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Too much of soundtrack to third Pirates of the Caribbean do things to me………………

#royai #fma

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lionheart

#jaime lannister #a song of ice and fire #game of thrones

fairy-edits

❤️ DATES TO COME 💙

-Fairy Tail: 100 Years Quest-

(Manga Cover 282)

Credits: H.Mashima & A.Ueda's Arts.

Color by me.

#jerza

itsiitsu

don't go Nanamin don't go

#jjk

thecalloffantasy

Word Upgrades & Adverb Replacements

Not banning adverbs, just helping you avoid the icky ones.

1. Swap the adverb, not the meaning. Instead of: “He whispered angrily.” Try: “He hissed the words between his teeth.”

2. Replace “said” only when it changes tone. Not every line needs flair! But sometimes: • mused (thinking aloud) • snapped (tension) • muttered (quiet frustration) • chirped (bright and quick)

3. Alternatives to ‘almost’ that aren’t icky. Objects: brushing against, bordering, adjacent to Actions: poised to, ready to, about to States: akin to, resembling, not quite Misc: a whisper from, at the cusp of, within reach of

Example: Instead of: “She was almost smiling.” Try: “A smile hovered at the edge of her mouth.”

Punctuation as a Writing Superpower

Punctuation is mood.

1. Em-dash = drama or interruption. “The decision — reckless as it was — already felt final.”

2. Semicolon = linked thoughts. “The storm hammered the walls; inside, her hands wouldn’t stop shaking.”

3. Colon = emphasis or explanation. “He wanted only one thing: answers.”

4. Ellipses = hesitation or fading thoughts. “I thought I saw someone behind the shed, but…”

5. Intentional fragments = emotional punch. “The letter fell from her hands. Silence. Then breathing. Then panic.”

A PROUD BIG BRO ❤️

#one piece #portgas d. ace

depsidase

chrysopoeias

Hands that kill

I'm pretty proud of how it turned out and even printed it out :)

#royai

"And what is it you like in a woman, m'lord?"

"Innocence."

- Interesting, how there was plenty of thoughts/inner monologues before and after this particular dialogue, but none whatsoever about this rather interesting question about what it is he likes in a woman. He is the The-Things-I-Do-For-Love guy afterall... Innocence? Certainly his sister would not evoke such conclusion? Mayhaps an image of that big ugly stubborn woman he thought to be such an innocent crossed his mind briefly?

(Feels like the "So he did." moment all over again...)

#jaime x brienne #braime #jaime you coward #why don't you share your thoughts like you always do #jaime has very rich inner monologues but sometimes he just doesn't elaborate.at.all.