Writing Pattern Tag (Long Edition)
Rule: List the first lines of your last 20 or so stories. See if there are any patterns. Choose your favorite opening line. Then tag 10 authors!
I suppose I will just start at the top of my page and work down. Like M34gs, I will post the links.
Steven had never believed much in luck. To him, luck was a silly idea, a subjective concept that was unable to be precisely measured. (The Journey Starts Together)
Liko quietly slipped out of her bedroom, taking care to tiptoe past her peacefully sleeping Pokémon. (Stargazing)
“It’s too cold!” Phoebe exclaimed, her voice tinged with a dramatic flair as she wrapped her arms around herself. (Holiday Spirit)
“Sidney, please!” Phoebe begged, her voice filled with excitement. (Gingerbread House)
“Thank you again for bringing me with you. I never realized how breathtakingly beautiful Mount Coronet was,” Diantha said, her voice filled with awe as she settled onto the wooden bench that overlooked the lower mountain range, the frosty air tinged with the scent of pine and earth, yet fresh with snow. (Confession Under The Northern Lights)
Steven leaned in closer to Sidney, their faces nearly touching, the tension palpable in the air between them. (Place Your Bets)
Lucian’s tongue clicked in dissatisfaction as he studied the small LED numbers glowing faintly on the display. (Winter Flu)
“Hold on a second! Are you actually saying that you’ve never had roasted marshmallows? Like ever?” Roy exclaimed, his eyes wide with astonishment as he gazed at the bewildered teenager slumped against the pillows on the bed. (Marshmallows)
A week had passed since the fateful battle against the legendary Pokémon, a conflict that forever altered the fate of their region. (Time Keeps On Slipping)
Pacing over the marble floor, Wallace chewed at his fingernail, a habit until now he thought he had broken. (Against The Clock)
Amethio pushed his hand harder into his stomach in a desperate attempt to relieve some of the pain. (Memories)
“Be still,” Jaskier hissed, “I have to clean this. (Survive The Night)
Wallace reveled in the tranquil embrace of the tropical sun, its gentle warmth caressing his skin as he basked in its radiance. (Heat Stroke)
Amethio awoke to the oppressive fatigue that weighed heavily on his body and mind. (Everyone Starts Somewhere)
Starter Pokémon—a crucial element for some trainers, a mere stepping stone for others. (Evolution Adventures)
Lance sighed as he rested his head against the white wall in the hospital waiting room. (Alone In Thought)
Cynthia prided herself on her composed nature. (Is Anyone Going To Say It?)
"Mono, Dean, really?" Sam struggled to breathe through the laughter "You have mono?" (Mono)
Another sneeze echoed into the night as you stood in front of the door that separated you and the icy chill of winter from the warmth of a burning fire. (Wives Tales)
Amethio let out an exasperated sigh as he gazed down at the unconscious girl lying on the ground. (Unfortunate Rescues (Sometimes Work Out)
I actually learned a little bit about my writing that I didn't notice. I've learned things I like and a few that I don't.
All but two are in the same fandom (12,18). I think that gives me a pretty good idea of where my comfort zone is.
I have a pretty strong tendency to start with who the main focus of the story is on and what they are doing in the opening moments.
Only six started with dialogue (3,4,5,8,12,18)
Maybe it's weird that 12 and 18 both start with dialogue AND are outside my usual fandom? Not sure.
Going into this, I thought there would be a clear favorite, but I was wrong.
My works tend to be prompt-based, and the titles reflect that.
6 Does NOT convey what is happening in the first paragraph. It's extremely misleading in the most comedic way possible.
I feel like my opening lines are almost robotic, as if I'm focusing too hard on the words themselves and losing some of the emotion.
Whump/sickfics seem to be what I write the most. That makes sense given the amount of whump and sicfic-based events I participate in.
I lean heavily into one shots with only four being multichapter (1,3,10,15)
@sinnohelitefourlore @thestorieswesay Anyone else who wants to join in. No pressure to participate if you don't want to; have fun!
I don't actually have ten people, which...is a tad embarrassing haha...