just like Sleepwalk, this episode won’t be about what it says in the title.

4.Discount Back to the Future 3.

5.When Mellisa gives him the bandage, her chin is strapped but right after, it’s gone.

6.Yes, tell it’s 1875 AFTER we already had a scene here and was told it was the 1870’s.

7.Worst Construction Crew Ever.

8.”The original Murphy’s Law” Wouldn’t that be Edward Murphy?

9.So over on BOTT, they somehow don’t know about these missing time travelers?

10.”Game over, man!” Boooo.

11.Slow motion finish.

12.Now it’s weird when an episode doesn’t end by sampling the theme song.

EPISODE SIN TALLY: 12

SENTENCE: Lose a race.

Oh hey another low tally, I’m so shocked. I don’t even care anymore, as long as I don’t try too hard to raise the tally. Come in next week as we finish the 11 minute episodes with the island of lost toboggan!

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Everything Wrong With World Without Milo

1.Stupid kid couldn’t see a sign right in front of them.

2.”That’s a terrible thing to say, Elliot” I agree, I mean yeesh!

3.”Living in a World Without Milo” And Roll Credits!

4.And in case him saying it wasn’t bad enough, here’s an entire song about how he wants a kid to not exist!

5.Also, is it me or does Christian Slater’s voice sound odd here? It sounded normal in his last song.

And obligatory sin off for the song.

5.”Something someone wishes for off handled is granted” cliche.

6.They happen to have a student who looks kinda like Milo and also messes things up!

7.That leash is attached to nothing.

8.”I was a senior when you were a sophomore” Wait, what? No way Elliot is that young.

9.Spoilers, we find out Milo is the reason Doctor Zone and Time Ape even exist who how does she still have Time Ape on her shirt?

10.By the way, neither Zack, Sara or Melisa seem too different in this Milo-less world which seems a bit odd for this kind of plot.

11.The people entering the school are different at the start of his echoed yelled than when it started.

12.And of course he goes crazy without all the damage Milo brings. Because bad things simply don’t happen without one kid with bad luck, I guess.

13.This is easily the deepest moral even said by a talking squirrel.

14.”Floating heads repeating things from earlier” cliche…even if only one does so.

15.So they somehow messed up and made it so Milo was never born, but they were just sitting around instead of doing something about it?!

16.”There’s no Milo in this time stream but there are Milo Balloons. Go figure” Dakota would be great at MML Sins.

17.Okay, so the lead in the stop sign made him remember Milo but how did the sign itself no longer have Milo’s name on the back? It can protect people but not itself?

18.Not sure how you make tons of Milo’s but it makes for a good ending gag.

EPISODE SIN TALLY: 18

SENTENCE; You don’t exist

Decent tally this time around. I blame Time Travel. See ya in a sec for a race!