Pressure Rework

A full rework of the story and characters of "PRESSURE" (temporary pfp by mangoth3boa)

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Pressure Rework

This blog is not associated with any of the Pressure devs. We FULLY support Ren/NoLongerNull. Our heart goes out to them.

This is a fan work so we can properly cope. If you have a problem with this, please block this blog and the tag #pressure rework and move on. Please do not call us names and/or drag us just because we're choosing to move on in a different way from others.

If you are sticking around, keep reading.

We will be accepting contributions to help rework the characters. So far, only Sebastian and Painter are being reworked.

Sebastian has been changed to reflect more that he is Chilean, rather than his ethnicity being more of an aesthetic like he seemed to be created with. His name has been changed to Sebastián Solis. His human appearance is also being updated, with longer hair and brown eyes rather than blue. We are still working on a mutated/fish design .

Painter is gaining a full body with removable computer head and various accessories, and being renamed into PAL.ette. Their pronouns have also been updated to be they/it/she.

Any contributions to update other characters are helpful, as are updates to the story of the game as long as they stay appropriate. If you have a contribution, please submit it with an ask. And if you have questions, please, any and all are accepted. Just keep it civil.

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File: Open

Open Program:

PAL.ette.exe

Loading Program... Program Launched

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File: Open

Date ___xx - xx - 20xx___

Sebastián Solis

23

Chilean - Korean

⬜⬜kgs

⬜⬜⬜cm

Brought to ⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜ on charges of ⬜⬜⬜⬜ ⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜. Facing the death penalty in the state of ⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜.

Eligible for mutation experiment.

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xx - xx - 2015

Mutation experiment begun.

Body reacting as expected.

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xx - xx - 20xx

Mutations taking place.

Patient has gained gills on the throat and pectoral areas.

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xx - xx - 20xx

Patients hair has fallen out. Gained fins on both sides of head.

Further mutations forming quickly.

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xx - xx - 20xx

Female anglerfish DNA has been injected.

Patient growing aggressive towards employees.

Upping tranquilizer dosage.

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xx - xx - 2025

Patient has fully mutated.

Prepping to be moved to ⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜ Deep Sea facility.

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xx - xx - 2025

Patient has breached containment.

All tranquilizers have failed.

Two guardsmen dead, four injured.

One scientist missing.

Locking down facility.

Kill patient on sight.

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Confidential documentation. All unauthorized personnel found with this document will be terminated.

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File: Open - Art

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File: Open

Photo Recovery

Proceed?

[Y] / N

Processing . . .

Photo recovered!

Error encountered: Photo quality has been decreased.

Opening Transcript. . .

[ That looks like ⬜-⬜⬜.. does it not? No no no no. You can't tell me that isn't it. Look at it! ...Different heat signatures? How can we even tell from up here?! ...The esca??? It looks the sa- Wait no you're right look at this photo- ...Hold on.]

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File: Open

Public post

Happy Pride month from those of us here at ⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜! We hope you all have a wonderful month and continue to follow our updates.

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File: Open

Unidentified creature noticed in ⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜⬜.

Hostile?: N/A

Heat signature?: N/A

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okay actually what the hell i can't keep writing this document out if I don't know what that even is. someone please identify this creature before you send me a request to document it.

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File: Open

ERROR: Error with file conversion; file extension .█████ not accepted. File may be corrupted.

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If we are on the topic of Mr. Lopee, I ask what would be his new main function in this rewrite. As it stands even in game, we don’t have much lore written about him officially besides what the previous devs have at least confirmed in their community posts (ie him being dead and all).

We know from old writers he was supposed to play a bigger role or at least had a more fleshed out backstory including his connections to Mr. Shade and why he seems to be omnipotent.

I suggest being more clear with who he is as more so a rumor of what happens when you don’t behave. “Don’t cross the company or else you’ll end up like Lopee. I heard he got disintegrated by his best friend.” “No no, I heard he was executed by one of their most dangerous experiments instead!”

Something that hints at betrayal/cause of death and powers. Lopee was always meant to be someone wanting to bring down the company so it only makes sense to expand on it in a more clear and defined sense rather than just the guy everyone knows for time manipulation.

Long story short; Keep basic premise of Mr. Lopee as the mysterious benefactor/omnipotent entity but expand further on his connections to the company either by making it directly known he was one of the heads or he was used as an example and is now a playground type rumor.

Contribution accepted

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For NAVI-AI ideas, I can suggest some things for design. Her core could include a cluster of TV screens, with a large one in the middle that displays her logo.

For something closer to the original, the TV screens can be kept, and she herself hangs from a mess of wires and cables that allows her to move, kinda like GLADoS maybe? With a robotic claw to grab things?

Her voice could be more similar to the average feminine TTS voice. Maybe something like MU/TH/UR 6000 from the Alien film franchise.

I don’t think her general “powerful supercomputer” concept needs many changes

Contribution accepted

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File: Open

Please put forward ideas for the following characters: - Imaginary Friend (Red & Blue) - HQ - NAVI AI - Mr. Lopee

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Can I suggest a Searchlights rework?

An idea I have is making them cephalopods! They could be more squid-like, and have a body-plan very unlike other members of the cephalopoda. The hooks could be swapped out with very stretchy tentacles used to grab prey instead of impaling them. This could also explain their large size, as the biggest known invertebrate today is a squid!

Another idea I have is making them relatives of crustaceans. You could take inspiration from spider crabs, and have them walk on the sea floor with very long legs. They could also have a robust shell comprised of chitin! And maybe stretchy tentacles with a claw on the end to grab and drag prey into their maw. Perhaps they have eyestalks as well?

If you end up accepting this then I heavily encourage you to do research on cephalopods or crustaceans! Not only will it help with plausibility and design, it’s also very interesting to learn about the critters in our sea

Contribution accepted

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File: Open

Last known picture of ▫️-▫️▫️, "The Diversionist"

IF LOCATED — HIGH RISK; KILL ON SIGHT

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mod note\\ Submissions have been allowed!

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File: Open

Sebastián Solis

"The Diversionist"

HIGH RISK; KILL ON SIGHT

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File: Open

The Diversionist ( @ramina-falcon-4 ) won the poll! The file for Sebastián will be released soon.

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Admin: Access

Blog moderator:

Bastien

ID: 4▫️4

Begin transcript . . .

[ This thing on? Okay... Company IDs came in today and this is just... So embarrassing. They didn't tell me the flash was so bright on their cameras and they printed this as my ID.... Obviously going to redact the information on it for safety, but come on– They didn't make me retake it or anything! This feels like a joke—

File: Open

—Hopefully they'll let me retake it once I actually start using it around, since I'm fairly certain it needs to have my full face visible. Whatever. Sorry for venting on the public blog, I think my supervisor might see this anyway, Bastien out! ]

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